如何在高考英语作文中增加细节(共19张PPT)【完美版】
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2019高考英语书面表达技巧九方面探导(共27张PPT)
action.
We felt proud for what we did during this activity, and it
would be a sweet memory in my mind forever.
好文章的标准
整洁的 卷面
丰富的 词汇
流畅的 结构
独到的 见解
牢记英语写作的基本要领：
A. was planning C. had planned B. planned D. would plan
技巧四：语言表达要准确
1. 忌汉语思维，逐字翻译
The car’s color was yellow.
The car was 改为 yellow.
2. 忌用词搭配不当
花费很多时 spend much 间做某事 改为 time in... take much time in...
题相关的内容。
技巧七：作文的时间安排要合理
写作理想时间是30分钟，最少不能少于20分钟，要有一
定的时间限制。
技巧八：生受 益匪浅。
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国
的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树。请根据以下四幅图 的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的 “绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in our class” 为主题的英语稿件。注意：次数不少于60。提示词：郊
技巧五：作文分类要牢记
步骤一
步骤二
开头直截 了当，不 拐弯抹角
步骤三
行文一般 以10个句 子为宜
仔细审题， 整理要点
步骤四
用最有把握 的词语句型 将规定内容 加以表达
步骤五
适当使用一 些过渡性的 连接词,将句 子连珠成串
高中英语写作提升之如何增加细节 课件(共21张ppt)
crowds. Only in this way can you keep yourself far away from
学会分析优秀的范文 the virus. More importantly, you must wear protective clothing or at least mask when you have to go out, as the protective
job in a foreign company.
3.__S_i_n_c_e_/A__s_/B__e_c_a_u_s_e__I_h_a_v_e__t_h_e__e_x_p_e_r_ie_n_c_e__o_f_____ ___l_o_s_in_g__m__y_p__u_rs_e__，______(由于我有过丢钱包的经历）
Dear Tim,
补充原因
Learning that the COVID 19 is also spreading in America
and you are asking for advice since Chinese have done quite
well in fighting in this battle, I am writing this letter to offer you
二、补全前因后果或目的
2.补充前因后果或目的
1. K__n_o_w_in_g__th_a_t_y_o_u__s_h_o_w_g_r_e_a_t_in_t_e_re_s_t_i_n_C__h_in_e_s_e____ __tr_a_d_it_io_n_a_l_c_u_lt_u_r_e_, (知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣,）
Looking forward to your early reply.
高考英语写作技巧 第1课时 增加细节,让文章丰满起来
abroad _________ (我们不仅仅能阅读国内外的新闻 ), but also get
information, send emails and attend online schools. She speaks perfect 2． Laura is a standard American style. _____________________
American English (她说一口完美的美式英语), and that' s __________________
why I am crazy about her.
3． However, it seems people are unaware of the negative
For example, effects of mobile phones on communication. ____________ many people begin to pay less and less attention to __________________________________________________
优化点三 内容比他人丰
正文是文章的核心部分，素有“猪肚美填”之说。词数达 标、内容充实、结构连贯、语意顺畅是五档作文必不可少的几 大要素。为了不只是简单地翻译或者仅仅完成题目所给条目的 指定内容，为了让表达逻辑有序，本部分将从两方面给予优化 指导。
第1课时 增加细节，让文章丰满起来
在英语书面表达中，增加细节是必不可少 的，细节可有效串联起各个要点，让文章显得丰 满、圆润，读起来朗朗上口，不干瘪生涩。细节 是需要构思的，细节是需要创意的，可尝试用以 下5个技法来增加细节。
[即时演练]
高中英语写作提升之如何增加细节 课件(共21张PPT)
二、补全前因后果或目的
2.补充前因后果或目的
1. K__n_o_w_in_g__th_a_t_y_o_u__s_h_o_w_g_r_e_a_t_in_t_e_re_s_t_i_n_C__h_in_e_s_e____ __tr_a_d_it_io_n_a_l_c_u_lt_u_r_e_, (知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣,）
I am writing to invite you to participate in this activity.
2._In__o_r_d_e_r_t_o__g_e_t_s_o_m__e__p_ra__c_ti_c_a_l _e_x_p_e_r_ie__n_c_e_,_______
(为了获得一些实践经验) I'm planning to take a part-time
I can feel how anxious Mr Steven will be now.
暂停3分钟
Because of the experience of...
三、适当将写作内容具体化
3.适当将写作内容具体化
1.The activity will be held
_f_ro_m__9__a_.m__._to__1_0_a_._m_._o_n__M_a_r_c_h_1__i_n_C__la_s_s_ro_o_m( 501.
我擅长于运动。
, such as A，B and C/ so on.
, including A，B and C/ so on.
I am good at sports, such as swimming, playing basketball and running/ so on. I am good at sports, including swimming, playing basketball and running/ so on.
如何在高考英语作文中增加细节(19页)
自中国的一位交换生).
2. I want to have a pen friend,
_h__o_p_e_fu_l_l_y_a__g_ir_l_w__it_h__in_t_e_r_e_s_ts__si_m__il_a_r_t_o_m__i_n_e.
(希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩).
如何在高考英语作文中增加细节（19 页）-PP T执教 课件【 推荐】
(2)In order to get some practical experience,
______________________________________________________________________
(为了获得一些实践经验) I’m planning to take a part-time job in a foreign company.
如何在高考英语作文中增加细节（19 页）-PP T执教 课件【 推荐】
5.补充功能性（交际性）语言 1____I_w__o_u_ld_g_r_e_a_t_ly_a_p_p_r_e_c_ia_t_e_i_t _if_y_o_u_c_o_u_l_d__
____d_o_m__e_t_h_e_f_a_v_o_u_r._____________（如果 你能帮我这个忙，我将不胜感激
missing passport, so that he can get it back. I would
appreciate it if you could do me the favor. I’m
looking forward to your reply.
交际语
结
Y果ours,
如何在高考英语作文中增加细节（19 页）-PP T执教 课件【 推荐】
如何增加细节+课件-2023届高三英语一轮复习应用文写作
1)添加修饰成分使文章更丰满。 (运用更富内涵的词，短语或句型） 2)变换更高级和丰富的句式。如：定语从句，独立主格结构，非谓语等
2. 补加语句: Specific examples，Causes/ purposes， results/meaning，Ways/conditions
1)列举实例来补充说明。 2）增加心理描写及背景渲染。 3）结尾发挥，写你的感受，评价，愿望，倡议等。
Discuss the principles
1.which information should be extended(哪些信息需要扩展)
2. from what aspects to extend the details(从哪方面扩展)
3. extend effective details (有效扩展) 4. know the logic of the details(逻辑性)
3. 增添过渡：如， besides, meanwhile，in brief, on the contrary, as a result , on condition that…
Instance exercise:
（2018 全国卷I） 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去
中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。 请你回复邮件,内容包括： 1.到达时间2.合适的礼物3.餐桌礼仪 注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Apply the rules to writing!
Dear Terry, How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details. To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time. Best wishes!
2. 补加语句: Specific examples，Causes/ purposes， results/meaning，Ways/conditions
1)列举实例来补充说明。 2）增加心理描写及背景渲染。 3）结尾发挥，写你的感受，评价，愿望，倡议等。
Discuss the principles
1.which information should be extended(哪些信息需要扩展)
2. from what aspects to extend the details(从哪方面扩展)
3. extend effective details (有效扩展) 4. know the logic of the details(逻辑性)
3. 增添过渡：如， besides, meanwhile，in brief, on the contrary, as a result , on condition that…
Instance exercise:
（2018 全国卷I） 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去
中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。 请你回复邮件,内容包括： 1.到达时间2.合适的礼物3.餐桌礼仪 注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Apply the rules to writing!
Dear Terry, How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details. To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time. Best wishes!
2018广东高考英语复习指导合理增加6个细节,提升书面表达(共23张) 精品优选公开课件
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行
看看历年高考英语作文真题，除了 “都叫李华”之外有什么共同点？
2007高考卷作文 假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一 封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔 友。具体条件包括：
年龄；性别；爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。
share with her our traveling experiences, taking ca
wEnhgaltisehvebrywdeohinagves增原oin加因acnodmlemaornn.mAonrde
I believe I about her
w增i加ll i c结o果un
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
3.坚持锻炼 普通表达：We should keep on doing exercise. 增加目的：To keep up good spirits and prepare big day efficiently and healthily， we are advise regular workout， building up our bodies.
2011年高考卷作文
希假望设得你到是学李校华辅，导正中在心一（所L英ea国rn学in校g学C习en暑te期r）课的程帮，助遇。到根一据些学困合校难规理，
定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
增加
1、本人简介； 2、求助内容； 3、约定时间；4、你的联系方式（Email： lihua@；phone： 12345678）。
让要点更具体清晰
意义： a. 历史/纪念屈原 b. 休闲娱乐 c. 强身健体
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行
看看历年高考英语作文真题，除了 “都叫李华”之外有什么共同点？
2007高考卷作文 假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一 封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔 友。具体条件包括：
年龄；性别；爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。
share with her our traveling experiences, taking ca
wEnhgaltisehvebrywdeohinagves增原oin加因acnodmlemaornn.mAonrde
I believe I about her
w增i加ll i c结o果un
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
3.坚持锻炼 普通表达：We should keep on doing exercise. 增加目的：To keep up good spirits and prepare big day efficiently and healthily， we are advise regular workout， building up our bodies.
2011年高考卷作文
希假望设得你到是学李校华辅，导正中在心一（所L英ea国rn学in校g学C习en暑te期r）课的程帮，助遇。到根一据些学困合校难规理，
定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
增加
1、本人简介； 2、求助内容； 3、约定时间；4、你的联系方式（Email： lihua@；phone： 12345678）。
让要点更具体清晰
意义： a. 历史/纪念屈原 b. 休闲娱乐 c. 强身健体
高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT)【优秀课件】
高考英语作文写作技巧（共17张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
• P1 Everyone needs some recreational activities to help them relax after a day's work or study. And there are many recreational activities available to us in today's society. For example, sports fans may choose to play basketball or football. Or one may take a break by watching TV or listening to music.
作文得分技巧
1、 卷面整洁，书写清楚 2、 构思简单，少犯错误 3、 中心突出，层次分明 4、 重在变化，宁简勿烂
议论文写作的基本模式
写作框架如下： 第一段：现象背景介绍+引出话题（公众观
点+大概理由）； 第二段：关于话题的相关因素（影响，作
用，好处，危害或原因等）； 第三段：陈述自己观点或预期未来。
辩论式议论文模版
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the
Model
Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____.
In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____.
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missing passport, so that he can get it back. I would
appreciate it if you could do me the favor. I’m
looking forward to your reply.
交际语
结
Y果ours,
如何适当增加细节
(希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩).
2.补充前因后果或目的 (1) Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese traditional culture,
___________________________________________ (因为知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣），I am writing to invite you to participate in this activity.
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How to add reasonable details to your article
假定你是李华。上周日在地铁站捡到了英 国人Steven 的护照。请你用英语给你市某英 文报社编辑写一封信，内容包括：
1.简述时间过程; 2.交代护照相关信息; 3. 委托报社刊登招领启事.
注意: 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
1. 增加同位语 2. 补全前因后果或目的 3. 适当将写作内容具体化 4. 写出个人感受、评价或后果 5. 补充功能性（交际性）语言
What kind of information can often be added to your article?
1 增加同位语
1 I am LiHua, _C__h_a_ir_m_a_n__o_f _th_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts_’_U_n_i_o_n_o_f_m__y__
如何在高考英语作文中增加细节（共1 9张PPT ）【完 美版】
如何在高考英语作文中增加细节（共1 9张PPT ）【完 美版】
4 增加结果或者是效果
(1)I think it is a good chance to appreciate local
operas, w__h_i_c_h__w__il_l__s_u_r_e_l_y__h_e__lp__y_o__u__le_a__r_n__m__o_r_e__ ___a_b_o__u_t_C__h__in_e__s_e cu(这ltu必re将.有助于你学到更多的中国文化） (2)We can set out early, so that we can have more _ti_m_e__t_o_r_e_a_d__a_n_d__s_e_le__c_t _b_o_o_k_s__________(以便我
(具体时间、地点）
(2 )I know the owner is Steven f_r_o_m__E_n_g_la_n_d_,_a_g_e_d__3_8_, _m_a_r_ri_e_d_. (相关身份信 息)
3 When I received the dictionary, I found that _th__e_re__w__e_r_e_s_o__m_e__m__is__p_ri_n_t_s_a__n_d_p__a_g_e_s__fr_o_m_____ _2_3_-_4_5__w_e__re__m__is_s_i_n_g_.___________(具体存在问题 如错印、缺页等)
如何在高考英语作文中增加细节（共1 9张PPT ）【完 美版】
3.适当将写作内容具体化 （1) The activity will be held from 9 a.m. to 10 ___a_._m_._o__n_A__p_ri_l _1_1__i_n_C__la_s_s_r_o_o_m___5_0_1_.__________
school.
(我们学校的学生会主席). /
a_n_e_x_c_h_a_n_g_e__s_tu_d__en__t _fr_o_m___C_h_i_n_a_._____________(来
自中国的一位交换生).
2. I want to have a pen friend,
_h__o_p_e_fu_l_l_y_a__g_ir_l_w__it_h__in_t_e_r_e_s_ts__si_m__il_a_r_t_o_m__i_n_e.
(2)In order to get some practical experience,
______________________________________________________________________
(为了获得一些实践经验) I’m planning to take a part-time job in a foreign company.
一个问题
主体信息写完往往只有60-70个字，不 足100词，怎么弥补词数？
需要“适当增加细节，以使行文连贯”。
▪Dear edihigh school student in our city. I’m
writing to tell you a piece of urgent information. I
picked up a passport last Sunday in the subway
station when I was taking a ride home. There was
nobody around when I found it on a waiting bench.
The owner of it is Steven who comes from England.
_(_3_)_S___in__c__e__I__h__a__v_e___t_h__e__e__x__p_e__r_i_e__n__c_e___o__f_l_o__s_i_n__g___m__y___I_D______ card, (由于我有过丢身份证的经历），I can feel how anxious Mr Steven will be now.