江苏高考英语二轮课件：专题五书面表达 层级二 第二讲 句式要高级句子要鲜活38页PPT
高考英语江苏专版二轮专题复习三维课件：增分篇+专题五+书面表达+第二节+第一讲+如何避免常见错
第二类 语法类错误
1．时态错误 误：In the morning, we had bicycled in the suburbs to plant trees. 正：In the morning, we bicycled in the suburbs to plant trees.
2．语态错误 误：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 正：Children who are raised in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 3．主谓一致错误 误：My hobby is widespread, which include drawing, collecting stamps and so on. 正：My hobby is widespread, which includes drawing, collecting stamps and so on.
5．动宾搭配不当 误：They are trying their best to improve their production. 正：They are trying their best to increase their production. 6．形容词和名词搭配不当 误：We walked a far way before planting trees. 正：We walked a long way before planting trees.
江苏省高三英语二轮复习：书面表达中如何写主题句、拓展句及结论句课件(共69张PPT)
例如： 主题句：Beijing is famous for its temperate climate, its large population, and its rapid industrial development.
该主题句有三个不同的观点揉在一起， 如果作为一个段落的主题句则不符合 要求，该主题句可分解为三个主题句， 由三个段落分别来完成.
请看下面的段落有什么问题：
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA （Young men’s Christian Association 基督教青 年会）for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame （身躯） again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Every day I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
例如主题句：“American food is terrible ”和“Pollution is a serious problem”就过于概括； 而主题句：“He speaks English”和 “ I bought a car last week”就过于具 体。
江苏专用高考英语二轮培优复习专题五书面表达课件
【参考范文2】 Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels.These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers’ purchase
【评分标准】 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
【写作思路】 本篇书面表达要求考生根据两段文字材料写一篇文章，针对“消费排名”现象 论述自己的看法和观点，并阐述理由。文章为任务型读写，属于议论文，主要使用
第一和第三人称，一般现在时。写作时应注意紧扣两段材料表达的主题，不可偏题，
还应注意合理使用高级词汇和较复杂句型。
convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.
请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
【写作内容】
1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象；
2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2—3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
高考英语江苏专版二轮专题复习三维课件：增分篇+专题五+书面表达+第一节+第二讲+如何写记叙文的摘要
如何写记叙文的摘要
对记叙文进行概括时，要抓住原文的人物、事件、结 果三大要素。有些记叙文的结尾有一个点题句，表达深刻 内涵或故事带给人们的启示，在写摘要时也需把故事寓意 表达出来。
一、记叙文摘要的模板 1．没有寓意只单纯介绍事件的记叙文摘要模板 (1)人物——事件 (2)人物——事件——结果 2．篇末有表示文章内涵的记叙文摘要模板 人物——事件——结果——启示
第二步：整合这些要素，提取重要信息，舍去次要细节
阅读全文之后，发现本文重要的信息是：人物和发生的事情。
第三步：确定人称和时态 人称：本文是讲述了一个小女孩和父亲的故事，应该用 第三人称； 时态：事情发生在过去，用一般过去时。 第四步：串联要素，确定表达
In this passage, the writer mainly tells us about a little girl, who wanted to buy some time from her busy father so that he could accompany her.
[点拨]
第一步：圈定本文的要素(见原文画线部分)
who when where
what
a girl and her father
at the time when her father came home from work
at home
The girl borrowed $10 from her father and wanted to buy an hour from her father.
参考答案：The passage mainly tells us about a father who posted his daughter's illness via WeChat to raise money for her treatment despite the fact that he had the ability to cover the medical expenses.
2020江苏高考英语二轮讲义：专题五 书面表达 层级二 第二讲 句式要高级句子要鲜活
第二讲 句式要高级，句子要鲜活[学生用书P106]句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。
精彩句式的合理使用会使文章极具可读性。
考生在写作时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线！[策略1] 特殊句式，风景独好写作中，如果考生能够使用强调句、倒装句、省略句、感叹句等特殊句式，不仅能彰显考生的英语水平，还能提升写作档次。
1．运用强调句①(2019·太原模拟书面表达)With your generous help, I firmly believe that I will adapt to the college life as soon as possible.→It is with your generous help that I firmly believe that I will adapt to the college life as soon as possible.②(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)I believe hard work will pay off!→I do believe hard work will pay off!2．运用倒装句(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The game is so significant that it is required that everyone should be present punctually.→So significant is the game that it is required that everyone should be present punctually.3．运用虚拟语气If you should accept my application, I would spare no effort to commit myself to your satisfaction.→Should you accept my application, I would spare no effort to commit myself to your satisfaction.4．运用省略句(2019·昆明高三摸底调研书面表达)While we travel along the way, we can enjoy the beautiful scenery as well as the new looks of the villages and towns.→While travelling along the way, we can enjoy the beautiful scenery as well as the new looks of the villages and towns.5．it 句型①(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)First of all, bear it in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time, which is of great significance to show your politeness.(it 作形式宾语)②(2018·江苏卷书面表达)It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.(it作形式主语)[策略2] 三大句式，编排巧妙1．增加亮点的定语从句定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次，在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句，或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句，这些都能为文章增加亮点。
2020江苏专版高考英语二轮复习讲义：专题5 书面表达 第二节 三
三、读写任务类——说明文典例写作内容30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；你的分析，从社会规范(rules regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的满分作文阅卷老师点评评分标准一、说明文的概括技巧说明文通常会有明确的主题句，先抓住关键词，并根据各段落的主题，有序地组织语言，完整表达出文章的中心内容。
如果是分析型说明文，概括时要找出文章所说明的现象、产生该现象的原因及解决问题的方法或建议，然后用自己的话重组信息点。
概括时要找出： 1.文章说明的是什么现象？ 2.造成这种现象的原因是什么？3.解决这种现象或问题的措施或建议是什么？ 二、说明文读写任务类常用句型1.This article deals with/discusses/analyzes/strongly emphasizes the impact of...2.This article not only describes...but also suggests...3.This article compares the disadvantages/benefits of...and summarizes key findings...4.This article gives an account of/provides an analysis of/provides a method of...5.This article shows/tells us that...6.The author finds it necessary to.../The purpose of the report is to show that...7.The author holds the idea that...，giving it an example of sb.who...8.The author strongly emphasizes the benefits of getting up early such as...9.This article points out the common phenomenon ，which...(补充解释)Xue Zhaofeng ，a professor from Peking University ，reportedly has more than 170,000 subscribers to his online teaching course and could be making about 35 million yuan ($5.3 million) a year.Xue is only one among the hundreds of online teachers making millions of yuan a month.According to iResearch ，an agency specializing in Internet data collection ，the online education market was worth 156 billion yuan by the end of last year ，and it is expected to reach 260 billion yuan by 2019.Online education has also found mention in this year ’s Central Government Work Report ，which Premier Li Keqiang delivered to the annual National People ’s Congress.We can thusconclude that online education not only has huge economic potential，but it also enjoys government support.Online education is not without problems，though.Some online “educators” are extremely popular yet they hardly teach students anything useful.Worse，there is hardly any supervision of online education agencies.A China Central TV report on Nov 17 said quite a high percentage of such agencies are being operated without the education bureaus’ acknowledgement.写作内容1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个单词阐述网络课程流行的原因以及你对网络课程健康发展的建议。
高考英语二轮专题复习课件：书面表达(32张PPT)
• …, it is absolutely a good news. • …, I am extremely delighted to hear about the
A Chinese boy consumed a large sum of money in two years overseas. What’s worse, he couldn’t live on himself and didn’t get a diploma eventually.
Para. 2 Voice your view
Previously, Chinese students would have to take standardized college admission tests, such as the SAT and ACT used in US schools.
The Gaokao is regarded as suitable preparation for Cambridge. The Gaokao scores of successful applicants will vary from province to province and year to year. As a guideline， successful applicants will usually have scores in the top 0. 1％ of those taking the Gaokao in their province. In addition to the total score， Cambridge Colleges will pay close attention to individual subject scores and scores in the Senior High School Examinations （Xueye Shuiping Kaoshi； previously the
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本文是一篇纯文本读写类作文。所给文本是两则日记,都是关于制订新年计 划的。要求结合所给文本,谈制订新年计划的意义,以及如何才能实现新年计划 。文章的主体时态应是一般现在时。 [写作要点]
1.用约30个词概括两段文字的主要内容: (1)很多人习惯在新年伊始表决心立计划; (2)有人成功实现,有人失败。
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2.你的观点: (1)制订新年计划的意义:
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(2019江苏苏北三市模拟) 请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左高右考的导文航 章。 Li Jiang 1 January, Sunny It's that time of year again: Time to make New Year's resolutions. It has become
2020版高考英语新素养突破大二轮江 苏专用 ：专题 五 书面表达 3作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题 课件中 考作文 高考作 文ppt
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江苏高考英语二轮课件：专题五书面 表达 层级二 第二讲 句式要高级句子
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