雅思大作文AcdemicWriting评分标准首段写法主体段写法
雅思大作文AcdemicWriting评分标准首段写法主体段写法
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3 Academic Writing
Task 2
IELTS Writing
Task2 评分标准解析
? Band 8 description
– Task Response
? Length
? Address all questions directly
? Clear position and well developed
– Coherence and Cohesion
? Cohesive devices
? Clear progression
? Clear central topic
– Lexical Resource
? Use a wide range of vocabulary
? Skillfully use uncommon items
? Error free
– Grammatical Range and Accuracy
? Use a wide range of structures
? Error free
Task2 评分标准解析
? LR 得分对策
? 避免口语词汇
? always; very; a lot of
? 避免表意不明
? new things; bad things
? 避免使用使役动词
? make sth adj.
? 避免意译
? starting places; cut out
4 Writing Task 2 分类突破
? 雅思写作话题分类
– R eport 【报告型】
? Reasons
? Influences
? Measures
– A rgumentation 【论证型】
? Opinions
? Evidences
首段写法
? 贫富差距：
–在当今社会，贫富差距很普遍并且越来越明显。这种状况如果得不到有效的解决将会给社会带来各种问题。本文将探讨贫富差距产生的原因并提出相应的解决方案。
? 国际旅游
–当前，出国旅游现在已经非常普遍并且人们在旅游过程中了解的异国文化。这种国家之间的了解对国际关系将产生重大影响。本文将探讨国际旅游受欢迎的主要原因以及对个人与社会的影响。
? 环境污染：
–在21世纪，人类面临着严峻的环境问题。这个问题如果没有得到有效的控制，会威胁人类的生存。在本文中，我将探讨环境污染的主要原因并提出有效的解决方案。
首段写法
? 贫富差距：
–In the contemporary societies, the gap between the rich and the poor is prevalent and becoming increasingly obvious. If this situation is not
addressed effectively, it will give rise to a variety of social problems. In
this essay. I will look into the reasons for the wealth gap and bring forth corresponding solutions.
首段写法
? 国际旅游
–In recent years, international travel has been increasingly popular across
5 the world and the tourists learn about the distinctive cultures from their own through traveling. Such understanding between people has
significantly affected the international relations. In this essay, I will
investigate about the reason for increase of international tourists and
analyze the effects on individuals and the society.
首段写法
? 环境问题
–In the 21st century, the human race is facing grave environmental
condition than any previous times. If the trend is not reversed, the
survival of human being will be in risk. In this essay, I will elaborate on
the causes of environmental damages and put forward corresponding
solutions.
首段写法
? 贫富差距：
–在当今社会，贫富差距很普遍并且越来越明显。这种状况如果得不到有效的解决将会给社会带来各种问题。本文将探讨贫富差距产生的原因并提出相应的解决方案。
? 国际旅游
–当前，出国旅游现在已经非常普遍并且人们在旅游过程中了解的异国文化。这种国家之间的了解对国际关系将产生重大影响。本文将探讨国际旅游受欢迎的主要原因以及对个人与社会的影响。
? 环境污染：
–在21世纪，人类面临着严峻的环境问题。这个问题如果没有得到有效的控制，会威胁人类的生存。在本文中，我将探讨环境污染的主要原因并提出有效的解决方案。
首段写法
– According to one recent survey , the number of private cars in
Beijing has increased by 20% to 2 million and it is difficult to
foresee any downward trend .
– THESIS STATEMENT
6 – This ever-swelling car ownership in many big cities as well as
countryside is causing numerous problems .
– It is reported that the world is facing a worsening youth
employment crisis: young people are three times more likely to
be unemployed than adults and over 75 million youth
worldwide are looking for work.
– THESIS STATEMENT
– The impacts of the situation should be given adequate
attention.
– Proving surprising facts: statistics
– According to a recent survey, more than 70% of the ……
– It is reported that ......
– An authoritative magazine concerning … reveals that …
– In a study conducted by the Medical Association, researchers
concluded that …
– Practice:
– The dying out of species
– Surprising statement: from experts or researches
– …, as educationalists suggests / points ou t / advises
– Studies have shown that / proven that …
– … (facts) …. Some experts draw the conclusion that ……
? Practice:
– Noise pollution
– Long term exposure in noise could lead to serious physical
disorders or even fatal disease, as medical experts advises /
cautions / suggests.
– THESIS STATEMENT
– They also prompt the government to identify the sources of
noise and to take effective actions to reduce noise.
– Noise pollution adversely affects the lives of millions of
people. Studies have shown that there are direct links between
noise and health. Problems related to noise include hearing
loss, sleep disruption, low productivity and so on, among which
Hearing Loss is the most common.
– THESIS STATEMENT
– These health hazards can only be eliminated though
identifying the main sources and the measures to reduce noises.
7 ? Sample:
– In recent decades, an increasing number of museums and galleries have been built in my countries, most of which are equipped with the latest technology and advanced facilities. What is the function of such places and who should be responsible for financing such places?
?
Most teens have money to spend thanks to an allowance
or after-school job, but do they have the money
management skills to go along with that income?
Therefore some people suggest that we should teach children about financial management at an early age. ?
It is known to all that noise can be annoying, but are you
aware of the fact that the impacts of noise on our
health can be appalling?
THESIS STATEMENT
To alleviate the hazardous effects, it is critical to identify
the main sources of noise and take necessary
measures to reduce noise pollution.
?
?
? 素材梳理：
– [C7T3 Page 167] WRITING TASK 2
– As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job
satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
– What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
– How realistic is the expectoration of job satisfaction for all workers?
Report 主体段结构
? 考官范文赏析：
– Body 1
? “Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways.”
– Firstly , feel the work is valued and valuable and feel the job is
worth doing
– Secondly , a sense of progression
– The sense of belonging also contribute to …
– Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility
8 Report 主体段结构
? 素材梳理：
– [环境资源类] Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have noticed this problem for a long time. Why are people failed to improve this situation? What are your suggestions?
Report 主体段结构
? 素材梳理：
– Page 228 Reasons and solutions for juvenile crime.
Report 主体段结构
? 素材梳理：
– Page 246 Reasons and solutions to water shortage
Report 主体段结构
? 素材组织：
– [环境资源类] Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have noticed this problem for a long time. Why are people failed to improve this situation? What are your suggestions?
Report 主体段结构
? 素材组织（平民版）：
– 首先
? First of all; to begin with; first
– 其次
? In addition; besides; in addition to
– 再次
? Moreover; what’s more
Report 主体段结构
? 素材组织（砖家版）：
– Reasons [主要次要；直接间接]
9 ? 一个主要原因是
– T he major / main / prime cause is that …
? 另一个因素是
– T he other contributing factor involves …
? ….也不能被忽略
– I n addition, … should not be ignored
Report 主体段结构
? 素材组织（砖家版）：
– Measures [有效性]
? 一个有效解决方案是…
? One effective approach to solve the problem is …
? 此外，…也是一个可行的选择。
? Besides, to do … is also a feasible choice.
? 如果能…, 问题也能得到极大的解决
? Provided that … can be done, this issue could be largely improved.
Report 主体段结构
? 素材组织（专家版）：
Report 主体段结构
? 素材组织（专家版）：
– The first reason is associated with the mass media, whether it is print media such as newspaper or magazine or the electronic media including the internet or TV, where the readers or
audiences are bombarded with fashionable content.
– However, whether to buy something fashionable is ultimately determined by we individuals, or more exactly, consumers.
– Therefore, some consideration should be given to the buyer themselves.
Report 主体段结构
? 素材组织（专家版）：
Report 主体段结构
10 ? 素材组织（专家版）：
– Many people suggest that the failure of family education may be to blame.
– Due to the fact that young children spent the major part of time in school
– educationalists also point out that there is a problem with school education as well.
Report 主体段结构
? 素材组织（专家版）：
– To reduce juvenile crime, first of all, parents should regulate children’s behavior and instill correct view of life.
– Though educating about right and wrong can reduce crime in the long run, to halt the current trend of juvenile crime, children should develop clear recognition about the consequences of inappropriate behaviors, where schools are in the best position to implement the solution.
– Schools should incorporate legal education into the elementary curriculum.
Report 主体段结构
? 素材组织（专家版）：
– C8 Page 167 solution to traffic and pollution
– I think to tackle the problem of pollution, cleaner fuels need to be developed. …
– However, traffic congestion will not be solved by
changing the type of private vehicle people can use. To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travellers. …
Task 2 论据扩展方法
? 论据扩展：
– [环境资源类] Far too little has been done to prevent animals and
11 plants from dying out, although people have noticed this problem for a long time. Why are people failed to improve this situation? What are your suggestions?
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? 主体段落论据扩展：
– The main reason is that a large proportion of people lack the awareness of protecting the endangered species.
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? 主体段落论据扩展：
– The main reason is that a large proportion of people lack the awareness of protecting the endangered species. ? Why so? 【给出原因】
? Really? 【给出具体事例】
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? 主体段落论据扩展：
– the main reason is that a large proportion of people lack the awareness of protecting the endangered species.
? [解释原因] Many people assume that there is no direct relation beween the living of those plants and animals and ours.
? [解释后果] As a result, people seldom see the necessity and the
significance to invest heavily on protection, due to which many species
become extinct.
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? 主体段落论据扩展：
– The other contributing factor involves the economic development. – [解释原因] Economic growth is invariably accompanied by taking resources from the nature such as cutting down woods in the forest, and discharging waste and pollutant into the nature.
– [解释后果] In this process, the habitats of many species are destroyed. – [举例说明] Taking chemical industry for example, as it contributes to the
overall national economy, the toxic water and other substances, which were discharged without being treated, have been the main cause of extinction of
12 some aquatic lives.
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? 主体段落论据扩展：
– People tend to give priority to economic development rather than species conservation.
– [解释原因] Generally speaking, ecomomic benefits are the primary concern of people, while protecting endangered species demands tremendous
amount of resources and produced limited values.
– [解释后果]Accordingly, being confronted with the choices, most would choose to develop the economy at the expenses of some species.
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? 主体段落论据扩展：
– To improve the current situation, the government need to launch educational program to inform the public about the significance of protecting endangered species. – How to do that? 【C8T3】
– Is that effective?
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? 主体段落论据扩展：
– For example, schools can open courses concerning environmental protection, and the government can
broadcast educational contents through the mass media to the public. In this way, people will becoming increasing aware of the living condition of endangered species and take necessary actions.
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? 论点表述：
– [20081023] Many people use distance-learning programs (study
material post ，TV ，internet etc.) to study at home ，but some people think that it can not bring the benefit as much as attending
college or university.
– Discuss both views and gives your opinion.
? 远程学习
? 上大学（在学校学习）
? 讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点
Task 2 主体段落扩展
13 ? [Task 2 真题练习]
– Many people use distance-learning programs (study material post ，TV ，internet etc.) to study at home ，but some people think that it can not bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. – Discuss both views and gives your opinion.
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? [Task 2 真题练习]
– [TS] One obvious advantage for students going to university is that studying in university may contribute to enhancing the students’ communicative abilities.
? 在学校学习一个最大的优势在于…
? 大学学习对提高学生的交流能力有益。
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? [Task 2 真题练习]
– [Ss] This is primarily / mainly because
? 这主要是因为…
– students living on the university campus will be able to get plenty of opportunities to communicate with different people, such as their roommates, classmates and tutors.
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? [Task 2 真题练习]
– [Ss] For example, when
– students have problems about their studies, they may try to get a clear understanding of the question by communicating and discussing with their professors. In the process, students will be able to acquire the skills of communication.
– [Ss] By contrast, if
– students stay at home, learning through distance learning programs, they may be deprived of the opportunity to communicate with their peers and teachers.
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? [Task 2 真题练习]
– [Ss] From the analysis above, it is clear that
? 由以上的分析，可以看出…
14 – attending university will benefit the students involved in terms of communicative skills, which are essential for their future careers.
– [150 words]
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? [Task 2 真题练习]
– [TS] The most obvious advantage for students going to university is that university education may contribute to enhancing the students’ communicative abilities.
? This is primarily / mainly because ……
? For example, when ……
? By contrast, if ……
? From the analysis above, it is clear that ……
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? [Task 2 真题练习]
– [TS] Government should take the main responsibility to address the environmental problem.
? This is primarily / mainly because ……
? For example, when ……
? By contrast, ……
? From the analysis above, it is clear that ……
Task 2 主体段落扩展
? [Task 2 真题练习]
– [TS] However, on the other hand, by stressing the role that
governments play does not mean the individuals can not make
significant change to the current situaiton.
? This is primarily / mainly because ……
? For example, when ……
? By contrast, if ……
? From the analysis above, it is clear that ……
Report 末段
? Report 构思：
– 末段：总结要点
? 总之，……问题涉及到多方面的原因，
? 但是结合上面提到的方式，我们可以有效的减少负面影响。
? In conclusion, multiple reasons result in the current …… (problem / issue),
15 ? while by combining the approaches mentioned above , we can
effectively minimize the negative influences or even eliminate the problem.
Report 真题实战
Report 写作分析
Writing Task 2
– In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individuals and the society and what measures can be adopted to solve this problem?
Report 写作分析
Report 写作分析
? 写提纲：
– Problems that unemployment causes
? New graduates would live in miserable situation.
? Cause huge waste of talent
? Increase the instability of society
– Solutions
? New graduates should lower their working expectation
? Graduates should equip themselves with new skills
? Government should make effort in creating more working
opportunities
Report 写作分析
? 合理安排：
– Problems that unemployment causes
? For individuals , new graduates would live in miserable situation. ? For society, it causes huge waste of talent
? For society, Increase the instability of society
– Solutions
? At the individual level, new graduates should lower their working expectation
? At the individual level, graduates should equip themselves with new skills
? At the governmental level, government should make effort in creating more working opportunities
16
Task 2 论点论证结构
? Report 构思：
– [2009.11.7] WRITING TASK 2
– Recent statistics show that the crimes committed by the young people in the major city of the world are on the increase. Give your analysis of the reasons and the solutions.
– Reasons:
? Increasing stress in life
? Negative influence from media
? Adolescent psychological problems are not well treated
Task 2 论点论证结构
? Report 构思：
– [2009.11.7] WRITING TASK 2
– Reasons:
? TS: Most contributing factors are associated with environment that youth live in.
? Increasing stress in life and study
? Negative information from modern media
? TS: Another element is intertwined with psychological education. ? Adolescent psychological problems are not well treated
Task 2 论点论证结构
? Report 构思：
– [2009.11.7] WRITING TASK 2
– Recent statistics show that the crimes committed by the young people in the major city of the world are on the increase. Give your analysis of the reasons and the solutions.
– Solutions:
? Promote psychological education
? Provide psychological consultancy services
? Depurate network environment
Task 2 论点论证结构
? Report 构思：
– [2009.11.7] WRITING TASK 2
– Solutions:
17 ? TS: Since the problem mainly arises from sub-healthy mental state, ? TS: Corresponding actions should be taken.
? Promote psychological education
? Provide psychological consultancy services
? Depurate network environment
Report 篇章结构
? 考察时间：2009-5-21
– 2009-5-21 A hundred years ago, people thought that the human race was steadily
improving in every area of life. Now it seems this is not certain in that situation. In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do you think we need to make progress?
–
话题中心： ? Progresses people made and problems people face – 写作要求：
? Examples of progress
? Examples of problems
Report 篇章结构
Task 写作框架汇总
? 考察时间：2009-5-21
– 首段基本结构：
? 背景铺垫+提出问题+全文写作目的
– Sample ：
? 人类生活在近两个世纪发生了翻天覆地的变化。
? 在生活水平提高的同时，人类社会也面临着诸多问题。
? 本文将探讨社会发展过程中人类取得的巨大进步以及亟待解决的问题。
Task 写作框架汇总
? 考察时间：2009-5-21
– 主体段基本结构：
? 主题句+支撑句(+ 总结句)
– Sample ：
? TS:
– 人类在科技方面取得了最主要地成就。
? SS:
– 工业科技的发展最为显著。当代工业为社会生产了更多的消费品，并
由于机械的运用以及技术的突破，产品制造成本被大大降低，这极大
地提高人类的生活水平。
– 交通科技的发展对于世界发展做出了令人瞩目的贡献。新型交通工具
在节省了宝贵时间外，极大地促进了全球化的发展，让身处异国的人
能方便往来。
– 同时，医药技术的发展给人类的健康生活提供了保障。
Task 写作框架汇总
18 ? 考察时间：2009-5-21
– Sample ：
? TS : By far, the major achievements of human being can be easily found in scientific fields.
? SS : The most noticeable advancement occurs in industrial field. ? Breakthroughs in transportation also contribute remarkably to the rapidly development of the world.
? Meanwhile, with the improving medicine technology, healthy life of peoples is largely guaranteed.
Task 写作框架汇总
?
考察时间：2009-5-21 – 主体段基本结构：
? 主题句+支撑句(+ 总结句)
– Sample ：
?
TS: 然而，在发展过程中产生了很多问题，并需要我们立即解决。 ? SS:
– 最急迫的问题之一是环境污染问题。(尤其是工业的发展，造成了大量的，对自然环
境的，不可补救地破坏。)
– 其次，在不久地将来我们会自然资源枯竭问题。(交通地迅猛发展也造成了严重地能
源短缺问题。)
– 在更长的时期内，社会老龄化问题也会变得严峻。（医疗科技在保障生活同时，也
间接造成了社会生产力的下降及养老问题）。
Task 写作框架汇总
? 考察时间：2009-5-21
– Sample ：
? TS: However, along with the conspicuous developments, many urgent issue arise, which require instant solution.
? SS:
– One of the most pressing issue facing human being is
environmental pollution.
– Besides, we may face a serious depletion of natural resources in
near future.
– And in a longer term, a large proportion of countries will face
thorny aging issue.
Task 写作框架汇总
?
考察时间：2009-5-21 – 2009-5-21 A hundred years ago, people thought that the
human race was steadily improving in every area of life. Now it seems this is not certain in that situation. In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do you think we need to make progress?
– 末段：
? 结构：概述问题（及解决方案）
19 ? 总体来讲，社会总是不停向前进步。人类的生活会越来越美好。然而在
享受现代生活的同时，每个人有义务为解决我们面临的问题做出自己的贡献。
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直接名词（或相当于名词的词）。由于这些都是基本常识，这里不再赘述。 为了使连接词多样化，建议考生运用下面的一些短语（或句式）连接论点和论据：…is a case in point; …serve as a typical example;…can be taken as an example; one example is that… another one is that等。 如：Working part time when you are studying in university is beneficial to your life. I myself is a case in point（or ‘my experiences serve as a typical example’）. Through those experiences, I have learned to be independent and responsible. 二、内化连接 实际上，大家看原汁原味的文英文文章会发现有些信息的连接不用外显式，而是通过某些特定的词或者特定的方式给读者以清晰的层次感，从而使文章信息传递更通畅。 下面我们来看一下哪些例证可以省去连接词，实现内化连接。
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2016年4月30日雅思写作考试大作文范文多版本汇总 4月30日雅思写作大作文考得是shopping habits (购物习惯)与agegroup(年龄段)之间的关系。也就是说，人们的购物习惯到底是由什么决定的?是年龄决定的，还是其他因素决定的?原题观点是：人的购物习惯更多是由年龄决定的。你也许同意这个观点，然后提出原因，给出例证;你也许不同意这个观点，那么你就得提出并论证什么因素决定了人们的购物习惯。一起来看看关于这个话题，各机构的范文都是怎么写的吧！ >>>4月雅思考试真题写作范文全汇总（多版本+语料），速速查看 Task：生活类题材 People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 和其他任何因素比起来，人们的购物习惯更多的取决于他们所在的年龄层，你在多大程度上同意或不同意? Sample answers(点击标题查看) 1. 雅思哥版(260 words) 2016年4月30日雅思写作真题大作文参考范文（1） 核心观点句： Some people think that age is the main factor that affects people’s shopping habits but I think this is only true in some cases. 一些人认为年龄是影响人们消费习惯的主要因素，但我认为这仅仅在某些情况下上是正确的. 2. 新东方版(294 words) 2016年4月30日雅思写作真题大作文参考范文（2） 核心观点句： I tend to hold the view that age group is one of the many effects imposed on how people consume. 我倾向于认为，年龄层是对影响人们如何消费的众多因素之一。
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题目类别教育与科技提问方式利弊判断 考试题目 Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every aspect. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 分析：教育与科技、教育与媒体可谓是雅思考试的热点，而且这些话题跟广大考生们息息相关。平时对生活多一些思考，备考期间针对话题词汇和句型多写多练，这些都是理想分数的 保障。 文章结构：4段 首段：导入话题，表达立场。 主题段1：玩电脑游戏对孩子的各方面有害。 主题段2：玩电脑游戏对孩子的成长有利。 结尾段：总结上文，重申立场。 In recent years, the prevalence of computer games has exerted a significant effect on children’s life. As to whether they affect children negatively, there is an endless debate. Despite the fact that playing computer games is an effective way to relieve pressure, the problems associated with study and health cannot be neglected. Clearly, playing computer games is regarded as a main factor leading to poor academic performance. With the entertaining nature, computer games will easily distract children from their studious pursuits. With the passage of time, children will probably fall behind their peers in academic development. In addition, when children spend too much time playing computer games, they are less likely to participate in physical activities, which is one reason why many children suffer from obesity. As a result, these overweight children’s confidence may be undermined and their health may be negatively influence as well. Despite these disadvantages, the advantages can still not be ignored. First of all, the latest research shows that game-playing helps children to home their communication and interpersonal skills. In many cases, players work together in teams to achieve goals, competing against other players. Therefore, their social skills and teamwork spirit are put to the test. Also, computer games can have positive and therapeutic effects on players. Games provide an opportunity for children to decompress and tune out of strains and stresses of everyday life. Giving their time to rest is critical for emotional and mental well-being. In conclusion, it is not advisable for children to play computer games, for the reasons that it not only has a negative impact on their study, but also makes them lose confidence, although computer games provide a form of relaxation.
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In the present age, _________________________________ are playing significant roles in their lives. (In the present age, the issue of __________________________________________ is increasingly disturbing.) But in the meantime, whether__________________________________has sparked much debate. Some people assert that __________________________while many others argue that _____________________________ _____. Personally, I'm in favor of the former/later view. Convincing arguments can be made that ______________________________________. To start with, _____ _____________________________________________.Therefore,__________________________________ __________________________________________________.Moreover,_____________________________ _____________________________________.Specifically,________________________________________ ____________________________. Lastly,_____________________________________________________ ___. In other words, ____________________________________________________ . Admittedly,______________________________________________________________.The reason for this is that__________________________________________________________________________________ ________ . Obviously,________________________________________________________________. Even so, _____________________________________________ . For instance,____________________________ __________________________________________________. In summary, I would concede that______________________________________________________. Despite that, _______________________________________________________________ . Overall, I am convinced that_________________________ should_____________________________________________ ___________.
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雅思大作文写作范文精选 多看，多练，多积累，写作能力才会提高，今天和同学们来分享一下雅思大作文范文，希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 雅思大作文写作范文——大学是否应该同时进行行为习惯的教育? 题目： Some people think schools should teach students to form good behavior in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 大学是否应该在教授知识的同时进行行为习惯的教育? 范文： It is often argued that teachers should be accountable for their student’s good and bad conducts as they are responsible for teaching them the morality of their children. Others, on the other hand, opi ne that educators’ role should be limited to imparting academic (educational) curriculum among students. This essay will discuss both points of view and argue that instructors can share the
responsibility for inculcating socially acceptable manners in students along with academic course training, followed by a reasoned conclusion. 人们常说，教师应该对学生的好与坏行为负责，因为他们有责任教导他们的孩子的道德。另一方面，另一些人则认为教育者的角色应该局限于向学生传授学术(教育)课程。这篇*将讨论这两种观点，并认为教师可以分担责任，在进行学术课程培训的同时，向学生灌输社会可接受的礼仪，然后得出一个合理的结论。 Many support the teacher’s role in students’ behaviour modification. Firstly they think that students spend much more time with their educators in school than with their parents. So it is easy for the trainers to develop a good interpersonal relationship with students and, thereby, can have a great influence on their trainees. In addition, they can give moral lessons through moral classes. Moreover, most of the students find their teachers as their role model. So the students accept the instructions of their professors’ than anyone else. 许多人支持教师在学生行为矫正中的作用。首先，他们认为学生在学校花更多的时间和老师在一起，而不是和父母在一起。因此，培训师很容易与学生建立良好的人际关系，从而对他们的学员产生很大的影响。此外，他们可以通过道德课进行道德教育。
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B卷：表格，讲述八个国家1990年和2000年千人拥有摩托车的数量A卷大作文：Difference between countries are becoming less evident recently. People can see the same films, brands, fashion, advertisements and TV channels. To what extent do disadvantage outweigh advantages? B卷大作文：Some people think government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 小作文：1/14/2016
大作文：A recent newspaper article reports that a 14-year-old boy who seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streets instead of sent to the prison, do you think this is right? Or the young criminals should be sent to the jail. 小作文：1/23/2016 个不同年龄段人用互联网5年到2006年，2003Bar chart描述英国的比率。The leaders or directors of organizations are often older 大作文：people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 1/17/2016 描述咖啡的生产、消费、和利润流向三个饼图小作文： The news media have become more inflential in people's
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