2023届高考英语读后续写情感描写素材讲义(深厚友谊 爱心助力 旅途历险)
2023届新高考读后续写精品专题万能表达篇讲义

新高考英语读后续写高频表达指导情感与动作篇六大续写功能Functions:一.复杂心情(消极) 二.不知所措(消极) 三.感激(转变)四.激动(转变) 五.紧张+成功(积极) 六.成功+结尾(积极)→For a moment, within my heart rooted to the spot. I should not have behaved in that way.有一瞬间,我心中有一种复杂的感觉,使得我钉在原地(倒装+定从)。
我不应该那样做(虚拟语气)[2016浙江卷]: 在她内心有一种复杂的感觉,Jane维持一动也不动,疲惫和无法动弹。
Within her heart was a complex feeling, Jane remained rooted to the spot, exhausted and unable to move.[2021八省联考]:在我内心有巨大的惊讶和感激,我站着一动也不动,盯着那个即将从盒子里拿出午餐的女孩。
Within my heart were enormous surprise and gratitude, I stood rooted to the spot, staring at the girl who was about to take out their lunch from a box.[2021全国1卷]:爸爸难以置信地钉在原地,当他看着可怕的厨房,想象双胞胎做了啥。
Within his heart was a complex feeling, Dad remained rooted to the spot in disbelief, watching the terrible kitchen and imagining what they had done.→配套词汇及短语:plex adj.复杂的plicated adj.复杂的3. emotion (s) n.情绪4. freeze (froze) v.冻住,冻结5.be rooted to the spot (因为惧怕或吃惊而)钉在原地6. abruptly 突然地7. stand (stood) still站住不动8.imagined what sb had done想象下某人做啥9. the sudden situation 突如其来的情况→ Heart beating wildly, she had no idea what to do. As a few seconds passed, an idea came into her mind.心在狂跳,她不知道该怎么办。
2023届高考英语二轮复习读后续写练习课件(与朋友相约与爬山,朋友却意外受伤)

➢ [高分句型3]. Then I was loaded into an ambulance and taken to a hospital, where I
stayed for four days.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
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I yelled for help. Hearing my cry for help, Mel made her way down and other climbers came to assist me. A couple of them were trained first aid treatment. They splinted my leg and called rescue team. Mel stayed by my side while I tried not to cry from the pain. I’d been lying on the ice shivering and in agony for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me. They strapped me into a sled and pulled me down the mountain. Then I was loaded into an ambulance and taken to a hospital, where I stayed for four days.
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状语从句
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强调句
副词做状语 非谓语
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2023届高考英语读后续写命题热点一助人篇+亲(友)情篇讲义

英语高考读后续写命题热点一助人篇+亲(友)情篇一、困难环境描写①David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children (使他不能像其他孩子一样走路或跑步), but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)②As the economy was in decline (由于经济衰退), some people in the town had lost their jobs (失去了他们的工作).Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet (牵强维持生计).③There was a man sick in bed (卧病在床), his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy.④But one day, a hurricane hit the town where he lived, pletely destroyed his home (完全摧毁了他的家).(2022·广州联考)⑤Christmas is going to be different this year. We won't be having a tree or presents (我们不会有圣诞树或礼物).We can barely afford food.(2022·潍坊市模拟)⑥Because the man had a poor sense of direction, hardly had he set foot in the forest when he realized he got lost. Cold and hungry, he was at a loss what to do/ he didn't know what to do (他不知所措).(2022·宁波市模拟)⑦After the war, prices were rising out of control. To the despair of the workers/To the workers' despair (令工人们无望的是), the pany announced the closure of the factory.⑧One thing he learned from this experience is that a good friend should be one who/that can share your joys as well as your sorrows (能与你同甘共苦的人).⑨Having gone through all kinds of hardships (经受了千辛万苦), they formed a close friendship. No matter what happened, they would help each other from then on.⑩It's true that success consists of going from failure to failure without losing your enthusiasm. How can you see the rainbow if you haven't experienced wind and rain (假如不经受风雨)?二、心情高级表达1.表示感动、感谢①Needless to say, I was deeply moved (深深地感动) when I saw all that they were doing. I cannot tell you how wonderful a Christmas that was.(2022·山东省大联考)②Recalling their sincere eyes and smiles while chewing the juicy fruit, I felt the warmth flowing into my heart (感到一股暖流涌入了我的心).(2022·新高考八省联考)③Tears welling up in his eyes (他热泪盈眶), he said in a strangled voice. (2022·南通市考前练习)④They were so grateful for (他们如此感谢) what Frank had done for them that they concentrated more attentively on their work than usual in order to make more delicious bread.(2022·唐山市二模)2.表示惊异、难受、难受、生气、恐慌、为难①He was shocked to see (他震动地看到) in front of him was a little disabled girl without legs. (2022·湖南省百所学校联考)②But what shocked Sam was that (让Sam震动的是) the man didn't try to escape when he saw him. Instead, the man looked relieved.(2022·广东省联考)③Mother gave them a tight hug,“Unbelievable! You can cook! It's the biggest surprise I have received (这是我收到的最大的惊喜).〞(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)④Each time these things happened, I was sick of (厌倦了) the way most people hadn't bothered to help.(2022·新高考八省联考)⑤He hung his head (他低下头), trying to avoid eye contact with me.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)⑥Hearing this, he lowered his eyes, obviously disappointed (明显很绝望).(2022·盐城市三模)3.表示快乐、欢乐、兴奋、冲动①At that moment, a flash of admiration and joy swept over me (我心中闪过一阵艳羡和喜悦).(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)②Seeing his confident smiles, I sighed in relief (如释重负).(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)③Hearing the good news, Bernard waved his hands and jumped up happily (双手挥舞,快乐地跳起来) and was too thrilled to say a word.④Astonished, Peter sat on the square, tears welling up in his eyes suddenly (眼泪突然涌了出来).(2022·山东省名校模拟)⑤Watching me wolfing them down, the family grinned and smiled (咧开嘴笑了), so did I.(2022·新高考八省联考)三、动作与细节描写①Hearing these words, he turned his head (他转过头去), tears shining in his eyes, and murmured “but other kids will laugh at me.〞(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)②For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he jumped up (他跳了起来) and cried, “I havea great idea! I have a solution that we can all help acplish.〞③She went out to buy the paper bags (出去买纸袋) in which the popcorn can be filled.④She prayed for help (祈求关心) and dragged herself forward.(2022·长沙市模拟)①For the following weeks, John prepared the popcorn (预备了爆米花) for Bernard every Saturday.Finally, the “little popcorn boy〞attracted much attention from the crowd, and the ines were enough to solve the problem (这些收入足以解决这个问题).②They sat around the decorated Christmas tree, with bright eyes staring at the variety of beautifully packaged gifts under the tree (光明的眼睛盯着圣诞树下各种各样包装美丽的礼物).(2022·泰州市期中检测)四、修辞描写①When the twins heard what their father said, a river of tears poured out (泪流满面).(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)②Mrs.Meredith always told her children not to spend money like water (不要花钱似水), saving some money helping the poor.③The smile on her face shone like a diamond (像钻石一样闪闪发光).④The scenery along the journey is just like a breathtaking landscape painting (像一幅美丽的山水画卷).五、主题升华①More importantly, I earned my teammate's recognition (赢得了队友的认可) and we have bee good friends since then.(2022·1月浙江高考)②From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to convey the goodwill (盼望传递善意) that Mexican family offered me.(2022·新高考八省联考)③Smiles spread o n their faces (微笑在他们的脸上开放) while the people present burst out thunderous applause.(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)④Helping others to realize their dreams gave me more pleasure (给我更多的乐趣).⑤Following the example of the stranger, I have decided to continue the same good practic e to make a better world (制造一个更美妙的世界).(2022·辽宁省高三联考)⑥With one small gesture, you may not only spread love (不仅传递爱), but also positively influence others' lives.【典例】阅读下面材料,依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
情感描写速记(上) -2023年新高考英语读后续写

二、开心描写
1.我很高兴知道我们将一起吃晚饭。I’m thrilled to know that we’ll have dinner together.
秘诀(一):情感是人“手”
我们来看下面几个例句: (1)Fear gripped her heart.她心中充满恐惧 。(grip抓住) (2)Jealousy seized her. 她妒火中烧。(seize抓住) (3)A wild joy took hold of her. 她十分快乐。 (4)A feeling of panic seized her.她突然惊慌失措。 (5)Anxiety tore her into pieces.她焦虑不安身心憔悴。(tore是
秘诀(三): 情感是压迫者
我们来看下面几个例句: (1)Worrying deprived him of sleep.他焦虑万分,难以入睡。
(2)Excitement deprived me of all power of speech.我激动得什 么话都说不出来。
(3)Astonishment and horror oppressed her.她惊恐不安。 ( oppress 压迫) (4)Anger and bitterness had preyed upon me continually.我感 到愤怒和痛苦。(prey本意是“捕猎”,在这里引申为“折磨”。非常形 象的表达,“愤怒”和“痛苦”像猎人一样,而“我”成了猎物,不就是我 被这两种情绪折磨着吗?)
情感描写速记(下) -2023年新高考英语读后续写

2、原谅
1. 他妈妈把手指放在他嘴唇让他停止说话,在他额头上吻了一下,然后走出了书房。 (动作链)His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips,gave a soft kiss on his forehead and walked out of the study.
3. “我只是希望我知道如何帮助她,”阿曼达想着李惊恐的眼睛,自言自语道“I just wish I knew how to help her,” Amanda said to herself, thinking of Li’s frightened eyes (想到Li害怕的双眼).
第三板斧: 亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等)
1、道歉
1.“对不起,”他说到,轻轻的摸摸Jackson的头。“I’m so sorry.”he said, gently petting Jackson’s head.
2. 他放下手,小心翼翼的看了Carter 一眼,然后低下了头。(动作链)He put down his hand, glanced cautiously at Carter and lowered his head.
3. 令她惊讶的是,她对我微笑,并对我忽视了我的孤独和英语交流的困难表示道歉。To her surprise, she smiled at me and expressed her apology for ignoring my loneliness (为她忽略我的孤独道歉)as well as my difficulty with English communication.
2. 他生气地握紧拳头,但是弟弟却激动地挥着手。He folded his fist angrily, but his younger brother waved his hands excitedly.
新高考英语读后续写满分攻略:读后续写 2个万能情感句(解析版)

touch, move, embarrass,
6. 紧张 tension 7. 尴尬 embarrassment 8. 后悔 regret
impress
【其他类】 puzzle, confuse, interest, relax, touch, move, embarrass, impress
9. 愤怒 anger / rage 10. 内疚 guilt 11. 感激 gratitude 12. 如释重负 relief 13. 羞愧 shame 14. 激动 excitement
(砰砰直跳)
情感描写高级句型
4.Happiness/joy/pleasure/delight took hold of him.(极度开心) 5.She was overflowing with happiness/joy/pleasure/delight.(幸福洋溢) 6.He shed tears of joy.(流下开心的泪水)
第一组例句: 1. His eyes twinkled with pleasure when he saw the news. 当他看到新闻,他的眼里闪耀着快乐。 2.He grinned with delight when he saw us. 当他看到我们,咧开嘴开心地笑了。
情感描写高级句型
3.The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪耀。 4.I couldn’t restrain my joy and jumped into the house.我抑制不住内心的喜悦,蹦
【中性态度】puzzlement迷惑, regret后悔, relief欣慰, surprise/ amazement惊讶 下面我们把这个简单句型,进行升级。 【升级1】加强情绪的语气 比如我想要表达的是:非常令 我吃惊的是,汤姆在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。
第06讲 读后续写之“亲情+友情类”主题(讲义)-2024年高考英语一轮复习讲练测(新教材新高考)

►第06讲亲情+友情类(讲义)_____________________________________________________________________读后续写中经常会遇到人际关系及个人情感类的故事内容。
如:父子关系、母子关系、师生关系、同学友情、伴侣关系等之间涉及家人、伴侣、邻居、亲戚或他人之间的情感沟通或沟通。
此类文章中常含有涉及个人的喜、怒、哀、乐、可怕、紧急、孤独、傲慢、喜悦等细节描写。
【写作步骤】一冲突和冲突纠结1.2.His voice trembled with anger. 他的声音因生气而颤抖。
3.Filled with anger/fury(狂怒),Tom was unable to utter a single word.Tom气得一句话也说不出。
4.Boiling with rage,Tom shook his fist at me.Tom怒火中烧,对我挥舞拳头。
5.Seeing this, he was filled/ bursting with anger.看到这些,他怒不行遏。
6.Feeling a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her, Jessica threw the can at the woman.Jessica 感到一股猛烈的嫉妒在心中升腾、奔涌,她把易拉罐扔向那个女人。
7.What he said pierced my heart.他说的话刺痛了我的心。
8.He was filled/ bursting with anger and storm out of the room.他怒不行遏,气冲冲地走出了房间。
9.Finding Clark's note in a mess, his teacher was blue in the face.发觉Clark的笔记一团糟,他的老师脸气得发青。
读后续写:互帮互助的友情讲义 2023届高考英语写作专项

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Monday started out great. I woke up on time, ate breakfast and did some last minute studying for my first hour math test. I was confident of getting good grades. Then I left my house. Ten minutes later, I was settled with my friends on the school bus. We were busy chatting about how we spent our weekend. At one stop, Fat Ryan got on hurriedly. He tripped over someone's foot accidentally and THUMP! He fell flat onto the floor.Every one of us on the bus looked on and laughed crazily. Ryan struggled to his feet, dusted the jacket and made his way to an empty seat. He tried to laugh with us, but his face was burning with embarrassment. The rest of the morning flew by. I did well in my math test. I read two more chapters of To Kill a Mockingbird in English class. It wasn't long before there went the lunch bell. I met my friends from the cheerleading team in the dining hall. Then I couldn't help but notice Ryan a few tables away, sitting all alone. He caught me looking. I smiled at him quickly and looked away.When we finished eating, we headed out to the courtyard to practice a cheer we would do at that night's football game. After a little practice, we nailed the cheer, so we decided we only needed to go through it one last time. Again, just like the rest of my day so far, the cheer was going great. I raised my leg for one last toe touch. RIIPPP! I felt my jeans split down the middle of my backside.I froze. I had no idea what to do but stand still. Then I heard people burst out laughing, and I saw them pointing at my torn jeans. Trying to cover myself with my hands, I tried to laugh too, but I felt tears began to well up in my eyes.注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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高考英语读后续写情感描写素材一、深厚友谊【精彩句子】1.Whether we succeed or fail, we always have each other's backs, which makes our friendship even stronger.无论我们成功或失败,我们总是互相支持,这使得我们的友谊更加牢固。
2.Friends are like an umbrella. Whether it's sunny or rainy, they will always be there for you.朋友就像一把雨伞,无论晴天或雨天,都会永远陪伴在你身旁。
3.I nodded firmly, knowing kindness and friendship bloom in both of our hearts.我坚定地点了点头,知道善良和友谊之花在我们的心中盛开。
4.I came a thousand miles to stand in this door tonight, and it's worth it if my old partner turns up.今晚,我从千里之外赶来站在这扇门前,只要我的老朋友出现,这一切都是值得的。
5.Despite our different backgrounds, interests and personalities, we have learned to appreciate and respect each other's differences.尽管我们来自不同的背景,有着不同的兴趣和个性,但我们已经学会欣赏和尊重彼此的不同之处。
6.Although her voice carried a so-what attitude, I sensed she was pleased by the invitation.虽然她的声音中带着一种无所谓的态度,但我感觉到她对这个邀请很高兴。
7.She jumped up, screaming in an excited voice, and wrapped her arms around me tightly.她跳了起来,激动地尖叫着,用胳膊紧紧地抱住了我。
8.Looking back, I realize that my classmates have not only been my friends, but also my teachers, who have taught me the importance of friendship and the value of teamwork.回首往事,我意识到我的同学不仅是我的朋友,也是我的老师,他们教会了我友谊的重要性和团队合作的价值。
9.Watching it hang in the yard, Angela smiled with satisfaction. She called Susan, apologized for her behaviour and expressed her sincere gratitude. She said the carpet was the most precious birthday gift she had ever received in the whole world.看着它挂在院子里,安吉拉满意地笑了。
她打电话给苏珊,为她的行为道歉,并表达了她真诚的感激之情。
她说地毯是她在全世界收到的最珍贵的生日礼物。
10.I could feel his icy shell gradually melting away and eventuallyI could discuss with him looking straight in his eyes.我能感觉到他冰冷的外壳逐渐融化,最终我能够直视他的眼睛与他交流。
11.She said that it was my company and encouragement that not only made her happy, but also improved her confidence.For me. it was hersincerity that helped me adapt to a new life.她说是因为我的陪伴和鼓励,不仅让她感到快乐,也提高了她的自信心。
对我来说,是她的真诚帮助我适应了新的生活。
12.She felt lonely and hopeless until I approached her warmly. From then on, we two often learned together and shared happiness and sorrow.在我热情地接近她之前,她一直感到孤独和无助。
从那时起,我们两个经常一起学习,分享快乐和悲伤。
13.The letter was written by Charlie and it read "Thank you, my ange1l. It is your company that makes me feel warm during the days I suffer from cancer.Please keep smile.”这封信是由查理写的,上面写着:“谢谢你,我的天使。
是你的陪伴让我在患癌症的日子里感到温暖。
请保持微笑。
”14.Mr Henry, who was a little shy after hearing the praise, just smiled, saying, “You have saved my life earlier, so a friend in need is a friend indeed.”亨利先生听了夸奖后有点害羞,只是笑了笑说:“你早些时候救了我的命,因此,患难见真情。
”15.It was on that very day that Asad made his first friend in the new school, and he truly understood the value of sincerity and honesty in a relationship.就在那一天,Asad在新学校里结交了他的第一个朋友,并且他真正理解了真诚和诚实在一段关系中的价值。
【创意语段】Last weekend, my classmates organized a fun-filled activity, whichI found extremely enjoyable. Starting with a picnic in the park, we hada great time chatting and laughing together. Afterward, we played a game of football, which was really fun and competitive. Seeing everyone cheering and high-fiving each other, I realized how strong our friendship was. As the sun began to set, we decided to wrap up the day with a barbecue party. While some were grilling burgers and hotdogs, others were singing and dancing to the music. It was a memorable experience that brought us even closer together.上个周末,我的同学们组织了一个充满乐趣的活动,我觉得非常有意思。
我们从公园野餐开始,一起聊天、笑声不断。
之后,我们进行了一场足球比赛,非常有趣和激烈。
看到大家互相欢呼、击掌,我意识到我们的友谊是多么的坚固。
太阳开始落山时,我们决定用烧烤晚会来结束这一天。
有些人在烤汉堡和热狗,其他人则在跟着音乐唱歌、跳舞。
这是一个难忘的经历,让我们更加亲近。
二、爱心助力【精彩句子】1.The kind young man, seeing the lost child wandering aimlessly in the street, took him by the hand and led him safely to his parents.这位善良的年轻人看到迷路的孩子在街上徘徊,他牵起孩子的手将他安全地带回到了父母身边。
2.A woman, whose car broke down on the highway, was grateful when apasserby stopped to offer her a ride to the nearest gas station.一位女士的车在高速公路上抛锚了,当一位路人停下来提供她搭车到最近的加油站时,她感激不尽。
3.A teenage boy, hearing the cries for help from a distressed swimmer, quickly jumped into the water to save him from drowning.一名十几岁的男孩听到一名游泳者的求救声后,迅速跳入水中将他从溺水中救了出来。
4.Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helpful hand.现在,我非常感谢她伸出援手。
5.Arriving home, I wrote to him and his wife a thank-you note for doing me a favour.回到家后,我给他和他的妻子写了一封感谢信,感谢他们对我的帮助。
6.From then on, I definitely believe that a far-off relative is not as helpful as a near neighbor.从那时起,我绝对相信远亲不如近邻。
7.Surprised and moved, the mother stood rooted to the ground, and then bowed low to us, weeping tears of joy.这位母亲惊讶而感动地站在原地,然后向我们深深地鞠了一躬,喜极而泣。