(最新)高考英语专题练习-开放式作文(含解析)

高考英语专题练习-开放式作文（含解析）

一、写作题

1.第24届冬季奥林匹克运动会将于2022年2月在北京和张家口市联合举行。现面向社会招募志愿者。假如你是李华，请根据自己的情况写一封申请信。内容包括：

1）热爱体育；2）英语流利；3）性格外向开朗；有组织能力

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022.

……

Yours,

Li Hua

2.近年来我国多地雾疆天气不断增多，极大地影响了人们的健康和生活。请你根据提示，用英语写一篇文章，向某英语报社投稿。

提示：

1).对现状的描述；

2).对生活造成的影响；

3).分析雾霾形成的原因；

4).建议减少雾霾的措施。（至少两点）

注意：

1).上下文连贯，行文流畅。

2).词数150个左右（开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

雾霆的：hazy

Dear Editor,

Recently many places in China were blanketed with thick fog.

Best regards!

Yours,

Li Hua

3.书面表达

一年以后你将成为一名大学生，请以“我的大学生活”为主题写一篇短文。内容应包括对理想的大学的描述以及你在大学里的学习和课余活动等。

注意: 1）. 次数100左右；

2）. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3）. 开头语已经为你写好，不计入总次数。

One year later, I will be a freshman in an ideal university, ……

4.假期中你外出旅游时发现许多不文明行为，如随地吐痰、乱涂乱画、乱丢垃圾等，请你给Beautiful China编辑部写一封信，呼吁人们提高素质、文明出行。内容要点：1）你所看到的不文明行为及危害；

2）为建设美丽中国，提出你的倡议（至少两点）；

3）开头和结尾己为你写好，不计入总词数；

4）不得出现真实姓名。

注意：1）词数100?120；

参考词汇：吐痰spit；刻画scratch；不文明行为immoral behaviors

Dear editor,

I am writing to tell you about what I saw while traveling during this winter vacation.

5.你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“健康的生活方式”为主题的英语征文活动，你打算参加。请根据以下提示信息写一篇英语短文。

1）. 营养均衡的膳食；2）. 经常参加体育锻炼；3）. 乐观的人生态度。

注意：1）.字数100左右（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）；

2）.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

All of us want to live a healthy life. The following are some useful tips.

6.书面表达

目前，有很多学生在课余时间沉溺于网络，远离了书本。请写一篇短文，说明课外阅读的好处，呼吁学生进行课外阅读。主要内容包括：

（1）沉溺网络，对阅读失去兴趣；

（2）阅读的好处：开阔视野，增长知识，有助学习，提高成绩等；

（3）养成阅读的好习惯，多读好书。

注意：①词数100左右；

②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

提示：视野horizon

7.某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。

1)说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；

2)介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；

3)描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。

注意：

1)词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；

2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3)文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. .

8.假定你是李华，校读书俱乐部负责人。俱乐部将在下周三下午三点在报告厅进行英语朗读比赛(recitation contest)。请你给外教Tom写一份电子邮件。内容如下:

1）邀请他担任比赛评委；

2）问他届时是否有空出席；

3）请他向学生推荐合适的文学作品。

注意:

1）词数80左右。

2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

9.书面表达

Chinese consumers drop cash and skip cards to create world's largest mobile payment market.

A German named Thomas Derksen spent an entire day shopping in a major Chinese city without cash or a credit card.

The 24-hour adventure in Hangzhou,which was streamed lived on the Internet,saw Derksen ride a bus,buy a bouquet of flower for his wife and even enjoy a street snack,all paid by using apps downloaded to his smartphone.

“Going out without cash is something I couldn't imagine doing back home in Frankfurt”,says Derksen.

After traveling to hundreds of cites in more than 30 countries,he believes Hangzhou,the captical of Zhejiang Province and home of Internet giant Alibaba Group,is NO.1 in terms of mobile payment.

Statistics from the Hangzhou-headquarted Ant Financial Services Group,the operator of Alipay,China's largest mobile payment service provider,show that about 98 percent of supermarkets.and more than 40,000 restaurants allow customers to pay with apps.

Hangzhou is not unique in China,though.In most cities,especially developed metropolises,mobile payment apps are now a part of everyday life.

【写作内容】

1).用约30个单词写出上文概要。

2).用约120个单词阐述你对移动支付的看法，并用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1).写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句。

2).作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

3).不必写标题。

答案解析部分

一、写作题

1.【答案】Dear Sir or Madam，

I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022.So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.

I am LiHua, an 18–year-old boy who is built up by doing sports regularly in my spare time. I love sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game. Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak English fluently, which makes it easier for me to help foreigners in trouble. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic which benefits me in communicating with strangers.

Everything taken into account, I think I am qualified for the position. I would be grateful if you could consider my application and offer me the opportunity at your convenience.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【考点】提纲作文，文字式应用文，半开放性作文

【解析】【分析】本文是一封英文书信，要求考生以李华的身份，写一封信申请冬奥会志愿者。写作要点已给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）热爱体育；2）英语流利；3）性格外向开朗；有组织能力。写作时注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【点评】本文是一篇书信，格式正确，内容符合要求，结构布局合理，句中使用高级句子。例如：I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022.同位语从句和动词不定式一般式的被动式联合使用；I am LiHua, an 18 –year- old boy who is built up by doing sports regularly in my spare time同位语和定语从句联合使用；I love sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game .结果状语从句；I can speak English fluently ,which makes it easier for me to help foreigners in trouble Meanwhile,非限制性定语从句；not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic which benefits me in communicating with strangers.倒装句；Everything taken into account, I think I am qualified for the position.过去分词的独立主格结构；另外，.Besides, Meanwhile, I would be grateful if---，的运用为文章增色添彩。

2.【答案】Dear Editor,

Recently many people in China were blanketed with thick fog.The Air Quality Index in most parts reached 500. Everything around disappeared from our sight.Some highways were

closed.More traffic jams and accidents happened.People had to wear masks.What's more,many people found it difficult to breathe.

The heavy hazy weather in China has been caused by many factors.First,the severely polluted environment contributed a Jot to this nightmare.Second,the increase of cars in the city area plays an important role.The cars send off a lot of poisonous gas.

In my opinion,we should call on people to use mote public transport,thus reducing the number of cars in the streets.Besides,some factories which cause pollution should be closed down.What's more,we have to do more to raise people's awareness of environmental protection.Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days.

Best regards!

Yours,

Li Hua

【考点】提纲作文，文字式应用文，半开放性作文

【解析】【分析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生就雾霾天气给人们的健康和生活带来的影响，给英语报社投稿。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1).对现状的描述；

2).对生活造成的影响；3).分析雾霾形成的原因；4).建议减少雾霾的措施。（至少两点），具有半开放性。写作时考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除此之外，还要给出自己的建议，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥，注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更上档次。在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词让文章看起来流畅，有条理。

【点评】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。定语从句的使用：some factories which cause pollution should be closed down.倒装句的使用：Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days.同时使用了First，Second，What's more,Besides等过渡词和contribute to，plays an important role，send off，call on等短语。

3.【答案】 One year later, I will be a freshman in an ideal university, which is larger than my senior high school and I can ride a bicycle to attend classes.

In a sense, it is obvious that knowledge and technology are very important, so it is vitally important for me to learn from the educated professors. I must make full use of every minute to learn so that I can contribute to society in the future.

I will also meet many new friends coming from different cities, who can share their diverse life with me. I will own more free time to do what I want to without much limitation, such as playing football and enjoying music. In short, only in this way will my university life be different and

colorful.

【考点】命题作文，开放性作文

【解析】【分析】本文是一篇对大学生活憧憬的文章，讲述了我的想象中的大学生活。本文抓住题目所给主要意思，要求同学些对大学生生活的一些想象，分别根据题目中的要点对理想的大学的描述以及你在大学里的学习和课余活动进行了阐述。本文的结构调理清楚，首段which is larger than my senior high school and I can ride a bicycle to attend classes总结全文，写了自己对大学生活的基本假想，要比我的高中大；然后第二段，以首句In a sense, it is obvious that knowledge and technology are very important为总领句，表示在大学中学业和技能的学习是很重要的，统领全段；第三段以第一句I will also meet many new friends coming from different cities为总起句，表示大学里会遇到很多朋友，然后进行阐述，最后用一句简单的话In short, only in this way will my university life be different and colorful做出了总结。真篇文章的脉络清晰，条理清楚，并且用词新颖，值得我们学习。

【点评】本文全篇条理都很清楚，并且行文整洁，在结构上面有一点需要赞赏，不仅没断都做到了总分总，而且全文结构也是总分总形式，值得我们参考。同时文中用到了很多美句，如：which is larger than my senior high school and I can ride a bicycle to attend classes，首段which引导的主语从句，开篇就抓住人的眼球；it is obvious that knowledge and technology are very important，it-be句型的采用，给文章添了一朵花；only in this way will my university life be different and colorful，倒装句的使用等等。并且也可以看到很多漂亮的词汇和单词，如：In a sense、In short、educated professors等等都是给文章亮彩的地方。

4.【答案】Dear editor,

I am writing to tell you about what I saw while traveling during this winter vacation. I was surprised to see so many immoral behaviors in public places. Some people spit at will wherever they went; some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots, which did great damage to them.

In my opinion, it's high time we should take action to help improve the situation. First, certain laws should be passed to ensure people won't damage the environment. Second, our media should also take responsibility to guide people to protect the environment. Last but not least, we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did.

Only by working together can we make our country become more and more beautiful!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【考点】提纲作文，文字式应用文，半开放性作文

【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生针对假期外出旅游时发现许多不文明行为，如随地吐痰、乱涂乱画、乱丢垃圾等现象，给Beautiful China编辑部写一封信，呼吁人们提高素质、文明出行。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你所看到的不文明行为及危害；2）为建设美丽中国，提出你的倡议（至少两点）。考生写作时不要逐句

翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意

准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同

时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动

丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾

驭能力。例如：Some people spit at will wherever they went运用了地点状语从句；some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots, which did great damage to them.运用了非限制性定语从句；it's high time we should take action to help improve the situation. 运用了虚拟语气；we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did.运用了宾语从句；Only by working together can we make our country become more and more beautiful!运用了倒装句。同时First，Second,Last but not least,等过渡词的使用，使文章更加流畅连贯。

5.【答案】 All of us want to live a healthy life. The following are some useful tips.

First, it's important that we have a balanced diet because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong. Not only should we take in enough grains and meat, but we should also eat fruit and vegetables. Second, taking exercise regularly is of equal importance, which can help us to keep fit and release stress. More importantly, we should develop a positive attitude, which allows us to look at things positively no matter what happens. Even if we are in a difficult situation, we should never lose hop.

Proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude will help us live a healthy life.

【考点】命题作文，文字式议论文，开放性作文

【解析】【分析】本文是以“健康的生活方式”为主题的英语征文活动，内容包括1. 营养均衡的膳食； 2. 经常参加体育锻炼； 3. 乐观的人生态度。根据所给提纲并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情

景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使

行文连贯。

【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练

地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：it's

important that we have a balanced diet because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong.主语从句和原因状语从句联合使用；Not only should we take in enough grains and meat, but we should also eat fruit and vegetables.倒装句的使用；taking exercise regularly is of equal importance, which can help us to keep fit and release stress.和we should develop a positive attitude, which allows us to look at things positively no matter what happens. 使用了非限制性定语从句；Even if we are in a difficult situation, we should never lose hop.使用了让步状语从句。

6.【答案】Nowadays, with the popularity of the Internet, many students spend too much time online, surfing different web pages or playing games. Their interest in reading drops greatly.

I think it is a good idea to do some reading in our spare time. As we all know, reading can broaden our horizons and enrich our knowledge in different fields. It is also a good help for our study. If we read more, we can understand what we learn in class better and get good grades. In other words, books are our good teachers and wise friends.

Therefore, it is necessary to develop a good habit of reading and try to read as many good books as we can.

【考点】提纲作文

【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文，要求介绍你课外学习英语的经验。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点评】提纲类作文。范文运用一些常见的短语In other words换句话说；develop a good habit of养成一个好的习惯；I think it is a good idea to do some reading in our spare time这个句子运用到it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式；As we all know, reading can broaden our horizons and enrich our knowledge in different fields.这个句子as引导非限制性定语从句

7.【答案】 It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. In reality, different students have different learning habits, which I think influence their learning efficiency greatly. Good habits always lead to high efficiency, while bad ones bring the opposite.

Some students are good at concentrating on what the teachers teach in class. They think only in this way can they understand and memorize the teaching materials better. If we find those materials interesting, we'll focus our attention on them for long. However, those dull lessons require our determination, self-controlling ability and confidence.

My classmates always call me "Mr. forgetful", because I cannot memorize those I have learnt.

I know that it is because I don't spend some time in memorizing them after class. My teachers advise me to repeat the materials several times and read them aloud, which they think will help improve my memory.

【考点】提纲作文，文字式议论文，开放性作文

【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达要求结合自身学习实际，就学习习惯问题为专栏写一篇稿件。内容包括1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；2介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。分析作文要求可知文章应使用第一人称，用一般现在时。根据要点提示可以在谋篇布局时考虑使用三段式，分三段分别介绍三个要点，根据需要可以调整要点顺序。为了提高作文档次，在写作

时要注意尽量使用高级词汇和高级句式，避免句子的单一。可以使用定语从句，状语从句，强调句等等。此外还要注意内容的连贯和上下文的过渡和衔接。

【点评】本文使用了经典的三段式，结构清晰，要点全面，时态，人称正确，很好的完成

了写作任务。作者在文中使用了大量的短语，比如In reality,lead to，concentrate on，focus one’s attention on , spend time in doing sth , advise sb to do sth 等，显示了作者词汇的丰富。而且定语从句which I think influence their learning efficiency greatly.并列句hile bad ones bring the opposite.，宾语从句Some students are good at concentrating on what the teachers teach in class.状语从句If we find those materials interesting,等复合句的出现也给文章增添了亮点，提高了档次。

8.【答案】Dear Mr. Tom,

I'm writing to invite you to be present at the recitation contest organized by the reading club at three next Wednesday afternoon in the lecture hall. If available then, could you do us the favor? And we would appreciate having you as a judge. By the way, It would be very nice if you can recommend some classic English literary works suitable for us students. Thanks for considering our request.

I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【考点】提纲作文，文字式应用文，半开放性作文

【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给外教Tom写一份电子邮件，写作背景：校读书俱乐部将在下周三下午三点在报告厅进行英语朗读比赛。写作要点

已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）邀请他担任比赛评委；2）问他届时是否有空

出席；3）请他向学生推荐合适的文学作品。

考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1.本篇以邀请外教Tom1邀请他担任比赛评委并

请他向学生推荐合适的文学作品为主题展开论述。通篇应该以一般现在时和将来时时态为主。2. 注意文章要以书信的形式进行叙述，因为是邀请老师出席活动。故应注意讲话语气。一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。3.根据要点，

先组此句；句式丰富，避免单词。4.要点要齐全，但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以

使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动

丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾

驭能力。例如：If available then, could you do us the favor? 运用了省略句；we would appreciate having you as a judge. 运用了动名词作宾语；It would be very nice if you can recommend some classic English literary works suitable for us students.运用了条件状语从句。

9.【答案】 Mobile payment is becoming increasingly popular in China, especially in big cities.

A German's 24-hour experience of going our without cash or a credit card in Hangzhou serves as a good example.

Obviously, mobile payment is good and should be encouraged. In the first place, mobile payment offers us a new level of convenience. With payment apps on our smartphones, we only need to scan the QR code to pay and within one or two seconds, the payment process can be completed.

In the second place, mobile payment signifies safety. Since no cash is needed in the future, we needn't worry about wallet or money being stolen any more. Nor do we need to be afraid of receiving fake money.

Last but not least, mobile payment does good to the environment .Not using cash means saving a lot of trees which are used to make paper.

【考点】其他，开放性作文

【解析】【分析】本文是一篇材料作文，考生要先读懂所给的英文材料，写出概要，然后对文中提到的移动支付，阐述自己的看法。。写作时注意以下几点：1.涵盖所有内容，合理发挥想象力，使文章的表达自然，丰满。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。3、

注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【点评】本文结构紧凑，布局合理，文字流畅，选词地道。使用了连词In the first place、插入语Last but not least，使层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如使用了原因状语从句Since no cash is needed in the future, we needn't worry about wallet or money being stolen any more. ；倒装句：Nor do we need to be afraid of receiving fake money.；定语从句Not using cash means saving a lot of trees which are used to make paper.等，使句子亮点纷呈。