外研版版高中英语必修一Section Ⅳ Writing——建议信
3． get along wel处于困境中
5． take an active part in
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第四步：句式升级 1．听说你交友困难，我很难过。 (一般表达)I'm sorry to hear that you can't make friends. (高级表达)I'm sorry you are having trouble in making frie nds.
会愿意和你交朋友的。
③I believe that if you follow my advice, you'll get alon
g well with your classmates. 我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。 ④I believe, with your trying, you can manage to overco
First, it is important to ________________. Then, it also helps to ____ ____________. Besides, it should be a good idea to ________________. Yo u can also ________________.(此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to _______ _________， I suggest ________________ (有时根据需要具体到某一方面). In addition, ________________ (其他建议). I'm sure ________________ (预 测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心)．
friendly if you take an active part in the
discussions in your class.
参考范文： Dear Xiao Dong， I'm sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situa tion is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. First, why not learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes? Then yo u can have much in common with them, which helps you get along well with them. Second, it will help you to show you are friendly if you take a n active part in the discussions in your class. Third, it would be a good id ea to help others when they are in trouble. With time going on, people will know you better and will like to mak e friends with you if you follow the tips above.
Yours， Miss Wang
[审题谋篇] 第一步：明确要求 该写作属于应用文类的书信，故要用第一人称来写；信的主 要内容是写建议，根据题意，首先明确书信双方的身份，自己为 报社编辑，对方是寻求建议的小冬，主题是关于交友中遇到的困 难。需要给对方提出下一步的意见和建议，故用一般将来时，同 时兼顾书信的特点，会用到表达愿望的情态动词。
2．首先，了解你同学的喜好。 (一般表达)First, get to know what your classmates like an
d what they don't like. (高级表达) First, why not learn about your classmates'
likes and dislikes?
[谋篇布局] 建议信的格式和普通信件一样，通常包括以下几个部分：信 头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。因为本写作任务开头和结尾已 给出，所以我们只需要写出正文部分即可。 建议信的正文部分分为三部分： 第一部分：引出话题； 第二部分：提出建议； 第三部分：表达祝愿。
[增分佳句] 1．建议信开头常用句式： ①I know you are now having trouble communicating with ot
第二步：确定段落 本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手： Para. 1 首先要陈述自己的关心 Para. 2 指出问题产生的原因，并提出建议 Para. 3 表达自己的希望与祝福
第三步：提炼要点
1．have trouble in making friends
交友有困难
2．likes and dislikes 好恶
2．表达建议常用句式： ①First(ly), why not join a club? If you do this, you can make friends. 首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到 朋友。 ②Second(ly), you should/can try to talk with others. Then/That way， you will feel better. 其次，你应该尽力与他人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。 ③Third(ly), it would be a good idea if you read a book or lis ten to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down. 第三，看书或听音乐是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己 平静下来。
cause ______________.(告知对方如何去做并如此做的理由) I am sure that ________________.(表达自己的期望) Best wishes，
________
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假设你是你校英语报社的编辑 Miss Wang，现在小冬因不善 于交流在交友过程中遇到了困难，请你用英语给他写一封 100 词左右的回信，给他提出一些建议或意见。
3．建议信结尾常用句式： ①I hope you will find these ideas useful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用。 ②As time goes on, people will know you better and will
like to make friends with you if you can follow the above. 如果你听从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加理解你，
me these difficulties. 我相信，通过努力，你会克服这些困难的。
[建议信模板] (一)
Dear ________，
I'm glad/sorry to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _ ____________(引出主题). Here are a few suggestions.
Exploring English
Section Ⅳ Writing——建议信
技法指导
建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。有 可能是写给个人，就收信人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观 点；也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等方面提出建 议忠告。
提出建议时，多用祈使句，时态以一般现在时为主，人称多 用第二人称。
I'm looking forward to ________________ (表达愿望)． Sincerely yours，
Miss Wang
(二) Dear ________，(问候语) You wrote that ______________.(你知晓对方面临的问题)
I understand that ______________. (你理解对方的处境或想法)I think ________________， be
hers, and you may often feel lonely. 我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。 ②I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on... 很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。 ③Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you. 这里有一些建议可以帮到你。 ④I think you can make it if you follow the advice below. 如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。
④Last but not least, you should talk with her first. 最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。 ⑤As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, you should
help each other. 就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。
3．第二，积极参与班级讨论会帮你显示你的友好。 (一般表达)Second, taking an active part in the discussions
in your class helps to show you are friendly. (高级表达) Second, it will help you to show you are
高中英语unit1livingwellsectionⅴwriting—建议信7英语_1
第一步 审题谋篇 1．体裁：_建__议__信___ 2．时态：一__般__现__在__时__为主 3．人称：_第__二__人__称___为主
[题型分析] 1．建议信属于应用文，其目的是督促对方解决问题，故语言应 正式、礼貌。 2．建议信的主体部分是正文，其结构如下： 第一部分：写信的目的及建议的理由。可以包括某种现象或危 害，然后很自然地引出建议的理由，理由要合情合理，语气得当，委 婉且有礼貌。 第二部分：建议的内容。根据问题所在有针对性地提出建议，同 时可以适当地阐述这种建议的理由，以使人信服和接受。 第三部分：希望对方采纳并表示感谢。
Yours sincerely， Li Hua
One possible version： Dear Mr. Smith， I am Li Hua, a student from Class Five, Senior Two. I am writing to draw your attention to two improper behaviors among students in the reading rooms of the school library: making noises and littering. As you know, it is difficult for readers to focus while some students are whispering to each other or making cell phone calls. Besides, a dirty environment is not only bad for our health but also has a negative effect on our studying. Therefore, in my opinion, some measures should be taken to solve these problems. First, put up some signs which forbid such improper behaviors. Second, ask all the students to pick up their rubbish when they leave. Thank you for your consideration.
人教版高中英语必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage Life Section Ⅳ Writing
4.When it comes to...,my suggestions are as follows. 说到……,我的建议如下。
5.What is strongly recommended/suggested is that... 我强烈建议……
6.You might as well do... 你不妨…… 7.You'd better... 你最好……
Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how
to learn Chinese well. ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
Then,it also helps to ________.Besides,it should be a good idea to ________.You can also ________.
As to ________,I suggest _____________.In addition, ________.I'm sure________.
I'm looking forward to________.
Sincerely yours, Li Hua
针对训练
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能 学好中文。请你根据下列要点用英语写封回信。
高一英语建议信写作
The first step: choose one endangered animal (group work)
5 minutes
How to protect wildlife?
1. we must take some measures to protect them effectively.
I believe that with your help the golden monkey will survive better. Please help them.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
Questions (2 minutes)
1. Who is Li Ming writing to? Why?
Li Ming writes a letter to WWF to give some advice.
2. In Para1, what does Li Ming write?
In Para1, Li Ming expresses his purpose of writing the letter.
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/ helpful. 2. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard(在这一点上). 4. I do hope that my ideas will work. 5. In the end, I will be glad if you find these ideas useful. 6. I would be ready to further discuss this matter/ discuss this matter with you in further detail.
高中英语作文写作指导 建议信34张
• You are supposed to get up early in the morning, which___________________________________________ • It would be a good idea to have a talk with your friend and explain the misunderstanding to him, which
3. 和 父 母 常 交 流 沟 通 ， 相 互 理 解 。
益处：逐渐取得进步
Task 3. Come up with key words
Helpful phrases Say aloud!
1. 给某人提建议
• give sb. some advice on…
2.向某人征求意见 • ask sb. for advice
葵花宝典四： which引导非限制性定语从句
• 例句：Actually, it is common for most students to be anxious about the busy and tough school life of Senior Three, which always makes us stressful.
_____________________
• Dear Xu meili
My advice to Xu meili
S3: I am worried about m__y_E__ng_l_is_h and I want to improve my _w_r_it_in_g_.
S4: I can't get on well with my friends and I don't know how to _im_p_r_o_ve_o_u_r_f_ri_e_n_ds_h_ip.
高中英语作文建议信首段尾段
高中英语作文建议信首段尾段High school is a crucial period in a student's life where they not only acquire academic knowledge but also develop essential life skills that will shape their future. As an experienced English teacher, I would like to offer some valuable suggestions to help you excel in your high school English writing assignments.Firstly, it is essential to understand the purpose and structure of the essay you are asked to write. Whether it's a narrative, expository, or argumentative essay, each type has its own unique characteristics and requirements. Familiarize yourself with the genre and the specific instructions provided by your teacher. This will help you organize your thoughts and ensure that your essay is well-structured and coherent.Next, focus on developing a strong thesis statement. Your thesis should be a clear and concise statement that outlines the main idea or argument of your essay. It should be specific and focused, providing a clear direction for the rest of your writing. A well-crafted thesis statement will serve as the foundation for your essay andguide the development of your supporting points.When it comes to the body of your essay, it is crucial to provide ample evidence and support for your claims. Conduct thorough research and gather relevant information from reliable sources. Incorporate direct quotes, paraphrases, and examples to strengthen your arguments and demonstrate your understanding of the topic. Remember to properly cite your sources to avoid plagiarism and maintain academic integrity.Effective organization is another key element of a successful essay. Organize your thoughts and ideas in a logical and coherent manner. Use transitional phrases and sentences to guide the reader through your essay and ensure a smooth flow of ideas. Each body paragraph should focus on a specific supporting point and build upon the previous one, leading the reader to your ultimate conclusion.In addition to content and organization, pay close attention to your language and writing style. Strive to use clear, concise, and engaging language that captures the reader's attention. Avoid using overly complex vocabulary or jargon, unless it is necessary to convey your ideas effectively. Vary your sentence structure to create a more dynamic and interesting read.Finally, do not underestimate the importance of proofreading andediting. Carefully review your essay for any grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, or inconsistencies. Ensure that your writing is free of any typos or formatting issues. Additionally, consider seeking feedback from your teacher or a peer to get a fresh perspective on your work and identify areas for improvement.Remember, writing is a skill that can be developed and refined over time. Consistent practice, dedication, and a willingness to learn from your mistakes will help you become a stronger writer. Embrace the challenges of high school English writing and see it as an opportunity to grow and improve.Good luck with your future writing endeavors and remember to always strive for excellence in your academic pursuits.。
概述英语必修一unit1 writing 一封建议信
practical/useful/helpful.
3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this
regard.
4. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.
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III Outlining
Presenting the problem（问题）
Proposing the solution and
letting people know how friendly you are. So
there should be no problem. It should
certainly provide you with some new friends.
I hope you find these ideas useful
talking to one person, it will get easier to talk to
others．
Find one person you have something in
common with, and once you become friends
with him, his friends will start talking to you too．
高中英语Unit1FriendshipSectionⅤWriting—如何写建议信教案(含解析)新人教版必修1
Section Ⅴ Writing — 如何写建议信[写作规范][题目要求]假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封100词左右的信。
1．要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2．要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3．友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。
第一步：审题谋篇1．体裁：书信；2．话题：向好友提建议；3．时态：一般现在时为主；4．人称：第二人称。
5．结构⎩⎪⎨⎪⎧ 第一段：点出写信的目的；第二段：列出所提的建议；最后一段：写出写信人的希望。
第二步：词汇推敲1．交朋友 make friends2．做……有困难 have trouble/difficulty (in) doing...3．做朋友 be a friend4．和……同甘共苦 share happiness and sorrow with...5．需要 call for/need第三步：句式锻造1．知道你在交友方面有麻烦我很难过。
I am sorry to know that you are having trouble/difficulty(in) making friends.2．如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种处境很容易。
The situation is easy to change if you take my advice.3．想要交朋友，首先要做一个朋友。
If you want to make friends, you should be a friend first.4．你要和朋友同甘共苦。
You should share happiness and sorrow with your friend.5．患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。
A friend in need is a friend indeed.6．友谊需要时间和投入。
Friendship calls for/needs time and effort.第四步：句式升级7．用why not改写句3。
高中英语Unit1FriendshipSectionⅤWriting_建议信课件新人教版必修1
建议 交朋友 做……有困难 和……同甘共苦 需要 全心全意
第三步：由词扩句雏形现 1．知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(宾语从句)
I am sorry to know _t_h_a_t_y_o_u_a_r_e__h_a_v_in__g_t_r_o_u_b_le__in__m__a_k_in_g _f_r_ie_n_d_s__. 2．如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种处境是很容易的。(be＋ adj.＋to do) The situation is easy to change if you take my advice. 3．要交朋友首先要做一个朋友。(主谓结构) If you want to make friends, you should be a friend first .
saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Lasuld be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends. It is well-known to us all that friendship calls
第五步：过渡衔接联成篇 (注意使用 however, to begin with, in addition, last but
not least 等关联词) Dear Su Ru，
I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
18学年高中英语Unit1LivingwellSectionⅤWriting_建议信教学案7
Unit 1 Living wellSection Ⅴ Writing-建议信一、基本结构建议信的主体部分是正文，其结构如下：第一部分：写信的目的及建议的理由。
可以包括某种现象或危害，然后很自然地引出建议的理由，理由要合情合理，语气得当，委婉且有礼貌。
第二部分：建议的内容。
根据问题所在有针对性地提出建议，同时可以适当地阐述这种建议的理由，以使人信服和接受。
第三部分：希望对方采纳并表示感谢。
二、增分佳句(一)建议信的开头常用句式——提出观点1．I am writing to express my views about ...2．You have asked for my advice on ...and I will try to make some suggestions.(二)建议信的主体常用句式——建议内容1．If I were you, I would ...2．I would like to suggest that ...3．It would seem to me that you could ...4．I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...5．In my opinion, you should ...6．In my experience, it seems that ...(三)建议信的结尾常用句式——表达希望1．I hope you will take my advice into account.2．I hope you will find these proposals/recommendations practical/helpful.[题目要求]假设你叫李华，你的美国朋友Johnson想和家人来中国定居，请你帮他在A、B两座城市中做出选择。
下图是这两座城市在就业、娱乐和环境等方面的对比情况。
请根据相关信息用英语给他写封电子邮件，提出你的建议并说明理由。
高中英语必修1优质学案1：Writing—Write a letter of advice
Writing—Write a letter of advice写作指导建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。
建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构，信的内容要包括写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由。
建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陈述建议，具体为：第一段：表明写作意图。
陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。
第二段：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。
注意千万不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。
第三段：对提出的建议进行总结。
要注意有礼貌，使读者容易接受。
话题词汇feedback n．反馈suggestion n. 建议proposal n. 建议venture v. 冒昧做某事beneficial adj. 有益的advise v. 建议suggest v. 建议recommend v. 推荐，劝告wise adj. 明智的话题句式1．段首常用语(1)I am writing to express my views concerning...(2)You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some suggestions.2．表达“建议”常用语(1)I think the most suitable...for you is...(2)I would like to suggest that...(3)You’d better.../It’s better to...(4)As far as I am concerned.../In my opinion...(5)For one thing..., for another...(6)If I were you, I would...(7)It seems to me that you could...3．段尾常用语(1)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...(2)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.(3)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.(4)I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.(5)I will be ready for further discussing this matter into details.典例展示为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。