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002.宽容的环境是孕育成功的沃土（55分） 1、小郭团队以在校中学生的身份取得科 研成果、摘获国际大奖，令人敬佩。这 之中必有他们不懈的努力和扎实的科学 知识功底，但我认为最重要的还是宽容 的环境。
002.宽容的环境是孕育成功的沃土（55分） 2、诚然，若非小郭注意生活细节，这个 课题就很难提出；若非有志同道合的同 学、自学而来的大学理科知识和反复实 验的毅力，研究便很难取得进展。但 “世有伯乐，然后有千里马。千里马常 有，而伯乐不常有。”若无父母的理解 支持和学校的宽容与设备支撑，得不到 伯乐赏识的“千里马”，小郭们终将无 法施展才华，再好的研究计划也逃不开 “骈死于槽枥”的结果。
001.告别印象主义（原55分，调为58分）
2、读小郭团队的故事，不难发现诸多 可圈可点的成功因素：关注生活细节， 是明察秋毫、细致敏锐的观察力；一年 的自学和实验，是攻艰克难、持之以恒 的坚韧力；实验的分工合作，是各司其 职、团结协作的凝聚力……加之父母与 校方的理解支持，内外因的叠加，都为 团队的成功起到推波助澜的作用。然而， 究其成功原因之根本，则在于小郭团队 反复实验、上下求索的实证精神。
2、开头在名言引入观点 之后，能对材料中小郭团 队的成功元素进行列举和 初步肯定，体现出思维的 全面性。段尾以“然而” 为转折词，突出“上下求 索”的实证精神，再次表 明了自己的态度。
001.告别印象主义（原55分，调为58分） 3、试想，若无实证，而只是注意到了旁人 遗落的细节，那么小郭便将遗憾地囿“天才 的微光”；若无实证，只是在书本中“证实” 脑海里的微光，小郭便止步于象牙塔内；若 无实证，只是赖着学校给予的实验资源草草 了事，则实验成果何以具有说服力，何以用 于指导生产实践，何以增添教师的福祉呢？ 由此可见，如果缺少实证精神，则团队的优 秀特质，地利人和的外部条件都将如一指流 沙，洒落在地。
2023年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试新高考Ⅰ卷 作文解析课件15张
然，人们倾向于忘记世界的多样性，忘记在历史和过去面前的反思，否认 过往的好故事，匆忙地告别过去，弗行本路，急赴未来。
1.何为“好故事”？
从形式上，“好故事”首先应该是故事，即在一个序列（时 间或因果）上排列的事件；其次要“好”，既包括一波三折、扣 人心弦、娓娓道来、具体生动，等等。
当然，内容和形式往往水乳交融，相得益彰，共同发挥作用 ，使故事更“好”。例如小中见大、意蕴丰富、常读常新、振聋 发聩、富有感染力，等等。
往深处漫溯，实为失去了本色，困囿于时代的一隅，失去了积淀好故事的 支撑，茫然了方向。
吾侪当讲好中国故事，纵以点点萤光，夙兴夜寐，思往矣之精神，铸华夏 千秋清梦，续今朝长歌九皋，抒写不曾断续的故事。
老师点评：
本文作者的观点独到，立意高远，文采熠熠，援例精当，横 亘古今，纵横腾挪，理贯意通。作文中所运用的引用，修辞等手 法恰如其分，字里行间透露着作者扎实的语文功底和丰富的文学 素养。通过本篇作文，我们可以看到作者对于作文的深刻思考和 独到见解，作文题材新颖、角度独特，展现了作者独到的思维方 式，具有一定的启示意义，但值得注意的是文字语言的连贯性还 需加强。
好故事是民族的禀赋，见证了人们的共同情感。
凝眸漶漫青史，晦暗夤夜，我们见诗经中“嗟我怀人，寘彼 周行”，闻“将翱将翔，佩玉琼琚”，我们沉浸在诗经的故事 里，感受着周时的爱恨离愁，痛其所痛，悲其所悲，乐其所乐， 朝忆在水一方的唯美，彼黍离离的沧桑。
似在天宫阙处，皎月泻辉，我们同故事如此接近，同过去又 是那般遥远。中华民族的情感却在一处汇聚，充盈于心。
《四六级考试作文》PPT课件_OK
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(注：这是老版本，满分为15分)
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14 Women are playing an increasingly important part in society
today. In Many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society.
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词义扭曲
(1) The town has only 30 thousand population but its economy has been on the rise in recent years. • (2) In my opinion, a college student should learn at least five or six thousand English vocabulary. • (3) I can hardly find a common point with my deskmate. • (4) Information is unavoidable in our times, namely, we cannot keep away from it.
If you want to be successful in your future, you should attach importance to the study of English. But how can you do well in your English studies? Among other things, determination is an important factor in learning English. However, some people tend to neglect this and only hope that luck will help/favor them.
中考作文指导公开课PPT课件
增加修辞手法
避免语言重复
适当运用比喻、拟人、排比等修辞手法， 可以增强文章的表现力和感染力。
尽量避免同一词汇或表达方式的重复使用 ，可以采用同义词或近义词进行替换。
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中考作文的备考策略
备考计划和时间安排
制定备考计划
调整计划
根据中考时间，制定合理的备考计划 ，明确每个阶段的学习目标和任务。
根据学习进度和效果，适时调整备考 计划，保持学习的针对性和有效性。
03 草拟 在草稿纸上列出文章大纲和要点，以便展开详细论述 。
04 撰写 按照构思和草拟的内容，完成文章的撰写。
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修改
仔细检查文章，修改错别字、语法和标点符号，确保 文章通顺、流畅。
写作的常见问题及解决方法
跑题
语言不规范
结构混乱
内容空洞
缺乏逻辑性
在写作过程中要时刻关注 主题，确保内容紧扣主题 。
注意语言的规范性，避免 使用口语化和网络语言。
在构思阶段要明确文章结 构，确保文章条理清晰。
在写作过程中要注重细节 和例子，使文章更加生动 有力。
在撰写过程中要注意逻辑 关系，确保段落之间衔接 自然。
写作的修辞手法和表达方式
类比
通过比较两种事物的相似之处，突出事物的 特点或表达某种情感。
反问
通过反问句表达肯定或否定的意思，引起读 者的思考和共鸣。
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注意题目陷阱
有些题目会设置陷阱，审题时需 特别留意，以免掉入陷阱。
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思考题目背景
审题时可以思考题目的背景和意 图，有助于更准确地把握题目的 要求。
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中考作文的素材选择
素材的来源和分类
来源
生活经历、阅读、观察、媒体、 他人传授
大学英语四级写作完整ppt课件
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如何结尾？——你的看法和打算
• 我的看法和打算 (结论)
基本结构： Your thought + The meaning of your choice 例：我认为应该举办英语口试 + 这么做的意义何在
In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm. Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.
• 11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 • 14分——切题。表达思想清楚，内容丰富，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本
上无语言错误。
• 另外，字数不足，也酌情扣分，如累计字数为110－119扣1分，100－ 109扣2分，90—99扣3分，70－79扣5分，50－59扣7分，少于49扣9分。 累计字数不包括题目中给出的主题句、起始句和结尾句中的字数。
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具体评分标准如下：
• 0分 —— 白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而思想无法 表达。
• 2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误， 且多为严重错误。
高职高考语文作文 PPT课件(共31张)
议论文：《笑》 （有删节）习作
（开头）笑，无论是对工作，还是对身心都是 大有好处的。人常道：“笑一笑，十年少。”笑， 能使我们的生活更有乐趣；笑，能使我们的工作 更有活力；笑，能使我们的身心更加健康。 （主体） 笑，能使我们的生活更有乐趣。……（详例） 笑，能使我们的工作更有活力。……（泛例） 笑，能使我们的身心更加健康。……（自己） （结尾）十六七岁，花一般的年龄。让我们大 家都来努力，用“笑”来减少生活中的烦恼与忧 愁；用“笑”来增加工作中的信心与乐趣；用 “笑”来传递人际中的和谐与温情。使我们的生 活时时温馨，处处洋溢着纯真的笑声!
（三）如何写好话题作文
1、选择好话题作文的切入点。 所谓选好切入点，就是要选好一个写作角 度。这是写好文章的关键。根据提示，从 自己最熟悉，最能驾驭的材料中，选好话 题的切入点，深入挖掘，写出新意。如 2002年全国高考卷以“心灵的选择”为话 题写一篇作文。有篇高分作文叫《昭君的 选择》。 2、选择好话题作文的文体。 话题作文的特点之一是“不限文体”，但 要注意，“不限文体”不是“不要文体”。 选择最擅长的文体来写作，记叙文或议论 文。
议论文
三要素：论点、论据(理论论据、事实论 据)、论证（举例论证、引用论证等） 提出问题——分析问题——解决问题 五段三绝： 五段：头尾各一段，中间分三段。 一绝：凤头亮观点，引用加解释； 二绝：猪肚分三段，举例又讲理； 三绝：豹尾要照应，号召用排比。
（四）作文扣分项
1、字数。800字，每少30字扣1分。一般标了有格， 至少写到所标字数的下三行。电脑统计数字有可能 统计纯字数，所以应该尽量写多点字数。 2、字迹。字迹端正，文面整洁，不乱涂乱改。忌讳 “龙飞凤舞”“天书”“歪歪扭扭”“边猜边读”。 3、错别字。 4、标点。书写规范，不可用“.”代替“，”“。”。 应独立占一格或两格。 有些标点不应在一行之首使用，如“，”“。”。 有些标点不能在一行之尾使用，如‘ “（《 等， 有些标点不能兼跨上下两行，如……——等。
湖南省学业水平考试高中英语作文复习课件
湖南省学业水平考试高中英语作文复习课件全文共6篇示例，供读者参考篇1Hello everyone! Today, I'm going to talk about the high school English exam in Hunan Province. As you know, it's super important and we need to study really hard to do well in the exam.First of all, we need to practice our listening skills. Make sure to listen to English songs, watch English movies, and even try to have conversations in English with our friends. This will help us get used to hearing English and improve our comprehension.Next, we should work on our reading skills. Reading newspapers, magazines, and books in English will help us expand our vocabulary and improve our reading speed. We can also try to read English articles online or even write our own paragraphs in English to practice.Don't forget about grammar and vocabulary! It's important to review all the grammar rules we've learned in class and practice using them in sentences. We should also try tomemorize new vocabulary words every day and use them in sentences to better remember them.Lastly, practice makes perfect! We should do as many past exam papers as possible to get a feel for the types of questions that will be asked in the exam. This will help us feel more prepared and confident on exam day.So, let's work hard, study smart, and ace the high school English exam in Hunan Province! Good luck, everyone!篇2Hello everyone! Today, I want to share with you some tips and tricks for preparing for the Hunan Provincial Academic Proficiency Examination for high school English.First of all, it's important to practice your English skills every day. Try to read English books, watch English movies, and listen to English music to improve your vocabulary and grammar. You can also use websites and apps like Duolingo or Quizlet to practice English exercises and quizzes.Secondly, make sure to review all the different sections of the exam. This includes reading, writing, listening, and speaking. For reading and listening, try to do practice exercises and listento English podcasts to improve your comprehension skills. For writing, practice writing essays, letters, and summaries to improve your writing skills. And for speaking, try to practice speaking English with your friends or family members.Additionally, it's important to familiarize yourself with the format of the exam. Make sure you know how many sections there are, how much time you have for each section, and what types of questions will be asked. This will help you feel more confident and prepared on exam day.Finally, don't forget to take care of yourself during the exam preparation period. Make sure to get enough rest, eat healthy food, and stay positive and motivated. Remember, you can do it!Good luck with your exam preparation, and I hope these tips will help you succeed in the Hunan Provincial Academic Proficiency Examination for high school English! Let's do our best together!篇3Hello everyone, today I'm going to talk about how to prepare for the Hunan Province Academic Proficiency Examination for high school students in English class.First, make sure to review all of the important topics that will be covered on the exam. This includes grammar rules, vocabulary, reading comprehension, writing skills, and listening skills. It's important to have a good understanding of all of these areas in order to do well on the exam.Next, practice, practice, practice! The more you practice your English skills, the better you will become. Try doing practice tests, reading English books or articles, listening to English podcasts or music, and writing essays. This will help you become more comfortable with the language and improve your skills.Don't forget to review any mistakes you make on practice tests or assignments. Learning from your mistakes is a great way to improve your English skills. Take note of any areas where you struggle and focus on improving in those areas.Lastly, make sure to get plenty of rest and eat healthy foods leading up to the exam. A well-rested and healthy mind will perform better on the exam. So make sure to take care of yourself as you prepare for the exam.In conclusion, preparing for the Hunan Province Academic Proficiency Examination for high school students in English class requires hard work, practice, and dedication. But with the rightmindset and preparation, you can do well on the exam. Good luck everyone!篇4Hello everyone! Today I am going to share with you some tips on how to prepare for the Hunan Province Academic Proficiency Exam for high school English.First of all, make sure you know the format of the exam. There will be multiple choice questions, reading comprehension, writing tasks and listening tasks. It's important to practice each type of question so you know what to expect on the day of the exam.Secondly, practice your vocabulary and grammar. Make flashcards of new words and review them regularly. Try to use new vocabulary and grammar structures in your writing and speaking exercises.Next, work on your reading skills. Read a variety of texts such as newspapers, magazines, and books to improve your reading comprehension. Pay attention to main ideas, supporting details, and inference questions.For the writing tasks, practice writing essays on different topics. Make sure to include an introduction, body paragraphs with supporting details, and a conclusion. Also, work on your spelling, punctuation, and paragraph structure.Lastly, for the listening tasks, listen to English podcasts, songs, and videos to improve your listening skills. Try to summarize what you hear and answer questions based on the audio.Remember to practice regularly and ask your teachers for help if you need it. Good luck with your exam preparation!篇5Hello everyone! Today I want to share with you some tips on how to prepare for the upcoming Hunan Province Academic Proficiency Exam for high school English. This exam is super important, so it's really important to be well-prepared!First of all, make sure you understand the format of the exam. There will be different sections testing your reading, writing, listening, and speaking skills. Make sure you know what to expect so you can practice effectively.Next, start practicing early! Don't wait until the last minute to start studying. Set aside time each day to review your notes, do practice exercises, and work on your speaking skills. The more you practice, the more confident you will feel on exam day.Don't forget to work on your vocabulary and grammar. Make flashcards, use online resources, or work with a study group to help you improve your language skills. Remember, the more words you know, the better you will do on the exam.It's also important to get plenty of rest and eat well during your study period. A healthy body and mind will help you perform your best on the exam.Lastly, don't stress too much. Remember, this exam is just one part of your academic journey. Do your best, but don't put too much pressure on yourself. Stay positive and focused, and you will do great!Good luck to all of you preparing for the exam. You've got this! Let's study hard and do our best on the exam. Go, go, go!篇6Hey guys! Today we're going to talk about how to review for the Hunan Province Academic Performance Examination for highschool English. It's super important to do well on this exam, so let's make sure we're prepared!First, let's go over some key points to review for the exam. Make sure you know all the grammar rules, vocabulary, and sentence structures that are commonly tested. Practice reading comprehension passages and answering questions about them. Also, work on your writing skills by practicing writing essays and short responses.Next, let's talk about some study tips. Make a study schedule and stick to it. Break up your study sessions into small, manageable chunks so you don't get overwhelmed. Use flashcards to help with memorization and practice speaking English with a friend or family member.Now, let's talk about some resources you can use to help you study. Check out online resources like study guides, practice tests, and grammar websites. You can also ask your English teacher for extra help and guidance.Remember, the key to doing well on the Hunan Province Academic Performance Examination is to be prepared and confident. So keep practicing, stay positive, and you'll do great! Good luck, everyone!。
METS4(医护英语考试四级)作文练习ppt课件
Exe. 3---key
A 26-year-old married female was admitted today with her chief complaint of a 6-day fever and cough.
Six days ago, she began wunning a fever and having a bad cough productive of mucous sputum, for which she has not taen any medical treatment up to now. In the past three days, she has been having a persistent high fever, an exacerbated cough productive of rusty sputum and a thoracalgia intensified with respirations. During her illness, she has been weak and had a poor appetite with normal urine and stools. However previously, she has been in good health and seldom sonsulted physicians.
• Postoperative nursing care and other supports are of great significance in achieving operative efficacy.
Exe. 2---key
At present surgery has been taken as an effective treatment commonly used for patients with cancer. However, many patients would severely suffer physically and mentally after these cancer treatment operations due to some postoperative complications and side effects, which therefore highlights the significance of postoperative care.
2024版精品中考复习作文指导ppt课件
中考作文重要性占据语文考试高分值中考作文在语文考试中占据相当大的分值比例，是决定语文成绩高低的关键因素。
考察综合能力中考作文不仅考察学生的语言表达能力，还涉及思维逻辑、创新能力和文化素养等多方面能力的综合考察。
历年中考作文题材回顾多样化题材历年中考作文题材丰富多样，包括记叙文、议论文、说明文、应用文等，涉及生活、成长、社会热点、文化传承等多个领域。
突出时代主题近年来，中考作文越来越注重引导学生关注社会现实和时代主题，如环保、科技创新、传统文化等。
03未来中考作文将更加注重对学生综合素养的考察，包括批判性思维、创新能力、跨文化交流能力等。
强化素养考察中考作文将更加紧密地结合现实生活，引导学生关注身边的人和事，体现作文的实用性和生活化。
紧密结合现实生活鼓励学生展示个性化和独特性的表达将成为未来中考作文的重要趋势，要求学生能够运用自己的语言风格和思维逻辑进行表达。
倡导个性化表达未来中考作文趋势预测审题立意与选材策略审题立意仔细分析题目，明确主题和写作要求，提炼中心思想，确定文章立意。
选材策略根据立意，从生活、学习、阅读等方面广泛积累素材，选择典型、生动、有感染力的材料。
0102合理安排文章段落，构建清晰的文章脉络，包括开头、主体、结尾等部分。
运用逻辑关联词和过渡句，确保文章条理清晰，层次分明，各部分之间衔接自然。
结构搭建逻辑推进文章结构搭建与逻辑推进语言表达技巧及运用语言表达运用准确、生动、形象的词语和句式，增强文章的表现力和感染力。
技巧运用掌握并灵活运用各种修辞手法和表达技巧，如比喻、拟人、排比等，提升文章的文采和内涵。
01审题不清未仔细阅读题目，导致理解偏差。
02选材不当所选材料与主题不符，无法支撑论点。
03结构混乱文章逻辑不清，段落安排不合理。
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高三期中考试作文“蹄疾步稳”讲评课件
又快又稳“蹄疾步稳”是良马，善调步伐，能控节奏，能成步法 ，方行稳致远。
“良马”“良才”绝不只是标签，是完整的过程性评价，真正的良 马“蹄疾步稳”日行千里是它在行进中不断地调整步伐，“蹄疾步稳 ”很难，需控制“快慢”“稳急”之节奏，形成自己的一套“步法”，步 法得当，蹄疾步稳，千里方可日达。于我辈，“贪功冒进，恋稳拖 沓”是错了步伐、失了节奏、乱了步法，随时都可能遭遇崩盘，最 后落得前功尽弃、人仰马翻，事与愿违！
我们经常犯的错误是“心快手慢”，如何让心“慢下来”，让手“ 快起来”，这是我们能否在“任重”在肩的情况下还能“致远”的关键 。蹄疾步稳，小步快走便是解决之道。
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3."蹄疾步稳"指马跑得很快同时很平稳,可引申为速度快并且很 稳。"蹄疾"出自唐朝诗人孟郊的《登科后》:"昔日龌龊不足夸， 今朝放荡思无涯。春风得意马蹄疾，一日看尽长安花。"，意思 就是昔日科举不得志，心胸郁闷促狭的时光实在不值一提，今日 及第萧洒旷达自由自在思绪开阔无涯。乘着和煦的春风，志得意 满，策马驰骋在宽阔的天街上，马蹄似乎也格外轻松迅疾，就好 像一天就可以看尽长安似锦的繁花。其中，疾就是飞快。
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虽说“驽马十驾，功在不舍”，但日新月异的当下是“万马奔腾 ”“人才济济”，让自己成良马，为良才方能提升核心竞争力！当然 ，我们不鼓吹“社会达尔文主义”，但对“贪功速成”“恋稳拖沓”的 价值观坚决否定，愿我辈为良马，能有自己的步法，能蹄疾步稳 ，郊有诗曰：“春风得意马蹄疾，一日看尽长安花”，用以形
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岁月不居，时节如流。有的青年人受惑于“出名要趁早”，过度 担心朱颜辞镜花辞树的到来，为求一时之名，献身网红经济，把 专业书籍束之高阁，将学业科研弃之一旁，精心于皮囊，醉心于 流量，偶有幸运儿能掀起一时风浪，最终却都落得个腹内空空的 结果。更有甚者，弄虚作假，伪造学历，硬凹人设，花重金，请 枪手，一时风光无两，他朝被人戳穿，跌落神坛，贻笑大方。如 此种种，不过是现代版的“仲永”“画皮”罢了。
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Obviously they didn’t realize that their behavior
had done great damage to the beauty of the park. Without
Boys and girls,
have something to tell you. There will be a lecture in our library, at 4:00 on Wednesday afternoon. Our history teacher Mr. Zhang will be invited to talk about Chinese traditional festivals. I’m sure you’ll learn more about Chinese culture and customs. Please be present on time and you might take a notebook and a pen with you. After the lecture, you are welcome to ask questions and I’m sure Mr. Zhang will be glad to communicate with you.
hesitation, I went up and stopped them politely. Quite
embarrassed, the two girls came out immediately. Then they took pictures outside the fence. Seeing that, I smiled
May I have your attention, please? I
That’s all. Thank you.
Sunday,
May 4 fine
It was a sunny day today and I went to Xishan
Park for a spring outing. The moment I entered
the park, a variety of beautiful flowers and green
trees came into sight. Attracted by the beauty, I
couldn’t stop taking photos. As I wandered along
the path, enjoying the beautiful view, I noticed
and everything looked nicer in my eyes.