上海黄路学校书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

我的英语学习

初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法，请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法，根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文，

要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并作适当发挥

3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；

4．词数80－100。

【答案】My English Study

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.

First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.

In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，communicate with，help sb. do，do more reading，in addition，in a word等。而感叹句How time flies!，倒装句only when we

develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句结构Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．（·安徽中考模拟）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Johnson打算暑假来合肥玩，而合肥的夏天经常持续高温，请你根据以下提示，用英文给他写一封邮件，告诉他防暑降温的方法。

● 清淡饮食；● 合理休息；● 适当运动；● ……

注意: 1.词数80-100；2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名和地名；4.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Johnson

Welcome to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat.____________________________________________

I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack,

Welcome to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat.

First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What's more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat.

I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇关于防暑的建议，所以写作时，比较多地用到表示建议的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建议时要条理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的词。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。写完后记得对文章检查复合，避免单词拼写及语法错误。本篇文章首先第一段对别人的到来表示欢迎，接着对合肥的天气进行总的描述，并引出下文自己的

建议。第二段也是文章的主体部分。用first of all, Next, What's more, Finally,提出了四点建议，其中用到建议的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。结构清晰，层次分明，词语及句型使用正确，很不错的一篇文章。

3．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达

今天早上你目睹了一起事件（下图），你想以"Mother Stops Him"为题写一篇短文，向你校英语报社投稿。短文内容如下：

1. 描述亊件。

2. 发表你的想法。

要求：

1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

3. 100个词汇左右。

参考词汇：lift…up扶起，knock…down撞倒，trust信任

Mother Stops Him

_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________

【答案】This morning, my mother took me to school. On the way, I saw a car knock an old man down and the car ran away. The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up, but my mother stopped me saying, "Don't lift him up, or he 'll say you hit him." But I think helping others is what we should do. That old woman will certainly appreciate me, so I trust that as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a better place.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇看图作文，所给材料较为详细，逻辑清楚，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般过去时态，主要是第一人称，句型以简单句为主。写作时要灵活运用，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确。

【点睛】

本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up。所以在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有

逻辑性,更富有条理.

4．（·辽宁初三）生活中总有些不经意的事让你感动，总有些平凡的人让你难以忘记。

白杨是我的同学。她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。请根据提示内容介绍白杨，并谈一谈她对你及同学们的影响。

There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you. ________

【答案】There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you.

My classmate Bai Yang comes from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. What’s more, she cares for the classmates and is ready to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students.

She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇人物介绍。人物身份为同学白杨，介绍分四个要点：她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时。注意语法正确，善用连词，使各个要点连贯。

【高分句型一】She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness.她精心照顾生病的母亲。who has a serious illness为定语从句。

【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.不管生活多么艰苦，

她仍然笑对生活。No matter how hard the life is为让步状语从句。

5．（·扬州中学教育集团树人学校初三）现在有些学生缺乏“感恩”意识，对待家人、朋

友、老师等很冷漠，而且行为方式和价值观令人担忧。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，以“Learn to Express Thanks” 为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括表格中的相关信息，并适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4）不得使用真实姓名、

校名和地名等。

Good morning, boys and girls!

The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express

thanks.”________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________

Thanks for your listening.

【答案】Good morning, boys and girls!

The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks.” Nowadays some students consider it natural to eat well and wear fashionable clothes. They think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them. Howeve r, they don’t show any sense of “Thanks”.

I don’t think it’s right. It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much. In addition, we are supposed to be thankful to our teachers for teaching us so much knowledge. What’s more, we should say thanks to our friends because they share joy with us and give us courage to overcome many difficulties.

In my opinion, it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to them. First of all, we should be polite to our parents and teachers. Besides, we should try our best to help others when they are in trouble. Last but not least, we must study harder to make a great contribution to our country in the future. And only in this way can we better reward our parents, teachers, friends and so on. Thanks for your listening.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如provide a happy life，any sense of，take good care of；very much，be supposed to do；be thankful to，so much，share

with，what’s more，say thanks to，in my opinion，be polite to，try our best，in trouble，in

the future，and so on 等。而固定句型it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to them.和

They think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them,/ It’s our parents who take

good care of us and love us very much./ we should try our best to help others when they are in trouble.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习

中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，

也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理

后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要

尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得

到较高的分数。

6．（·广东中考模拟）近年，有一些地区提出把游泳纳入中考的体育考试，并在学生中做

了一次问卷调查。下面是一个学校的调查结果，请你根据调查情况写一篇英语短文阐明调

查结果及表达自己的观点。

赞成的学生人数占：57%不赞成的学生人数占：43%

理由：

1. 强身健体，预防疾病

2. 训练求生技能

3. 休闲娱乐，放松身心理由：

1. 害怕水

2. 有危险性

3. 气温低时容易感冒

你的观点与理由？

要求：

1. 词数80左右。（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）

2. 不得透露学校，姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school.

【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the

result from one school.

About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against （prevent） illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.

However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.

In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.

（In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.）

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇材料作文，根据所给材料，阐明关于“把游泳纳入中考体育考试”的两种不同观点，而且最后还要表达出自己的观点，所以文章主要用一般现在时。文章分为三个部分，第一部分，首先引出本文话题，并用Here’s the result from one school.起到承上启下的作用，引出调查结果；第二部分分别阐述两种不同观点About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….; However, 43 percent students are against thi s plan for some reasons.最后提出自己的观点并进行总结In my opinion…。注意阐明观点列举理由时，要注意条理性，比如用到表示次序先后的词first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文内容完整，写作条理清晰，语言表达准确，是一篇不错的文章。

7．（·扬州市竹西中学中考模拟）写作

“百善孝为先”,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。

某英语报社正在举办以“弘扬中华传统文化”为主题的征文活动,请你以“We s hould honor our parents”为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动。内容包括:

What do you often do for your parents?

Why should we honor our parents?

How should we honor our parents?

要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

We should honor our parents

As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of

China.____________________________

【答案】We should honor our parents

As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.I honor my parents.I often

help my parents do housework in my spare time.I think it's our duty to honor our parents.Our parents take much effort to raise us, so it's important for us to honor them.They love us so we should love and respect them.

First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.Next, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely.We'd better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.It's also important to tell our parents we love them.

【解析】

【分析】

本题要求考生以“我们应该尊敬我们的父母”为题结合所给的内容要点，写一篇作文

【详解】

这是篇材料作文，主要内容要点已给，所以考生要围绕着要点，进行写作，不要遗漏，当然顺序可以适当调整。这篇作文又句型亮点，例如：As we know，…众所周知；.I think it's our duty to do sth等等，其次文章结构也比较清晰，例如第二段的衔接词，First of all，Then，Next，使用的简单而恰当。

8．（·天津中考模拟）假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校成功举办了“中华诗词朗诵比赛”，请用英语写一篇短文，介绍活动情况并呼吁更多的人参与这样的活动。内容要点如下：

注意事项：

（1）须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、行文连贯作、适当发挥；

（2）词数在80个左右，文稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数；

参考词汇：中华诗词朗诵比赛 Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition;表现 performance; 高度评价think highly of ;朗诵recite;天赋gift;免费的free

I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school...

【答案】I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school held a Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition on the afternoon of May 23rd. It was held in the school hall. The competition is held every tram. This year it was a big success again. All the teachers and students thought highly of the students' wonderful performances. Wang Li from Grade 8 won the first prize. She has a real gift for reciting .Each winner won a free ticket for the book show.

I hope more people will take part in this activity and enjoy the beautiful Chinese culture

【解析】

【详解】

本题是一篇给材料作文，介绍“中华诗词朗诵比赛”活动情况并呼吁更多的人参与这样的活动。短文用第一人称和第三人称，还会用到被动语态的句子。写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文，其次考生可根据表格中的要点提示去写作。文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，但不要逐句翻译，并补充两条个人的观点。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．（·甘肃中考模拟）发明创造改变了世界。作为一名中学生．假如你梦想当一名发明家，应该怎样做才能实现梦想呢?请根据下面的漫画提示，以“How to Become an Inventor”为题，写一篇短文。

要求：1. 80词左右，可适当发挥。（文章标题和开头已给出不计人总词数）

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。

How to Become an Inventor?

【答案】How to Become an Inventor?

With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream come true? In my opinion,First,studying hard is the basic method.It is clear that only when we study hard to acquire the knowledge about the science and technology can we fulfill the need of innovation.Second,interesting is the best teacher.Hardly can we imagine a child without passion of exploring will get progress in innovation Third,we need the spirit of creativity which provides us different thoughts to solve the problem.What's more important,Never give up.Keep our belief.That's the key to success for all scientists,such as Madame Curie and Darwin.

What I have list above is my answer to how to become an inventor,and that is what I'll persist doing in the future with my whole passion.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇话题作文，以“How to Become an Inventor”为题，写一篇短文。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I want to be……，studying hard is……，we need……，That's……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要成为一个发明家；接下来介绍为了成为一个发明家，应该如何做；最后指出为了成为一个发明家，我要坚持做下去。此处play an important role in, come true, give up, such as等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

10．（·吉林中考模拟）“inspire” 一词的汉语解释是“激励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考”等。请以“The person who inspired me”为题写一篇不少于 80 词的短文，向校报的英语园地投稿。

要点： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？

2. How did he/ she inspire you？

要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

2. 语言流畅，字迹清楚。

【答案】The person who inspired me

Many people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.

Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last year's ping-pang competition.

You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以The person who inspired me为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。题目中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时应注

意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复合句。为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾经激励过自己的人。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三人称单数形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.等等。

11．（·山东中考模拟）写作

现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活（low-carbon life）”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。

提示词语：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _

【答案】Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it's my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we'd better not spend much money on expensive

clothes.

If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文，针对“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建议。根据要表达的内容确定并

准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be good for, help with, instead of,

besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

12．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

以“我是…… 的一员”为题，写一篇80-100字的短文，标点符号不占格。提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或社团的一员，或者作为家庭、班级、社区的一员，写出你的经历、感受等。内容可以包括以下几方面：

Are you glad to be a member of...?

What do you do in it?

How do you feel as such a member?

I’m a member of... （请将题目自行补充完整，已给的单词不计入总词数）

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________

【答案】I’m a Member of the Singing and Dancing Club

Hello, everyone! I’m very glad I'm a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. I’m an actor in the club. Many students in our school have joined t he club, so I also have made a lot of friends.We have many activities on campus.Each week,we have two times of training. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, but I am always happy when I dance.All the members in the club are just brothers and sisters. I like this club very much.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“我是…… 的一员”为题，写一篇短文。首先考生需要把题目补充完整，然后根据所给出的材料提示，动笔写作。文章时态主要用一般现在时和现在完成时，人称主要用第一人称。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的

表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

13．（·天津中考模拟）假设五一小长假期间，你去故宫博物院参观，请根据以下要点提不与一篇英语短文，讲述你在故宫的所见所闻。

（1）你提前在网上购买了故宫门票。

（2）你乘火车到达北京后’转乘地铁来到故宫。

（3）故宫的建筑高大雄伟，展品琳琅满目，精美绝伦。

（4）故宫内游人如织，人们纷纷拍照留念。

（5）闭馆时间到了，你仍然不愿离去。

（6）你的感受……

参考词汇：故宫博物院the Palace Museum 提前in advance

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

My visit to the Palace Museum

On May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum.

___________________________________________________

【答案】My visit to the Palace Museum

On May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum. I bought tickets to the Palace Museum online in advance. When I arrived in Beijing by train, I transferred to the Forbidden City by subway. The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in succession. It's closing time. I still don't want to leave. I feel that the Palace Museum is very great. It was a very happy day and and I gained a lot.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇发言稿。题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应根据材料内

容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。在写作时，本文的主语可以用第一人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。为了是表达更有逻辑性，可以使用序数词，连接词等。

【点睛】

这篇短文用到了一些好的句型：The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. ；Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in succession.这些给文中增色不少。

14．（·安徽中考模拟）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感兴趣，给你写信想了解该诗，请你根据以下提示给他回信：

1.作者：孟郊

2.时间：唐朝

3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题：母爱的伟大

注意：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数: 80-100词左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________

Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.

Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts.

If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇材料作文。

【详解】

根据内容可知，这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

第二部分：文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

1.作者：孟郊

2.时间：唐朝

3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题：母爱的伟大

第三部分：信的结语——如果对方有任何问题，可以继续问自己，并期待收到对方的来信。

15．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达

我校决定让学生轮流打扫厕所，以此作为教育学生的一种方式。这件事在学生中引起了强烈的反响，请你把下列不同意见整理成一篇书面材料，报告给学校。

同意：1．多数学生是独生子女，不会做事。

2．学生应该学会做艰苦的工作。

3．学会理解和尊重清洁工人的劳动。

不同意：1．很脏，容易使学生生病。 2．不是学生应该做的事情。 3．打扫教室就足够了。

注意：1．短文应包括表中所有内容，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译； 2．不少于80词。生词提示：respect尊重

【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.

Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.

But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.

【解析】

【详解】

阅读题干要求，这是一篇看法类的作文，那么首先得点明讨论的话题，然后分别写出不同人群对此事的看法，时态以一般现在时为主。

重点词汇及短语：argument争论；take place发生；among（三者或三者以上）之间；a good chance for sb对某人来说是个好机会；help sb do sth帮助某人做某事；get sick生病。亮点句型：

（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来，在学生中发生了一场激烈的争论。现在完成时（have/has+done）。

（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务劳动是他们学习如何做困难工作的好机会。动词不定式作主语，谓语动词用单数，疑问词+to do。

16．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达

假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Alex来信说他要来中国做交换生。请根据以下信息给Alex写一封回信，介绍一下你的近况，并给他一些在中国如何与同学融洽相处的建议。

写作要点：

1. 欢迎他来中国。

2. 介绍你的近况：

（1）大多数时间忙于复习备考。

（2）有时在户外做运动。

（3）很少有时间外出娱乐。

3. 给他一些在中国如何与同学融洽相处的建议。

写作要求：

1、不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2、可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3、字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4、至少80词。

Dear Alex，

How are you doing ?_________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ming

【答案】Dear Alex，

How are you doing? You said that you would come to China as an exchange student in your last letter. Welcome to China. You want to know about me. Let me tell you. I have been spending most of my time reviewing for exams these days. Sometimes I do sports outdoors. But I seldom have time to go out for fun.

You said you will worry about how to get along with students when you are in China. In fact, you don’t have to be worried about it. Chinese people are friendly. You should take an active part in all kinds of activities in school. If your friends have some questions, you should help them. They'll thank you for your help. You can bring some small gifts to your classmates when you are invited to their homes. I hope you can get on well with your classmates.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ming 【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信作文，假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Alex来信说他要来中国做交换生。请根据以下信息给Alex写一封回信，介绍一下你的近况，并给他一些在中国如何与同学融洽相处的建议。注意书信的格式。本文人称主要是第一和第二人称，时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，认真阅读所给提示，所给提示就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚，至少80词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

亲爱的亚历克斯，

你好吗？你在上一封信中说你将作为交换生来中国。欢迎来到中国。你想了解我最近忙些什么。让我告诉你。这几天我大部分时间都在复习考试。有时我在户外运动。但我很少有时间出去玩。

你说你在中国时会担心如何与学生相处。事实上，你不必担心。中国人很友好。你应该积极参加学校的各种活动。如果你的朋友有问题，你应该帮助他们。他们会感谢你的帮助。当你被邀请去他们家时，你可以给你的同学带一些小礼物。我希望你能和同学们相处得很好。

最美好的祝福！

你的，

李明

【点睛】

书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。

17．（·北京中考模拟）从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计人总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目①

假如你是李华，明天下午2:00你要去参加“传统文化才艺展示”活动，因此不能上英语课。

请用英文给你们的外教John写一张请假条，告诉他你要去干什么，为什么要参加这个活动以及你保证按时完成作业。

提示词语:traditional talent show, Chinese culture, ask, help

提示问题:.What will you do tomorrow afternoon?

Why will you take this activity?

How will you finish your homework?

Dear John,

I'm sorry to ask for absence from your English lesson.__________________

______________________________________________________________

Your loring student

Li lHua

题目②

一位好老师，胜过万卷书。在你的初中生活中，一定会有一位老师给你留下了深刻印象。某英文网站正在开展以“Thank you, my teacher”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，让更多的人认识你的老师，同时表达你对他/她的感激之情。主要内容包括: 哪位老师给你留下了深刻印象，发生了什么事使你印象深刻以及你想对他/她说些什么。

提示词语：kind, helpful，talk with，make progress

提示问题：Which teacher impressed you most?

What happened to make you impressed?

What do you want to say to him/her?

Thank you,my teacher

【答案】题目一：

Dear John,

I'm sorry to ask for absence fom your English lesson. I'm going to aend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow aftermoon.

In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.

I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.

Your loring student

Li Hua

题目二：

Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful.

last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found out this, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.

I really want to say"Thank you for helping me. I love you!" to my English teacher.

【解析】

【详解】

、

题目①

本文是一篇应用文，作文要求写一张请假条，因此格式要遵循假条的格式。假条的内容——时间和事由均给出，结合提示问题可知假条主要从三个方面写，这三个方面需要作者自由发挥一部分内容。

本例文是一篇应用文，人称为第一人称，时态是以一般将来时为主。例文分成三段，根据提示问题，每段成一行，这种写法条理清晰，分段明确。

高分亮点：ask for；absence from；一般将来时；in order to；help sb with sth；promise to do；on time。

题目②

题目二是一篇话题作文，根据话题可知这是一篇感谢老师的文章。人称应该为第一人称。注意给出的提示问题，文章要包含这三部分的内容。

本例文以第一人称书写，时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。文章第一段介绍“我”要感谢的老师，第二段用一般过去时介绍为什么“我”要感谢老师，第三段表达“我”的感谢。分段明确，语句简洁不啰嗦，时态运用合理。

高分亮点：Among all my teachers；did badly in；As soon as；found out；talked with；现在完成时；want to do sth。

18．（·山东中考模拟）紧张而又忙碌的初中生活即将结束，在装载你收获的行囊----成长记录袋中还应增添一份你自己满意的答案。

根据上述提示，请以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”为题写一篇文章，记录你难忘的校园生活。首句已给出。

注意：. 1.语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

2. 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名或能够透露你个人身份的相关信息。

3.词数80左右，信件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My Unforgettable Junior High School Life

How time flies!

【答案】How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.

In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.

In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文要求我们以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life为题，回想一下自己即将过去的初中，讲述难忘的初中生活。题目中用思维导图，列出了一些文章中会用到的关键词，供学生们参考使用。审题可知，这篇短文应以一般过去时、第一人称为主来叙述。题目中并没有给出具体的写作内容，学生们应发挥自己的想象力，可以从自己的学习、爱好、与同学的交往、与老师的相处以及自己的感受等方面进行详细阐述。写作时应注意：首先要展开合理想象，补充文章细节内容，注意各部分内容之间的层次，内容要完整、充实，结构要清晰。其次应注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译。句子的结构要完整，可以简单句结构为主，如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句、复合句及其他复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并描述了自己的感受。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容充实、完整，符合题目要求。短文中作者从自己的学习情况、与同学的交往、爱好、特长等方面进行了总结，在最后提出了对未来的希望。层次清晰，结构合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章第一段引出主题，使用了一般现在时；第二段回忆过去的生活，主要使用了一般过去时；最后对未来提出希望，用到了一般将来时。语法规范，用词准确，注意了名词、动词、形容词等的正确形式。句式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句句型，调整了文章节奏，提升了作文档次。短文中较好的句型有：In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them、But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting、In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.、I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success等等。

19．（·湖南中考模拟）书面表达

假如你是李华，马上将要中学毕业，一路上肯定有很多人帮助或者鼓励过你。某英文杂志社正向九年级毕业生征文，请用英语写一篇题为“Thank you, My ________”的短文，将你对你的父母、老师、朋友或同学的感谢表达出来。