高考英语作文解析
高考英语作文解析 This model paper was revised by LINDA on December 15, 2012.
2019年高考英语（全国I I卷）
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括;
1.比赛信息；
2.赛前准备；
3.表达期待
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文文连贯。
【题目分类】
应用文：通知比赛信息及赛前准备事项
【写作要点】
【选材分析】
作文依旧考查了应用文的写作，选材传统，贴近学生真实校园生活；所给邮件要点明确，只要覆盖到所有要点，灵活运用多种词汇和句式，达到上下文衔接连贯，基本就没有什么问题；
样文：
Dear Chris,
How are you doing Currently, high school volleyball match is around the corner . As the captain of our school volleyball team, I’m writing to inform you some key information with regard to this.
Here is a brief notice. As scheduled, the match is supposed to launch in our school gym from 7:00 to 9:00 . next Sunday. All team members are required to gather in the gym in advance. Additionally, intensive training will be arranged every morning from 7:00 to 9:00 . before the coach, Mr. Wang, will show us some practical game plans then.
Everyone is longing for our victory, and it would be more cheerful if we could win the champion in our own participation will surly make a difference.
Yours,
Li Hua
2012全国各省市高考英语满分作文
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2017高考英语真题及满分作文(全国III卷)
2017高考英语真题及满分作文（全国I、II卷） 2017年高考已然落下帷幕，不过这也意味着下一届高考序幕的开启。今天，万朋教育小编跟大家一起回顾一下刚过去的2017年高考全国I卷和全国II卷的英语作文真题 及优秀满分范文！希望为2018年的准高考生们提供参考。 全国I卷 书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： 1.时间和地点； 2.内容：学习唐诗； 3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
优秀满分作文 Dear Leslie, How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about our next lesson. The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a b rief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class. If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 全国II卷 书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：