剑桥雅思4test4写作task1范文(书信类)

剑桥雅思test4写作task1范文（书信类）

You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter

● say who you are

● give details of the accident

● suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents.

a) 题目分析，包括写作中需要涉及的要点以及考生可能对题目产生的错误理解。 ?

要点 1. 事故必须发生在超市内，而不是外面，例如：在停车场。 2. 此事故是小事故而不是大事故。 3. 书信的格式必须正式。

考生可能产生的错误理解和问题

1. 题目要求非常清楚，应该不会对其有任何误读。

2. 考生必须提供细节，尤其在第二点和第三点上。

3. 书信的内容不要过于感性。 b) 建议的写作结构，对比此结构与考生有可能采用的不恰当结构。内容要提及超市所在位置，还要包括事故的具体细节，例如: 地点、损伤及日期。给出事故的原因，并给出在将来如何避免这一问题的建议。结尾部分应该是有好的评论而不是威胁的评论。

雅思写作范文

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I have been a frequent shopper at your Winchester branch for several years and have been very happy with your supermarket. However, last Saturday I was involved in an accident there, when numerous cans fell onto my head from a top shelf. My head was cut in several places and I had to be taken to hospital. I believe that the accident was caused by the cans being incorrectly placed on the shelves.

I would suggest that your staff take a lot more care in future when they place products on shelves. Also, it might be a good idea to avoid placing heavier items on top shelves in future, so that injuries like mine are avoided if items do fall off.

I am sure that the accident was not caused by any wish to harm anyone and will not be taking the matter further, but I would like your assurance that measures have been taken to prevent similar problems in the future. Yours faithfully, John Brown (164 words)

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