江苏高考英语书面表达指导

江苏高考英语书面表达指导共3段审题：先看中文要求，圈出主题，再读材料（要求中出现的主题一定要在文中以各种不同语言形式反复出现）第一段打草稿，二三段列提纲。

带好尺，如需涂改，用尺划一条。

没有特别大的错误尽量少涂改。

平时准备：各类主题句各准备一两个；按照观点准备句子，如健康，方便，解放劳动力等准备逻辑链完整的句子。

评分标准：1.要点全面2. 应用了较多的词汇：指词汇使用的多样性，如词性的多样性、高级词汇的使用、同义词与反义词的使用、短语的使用等。

3. 应用了较多的语法结构：感叹句、倒装句、复合结构、强调句型、定语从句、非谓语动词短语等语法结构的正确使用4. 上下文连贯：段与段、句与句之间以一种明晰的、合乎逻辑的顺序组织与安排，做到在文意与结构上层次分明、条理清楚、连贯流畅。

（第一段的summary是为下文服务的，要和下文在逻辑上有衔接起来）考试时间实际操作流程：听力（20 分钟）——单项填空（10 分钟）——完形填空（12 分钟）——阅读A (8 分钟)——阅读B（10分钟）（至此时间仅剩一半，很正常，不必惊慌）——阅读C（10 分钟）——阅读D（10 分钟）—任务型（15 分钟）——书面表达（25 分钟）还剩15分钟前务必涂卡！总则：1. 按要求完成任务2. 要扣题（不断重复关键词以免偏题）3. 先审题，后动笔，文章共3段，160-170词。

5. 卷面影响档次（篇幅，字，段落结构，涂改）4. 流畅自然避免：创造词块，句子过于复杂，逻辑混淆，生搬硬套步骤：审题（明确主题及应采取的立场，考虑好段落衔接，特别是一二段之间的衔接），明确需summary的内容，第一段打逐字稿（写好主要内容再根据字数添加或删减，27~33词）。

结构篇忠于原文，不发表议论；1-2句—打草稿●1句版：(With…/Despite…),句子主干，(leaving…./which…/as is exemplified by the case of…/as isexemplified by the three selections above. ) （推荐高手使用）图表或漫画As is indicated in the graph/As is shown in the comic,主句,…2014范文With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups: For and Against(意见不一).●2句版：○1句概述材料最general，最主要，覆盖面最大的信息，且在本段中起到介绍话题的作用。

○1○2句再补充主要信息，且可能起到一二段衔接的作用。

○1○2句之间常需体现逻辑联系，多用however连接。

一长句一短句，长句参考1句版写法。

(此版本最为常见，但并非任何时候都适用)2018: As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.（第二句可改为：However, some consumers find the ratings reliable while others disappointing/However, consumption ratings prove reliable to some consumers but disappointing to others）while(whereas) 如放句首则重点在后面，放中间表两方观点并列。

2017图表：The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.2016: Online voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.2015: The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack, which not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.2013漫画：People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees. (根据漫画：As is depicted/portrayed in the comic/caricature/ cartoon)2019一模漫画The caricatures vividly mirror/reflect a social phenomenon that some people are reluctant to socialize with people not familiar with to them, whether strangers or neighbors, as is exemplified by the case引发热烈讨论/争论…, which has sparked off/arouse/fuel a heated debate (among the public)意见不一…, which has received mixed response among the public.…, towards which there exist different attitudes among the public流行gain currency/gain widespread popularity/catch on引发公众关注/成为社会问题become a social concern/raise social concernCurrently, ...has been brought to public attention/ drawn public attention.难事，头疼事a headache, a hard nut to crack●支持反对型主题句：(现象不能说支持反对)支持vote for, applaud, in sympathy with, subscribe to, of tremendous significance, … is a wise option; It makes much sense to, outweigh反对…has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.I tend to take the “against” side for the following reasons; I don’t subscribe to this opinion….nothing but a bad idea.●原因分析型主题句：Various factors are at playto/Triggers of such a phenomenon come inBehind …lie many factors; The reasons behind the are not far to seek；phenomenon/problem could be interpreted from the following perspectives.导致：account for, make for, give rise to, contribute to, be responsible for（是……的原因）,●负面影响型主题句：by no means should we neglect the problems arise from ...; However, we mustbe alert to the potential threats posed by ...; Howerver, problems arising from … deserve attention; It is worthnoting that such a phenomenon will exert negative impacts; give sufficient weight to充分重视常用表达Such a situation, if left unchecked, will encourage a social atmosphere where●重要性（好处）型主题句：The importance of…is beyond measure; The significance of …can neverbe emphasized enough; The importance of… is not to be ignored; Without doubt/Undoubtedly, … playsa prominent role in every aspect of our life; …is an inseparable/essential part of modern life and should♦Essential measures should be taken to guarantee….♦In a bid/gesture to wrestle with the problems mentioned above, concerted/combined/joint /collective efforts are to be made.♦Such a situation deserves immediate measures.♦In view of the gravity of the situation, action must be taken immediately/measures admit of no delay/ measures to deal with it should be high on the agenda.♦Such consequences set the alarm bells ringing/serves as a wake-up call. (过渡句，适合严重情况).It is highly necessary that…♦The following measures, if implemented/adopted, will assist us in (本句也可作为结尾句)♦To move from insight to action（过渡，由世界观到方法论）, concerted efforts are to be made. ♦Attacking the problem (is a hard nut to crack that) requires/involves efforts both at the individual level and at the social level.提建议句型：Government are supposed to see to it that; be given serious thought to; It is imperative that …should; Instead of… isn’t it more meaningful to…?; It is advisable that…; If….,Priority should be given to; Never should …shrink from the responsibility to…; be obliged to…举例类：举例前有个过渡句。