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概况:

1、分数:106+36(写作+翻译)

2、题型:议论文、书信、图表

3、要求:>=150 ①内容:切题

②逻辑

③形式

(一)内容——a.写全 b.切题即可,不要求高深

(二)形式——a.三段文

b.句子,正确且稍复杂

c.单词

(三)逻辑:清晰有条理

议论文

Argumentative essay---------

两类:现实分析,观点分析

一.现象分析类

(一)负面现象: 社会类,校园类

社会类

段一:现象陈述,事实描绘

(该段避免出错)

句型1.

Living in an era stuffed with explosive information from various medias,one cannot fail to be exposed to the issue that the phenomenon of piracy gets increasingly serious. / in today’s society there are more and more pirated products. 现象本身,which unanimously calls for prompt and effective solutions.

段二:原因分析

分别陈述主观原因和客观原因

主观原因(主语是人即可)

Some people / some students / parents / consumers消费者/ producers制作者/ officials官员

句式:

a).some people are of the mistaken thought that......

一些人误认为······(同从+主观思想、意识、心态等)

......that natureal resources are inexhaustible.

b).some people are under the impression that......

一些人误以为······

some people are of the impression that......

一些人正义为······

......that pirated products are as qualified as those certified ones.

c).some people lack / are short of......

一些人缺少······

https://www.360docs.net/doc/883511094.html,ck public morality.(公德心)

https://www.360docs.net/doc/883511094.html,ck the awarness of preserving / protecting culture relics.(名胜)

d).some people are not aware of......

......of the harmfuless of pirated products.

客观原因(主语非人)

Ⅰ、自然、环境、资源、生态······

·the development of society/economy......

·the improvement of living standards......

·the dramactic growth of global population......(人口剧增)

·the booming of industry......(工业兴盛、蓬勃发展)

Ⅱ、社会、人文、心理······

·the soaring price of real estate......

·the difficulty in job hunting......

·the working stress......

Ⅲ、就业难问题······

·the financial crisis......

·the fierce competition in talent market......(人才市场)

Ⅳ、负面经济、市场类现象——盗版、假冒、豆腐渣等影响市场经济······

·the illegal competition......

·the uncompleted market economy of today’s society......(不完善的市场经济)

·the over pursuit / seeking for high profits......

·the intense globalization......

句式:

......makes......to such an extent that......

······使得······所以······

·Make sb./sth.+do./adj. ......

·Make sb./sth.+not do......

·Make the chance/opportunity become little......

·Make the demand of the sources increas......

①The dramatic growth of global population makes consumptions of natural

resources increase greatly to such an extent that the resources get increasingly deficient.

②The financial crisis makes the economy slump greatly to such an extent that work

opportunity gets much fewer than before.

③The over seeking for high profits makes a certain number of people produce

pirated commodities to such an extent that pirated products can be seen anywhere in today’s society.

句型2. 原因分析

There are many reasons for what we mentioned above.First ,we can easily find it is mainly because 主观原因. While ,it is also worth noting that 客观原因.

段三:

(1.)措施——万能措施

——具体措施

a.常见万能措施:

“软”:鼓动、号召、意识形态

·promote the awarness among people that......在人们中间推行···意识/让人们意识到······

......that natural resources cannot be regenerated.

“硬”:

·establish / lay down relevant policies (laws/regulations)

·reinforce the supervision加强监督

·strictly punish those responsible for such miscounducts严惩那些需要对不当行为、劣迹负责的人们

b).具体措施——待定

句型4.

A serious of effective measures are to be taken. First of all ,departments concerned are supposed to lay down some relevant policis or regulations ,thus leaving it under effective control .Second ,we should 具体措施/“软”万能措施.Otherwise总结,we will find it hard to extricate from the situation that the phenomenon mentioned above will get aggravating.

(2.)危害——社会

——个人

句型3.

As to its impacts ,unfortunately ,it dose serve as a disrupting factor for 社会的一方面* *. While ,for individuals ,the negative effects are also apparent. For instance ,例子(负面现象中的损失者),+even doing. Therefore ,some powerful measures should be taken as soon as possible .Otherwise总结,it cannot be expected things will develop naturally.

* *(宏观):

·economy’s development经济发展

·market economy’s smooth operation市场经济的顺利进行

·society’s stability(政)社会稳定

·public morality社会公德

·social credit社会诚信

·chinese traditional virtue

Even doing :

·fake medicine worsens one patient’s i llness ,even killing him or her .

·fake medicine deteriorate one patient’s illness,even depriving his or her life.·pirated books bring much econimic loss to the writer ,even spoiling the writer’s enthusiasm for creation.

·pollutes the environment greatly ,even doing harm to people’s health.

小结

——社会负面现象

全文

段一:现象陈述句型1.

句型2.

段二:原因分析(

主客)

段三:(1)危害句型3.

(2)措施句型4.

校园类

段一:

(1.)······对大学生的重要性

句型5.

Among recipes of a colorful campus life ,有重要性的好事物* * ,seems to be very one that can by no means be ignored .Without 有重要性的好事物,the life makes a dull one without any taste and the college time turns out to be uncompleted .

* *: 常见校园好事物

·elective / optional courses

·extracurricular activities

·volunteering work

·intership

·friendship

·community service

(2.)现象陈述

句型6.

These days ,it i s no surprise for a college student to be acquainted with or even to be a part of the reality of + waste on campus(n.)表面现象/ that + the waste on campus gets increasingly grave.句子Actually , this issue is so prevailing in some colleges that social attention has been aroused .

段二:原因分析

句型2.

·Some students are of the mistaken thought that the classics are out of date.

·The fierce competition of today’s society makes students only focus those relevant to their future job-hunting to such an extent that they spare no time on reading classics. ·The good living conditions for today’s young people makes them unconcious of thrift to such an extent that they squander money and time .

段三:

(1.)措施——校方措施

——学生措施——思想

——行动

句型7.

To prevent such unhealthy practice from raging in Ivory Tower ,it is high time that measures were taken .Of course ,as the guardian of young students ,school authorities have great responsibility to insturct student that + thrift is one of our nation’s traditional virtues and should be carried forward by the youth .“口号” While for student individuals ,the first important thing is to keep it in mind that besides studey , we ought to decelop our abilities / quantities in + ......美德、品质. Also ,one / I

should take some practical actions and just start from trifles , doing ...... 具体实际操作doing ...... (可省略).

Turning off the lights when leaving the room , ordering exact amount of food we can consume when dining in the canteen .

......:

Abilities in ......(能力)

·communication

·cooperation

·independence

·team work

·self-discipline

·fast-learning

·social-skills

Qualities of ......(美德)

·thrift integrity diligence honesty

·punctuality

·filial piety 孝心

·endurance for hardship 吃苦耐劳

·good taste

·the campus green culture

·the studying atmosphere on campus

·the healthy growth of young people

·young people’s personality cultivation

·campus credit

(2.)危害

句型3.

小结

——校园负面现象

全文

段一:重要性句型5.

现象陈述句型6.

段二:原因分析句型2.

段三:措施句型7.

危害句型3.

插曲:分词的两点使用

1.同主语发出两个动作,将其中一个设置为谓语构成主句,另一个设置为分词,作伴随状语。

Eg: He studies in ... University , majoring in administration .

他就读于······,攻读管理学。

(两个动作基本上无主次之分)

Eg: Shrugging his shoulders , he walked away .

他耸耸肩,走了。

(“走”

2.同主语发出三个动作,“主句主要的、宏观的动作,doing 1. ...... , doing 2. ......

(1.2.均为次要,基本无比较,具体的动作)。”总分结构

Eg:The chemical reaction lasts one hour , producing white sediment ,giving out blue gas as well .

化学反应持续了一个小时,生成白色沉淀并发出蓝色气体。

Eg:To relieve the presure from unemployment the government should take some measures , offering favorable policies broadeing career channels .

为了缓解失业压力,政府应该提供一些优惠政策、拓宽就业渠道。

*英文——总分、总分总(√)

——分总(×)

(二)中性现象

段一:

(1.)现象陈述句型8

Nowdays , 中性话题词/词组digital products ,as a hot topic , has attracted many people’s attention simply due to the very fact that 现象陈述.

......that there appear / exist many digitl commodities in our life , such as cell phone and figital cameras .

(2.)话题介绍句型9.

These days , it is hotly discussed on some websites’ bbs what 中性话题词scientific discovery can bring to our life . Actually , such a question has been increasingly arousing people’s attention .

常见的中性话题词:

实物类:

Internet Mobile phone Private car

Electronic book

现象类:

Recreational activities 娱乐活动

Talent show Idol worship

Working stress

Fierce competition of today’s society

段二:后果(影响)的两面性

句型10.

They say every coin has two sides , though a little bit of cliche , it really reveals the very truth that everything tends to give rise to positive and negative impacts , so 中性话题词, is of course no different .It is true that 好处.While , it is more essential for us to know 坏处.

好处:

·Private car brings us much convenience for example , it can drive us to anywhere we want.

·Internet can bring us more convenience , for example , it shortens the distance between us and our friends by offering such chatting tools as QQ or MSN . ·......can bring us convenience / efficency / entertainment / information / fun / new experiences /confidence / motivations for work / freedom / comfort ...... , for

example , ......

坏处:

(1.) ...... , even doing ......

(2.)Some digital products are harmful to people’s health due to radition from them .

(3.)The convinence brought by digital products makes us terribly dependent on them to such an extent that we cannot figure out how life will be without such digital stuffs as cell phone . (只适用于物品类)

(4.)The ...... brought by ...... makes us terribly dependent on /terribly addicated to it so that we cannot figure out how life will be without ......

段三:结论——一分为二

句型11.

Thus , we are supposed to keep it in our minds whether 中性话题词can benefits us or not depends on whether we can take good charge of it . If we 某种正确做法,it follows that 好处收益. Otherwise , if we fail to do so / 某种错误的做法,we will find ourselves trapped in a terrible condition that 亏损.

·If we just treat Internet as a good tool to search for information .

·The Internet can offer us large amount of knowledge that other kinds of media cannot give .

·Otherwise , if we fail to do so , we are likely to be addicated to Internet .

小结

——中性现象

全文

段一:现象陈述,话题介绍

句型8.9.

段二:后果的两面性

句型10.

段三:一分为二对待

句型11.

议论文

Argumentative essay---------

二.观点类(正反观点对比题)

插曲:转化

(1.)“我认为······”

I think ...... →

=My view is that ...... (表语从句转化法)

=It is my view that ...... (主语从句转换法)

=I am of the impression that ...... (同为从句转化法)

=I have always been of the impression that ......

(2.)“有些人认为······”

Some people think /believe / consume / consider ...... →

=One allegation (which is ) often made by some(有些人) / other(另外一些人) people is that ...... (表语从句转化法)

= It is universaly believed by some / other people that ...... (主语从句转换法)

=There is popular assumption among some / other people that ...... (同位语从句转换法)

段一:话题介绍

句型12.

(一般以题目中的“···吗?”一般疑问句打头)

Should parents send ...... ?(09.12)一般疑问句As a hotly-discussed topic on some websites’ bbs , such a question seems to be at the heart / center of debate simply because perception from differnet angle leads to different result .

P83-(2) ----topic:“Preferable Work” 非一般疑问句——转化为“特殊疑问句”What’s one’s preferable work ?

What kind of job do you like ?

段二:别人的观点句型13.14.

句型13.

Actually , there is urgent need to debate this issue openly . One acknowledged assumption says 观点1.(我不同意的观点),the reason for which is that 观点1.的论据. Whereas ,it is also universally believed by some people that 观点2. (我准备同意的观点).

观点1. We should send our children to art classes.

......the reason is that + 论据.

...... that + 观点2. It is not a good idea to send little kids to learn art .

句型14.

One well-accepted allegation indicates it is better to 观点1. send kids to art classes , becuase 观点 1. 论据. Whereas ,there are other people taking a reverse standpoint ,saying 观点2. we should not send children to art classes at their early age . Well , which way shall we go ,it is really a question .

插曲:论据的写法

正方观点:论据+好处

(1.)It is greatly instrumental / helpful “to do ...... ” / “to have sth. done ”.

We should send our children to art classes , it is greatly instrumental to develop the kids’ good taste in art .

We should expect ...... it is greatly instrumental to encourage more people to do good deeds .

→p83-(3)

It is greatly instrume ntal to have students’ social skills well practiced .

(2.)It is of great help “for doing ......” .

It is of great help for exploring the kids’ potential in art from an early age .

反方观点:论据+坏处

(1.)It causes ...... 导致······(坏结果)

bring + 中性结果cause + 坏结果

It causes some presure / mental burden / psychological burden to little kids . (2.)It may be harmful to ......

......to the growth of little kids and their personality developing .

(3.)It may exert negative impacts on ......

......on students’ r egular study and life .

(4.)It tends to contribute to ......

...... the disruption of campus environment .

(5.)...... even doing ......

It brings much mental bueden on children , even delaying their personalities development .

(6.)......contribute none to ...... / ......has little connection with ......

The name of a product contributes none to its sale .

段三:我的观点

(1.)非“调和类”(同意后者)句型15.

At the question which side I stand by ,I prefer the latter . As is known to us all , 观点2. 论据(1). It is also worth noting that 观点2. 论据(2).

“ ”可替换为“做法、措施(句型4.7.)”

(2.)调和类(较少见)句型16.(勾兑)

Frankly speaking ,when confronted with the question of choosing A or B , it is easy to feel confused .While ,with individuals’ personal situation seriously being considered ,we find it not so hard to make a choice .For those who show great talent/interest in art , it might be a good thing to send such to art classes . While for those who have no interest/talent of art , it must be better to respect the children’s will ,not to c ompelling them to do what they wouldn’t like . Actually ,that exactly matches an old saying “the fittest is the best .”

小结

——正反观点对比类

全文

段一:引入话题句型12.

段二:他人看法句型13.14.

段三:(1)同意后者句型15.

(2)调和类句型16.

句型13. 15.

Actually , there is urgent need to debate this issue openly . One acknowledged assumption says E-book will replace the traditional books , the reason for which is that E-book brings us much convenience because it is light and handy yet with abundant contents of hundreds of books . Whereas ,it is also universally believed by some people that the traditional books will still be popular in spite of the appearance of E-books .

As the question which I stand by ,I prefer the latter .As is known to us all , E-books

also contribute to the power consumption and the radiation from it is harmful to the readers’ eyes , both of which can be safety avoided in traditional books . It is also worth noting that compared with traditional books , E-books tend to be more expensive and cannot be afforded by every reader .

真题:2010.6 (校园负面现象)

Due attention should be given to the study of Chinese .

1.近年来学生中出现忽视中文学习的现象

2.出现这种现象的原因及结果

3.我认为······

段一:句型6.

These days ,it is no surprise for a college student to be acquainted with or even to be a part of the reality of / that the ignorance of Chinese study .Actually this issue is so prevailing in some college that social attention has been aroused .

段二:句型2.+句型3.

句型2.

There are many reasons for what we mentioned above .First , we can easily find it is mainly because many students are of the impression that they had good command of Chinese since they use it every day . While , it is also noting that today ,the high demand of English ability in job hunting makes students have to spend much time on English study to such an extent that they have no more effort to pay attention to Chinese study .

句型3.

As to its impacts ,unfortunately , it dose serve as a disrupting fatctor for Chinese traditional culture .While ,for individuals , the negative effects are also apparent . For instance ,the negligence of Chinese study leads to one’s decreased appreciation of Chinese literature , even resulting in their ignorance of Chinese study . Therefore ,some powerful measures should be taken as soon as possible . Otherwise ,it cannot be expected things will develop naturally .

段三:句型7.

To prevent such unhealthy practice from raging in Ivory Tower , it is high time that measures were taken .Of course , as the guardian of young students , school authorities have great resposibility to instruct the students that if we want to introduce Chinese culture to the whole world , we should study Chinese well first .While for student individuals , the first important thing is to keep it in mind that . Also ,one should take some practical actions and can just start from trifles , picking up the habit of reading and writing in Chinese , reciting some ancient Chinese poetries .Only in this way will things get better .

历年考题举例

P72-07.12 P73-06.6 p73-06.12(old)中性问题

P74-05.6 负面/社会类

P72-08.12负面/校园类

祝大家今年的六级考试都通过!

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