批改网高分表达总结
批改网高分表达
一、短语，高分词组
1. creating a green campus创建绿色校园
2. enjoy great prestige in the world享誉世界
2. is the essence of 是…的精华
3. Recently a debate about green campus has aroused public attention.引起公众关注。
4. Undoubtedly毫无疑问
5. Has a profound impact on both individuals and society.对个人和社会有极深影响。
6. Needless to say, a green campus includes...不必说
7. Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。
8. make efforts to
Meanwhile, we should make efforts to improve the moral standard of university students in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’mental health.
9. Work out 解决，实现
10. Increase the awareness of the importance of...增强对...的认识的重要性
11. Rewind the clock 时光倒流
12. In addition to this除此之外
13. Go all out全力以赴(属于四六级经典高分短语)
14. what's more意思是另外，而且…，是四六级经典补充类词组。 What's more, bigger banks can diversify their earnings, which should further militate against failure .
而且，大银行可以使他们的收入多样化，这可以防止经营失败。
15. whereas意思是然而…，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇。
16. nothing but意为：只有,只不过，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. 天才只不过是劳动加勤奋。 17. take advantage of利用，是四六级经典短语
18. attach importance to意为：重视，属于四六级经典高分短语 19. take pride in意为：以…自豪，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒
20. take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语。
21. on account of意为：由于，属于四六级经典高分短语
22. far beyond的意思是远远超过，大量超出，远在天边，是四六级经典词组。 23. may as well意为：最好，不妨，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ We may as well cut across the playground.
我们不妨从运动场上横穿过去。
24. it pays to 意为：...是值得的。属于四六级经典高分句型，用得很棒！Though time is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make our work better.
25. not to mention意为“更不用说/别提……”，同意表达有to say nothing of、not to speak of
It goes without saying that whereas only when our condition is rougher will the studying abroad become more significa nt. A case in point, we can have it. On account of an ac cident, he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and n ot to mention the reward he can take pride in. What's more , it is universally acknowledged that studying abroad is of consequence. For one thing, on no account can we be i ndifferent to other's pain since they might go through some surge. That is the reason why we should hug and counsel them to restore their confidence. For the other thing, we m ay as well go all out to lend them a hand and take advan tage of our love to illuminate the darkness of their hearts as well. For
your information, it is love that contributes to the harmony and wealthiness of a nation, that results in our power an d ability to tackle the challenge and finally cope with it once for all, that leads to a considerable number of peop le struggle to achieve their goals.
What,more 提高文章连接性studying
4.1 When there is love, there comes hope. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: affection, love, attachment 均含“爱，热爱”之意。
4.2 The picture depicts a common sense of a lamp brightenin
g the darkness, telling a philosophy to us as to love. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: lamp, light 均有“灯”之意。
4.3 As we can see, evidently, love compared to be a lamp and when the darker surrounding is, the brighter it will be . [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: enclose, encircle, envelop, fence, surround 均有“包围”之
意。 4.4 The drawing is undoubtedly meaningful and pays to think that has we ever attach importance to love surroun ding us. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: consider, think, believe, count, deem, reckon, regard 均含有“认为”之意。第4段
5.1 It goes without saying that whereas only when our condi tion is rougher will the love become more significant. [修改]
[优秀词汇] whereas意思是然而…，是经典转换话题类词汇。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: significant, important, momentous 均含“重要的，重大的”之意。
[精彩句型] it goes without saying that 意为：不用说...，很明显...。类似的表达有：属于经典高分句型，(It is) needless to say (that)，It is obvious that，Obviously, ...。用得很棒！
5.2 A case in point, we can have it. [修改]
[闪光短语] a case in point意为：一个恰当的例子，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！[拓展辨析] 动名搭配have...it 在语料库中出现过34 次
5.3 On account of an accident, he died of tetanus and his son was completely paralyzed. [修改]
[学习提示] accident表示“意外事故”。注意与incident的区别。详情点击[闪光短语] on account of意为：由于，属于经典高分短语。
5.4 Without her help and affection, he hardly can achieve t his spectacular project and not to mention the reward he ca n take pride in. [修改]
[闪光短语] 高分词组，not to mention意为“更不用说/别提……”，同意表达有to say nothing of、not to speak of。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: plan, design, plot, scheme, project, blueprint, programme 均含“计划”之意。
[闪光短语] take pride in意为：以…自豪，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！ 5.5 What's more, the Brooklyn indeed light up the world, so do their love. [修改] [闪光短语] what's more有助于提高文章衔接
[闪光短语] what's more意思是另外，而且…，是经典补充类词组。[学
习提示] 易混词汇: earth, world, globe 均可表示“地球”之意。第5段
6.1 As far as I am concerned, it is universally acknowledge
d that lov
e is o
f consequence, while lovin
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h other is our obligation and being loved is our privilege. [修改]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: acknowledge, admit, confess, recognize, concede 均含“承认”之意。
[精彩句型] It is universally acknowledged that意思是大家都认为，是经典句型。
[闪光短语] 高分词组，be of接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。 6.2 For one thing, on no account can we be indiff erent to other's pain since they might go through some surg e. [修改]
[精彩句型] On no account can意思是...绝对不能...，是经典句型。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: energy, force, power, might, strength, vigour 均有“力”之意。[闪光短语] on no account 意为：决不，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！
[精彩句型] on no account can we 意为：我们绝对不能...，属于经典高分句型，用得很棒！
6.3 That is the reason why we should hug and counsel them to restore their confidence. [修改]
[精彩句型] that is the reason why的意思是原因是，是经典句型。[学习提示] reason表示“原因，理由”。注意与cause的区别。详情点击[精彩句型] the reason why 意为：...的原因是...，属于经典高分句型。 6.4 For the other thing, we may as well go all o ut to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate the darkness of their hearts as well. [修改] [闪光短语]may as well意为：最好，不妨，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！[闪光短语] take advantage of的意思是利用，是经典短语。
[闪光短语] go all out意为：全力以赶；鼓足干劲，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！[拓展辨析] 动名搭配lend...hand 在语料库中出现过559 次
6.5 To conclude, only when we fall into the darkest place,