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考研英语作文详解PPT课件
强调句
A．强调谓语:Egl: I love you. /I do love you./ I did love you.B.强调句式: It is/was +被强调成分+that/who+句子其他成分。
第二部分
真题简析
真题简析
Directions:Suppose you are working for the“Aiding Rural Primary School”project of your Do not use your own name in the e“Li Ming”instead.(10 points)
ENGLISH COMPOSITION
考研英语作文详解
宣讲人：某某某
时间：20XX.XX
目 01 录 02
03 04
考察范围 真题简析 备考工作 写作技巧
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
第一部分
考察范围
考察范围
主动句变被动句“英文多被动，汉语多主动”，还需要警惕名词与动词之间暗含的“主被动”关系。Egl: It
is said that…据说/相传Eg2: I suggest that … It is suggested that …
考察范围
E．含同位语句式A.人身份 Eg. I am convinced that …As a college student,I am convinced that …l, as a college student，am convinced that … B.物 性质Eg. A strong will brings us power …插入语Egl: As I see， the causes of this phenomenon are diverse.The causes of this phenomenon，as I see，are diverse. Eg2: All of a sudden，the silence of the lake was broken bya scream.
A．强调谓语:Egl: I love you. /I do love you./ I did love you.B.强调句式: It is/was +被强调成分+that/who+句子其他成分。
第二部分
真题简析
真题简析
Directions:Suppose you are working for the“Aiding Rural Primary School”project of your Do not use your own name in the e“Li Ming”instead.(10 points)
ENGLISH COMPOSITION
考研英语作文详解
宣讲人：某某某
时间：20XX.XX
目 01 录 02
03 04
考察范围 真题简析 备考工作 写作技巧
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
第一部分
考察范围
考察范围
主动句变被动句“英文多被动，汉语多主动”，还需要警惕名词与动词之间暗含的“主被动”关系。Egl: It
is said that…据说/相传Eg2: I suggest that … It is suggested that …
考察范围
E．含同位语句式A.人身份 Eg. I am convinced that …As a college student,I am convinced that …l, as a college student，am convinced that … B.物 性质Eg. A strong will brings us power …插入语Egl: As I see， the causes of this phenomenon are diverse.The causes of this phenomenon，as I see，are diverse. Eg2: All of a sudden，the silence of the lake was broken bya scream.
英语写作方法指导ppt课件
正：I’m 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.
C、难词解释法：
不少考生平时不注重记忆必要的单词，写作时 碰到生词就绕道走，最后只好用解释法、定义 法来说明，结果语言晦涩难懂，文意错乱，表 达不畅。
病原体侵入 生长繁 殖，引 起不同 程度的 病理生 理过程
病原体侵入机体，消弱机体防御机能 ，破坏 机体内 环境的 相对稳 定性， 且在一 定部位 生长繁 殖，引 起不同 程度的 病理生 理过程
④组织语言、正确叙述是整个写作过程中的重要环节。
知道了内容、抓住了要点后，再根据要点确定句型，扩展句 子，把这些内容有机地连接起来。在联句成文的过程中，还要 注意，句子或者段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题，也是个逻 辑思维方法的问题，这两者是不能截然分开的。例如，两个意 义单位之间是递增、选择、对比、转折、概括、举例、时间顺 序或是因果关系，都要使用得当，并且用一定的词句加以表达， 否则，文章就会松散或含糊不清。
二、语法正
在写书面表达时，每一个句子都要尽 可能避免语法错误，考生们通常在下 列语法方面最易出错。
A、动词错误
a.多用动词。如： There were hundreds of students couldn’t go to school because they were poor.
(改为Hundreds) b.缺少动词。如：It is said that they often careless in class. (加are)
（去掉was）
不少基础较差的同学喜欢在行为动词前面加be动词， 例如：I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer（. 去掉am）
C、难词解释法：
不少考生平时不注重记忆必要的单词，写作时 碰到生词就绕道走，最后只好用解释法、定义 法来说明，结果语言晦涩难懂，文意错乱，表 达不畅。
病原体侵入 生长繁 殖，引 起不同 程度的 病理生 理过程
病原体侵入机体，消弱机体防御机能 ，破坏 机体内 环境的 相对稳 定性， 且在一 定部位 生长繁 殖，引 起不同 程度的 病理生 理过程
④组织语言、正确叙述是整个写作过程中的重要环节。
知道了内容、抓住了要点后，再根据要点确定句型，扩展句 子，把这些内容有机地连接起来。在联句成文的过程中，还要 注意，句子或者段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题，也是个逻 辑思维方法的问题，这两者是不能截然分开的。例如，两个意 义单位之间是递增、选择、对比、转折、概括、举例、时间顺 序或是因果关系，都要使用得当，并且用一定的词句加以表达， 否则，文章就会松散或含糊不清。
二、语法正
在写书面表达时，每一个句子都要尽 可能避免语法错误，考生们通常在下 列语法方面最易出错。
A、动词错误
a.多用动词。如： There were hundreds of students couldn’t go to school because they were poor.
(改为Hundreds) b.缺少动词。如：It is said that they often careless in class. (加are)
（去掉was）
不少基础较差的同学喜欢在行为动词前面加be动词， 例如：I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer（. 去掉am）
英语写作技巧Chapter3.EffectiveSentences课件
第12页，共32页。
Ways to Achieve Conciseness
❖ Avoid nouns made from verbs ❖ Rewrite the passive voice as active ❖ Cut or shorten words or phrases ❖ Combine sentences
If I were president of the university and he was my second in command, things would be very different.
第10页，共32页。
Conciseness (简洁)
❖ A sentence should contain no unnecessary words. If the idea is fully expressed, the fewer words are used, the better. Compare the following:
❖ The earliest electronic computers were not compact. They were considered not reliable at that time.
Qualities of Effective Sentences
❖ Unity （统一） ❖ Coherence （连贯） ❖ Conciseness (简洁) ❖ Variety
第2页，共32页。
Unity（统一）
❖ Unity is one of the fundamental qualities of effective writing. Unity in sentences helps to make the idea clear. A unified sentence expresses a single complete thought. It doesn’t contain ideas that are not closely related ,nor does it express a thought that is not complete by itself.
Ways to Achieve Conciseness
❖ Avoid nouns made from verbs ❖ Rewrite the passive voice as active ❖ Cut or shorten words or phrases ❖ Combine sentences
If I were president of the university and he was my second in command, things would be very different.
第10页，共32页。
Conciseness (简洁)
❖ A sentence should contain no unnecessary words. If the idea is fully expressed, the fewer words are used, the better. Compare the following:
❖ The earliest electronic computers were not compact. They were considered not reliable at that time.
Qualities of Effective Sentences
❖ Unity （统一） ❖ Coherence （连贯） ❖ Conciseness (简洁) ❖ Variety
第2页，共32页。
Unity（统一）
❖ Unity is one of the fundamental qualities of effective writing. Unity in sentences helps to make the idea clear. A unified sentence expresses a single complete thought. It doesn’t contain ideas that are not closely related ,nor does it express a thought that is not complete by itself.
大学英语四级写作完整课件
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模板1
• People hold different views about X./__ or __, which is better? Different people have diverse opinions upon this question(issue)./ People’s opinions are divided upon this issue.
• 2. 从内容和语言两方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和 语言是一个统一体。作文应该表达题目所规定的内容 ，而内容要通过语言来表达。既要考虑作文是否切题 ，是否用英语清楚而明确地表达了主题思想，也要考 虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。
• 3. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分，该 给低分的给低分，包括0分，一名阅卷人员在所评阅的 全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。
• From the above discussion, we can come to the
conclusion
that
总结观点.(可加谚语做结尾)
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高分策略: 注重结构的逻辑性
• 关联词: • 一. Addition 此外 • in addition, and，similarly，besides，furthermore，
• 1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是……
• 2. 也有人持不同意见，……
• 3. 我的看法和打算
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如何引入？ —— 一个现象
• Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?
With the development of English education in China, nowadays, many attentions have been paid to spoken English skills.The question, wether students can actually use English as a communication tool after years of study, has caused hot debate.As a result, test of spoken English is becoming increasingly common in English education.But does it really necessary to set such a test?
初中英语作文范文20篇ppt课件
The Spring Festival The Spring Festival comes in winter. It is the most important traditional festival in China. People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives. Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn't go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
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亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求：1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及 学习感悟；2.词数80左右。
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【优秀满分范文】
My English Study How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study. When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn't master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English. In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
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亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求：1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及 学习感悟；2.词数80左右。
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【优秀满分范文】
My English Study How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study. When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn't master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English. In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
2024年度大学四级考试写作PPT课件
《网络游戏的利与弊》
点评
文章结构清晰，观点明确，从多个角 度分析了大学生兼职的利与弊，论证 充分，语言流畅。
点评
文章立意新颖，对网络游戏的利与弊 进行了深入探讨，观点鲜明，论据有 力，是一篇优秀的议论文。
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应用文范文欣赏与点评
范文
《给校长的一封信——关于校园 环境的建议》
点评
文章格式规范，语言得体，针对 校园环境问题提出了具体可行的 建议，体现了作者的实际应用能
注意格式
不同类型的应用文有不同的格式 要求，考生需熟悉并掌握各种应 用文的格式规范。
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明确目的
在写作前，要明确写作目的和受 众对象，确保语言得体、表达准 确。
简洁明了
应用文要求语言简练、明了，避 免使用过于复杂的词汇和句式。
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图表作文写作
题型特点
仔细观察
图表作文是四级考试中的一种特殊题型， 要求考生根据提供的图表或图片进行写作 ，描述图表内容并表达自己的观点。
增强文化素养
写作涉及到广泛的知识领域和文 化背景，通过写作训练可以增强 考生的文化素养和跨文化交际能 力。
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写作基础技能与训练
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词汇积累与运用
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积极词汇的积累
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包括各类主题相关的名词、动词、形容词等，注意词汇的准确
性和地道性。
词汇的灵活运用
02
在写作中，要善于运用同义词、反义词、上下义词等，丰富文
章表达。
避免重复使用词汇
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避免在同一篇文章中重复使用相同的词汇，提高文章的表达效
点评
文章结构清晰，观点明确，从多个角 度分析了大学生兼职的利与弊，论证 充分，语言流畅。
点评
文章立意新颖，对网络游戏的利与弊 进行了深入探讨，观点鲜明，论据有 力，是一篇优秀的议论文。
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应用文范文欣赏与点评
范文
《给校长的一封信——关于校园 环境的建议》
点评
文章格式规范，语言得体，针对 校园环境问题提出了具体可行的 建议，体现了作者的实际应用能
注意格式
不同类型的应用文有不同的格式 要求，考生需熟悉并掌握各种应 用文的格式规范。
2024/2/2
01 02 03 04
明确目的
在写作前，要明确写作目的和受 众对象，确保语言得体、表达准 确。
简洁明了
应用文要求语言简练、明了，避 免使用过于复杂的词汇和句式。
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图表作文写作
题型特点
仔细观察
图表作文是四级考试中的一种特殊题型， 要求考生根据提供的图表或图片进行写作 ，描述图表内容并表达自己的观点。
增强文化素养
写作涉及到广泛的知识领域和文 化背景，通过写作训练可以增强 考生的文化素养和跨文化交际能 力。
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写作基础技能与训练
Chapter
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词汇积累与运用
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积极词汇的积累
01
包括各类主题相关的名词、动词、形容词等，注意词汇的准确
性和地道性。
词汇的灵活运用
02
在写作中，要善于运用同义词、反义词、上下义词等，丰富文
章表达。
避免重复使用词汇
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避免在同一篇文章中重复使用相同的词汇，提高文章的表达效
中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)
看法
我认为……
建议（至少3条） 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
第五步：集句成段，组段成篇
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play computer g2a.m迷es恋网吧，上网打游戏 watch too much.T..V... refuse to do homework
2. List some keywords about opinions.
not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to
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2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)
Write your story about growth according to your story line.
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.
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课前播放
Guess the name of the song 猜歌名
Writing 写作
迁西二中 高一英语组
Slogan 班号
My aim is to go to the university I like! 我的目标是考上我喜欢的大学！ I can try my best to learn English well! 我会尽全力把英语学好！
If we keep on struggle from now on, what will our life be like in ten years?如果从现在起我们坚持奋斗， 十年后我们的生活会是什么样？
Step Ⅳ Consolidation 巩固提升
Task 2 : writing & discussion ： 十年后，我的家庭、工作和业余生活 要求：1.先选定其中任何一个话题，写 一个主题句！ 2. 再扩写3句相关内容。
（组内7、8号背诵）
自我归纳： 翻译句子基本技巧“先中间，后两边”
写作中，英语常用句式结构： 宾语 状语。 主语 谓语动词+______+ ______+ （主句和从句都一样） V 第一步:“先中间 ”是指先确定主句谓语 __________ 状语 主语 宾语 第二步:“后两边 ”再填_____、____ 、_____.
高考作文范文
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.I think my life will be very different in ten years.I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own family,probably with a lovely child.I hope I’ll work in a computer company as a program designer.I’ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues.I’ll do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time,I’ll continue to take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball games.On my holidays,I’ll travel around the world.In a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful.
引例1、2 ⒉ 真 对 数 数 1对数的定义 lo g a N b < 3说明 底 4两种常见的对数 数
例1： 例2： 小结：
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底 数
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幂 值
演示区
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例4 作业
例3⑴
1 5 8 3 4 7 第 6 2 组
Congratulations!
There is a surprise for you in the classroom!
Tip 3: You can achieve, when you believe.
只要你相信,你就可以!
StepⅤ Self-reflection & summary 反思与总结
知பைடு நூலகம் 技能
What have you learnt in this period?
过程 方法
情感 态度
课题：对数的概念
写作评分 （10分） 1.要点扩写（3分） 2.书 3.错 写 （3分） 误 （2分）
4.高级句式（2分）
Tip 2: how to develop the main point: examples & details 如何扩写要点：举例、细节描写
（ 2014高考新课标Ⅱ）一家英语报社向中学生征文,主 题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完 成短文。 1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活。 注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文 连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future._______________________
（组内7、8号改错）
6.大学毕业后，他 决定参军更好的发 展自己。 After he ___________ graduate graduated from university, he decided to join the army to develop himself better.
Tip 1：Struggle is our life ! 人生就是奋斗!
小测
答疑 解惑
找 三 个 错 误 送 三 个 小 贴 士
Writing 写 作
巩固 提升
反思 总结
？最佳 小组
StepⅠ: a quiz小测 temple 1.寺庙 _______ university/college 2.大学 _______________ develop 3.发展 ________ competition 4.比赛 __________ 5.奖品、颁奖 ________ award go skiing 6.滑雪 __________ join the army 7.参军 ___________ from… 8.从…毕业 graduate ______________ 9.使某人想起…remind ____________ sb of… 10.被…录取________________ be admitted into…
高考作文范文
In ten years,I think I‘ll be a reporter.I‘ll live in Shanghai,because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.I think it‘s really a beautiful city.As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people.I think I‘ll live in an apartment with my best friends, because I don‘t like living alone. I‘ll have pets.I can‘t have any pets now because my mother hates them and our apartment is too small.So in ten years,I‘ll have many different pets.I might even keep a pet parrot! I‘ll probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week I‘ll look smart,and probably will wear a suit. On the weekends, I‘ll be able to dress more casually. I think I‘ll go to Hong Kong on vacation,and one day I might even visit Australia.
即学即练
（组内7、8号改错）
1.大学期间，他仍 然认真学习，刻苦 训练。 During the university, he still studied hard and ______ train hard. trained
2.大学期间，他积 极参加各种比赛并 多次获奖。 During the university, he took an active part in many competitions and won awards.
2.由于自己的刻苦努力 和老师的细心帮助，他 于2012年被河北师范大 学(Hebei Normal University)录取。 Because of his hard work and teachers’ careful help, he was admitted into Hebei Normal University in 2012.
Who is the boy?
StepⅢ Presentation 重点问题 答疑解惑
Task 1：写作中，如何摆脱“汉式英语”， 正确翻译句子？
自主学习：补全句子 1.小学(primary school)毕业后，他 在少林寺习武 (Kungfu) 4年。
After he graduated from the primary school, he learned Kungfu for 4 years in the Shaolin Temple.
5.实习期间 （internship ），红色 的校服让他想起了在 迁西二中的日子。 During the intership , the red school uniform reminded him of the days in No.2 Senior High School of Qianxi.
（组内5、6号改错）
3.2014年，他获学校一 等奖学金(scholarship) 。 In 2014, he ∧ awarded was the first prize scholarship of the school .
4.寒假期间，他和 朋友一起去张家口 滑雪。 During the winter holiday, he went skiing with his friends in Zhangjiakou.
Task 3 : Showing time & assessment 展示与评价
Guess the name of the song 猜歌名
Writing 写作
迁西二中 高一英语组
Slogan 班号
My aim is to go to the university I like! 我的目标是考上我喜欢的大学！ I can try my best to learn English well! 我会尽全力把英语学好！
If we keep on struggle from now on, what will our life be like in ten years?如果从现在起我们坚持奋斗， 十年后我们的生活会是什么样？
Step Ⅳ Consolidation 巩固提升
Task 2 : writing & discussion ： 十年后，我的家庭、工作和业余生活 要求：1.先选定其中任何一个话题，写 一个主题句！ 2. 再扩写3句相关内容。
（组内7、8号背诵）
自我归纳： 翻译句子基本技巧“先中间，后两边”
写作中，英语常用句式结构： 宾语 状语。 主语 谓语动词+______+ ______+ （主句和从句都一样） V 第一步:“先中间 ”是指先确定主句谓语 __________ 状语 主语 宾语 第二步:“后两边 ”再填_____、____ 、_____.
高考作文范文
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.I think my life will be very different in ten years.I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own family,probably with a lovely child.I hope I’ll work in a computer company as a program designer.I’ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues.I’ll do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time,I’ll continue to take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball games.On my holidays,I’ll travel around the world.In a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful.
引例1、2 ⒉ 真 对 数 数 1对数的定义 lo g a N b < 3说明 底 4两种常见的对数 数
例1： 例2： 小结：
优胜组为
>a N
底 数
指 数 b
幂 值
演示区
⑵ ⑶
例4 作业
例3⑴
1 5 8 3 4 7 第 6 2 组
Congratulations!
There is a surprise for you in the classroom!
Tip 3: You can achieve, when you believe.
只要你相信,你就可以!
StepⅤ Self-reflection & summary 反思与总结
知பைடு நூலகம் 技能
What have you learnt in this period?
过程 方法
情感 态度
课题：对数的概念
写作评分 （10分） 1.要点扩写（3分） 2.书 3.错 写 （3分） 误 （2分）
4.高级句式（2分）
Tip 2: how to develop the main point: examples & details 如何扩写要点：举例、细节描写
（ 2014高考新课标Ⅱ）一家英语报社向中学生征文,主 题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完 成短文。 1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活。 注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文 连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future._______________________
（组内7、8号改错）
6.大学毕业后，他 决定参军更好的发 展自己。 After he ___________ graduate graduated from university, he decided to join the army to develop himself better.
Tip 1：Struggle is our life ! 人生就是奋斗!
小测
答疑 解惑
找 三 个 错 误 送 三 个 小 贴 士
Writing 写 作
巩固 提升
反思 总结
？最佳 小组
StepⅠ: a quiz小测 temple 1.寺庙 _______ university/college 2.大学 _______________ develop 3.发展 ________ competition 4.比赛 __________ 5.奖品、颁奖 ________ award go skiing 6.滑雪 __________ join the army 7.参军 ___________ from… 8.从…毕业 graduate ______________ 9.使某人想起…remind ____________ sb of… 10.被…录取________________ be admitted into…
高考作文范文
In ten years,I think I‘ll be a reporter.I‘ll live in Shanghai,because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.I think it‘s really a beautiful city.As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people.I think I‘ll live in an apartment with my best friends, because I don‘t like living alone. I‘ll have pets.I can‘t have any pets now because my mother hates them and our apartment is too small.So in ten years,I‘ll have many different pets.I might even keep a pet parrot! I‘ll probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week I‘ll look smart,and probably will wear a suit. On the weekends, I‘ll be able to dress more casually. I think I‘ll go to Hong Kong on vacation,and one day I might even visit Australia.
即学即练
（组内7、8号改错）
1.大学期间，他仍 然认真学习，刻苦 训练。 During the university, he still studied hard and ______ train hard. trained
2.大学期间，他积 极参加各种比赛并 多次获奖。 During the university, he took an active part in many competitions and won awards.
2.由于自己的刻苦努力 和老师的细心帮助，他 于2012年被河北师范大 学(Hebei Normal University)录取。 Because of his hard work and teachers’ careful help, he was admitted into Hebei Normal University in 2012.
Who is the boy?
StepⅢ Presentation 重点问题 答疑解惑
Task 1：写作中，如何摆脱“汉式英语”， 正确翻译句子？
自主学习：补全句子 1.小学(primary school)毕业后，他 在少林寺习武 (Kungfu) 4年。
After he graduated from the primary school, he learned Kungfu for 4 years in the Shaolin Temple.
5.实习期间 （internship ），红色 的校服让他想起了在 迁西二中的日子。 During the intership , the red school uniform reminded him of the days in No.2 Senior High School of Qianxi.
（组内5、6号改错）
3.2014年，他获学校一 等奖学金(scholarship) 。 In 2014, he ∧ awarded was the first prize scholarship of the school .
4.寒假期间，他和 朋友一起去张家口 滑雪。 During the winter holiday, he went skiing with his friends in Zhangjiakou.
Task 3 : Showing time & assessment 展示与评价