全国英语四级作文指导
大学英语四级作文讲义
1. Young people may find going abroad appealing because they really enjoy it. (空洞句) Young people may find going abroad appealingbecause we can learn a lot and broad oue view ina different counties.2. The reason I like surfing the Internet because it is my favorite hobby. （句子碎片）The reason why is that ………It is widely accepted/ believed thatIt goes without saying that3. Mobile phone is very common in our society, about 1/3 of city dwellers have become accustomed to using it.Mobile phone is very common in our society and about 1/3 of city dwellers have become accustomed to using it（标点）4. Some students did not choose their courses wisely, consequently, their credits for college admission were inadequate.Some students did nit choose their course wisely ,consequently; (分号)5. I kept on thinking about failing in NINEM for MA/MS in last year. Why? Because of the time.Because of the time is limited. （从句不可以成为主句）6. I am going to have a lot of activities during the summer vacation. For example playing in the field, climbing the mountain, and traveling by train.for example 后一般只跟一样东西such as 可以在后面加许多7. College students doing part-time jobs is good to his family, himself and the society.to their family theirselves and the society(错误指代)8. I will meet with lots of difficulties, but I think I can overcome it. (faulty reference)9. Finding a good apartment is as difficult as to pay the rent.10. The canteen should setup several televisions. Improvement of the Sentence Writing1. Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.2. Many Chinese people have gone to the United States in the past 15 years.3. Such belief is wrong and dangerous.As a matter of fact ,such belief is unfortunately wrong and possible dangerous (副词)4. There are two reasons for the effect.There are two possible resons fot the this dangerous effect (形容词)5. I think we can take three measures to solve the problem.Three measure , I think can be taken to solve the problem. （插入语）6. It seems that the first part is better written than the other parts.the first part ,it seem s is better than the other parts（插入语）7. We are making great efforts to improve our English. Great efforts are being made to improve （多用被动语态)8. Because of social demands, there appear many evening schools.Many eveing schools are made called to existence by social demands(多用被动语态)9. Diplomas are very attractive because it is demanded by our society.Why are these diplones so attractive and charming ?The reason for this is that it is (无中生有)10. English studying is very common because it is widely used in our society.11. Living in the countryside is the best thing for me.Nothing could be better for me than living in the countryside(反问陈述)12. Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will always find advertisements.It is impossible to pick up an newspaper without fing ads13. We can see from the above graphs that from 1990 to 1995 the price of meat was on the rise, while consumption increased.14. Although we hold different attitudes towards opportunity, no one should neglect its importance.Different as the attitudes one ,no one (as的作用)15. As is shown by the two graphs, from 1800 to 1900, with the rapid growth of U.S. population, the number of species no longer existing shot up, adding up to 70 in 1990.During the period of the time from16. Pollution is an extremely serious problem：the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.17. Beijing has won the bid for the 2008 Olympic Game! Many college students could not sleep that night because they were so excited.18. Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty.19. The style of living has become more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people.20. More and more people agree (realize/are aware) that women should enjoy full equality with men.21. Teachers are called “engineers of human soul”.22. Does television have more advantages than disadvantages?23. I am in favor of equal rights for women. I think women should especially have the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms. They should get the same pay as men for the same job. They should also have equal opportunities for promotion.24. True friends will be very proud of your progress. If you face difficulties true friends will encourage you.①空洞句②句子碎片③标点④分号⑤从句不可成为主句⑥破折号⑦错误指代⑨平行结构⑩被动⑾要用人做主语⑿形容词和副词⒀插入语⒁无中生有⒂⒃陈述⒄冗余结构⒅反面绪论的句型————文章的开头段部分第一类：选择题型的开头For most people today, ____________has become their main source of__________, but as forme, __________should be regarded as a better source.There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of____________. Somepeople suggest that, while others argue that____________, l agree with the latter.It is a quite controversial argument whether_____________. In my opinion, l think that____________is a better idea because of_____________.It is often difficult for some people to decide whether ___________. But for others, the advantages of__________ always outweigh the disadvantages.From my point of view it is more advisable to choose______________ rather than____________.People differ greatly in their attitudes towards this problem. Some people hold the opinion that____________. Others, on the contrary, maintain that ____________. Personally, I stand on the side of____________.Despite the fact that most of them like____________, I would like to choose to_____________. 第二类：判断题型的开头赞成类l agree with the statement to some extent that ___________.I can see both advantages and disadvantages to_____________. Overall, l think it is a good idea. Consequently I agree with the title statement that________________.I fully support the statement above because I am very sure that______________.Many people advocate that___________, they claim that_______________, my opinion is the same as theirs in the following reasons.At first glance, it seems very difficult for us to draw a definite concIusion that_______________is right or wrong, because it has both advantages and disadvantages.However, after serious considerahons we can see that under most cireumstances _____________ will do more good than harm.Two different opinions obviously exist to support and to oppose. After pondering theopinions from several aspects, personally, I agree with the idea that____________.反对类Nowadays, the problem of _____________has aroused public attention. Some peoplecriticize that. They believe that____________. However, I firmly objectto this argument.Until recently, ______________ was viewed as the prime argument, but people are taking a fresh look at it.Although it is an admirable idea, ____________ is not always a realistic option.Thinking logically, I can only say that this statement is valid because.Some people think that_______________, frankly speaking, I cannot agree with their opinion for the reasons below.To make it an extreme, the majority would argue that __________．It is essentialFor______________.第三类：论述题型的开头One of the hottest topics many People talk about now is___________.It has become apparent to us that______________.____________ plays a vital part in everyone's daily work and life.In the past few years, there has been a growing trend that____________.One of the universal issues thet draw growing concern is_____________._______________. This view has been shared now by more and more people.____________ is known as one of the most serious problems in today's society. We can see it almost everywhere. This phenomenon is the result of several reasons.With the development of society, _____________.In recent years, many cities have been faced with the serious problem of___________.One of the great writers once said that__________. Now it still has a realisticsignificance.When asked about ___________,people have al1 kind of views concerning it. From mypoint of view, ____________.本论的句型————文章的理由段部分承上启下的过渡句型In my opinion, the phenomenon __________is mainly due to several factors.A number of reasons may help at this point.This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.Putting too much emphasis on ___________ may result in obscuring other facts.To assume that ________ is destined to miss the following points.The reasons and examples 1isted below will strengthen my point of view.阐述理由的句型The main problem with this argument is that ___________.The root cause for __________ is____________.The most immediate reason for ___________ is ___________.One of the factor accounts for is that _____________.举例This offers a typical instance of ____________.Take __________ for example.We may cite a common example of ___________.结论的句型——文章的结论部分In short,___________. In sum,___________.In summary, ___________. In a word, __________.Taking into account of all these factors, I think that ___________.Based on the points discussed above, we can see ___________.With the improvement of ___________, ___________ will prove to hold great superiority over ____________.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that _________. There are a lot of details to consider, but al1 in all, I support the idea that _________.While it is true that the argument I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think that ____________. 问题解决提出解决方案Measures must be taken toIt is high time we had toIt is pressing/indispensable/essential that proper actions/effective measures should be taken to Great efforts should be put into/focused onWe need to take a fresh/clear look/view at this matter/problem/situation /in a new perspective/ from a new standpoint.最佳、最重要解决方案的句型What we can do is simply toThe best approach/solution to … isIt is urgent/pressing/significant/practical/feasible to应用文常用句型常见辩论话题理由1．SmokingFor：1．it is pleasurable and relaxing2．it is one's right3．it is difficult to stop smoking4．it is an old custom going back hundreds of years5．it is not always dangerous to one's health6．it makes socializing easier7．it is an important source of tax revenue8．intoxication is a natural drive (e.g., coffee, drugs, alcohol)Against:1．it is harmful to one's health (e.g., heart disease, bronchial trouble, lung cancer )2．it is harmful to those nearby3．it is a dirty and expensive habit4．it is addictive (i.e., nicotine)5．it is quickly being banned in public areas6．it lives off deceptive advertising2．School UniformsFor：1．they build character2．they eliminate class differences3．they allow students to better concentrate on their studies4．they are popular with parents and administrators5．they are inexpensive6．they are attractive and neat7．they eliminate the need to choose what to wear every day8．many countries have themAgainst：1．they lead to conformity2．they are disliked by students (students like to primp)3．they create a military mentality4．they are an infringement on our freedom (different strokes for different folks) 5．they are ugly and childish6．they deprive youths of an important choice: what to wear7．they are losing popularity everywhere3．Legalized GamblingFor：1．it reduces taxes2．it is a source of government revenue3．it is gaining popularity in the world4．it is an old practice dating back thousands of years5．it is pleasurable (e.g., horse racing, casinos)6．it is voluntary7．many people play poker and mahjongAgainst：1．it is banned in most countries2．it is condemned by most religions3．it can become addictive4．it encourages people to throw away their hard-earned savings5．it teaches people not to work for money6．it can destroy happy families7．it can lead to suicide8．it is easily controlled by the Mafia (e.g., bookmakers )4．City LifeFor：1．it is exciting2．it attracts people from the countryside3．it offers the best schools, hospitals, and stores4．it offers many amenities (e.g., swimming pools, bowling alleys, and sports stadiums ) 5．it offers many chances of employment6．its noise and overcrowding are hardly noticeable7．cities have an efficient public transportation system8．city planners can create a good living environment 9．crime can be found in the countryside as wellAgainst ：1．it is unhealthy (e.g., water and air pollution )2．it is not a good environment for children3．it is devoid of Nature and distinct seasons4．it is noisy and dangerous5．it makes people nervous and even neurotic6．it has created awful slums7．cities are overcrowded and expensive8．many city dwellers long to return to the countryside 9．city housing projects are unpopular5．Informing Patients Of CancerFor：1．patients want to know2．it is wrong to hide the truth3．it is not a shock for the patient but for his family4．it gives the patient a chance to plan his last days5．it is the patient' s body, not the doctor' s6．doctors are for it (in the U. S.)7．it allows a person to choose alternate means of treatment Against：1．it is heartless and cruel2．it may make the patient give up3．it causes depression4．it can lead to suicide5．most relatives are against it6．a white lie can save undue suffering7．doctors are against it (in Japan)6．Social SecurityFor：1．the state should help the poor, aged, unemployed, and sick 2．the state should provide good health care for its citizens 3．the strong must help the weak4．Social Darwinism is outdated5．there will always be social misfits that need help6．all religions stress charity7．all advanced countries have some form of social securityAgainst ：1．it costs too much2．it encourages laziness and destroys the work ethic3．it does not work efficiently4．people should look after themselves5．it results in heavy taxes6．Social Darwinism tells us that life is the "survival of the fittest" 7．there are no freebies in life7．CoeducationFor ：1．it is natural (i.e., adult society is not segregated )2．it gives men and women a chance to better understand one another 3．it gives men and women a chance to compete with one another 4．it is the modern trend5．it has many practical advantages (e.g., school plays, music groups) 6．it produces well-adjusted adults7．most parents prefer coeducation.8．separate schools foster sexual rivalry9．women become neurotic in all-women' s schoolsAgainst ：1．women do better academically in their own colleges2．women are in college to get an education, not a husband 3．women have their own values to develop4．it can lead to intimacy and promiscuity5．it is still rare in some countries6．it is opposed by some parents7．it robs women of their self-confidence8．separate schools have existed for centuries9．marry great men and women attended separate schools8．Corporal PunishmentFor ：1．children are not adults2．children respect discipline3．it is a check on excessive permissiveness4．it does no permanent damage because children are hardy creatures 5．it is opposed only by mixed-up psychologists6．it is a form of training7．it builds real character8．it reinforces the authority of teachers and parents9．it works to control juvenile delinquency10. there is the saying: Spare the rod and spoil the childAgainst ：1．it is barbarous2．Freud said it is wrong3．love is better than physical punishment4．it can cause psychological problems5．it is not necessary if children are raised correctly6．it is an emotional, irrational response7．it can result in a lawsuit8．beatings have been known to result in death9．there is the saying : Violence begets violence9．Organ TransplantsFor ：1．they prolong life2．they are supported by the medical profession3．they enhance medical science4．they are a challenge to surgeons5．critically ill people want transplants in order to live6．costs will come down as the surgery becomes routine7．there is no "time" to die8．death is defined as brain death9．the drugs cyclosporine and FK-506 have helped eliminate the problem of rejection Against ：1．they are too expensive2．they favor the rich3．they encourage the poor in Third World countries to sell their organs4．they are unnatural as seen by the body' s rejection5．they are often unsuccessful6．the idea is sinister7．Nature has decided when we should die8．the process of deciding who gets the next available organ is unfair9．there is as yet no agreement on what constitutes death (brain -dead versus heart-dead)10．Civil DisobedienceFor ：1．it draws attention to unjust of unconstitutional laws2．it is a matter of religious or moral convictions3．it is the only way to fight oppression4．it is usually nonviolent5．it is used only in extreme circumstances6．it goes back to the time of Jesus Christ7．it is common, like cheating on taxes and illegal parking8．God' s laws take precedence over man' s laws9．protestors are ready to accept punishment for their beliefs10．many famous people have engaged in civil disobedience (e.g., Mahatma Gandhi and Andrei Sakharov)11．there are many famous examples such as the Boston Tea Party and conscientious objectors during the Vietnam WarAgainst ：1．no one is above the law2．it can quickly destroy law and order3．it leads to anarchy4．it leads to contempt for all laws5．protestors are cowards trying to escape punishment6．protestors often resort to violence7．the democratic process should be used to effect change11．AbortionFor ：1．it is a woman' s fundamental right, say abortion-rights advocates2．it is necessary for unwed mothers3．it is necessary for rape victims4．it is necessary in some cases to save a mother' s life5．procreation is a couple' s choice6．it is a form of birth control7．poor, illiterate women want it8．most women support it9．it is necessary to prevent overpopulation10．it prevents unwanted babies from coming into the world11．it is not murder because a fetus is not yet a human beingAgainst：1．it is murder (infanticide), say anti-choice groups2．life begins at conception3．it is an unnatural practice4．it is immoral because only God can take a life5．a fetus is a human being-unborn but viable6．the rights of a fetus must be protected7．it is painful for the fetus-a barbaric practice8．it is not the same as other modern birth-control devices9．it causes many women to have guilt feelings10．unwanted babies can be put up for adoption12．CensorshipFor ：1．it is for the good of society2．it protects children3．every society has some form of censorship4．the individual is less important than the community 5．absolute freedom leads to anarchy6．many adults are not mature enough to make their own decisions 7．it can be carried out wisely8．pornography is not art9．pornography is in the hands of unscrupulous people 10．obscene works should be banned11．it is necessary in times of warAgainst ：1．it limits the individual' s freedom and human rights2．it is not consistent with democracy3．it is subjective and not objective4．it creates the problem of who will censor5．it is disappearing in advanced countries6．it deprives adults of their right to make decisions7．it can be applied to all aspects of our lives8．it is the first step toward totalitarianism9．it draws attention to banned works and increases sales 10．voluntary censorship is better13．Equality Of the SexesFor ：1．we all have the same Creator2．matriarchal societies go back thousands of years3．all advanced societies have given women equal rights 4．most companies have adopted equal pay for equal work 5．there are no skills women cannot master6．there are even women body builders7．men have a basic inferiority complex8．women are more interested in peace than men9．some world leaders are women (e.g., Margaret Thatcher )10．women are superior to men in some fields11．no scientific studies back up the stereotypes men have of women Against ：1．women have a different biological function2．women are physically weaker than men3．women can' t be mothers and career women at the same time 4．many women want to depend on men5．most women want to stay at home and be mothers6．women haven' t been given the vote in some countries 7．women are emotional and irrational8．women think intuitively (no famous women philosophers) 9．hormones cause women to behave differently14．Foreign AidFor ：1．it is humane2．the rich should help the poor3．all religions teach charity4．it seeks to end poverty, disease, and illiteracy5．it can be used to help refugees and combat slavery6．it is given by all advanced countries7．it is supported by the Red Cross and the United Nations8．it helped rebuild Japan and Germany9．it increases world trade10．it achieves political objectives11．it promotes national securityAgainst ：1．it is degrading to the recipient2．it is never appreciated3．it leads to feelings of inferiority4．it limits the independence of developing countries5．it subsidizes laziness6．it often goes into the pockets of corrupt officials7．it supports Third World dictatorships8．it can be culturally damaging9．it has divided the United Nations10．the money should be spent at home for one' s own people15．DivorceFor ：1．it is the logical solution to a bad marriage2．it allows both persons to seek happiness in a second marriage3．it dates from as early as ancient Babylonia4．it is legally recognized by most countries5．it is accepted by most people6．remarriage is a right7．it is necessary in cases of adultery, alcoholism, desertion, drug addiction, and mental and physical cruelty8．children are better off living with one parent than with both in an unhappy environment 9．feminists support itAgainst ：1．it breaks up the family2．it makes it too easy for two persons to walk out of their marriage3．it is opposed by various religions4．it is banned by some countries5．it was uncommon until fifty years ago6．marriage is a serious responsibility7．it is a sign of immaturity8．counseling is the solution9．it harms children emotionally10．children need both parents11．child custody decisions are messy16．Compulsory Military ServiceFor ：1．it aims to strengthen national defense2．it teaches young men discipline3．it builds character and physical fithess4．it teaches valuable skills5．it nurtures a spirit of comradeship an equality6．it offers opportunities for overseas travel7．it exists in many countries (e.g., Switzerland, Singapore)8．it reduces unemployment9．it instills a sense of patriotismAgainst：1．it is unnecessary in view of today' s professional armies2．it is a step away from peace3．some countries have abolished it (e. g., the U.S., Japan)4．today' s armies do not need unskilled manpower5．it interrupts young men' s studies and careers6．it is a useless experience7．it is a source of slave labor8．it results in bullying and conformity9．it does not build character10．it can cause mental disorders11．military skills are useless in private industry17．V oluntary EuthanasiaFor ：1．it is a basic right-the right to die2．the Greek origin of the word euthanasia means "good death "3．it allows one to die with dignity4．it allows one to choose the time and place of death5．it is logical and humane6．it can be regulated with safeguards (e.g., the person must be rationally lucid) 7．it is painless8．it is the solution to a terminal illness with suffering9．the dying want it10．some doctors will assist the patient to end his life11．it recognizes death as a natural, biological process12．doctor-assisted suicide is legal in Holland, under certain guidelines Against ：1．it is murder or suicide2．it is illegal in most countries3．most doctors oppose it4．it is a first step to killing the old and infirm5．it is irreversible in the event of a new cure6．only God can end a life7．most religions oppose it8．suicide is always irrational9．the dying are too sick to know what they want10．the dying should look to hospices that dispense painkillers11．it can be abused by greedy persons seeking an inheritance18．Capital PunishmentFor：1．it frightens would-be criminals (acts as a deterrent )2．it serves as a just reward for killers3．it lowers crime rates4．it is more economical than a life sentence (saves the state money)5．in rare cases it may lead to the death of an innocent person, but this cannot be helped 6．most countries practice it7．killers should not be allowed to become hero-figures8．a life sentence is never for life but for only a few years9．killers are heartless and cruel and should not be protected by sociologistsAgainst ：1．it frightens no one2．it is motivated by revenge and not justice3．it does not lower crime rates4．it can lead to the death of an innocent person (a mistake)5．it is a barbaric practice (hanging, electric chairs, gas chambers)6．it is unjust because only God can take away life7．the real solution to crime is the elimination of social injustices and rehabilitation 8．killers are often mentally ill and in need of medical treatment9．the death penalty is being abandoned by many countries19．Trade ProtectionismFor ：1．industries need government protection2．no nation can allow its industries to be destroyed3．agriculture must be protected for national security reasons4．real free trade doesn' t exist and never has5．national security is more important than idealistic trade principles6．it has made Japan, South Korea, and Taiwan prosperous7．every nation ' s economy is shaped by its own culture8．there are various forms of free-market economy9．every nation should have an industrial policy10．governments must provide jobs for their workers by whatever meansAgainst ：1．it invites retaliation2．it invites reciprocity based on a quid pro quo basis3．it impedes world trade and prosperity4．it hurts poor, underdeveloped countries5．it leads to trade wars6．it makes industries less competitive7．it costs taxpayers large sums of money8．it gives consumers less choice9．it is denounced by most nations10．it is based not just on high tariffs but also on government regulations, inspections, certification, and distribution20．Nuclear PowerFor：1．it provides huge amounts of energy from small amounts of fuel2．it is the best source of energy for countries without oil3．the world' s supply of oil will be exhausted in 90 years4．it already produces most of the energy needs of some countries5．it could supply all the world' s electricity for millions of years if fully developed6．it is safe if properly supervised7．nuclear power plants create less air pollution than fossil-fuel power plants8．the issue has become far too emotionalAgainst ：1．it is too dangerous (e.g., Chernobyl accident)2．most people are afraid of it3．the world' s supply of uranium is fast decreasing4．it is better to develop other sources of energy (e.g., fusion)5．radioactive wastes cannot be disposed of6．it can produce nuclear weapons for warfare7．certain radical world leaders are trying to buy nuclear weapons8．nuclear plants are expensive to build9．the U.S. is slowly closing down its nuclear power plants10．nuclear wastes can cause cancer。
2024年12月大学英语四级参考作文
2024年12月大学英语四级参考作文1.2024年12月大学英语四级参考作文篇一怎样保持健康How to Keep Fita healthy body is very important to every one of us. when you are sick, you feel painfu l all over your body, have no energy to work; and the only thing you want to do is lying on the bed.when you are healthy, you can eat well, sleep well, sing and jump happily, do all the thi ngs you like to enjoy life.the methods to keep us fit vary. in the morning, you can get up early, go outdoors, bre athe the fresh air, and do physical exercises. running and swimming are extremely helpful t o keep one fit. if you are a busy person and have no special time allocated to do these thing s, there are still some ways useful for to keep fit. the easiest way is to walk to your office ins tead of riding a bike or taking a bus.you also have to take a routine physical check - up. your doctor will know the conditio n of your body most clearly, and he will give you the most valuable advice to keep fit. you s hould always try to make yourself happy. if you feel happy, you can eat well, sleep well, and your body is sure to be in an excellent condition.health is the most valuable possession a person expects in his life. try every means to keep fit is my advice to the people who want to live a happy life in this beautiful world. 2.2024年12月大学英语四级参考作文篇二和谐校园Creating a Harmonious Campus1. 建设和谐校园很重要2. 和谐校园不仅指和谐的环境3. 为建设和谐校园我们应该……【范文】Creating a Harmonious CampusA harmonious campus is of vital importance. It is just like a solid, colorful and appeali ng textbook. It nurtures the students’ mentality, beautifies their minds, sparks their aspira tions, enlightens their wisdom and accelerates their overall development.When it comes to a harmonious campus, we do not merely mean a beautiful environ ment on campus. We also mean a healthy interpersonal relationship, where teachers and stu dents get along well, while students respect and care for each other. We mean a sustainable campus that brings teachers and students to fully play their enthusiasm and positivism as w ell, while at the same time reinforce campus regulations and campus order.The creation of a harmonious campus needs joint efforts of institutes and students. C olleges and universities should introduce advanced campus culture which encourages a vari ety of creative extra-curricular activities and puts first staff, faculty and students. As student s, we should behave ourselves, learn to be tolerant and respect each other.3.2024年12月大学英语四级参考作文篇三绿色消费Green Consumption1. 绿色消费的概念在中国日渐流行2. 中国推行绿色消费还存在许多困难3. 如何解决这个问题【范文】Green ConsumptionThe conception of green consumption has gradually become popular in China. More and more green foods are making their appearance on the market and more and more people are becoming conscious of environmental protection.However, there still exist quite a few difficulties in the further promotion of green con sumption. On the one hand, many people are still not quite clear of the advantages of gree n foods. On the other hand, due to high profits, many fake green foods are found in themarket. Moreover, many consumers don’t want to pay extra money for green foods.There may be several ways to solve these problems. Firstly, the government should su pervise the good quality strictly to protect consumers’ interests. Secondly, the conception of green consumption should be further promoted and emphasized. Thirdly, the governme nt should work together with manufacturers to make the price more reasonable.。
大学英语四级作文讲解ppt课件
In my opinion, free admissions to museums are good for the public, but on the other hand they may pose problems to the museum management. Governments should provide help to museums and guide them to serve the public better.
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• 1、 not only…but also… • Only by…can… • Not until…do… • 2、分词做状语，动名词做主语或宾语 • 3、适当插入一些副词或介词短语等 • This measure, undoubtedly(in my opinion),
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注意：1.不要妄图以情动人； 2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。
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2.结构上要层次清晰
结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句 (Conclusion)。 分段——文章结构的关键 引言段——扩展段——结尾段 引言段要包含中心句；扩展段每段应有主题；结 尾段自然收尾 开头空出相同字符数空格；题目不必重抄；段与 段之间不必空行
will eliminate the waste of water.
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评分原则
• 1、检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四 级教学要求。
• 2、采用总体评分（Global Scoring)方法 • 阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（reward
2024年度-《四级作文教程》PPT课件
《四级作文教程》PPT课件CATALOGUE 目录•引言•四级作文考试概述•写作基础技能提升•常见题型及应对策略•高分技巧与备考建议•实例分析与模拟训练01引言提高学生英语四级写作水平，满足大学英语教学要求帮助学生掌握四级作文考试技巧，提高考试成绩培养学生英语写作能力，提高英语综合应用水平目的和背景四级作文常用句型及词汇短语四级作文常见题型及写作技巧四级作文考试概述及评分标准四级作文写作步骤及实例分析四级作文备考策略及模拟训练课件内容概述010302040502四级作文考试概述考试形式作文类型字数要求时间限制考试形式和要求01020304采用计算机化考试形式，考生需在规定时间内完成一篇作文。
主要包括议论文、应用文和图表作文三种类型。
作文字数一般要求在120-180字之间。
考试时间一般为30分钟。
评分标准和流程评分标准主要包括内容、语言、结构和卷面四个方面。
其中，内容要求切题、有深度；语言要求准确、流畅；结构要求清晰、连贯；卷面要求整洁、美观。
评分流程一般由两名阅卷老师分别评分，取平均分作为最终成绩。
如两名老师评分差距过大，会引入第三名老师进行仲裁。
对历年四级作文真题进行统计和分析，可以发现各种类型的作文出现频率和变化趋势。
历年真题类型分布历年真题主题分布高分作文特点分析历年真题的主题，可以了解四级作文考试的热点话题和命题趋势，为备考提供参考。
通过对历年高分作文的分析，可以总结出一些共同的特点，如立意新颖、语言优美、结构严谨等。
030201历年真题分析03写作基础技能提升通过广泛阅读和积累，掌握更多高级词汇和短语，提高表达的准确性和丰富性。
扩大词汇量系统学习语法知识，包括时态、语态、虚拟语气等，确保句子结构正确、表达清晰。
语法规则掌握注意避免常见的词汇和语法错误，如拼写错误、主谓不一致、中式英语等。
避免常见错误词汇和语法运用句子结构和表达句式变化灵活运用简单句、并列句、复合句等句式，使文章表达更加生动、多样。
英语四级作文写作技巧
英语四级作文写作技巧英语四级作文写作技巧对于考英语四级的同学来说，英语四级作文是特别重要的一部分。
那么英语四级作文有哪些写作技巧呢?下面由学习啦我为大家整理的英语四级作文写作技巧，盼望大家喜爱!英语四级写作的常见语法错误1、主谓不全都，人称与动词不符。
例如：My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误) My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)上面例句中，主语是My sister ，为第三人称，所以谓语动词应当用第三人称单数形式goes才正确，这种主谓不全都的错误在写作中是很常见的问题，稍一疏忽就会犯，考生需要更加细心才行。
2、句子成分残缺不全，语句不通。
例如：We should read books may be useful to us. (误)We should read books which may be useful to us. (正)这是一个定语从句的例句，其中which在从句中做的是主语，所以不能省略，一旦省略就会造成句子成分残缺，考试中大家在写完一句话时要记得读一遍看看通不通顺。
3、句子成分多余，累赘简单。
例如：This test is end, but there is another test is waitingfor you. (误)One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)这一句的错误有点中式英语的味道，逐字逐句对应翻译，there is 放在这里，累赘而又繁琐。
4、动词时态、语态的误用，前后不全都。
例如：I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)这个例句中前面是was walking ，所以后面也要用相应的过去进行时were，同一个句子里，没有特别状况，前后时态时要保持全都的。
2023年四级英语作文写作思路及答案
2023年四级英语作文写作思路及答案【2023年四级英语作文写作思路及答案】As the 2023 College English Test (CET) approaches, many students may feel anxious about their writing skills. However, with the right strategies and practice, you can improve your writing and confidently tackle the writing section of the exam. Here are some tips and ideas to help you prepare for the 2023 CET writing section.1. Understand the Writing Task TypesThe 2023 CET writing section will consist of two tasks: an essay and a letter or report. The essay task will require you to write a short essay on a given topic, expressing your opinion or analyzing a situation. The letter or report task will test your ability to write a formal letter or report based on a provided scenario.2. Practice Writing RegularlyTo improve your writing skills, it is essential to practice regularly. Set aside time each day to write essays or letters on various topics. This will help you become more comfortable with the writing process and develop your ability to express your thoughts clearly and coherently.3. Focus on Grammar and VocabularyCorrect grammar and a wide range of vocabulary are essential for writing well. Review common grammar rules and practice using them in your writing. Additionally, expand your vocabulary by learning new words and phrases and using them in your essays and letters.4. Organize Your Ideas EffectivelyWhen writing essays or letters, it is crucial to organize your ideas in a logical and coherent manner. Start by creating an outline to plan out your main points and supporting details. This will help you stay focused and ensure that your writing iswell-structured.5. Proofread Your WritingBefore submitting your writing for the 2023 CET, make sure to carefully proofread it for errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Check for consistency in verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Additionally, ensure that your writing is clear and easy to understand.Sample Answer:Essay Task:Topic: Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media.Social media has become an integral part of our daily lives, offering numerous benefits as well as drawbacks. One of the main advantages of social media is its ability to connect people from different parts of the world, allowing for easy communication and networking. Additionally, social media platforms provide a platform for sharing ideas, information, and experiences with a global audience.However, social media also has its downsides. One of the major disadvantages is the potential for spreading misinformation and fake news, leading to confusion and misunderstanding among users. Additionally, social media can have negative effects on mental health, as excessive use can lead to feelings of loneliness, depression, and anxiety.In conclusion, while social media has its advantages in terms of connectivity and information sharing, it also comes with several drawbacks that need to be addressed. It is important for users to use social media responsibly and critically evaluate the information they encounter online.Letter Task:Scenario: You recently attended a job interview and want to thank the interviewer for the opportunity. Write a thank-you letter to express your gratitude and reiterate your interest in the position.Dear [Interviewer's Name],I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for the opportunity to interview for the [Position] at [Company Name]. I thoroughly enjoyed our conversation, and I am excited about the possibility of joining your team.I am impressed by [Company Name]'s dedication to [specific aspect of the company], and I believe that my skills and experience would make me a valuable asset to your organization.I am particularly interested in [specific aspect of the position], and I am confident that I have the qualifications to excel in this role.Thank you once again for considering me for the [Position]. I look forward to the possibility of working with [Company Name] and contributing to its continued success. Please feel free to contact me if you require any additional information or if there is anything else I can provide.Thank you for your time and consideration.Sincerely,[Your Name]By following these tips and using the sample answers provided, you can improve your writing skills and effectively prepare for the 2023 CET writing section. Remember to practice regularly, focus on grammar and vocabulary, organize your ideas effectively, and proofread your writing to ensure success on exam day. Good luck!。
四级各类作文框架
四级各类作文框架一、议论文1. 引出话题描述现象或提出问题，引起读者兴趣。
可以引用相关数据、事例或名言来引出论点。
2. 阐述论点明确提出自己的观点，即论点。
可以通过解释、举例、引用等方式来支持论点，使论点更加有说服力。
3. 分析论点对论点进行深入分析，探讨其原因、影响、利弊等方面。
可以从不同角度进行思考，提供多种观点和论据来丰富论证。
4. 反驳反对观点如果存在反对观点，要进行反驳。
指出反对观点的不足之处，并用自己的论据进行反驳。
可以提出一些建议或展望未来，使文章更有深度和意义。
二、说明文1. 引出说明对象简单介绍说明对象的背景、特点或相关情况。
可以提出一些问题或引起读者的好奇心，引导读者进入。
2. 详细描述说明对象按照一定的逻辑顺序，对说明对象进行详细的描述和解释。
可以使用图表、数据、事例等方式来辅助说明，使内容更加直观易懂。
3. 分析说明对象的特点或功能探讨说明对象的独特之处、优势或所具有的功能。
可以分析其对人们生活、工作、社会等方面的影响。
4. 举例说明给出具体的例子来进一步说明说明对象的特点或功能。
例子可以是真实的事例、历史事件、科学研究等。
可以提出一些对说明对象的展望或建议。
三、记叙文1. 引出故事描述一个引人入胜的场景、事件或人物，吸引读者的注意力。
可以使用生动的描写、对话或细节来营造氛围。
2. 发展故事按照时间顺序或事件发展的逻辑，逐步展开故事的情节。
描述人物的行动、心理变化和周围的环境变化。
3. 高潮和转折在故事中设置一些高潮和转折，增加故事的吸引力和紧张感。
可以是人物面临的困难、挑战或意外情况的发生。
4. 结局和启示讲述故事的结局，包括人物的命运、事件的结果等。
可以通过结局引出一些启示或思考，让读者从中获得一些感悟。
可以表达自己对故事的感受或评价。
大学英语四级写作技巧盘点
大学英语四级写作技巧盘点通过了三级B考试的同学们,就要开始考虑四级考试了。
相信大家在高中甚至初中阶段就已经听说过英语四级的“恐怖传说”了。
下面是小编整理的大学英语四级写作技巧盘点，欢迎大家阅读分享借鉴。
英语四级写作技巧看清题目，明确写作范围、内容。
和我们考试一样，有许多的学生看一半题，就感觉已经很是理解题目的意思了。
这是兵家之大忌，写到最后才发现自己写的已经跑题了，为时已晚。
一般来说最少分三段，第一段说明情况、阐明自己的基本观点，反对还是赞同。
第二段可以分段论述自己的观点，可以摆明自己的证据、例子、看法。
最后一点对自己的论述观点要进行总结归纳。
阐述部分最重要。
在论述自己的观点的时候要有层次，有条理。
在每句开头还可以用First,Secondly,Finally等开头词来分别诉说自己的观点。
可以用一些大家熟知的例子来论证你的观点。
平时要多积累一些词汇、句式等。
比如表示举例、转折、连接等的词汇证明你的词汇积累是很大的，这样才可以让判卷老师在短时间范围内给你高的分数。
在考试进考场的时候，你可以多看看自己以前的积累本。
遇到不同的要求要理解题目的意思。
遇到表格类的写作，就要分析卷子是让你论证什么观点，你需要在脑海中建立什么观点。
遇到漫画写作，要看清漫画想要告诉你的寓意是什么。
注意的小知识点。
考试写作文中题目大小写，作文开头字母的大小写，以及文中的标点符号，段落层次表达的意思。
还有就是文章的人称、时态。
时态，是文章的精髓，一个时态应用不正英语四级写作方法文意切题：切题是决定一篇作文是否合格的根本。
即使结构清晰、语言华丽，但主题与指令要求不符，那一切都是枉然。
所以，写作时，文章主题一定要紧扣命题点或图画寓意来写，段落布局也要切合主题，从而确保内容准确。
结构清晰：英语作文讲求逻辑严密，要求文章结构合理有序。
一般而言，四级作文可依三段式展开，第一段提出问题、点明主题或描述图画;第二段分析问题、论述主题或揭示图画寓意;第三段解决问题、给出评论或发出吁请。
2024下半年四级作文通用模板
2024下半年四级作文通用模板一、开头段。
1.话题引入。
2.话题阐述。
3.写作意图。
范文：With the rapid development of society, the importance of English learning has become increasingly prominent. As a college student, I believe that improving English proficiency is crucial for our future career development. In this essay, I will discuss the significance of English learning and propose some effective strategies to enhance English skills.二、中间段落。
1.主题句。
2.分论点。
3.论证或举例。
4.过渡。
范文：To begin with, English has become a global language, playing an essential role in international communication and cooperation. Proficiency in English not only facilitates our study and work but also broadens our horizons and enriches our lives. Moreover, with the increasing globalization of the economy, many multinationalcompanies require employees to have a good command of English. Therefore, improving English proficiency is of great significance for our future career development.In addition, effective English learning strategies are crucial for enhancing English skills. Firstly, it is essential to create an English-friendly environment. For example, we can watch English movies, listen to English songs, and communicate with native English speakers. Secondly, we should make good use of various English learning resources, such as English textbooks, online courses, and language learning apps. Furthermore, practicing English regularly is also important. We can participate in English corner activities, join English clubs, and engage in English discussions with classmates. By doing so, we can gradually improve our English proficiency.三、结尾段。
大学英语四级写作技巧归纳
大学英语四级写作技巧归纳大学英语四级写作技巧归纳大学英语四级一般指大学英语四级考试。
大学英语四级考试，即CET-4，College English Test Band 4的缩写，是由国家教育部高等教育司主持的全国性英语考试。
掌握正确的英语四级做题的方法，才不会成为你的绊脚石。
所以以下是店铺给大学英语四级写作技巧归纳大学英语四级写作技巧归纳篇1一、审题立意大学英语四六级作文的题型一般是标题作文、主题句作文或情景、图表作文等等，去年四级作文考试有书信和记叙文，但基本都属于命题作文范畴。
对于命题作文，审题立意是写好作文至关重要的一步。
所谓审题，就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想和主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。
也就是通过分析作文题给出的标题、主题旬或情景，找出关键词或中心词，明确写作要求，是写哪方面的内容，既包括题材上的要求，也包括体裁上的要求.如果不审题就随便下笔，想一句写一句，内容离题，即使再好的再华丽的再精心构思的词句表达也无济于事.另一方面，四六级写作的目的是测试学生用英语书面表达思想的初步能力，并不是测试你母语创作能力，而且为了便于作文评卷有一尽量统一的标准，出题方式无论怎样变化，四六级作文都可以归纳为三段式，有的甚至给出三段的段首句。
其目的就是让学生们在统一主题下的写作要点、思维和方式尽可能地同一化和统一化。
鉴于此，我们应清楚四六级写作没有太大的自由发挥空间。
在构思段落之前一定要仔细斟酌标题、主题句和段首字，找出关键词从而确定写作的方向和范围，而且还应记住要尽量缩小这个范围，不能脱离要求任意展开，那样属于跑题。
二、段落构思文章的段落，是文章的基本组成部分，一篇好的文章需要精心的段落构思和合理的段落安排，根据不同的题材确定不同的段落写作顺序.四六级作文从结构上看，一般由三部分组成：引言部分;结尾部分，而且每段往往只有一个主题，段中各支持句围绕明确的主题，层层展开论证并服务于主题句。
整篇文章也是层层推进，环环相扣，条理分明，完整统一。