昆山书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

昆山书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·广东中考模拟）马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。

My Life At School

How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.

【答案】My Life At School

How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.

In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.

I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式，展示

了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们变成自己的话，并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情；最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。

2．（·北京中考模拟）“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造?

某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤” 为主题的征文活动?假如你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿, 讲述你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历, 并谈谈你的感受?

提示词语: diligence （勤奋）, make progress, effort, proud

提示问题: ? What did you achieve by working hard?

? What did you do to make it?

? How did you feel about it?

【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.

It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I

was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize.

It was so great that all my efforts paid off.I felt so proud of myself.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历。所提供的材料中列举了“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造。主要从：你努力工作取得了什么成绩？?你是怎么做到的？?你觉得怎么样？这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料和提示词的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 这对我来说是一个很大的挑战，因为我对自己的英语口语没有那么自信，在公共场合说话也很害羞。

句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public.是由because引导的原因状语从句。

【高分句型二】

The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我练习得越多，就越自信。

这句话用到了“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。

3．（·河南中考模拟）亲爱的同学，三年的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，请你谈一谈，这三年以来，你学习英语的心得体会。

要求：

1.你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟。

2.词数80左右。

3.行文连贯通顺。条理清晰，表达准确。

4.文中不允许出现真实校名和人名。否则，试卷按零分处理。

【答案】My English Study

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.

When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I

made great progress in English.

In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.

【解析】

【详解】

短文第一句Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.开门见山回忆学习英语的记忆。接下来叙述自己遇到的各种学习英语的困难：听不懂老师的英语，记忆词汇短语有困难等等。分别列出，行文流畅。用短语give up放弃，表示困难太大，难倒了自己。后来在老师的帮助下，克服了困难。逐步地Step by step，不断取得进步。

最后一句In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.对学习英语兴趣的重要进行总结，结束全文。

4．（·湖南中考模拟）情景作文

阅读现在已成为人们生活中最重要的一部分。请根据提示的内容，以“Reading Is Very Important”为题，谈谈阅读的好处和你的阅读习惯并号召大家阅读。要求内容连贯，并进行合理拓展， 80 词左右。 good points ， get lots of knowledge ，so much fun ， keep happy ，a good way to relax， enjoy reading ， after school, write down ，think ， begin now Reading Is Very Important

It’s very important for us students to read books.

【答案】Reading Is Very Important

It’s very important for us students to read books. And there are so many good points when we do that. First of all, we can get lots of knowledge we didn’t know, especially when we are reading some scientific books or historical ones. And reading can bring so much fun to our life. If we read some jokes or interesting stories, it’s easy for us to keep happy all day. Also, it’s a good way to relax. After a long-day work, just take a book to read, imagining what’s happening in the book, so our brains could get enough relax.

Since reading can help us so much, I enjoy reading a lot. I like to read after school, when I finish my homework. And my favorite time is the summer vacation, I can get lots of nice books to read without worrying about time! And I write down what I think after reading each book!

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，谈谈阅读的好处和你的阅读习惯并号召大家阅读。英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

5．（·浙江中考模拟）今年我国首次将高考作弊列入刑事处罚，称为史上最严高考．此事引起社会广泛关注．作为一名中学生，请你根据以下提示，就"学生考试作弊"这一话题，

谈谈自己的看法．

要求：

1．词数80-100；开头已给出，但不计入总词数．

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．

3．参考词汇：exam-room 考室exam-cheating 考试作弊 electronic products 电子产品 micro-earphones 微型耳机 competing environment竞争环境

It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year,our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It is reported that …_______

【答案】It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It's reported that some students carry some important information or notes into the exam-room．Some students copy others' answers．What's more，others use electronic products，such as mobile phones，micro-earphones to pass on the answers．

There are many reasons for students to cheat in the exam．Some students are too lazy to work hard．They want to get good grades in order to enter a good high school or a good university．Some students have too much pressure from their parents and teachers．They only want to make them happy．

In my opinion，it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams，and it's unfair for other students．In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．

【解析】

【详解】

高分句型一：Some students are too lazy to work hard．一些学生太懒了而不努力学习．

句中使用了"too…to…太…而不能…"结构。

高分句型二：In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．为了营造公平的竞争环境，我们应该对考试作弊说不．

高分句型三：it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams．学生考试作弊是不诚实的

句中使用短语有：“in order to do sth 为了做某事”，“say No to…拒绝…”，“copy others' answers抄袭他人的答案”，“get good grades取得好成绩”。

6．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达

下图描述了李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的经历。请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。

要求：1. 完整叙述图片内容，可适当发挥；

2. 结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。

【答案】Last May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people don't pay attention to hygiene. There's rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇看图作文，根据图片的内容介绍一下李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的经历。主要是要完整叙述图片内容、结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。时态为一般过去时，人称为第三人称。在陈述个人观点或给出建议时用一般现在时来写。注意作文中必须包含图片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. 你在海边看到的不是风景，而是无数晃动的头。句子What you see at the seaside做主语。

【高分句型二】

In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. 在我看来，旅行时，人们不仅要注意安全，还要注意卫生，不要到处乱扔垃圾。该句话运用了not only…but also…。

7．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。

注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。

A hoarding school or a day school

We are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________

【答案】

We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.

If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.

As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.

【解析】

【分析】

整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。

【详解】

写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增加了文章的亮点。

【点睛】

这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

8．（·山东中考模拟）为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介

绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。

内容提示：

1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口

2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。

要求：

1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右.

2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。

【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up t he teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.

After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。

9．（·黑龙江中考模拟）假如你是吴浩，你的父母打算春节期间带你和妹妹去北京。你们准备坐飞机去，请你给旅行社写封电子邮件，咨询有关航班，酒店和旅游景点的情况。留下你的电话，以便旅行社和你联系。

Dear Sir or Madam,

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

Best wishes!

Wu Hao

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to ask for your help about my family trip. My family is planning a trip to Beijing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your

help.

Best wishes!

Wu Hao

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于应用文体，向旅行社询问去北京的航班、酒店以及旅游景点。根据要表达的内容

确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习

惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如ask for help, decide to do, by air,

would like to do, order, places of interests以及thanks for等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意

思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

10．（·广东中考模拟）近年，有一些地区提出把游泳纳入中考的体育考试，并在学生中做

了一次问卷调查。下面是一个学校的调查结果，请你根据调查情况写一篇英语短文阐明调

查结果及表达自己的观点。

赞成的学生人数占：57%不赞成的学生人数占：43%

理由：

1. 强身健体，预防疾病

2. 训练求生技能

3. 休闲娱乐，放松身心理由：

1. 害怕水

2. 有危险性

3. 气温低时容易感冒

你的观点与理由？

要求：

1. 词数80左右。（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）

2. 不得透露学校，姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school.

【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a su rvey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.

About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up

our body and guide against （prevent） illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.

However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.

In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.

（In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.）

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇材料作文，根据所给材料，阐明关于“把游泳纳入中考体育考试”的两种不同观点，而且最后还要表达出自己的观点，所以文章主要用一般现在时。文章分为三个部分，第一部分，首先引出本文话题，并用Here’s the result from one school.起到承上启下的作用，引出调查结果；第二部分分别阐述两种不同观点About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….; However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons.最后提出自己的观点并进行总结In my opinion…。注意阐明观点列举理由时，要注意条理性，比如用到表示次序先后的词first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文内容完整，写作条理清晰，语言表达准确，是一篇不错的文章。

11．（·山东中考模拟）每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。

要点包括: 1. 变化是什么?

2. 变化是如何发生的?

3. 变化后有什么感受?

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________

【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.

When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.

Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我小时候不喜欢读书，最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

12．（·陕西中考模拟）假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件, 想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件, 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。

要求:1. 参考提示语, 可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；

4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。

Dear Bill,

Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. ____________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?

Tell me about your ideal job!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。【详解】

首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后向Bill提出问题，结束全文。

【点睛】

本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。

13．（·扬州市竹西中学中考模拟）写作

“百善孝为先”,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。

某英语报社正在举办以“弘扬中华传统文化”为主题的征文活动,请你以“We should honor our parents”为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动。内容包括:

What do you often do for your parents?

Why should we honor our parents?

How should we honor our parents?

要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

We should honor our parents

As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of

China.____________________________

【答案】We should honor our parents

As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.I honor my parents.I often help my parents do housework in my spare time.I think it's our duty to honor our parents.Our parents take much effort to raise us, so it's important for us to honor them.They love us so we should love and respect them.

First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.Next, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely.We'd better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.It's also important to tell our parents we love them.

【解析】

【分析】

本题要求考生以“我们应该尊敬我们的父母”为题结合所给的内容要点，写一篇作文

【详解】

这是篇材料作文，主要内容要点已给，所以考生要围绕着要点，进行写作，不要遗漏，当然顺序可以适当调整。这篇作文又句型亮点，例如：As we know，…众所周知；.I think it's our duty to do sth等等，其次文章结构也比较清晰，例如第二段的衔接词，First of all，Then，Next，使用的简单而恰当。

14．（·宁夏中考模拟）书面表达

难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。假如你是班长，根据以下提示，用英语写一则通知。要点如下：

1. 时间：6月26日下午3:00.

2. 地点:六楼会议室

3. 活动内容：

1）对老师用话语表达谢意；2）与同学交流自己的将来的梦想；3）师生合影，互赠留言等等。

参考词汇：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..

备注：词数100左右，通知开头已拟好，不计入总数。

Boys and girls,

The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________

【答案】Boys and girls,

The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.

We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.

Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。而复杂单句结构In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

15．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

假定你今天是英语课上的值日生，请根据表中信息完成主题为“班级新闻”的值日报告。

要求：（1）报告必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节，但不要逐条翻译；

（2）报告的开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数），你只需接着写；

（3）词数在80-100左右。参考词汇：捐赠 donate 希望工程 the Project Hope

Hello, Everyone! Here are some important things that happened this week.

____________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________

That’s all, thank you.

【答案】Hello, Everyone! Here are some important things that happened this week. Let me tell you something about the speech contest. My classmate- Lijia has kept practicing spoken English these days. With the help of the teacher, she worked so hard that she won the first place in the English speech contest on Wednesday afternoon.

And now let’s talk about the good things that happened in our class. 200 books, 50 school bags and 4200 yuan were donated for the project Hope. In addition, Li Ming got ill on Monday and our monitor sent him to the hospital in person.

Our colorful school life brings us so much happiness that we will remember the days forever. That’s all, thank you!

【解析】

【详解】

本题是一篇材料作文，假定你今天是英语课上的值日生，请根据表中信息完成主题为“班级新闻”的值日报告。本文人称主要是第一和第三人称，使用的时态有一般现在时、一般过去时、现在完成时和一般将来时，一定注意时态的转换。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含所给要点，，条理清楚，字数80-100左右。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

大家好！以下是本周发生的一些重要事件。我来告诉你一些演讲比赛的情况。我的同学李佳这些天一直在练习口语。在老师的帮助下，她努力工作，在周三下午的英语演讲比赛中获得了第一名。

现在我们来谈谈我们班上发生的好事。为“希望工程”捐赠了200本书、50个书包和4200元。另外，李明周一生病，班长亲自送他去医院。

我们丰富多彩的学校生活带给我们如此多的幸福，我们将永远记住这些日子。

就这些，谢谢！

【点睛】

书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。

16．（·湖南中考模拟）假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。

提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。目前数量在减少，因为：

1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；

2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。

3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。

要求：1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙ivory

Dear classmates

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________

I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.

Yours,

Lihua 【答案】Dear classmates,

Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.

As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.

I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.

Yours,

Lihua 【解析】

【详解】

本文是一封倡议书,倡议大家保护大象。文章共分为三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所处的现状，然后说明出现这种状况的原因，最后为了保护的大象我们应该如何去做。时态主要为一般现在时。提出倡议时可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建议的句子。写作时注意不要使用太复杂的句型，以免出现语法错误，为使句子具有连贯性，可以适当使用连词。本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比较级和最高级；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等词的使用使文章具有层次性，条理清晰。并且一些连词的使用，比如so, or,

but等也使文章具有连贯性，是一篇不错的文章。

17．（·天津中考模拟）假如你是天津的一名中学生李明，刚刚结東五一小长假的旅游回到学校。请你根据以下内容提示，以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。

（1）5月1日天气晴朗，我和家人开始了两天的旅程。

（2）早上7：30我们乘京津城际铁路出发，车程大约半小时。

（3）上午我们参观了故宫博物院，学到了许多历史知识，并为朋友们购买了礼物。

（4）第二天清晨，我们登上了长城，雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。

（5）我的旅游感受……

参考词汇:京津城际铁路 Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway

王府井大街 Wangfujing Street

故宫 the Palace Museum

北京烤鸭 Peking Roast Duck

要求：

（1）词数:80～100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

A Trip to Beijing

During the May Day Holiday，

I______________________________________________________________

【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and comfortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our two-day-trip in Beijing.

First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.

On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.

During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the

Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.

【解析】

【详解】

以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。

记叙自己的一次旅行，审题时注意本文使用一般过去时，叙述事实的时候以时间为顺序。用合适的连词把各句连接成一个有机的整体，同时要用相对高级的词汇提升文章的层次和文采。在发表你的看法的时候，写作的时候要注意要点的全覆盖，不能有遗漏或省略，同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。 We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.

.等这些句子运用也让文章增色不少。

18．（·北京中考模拟）题目①

假如你是李华，你们学校的英国友好校下周将要来访。学校国际部正在招募接待英国学生的志愿者，陪伴他们度过周末。你想成为志愿者。请用英语写一封申请信，在信中说明你申请的理由，以及你打算拿给英国学生安排哪些周末活动。

提示词语：get along with, friendly, places of interest, Chinese dishes

提示问题：1. Why would you like to be a volunteer?

2. What do you plan to do during the weekend?

Dear Sir/Madam，

I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，Li Hiua

【答案】Dear SiraMadam.

I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students I like making friends andI am outgoing，so it's easy for me to get along well with them.

I have some plans for the weekends.First of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.

I'll also cook some Chinese dishes for them.I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，Li lHua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇是材料作文，以书信格式，根据所给材料写申请信；书写时材料要用全，注意紧扣主题，结构严谨。

【详解】

1.本篇是书信格式，以第一人称向学校国际部申请当志愿者；根据材料提示，介绍自己的

情况用一般现在时，计划如何安排周末活动用一般将来时。

2.本例文层次分明，第一层阐述自己申请的理由，介绍自己开朗的性格适合志愿者的工

作；

第二层详细介绍给英国学生安排哪些周末活动；最后表明自己的期待。文体正确，文句通顺，内容完整。

3.本例文恰当地使用了很多的短语和句型，是文章文句精彩。如：用不定式would like to be

a volunteer to receive the British students阐述自己的愿望，make friends、It's easy for me to get along well with等介绍自己合适志愿者的工作；用动词短语have some plans for、介词短语like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.、宾语从句I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.详细介绍周末的活动，短语丰富，句型多样。

19．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE栏目的征稿内容，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。

Hi,

I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:

? recommend two traditional Chinese things

? show your reasons why you recommend them

Looking forward to hearing from you.

David

注意事项：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；

3. 词数在90个左右，感谢信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；

4. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am glad to share my opinion with you.____________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese painting s have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them.

The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves?

I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】

【详解】

本文主要是向别人分享想法，推荐礼物。第一句话点题，随后引出文章的两个主题，一· recommend two traditional Chinese things。例如：I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves.二· show your reasons why you recommend them。理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. 理由二：Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable.最后用I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us总结全篇。文章干净利落，层次分明。

20．（·如皋市实验初中中考模拟）亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。

注意：1. 词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

2. 回复必须包括所以要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。

3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇: civilized 文明的

Dear Danny,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in ci vilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.

All the best,