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留学ps范文Dear admissions committee,My passion for pursuing a higher education in the field of international relations has led me to apply for the graduate program in your esteemed institution. I believe that my academic achievements, research experience, and personal background make me a strong candidate for this program.From a young age, I have been fascinated by the complexities of global politics and the interplay between nations. This curiosity has driven me to critically analyze international affairs and develop a strong understanding of the field. During my undergraduate studies in political science, I excelled in courses such as International Relations Theory and Comparative Politics, which enhanced my analytical skills and broadened my perspective on global issues.Apart from my academic achievements, I have also gained practical experience in the field through various research projects. One notable project was investigating the impact of economic globalization on the foreign policy of developing countries. Through extensive literature reviews and empirical analysis, I discovered how globalization has reshaped the foreign policies of these countries and the implications for international relations. This research experience has honed my research skills and equipped me with a solid foundation in conducting independent studies.Moreover, my personal background has provided me with a unique perspective and motivation to pursue a career in internationalrelations. Growing up in a multicultural environment, I have witnessed firsthand the importance of fostering cooperation and understanding between nations. This personal experience has strengthened my resolve to contribute to the field through academic and practical endeavors.I believe that your graduate program in international relations is the perfect platform for me to further develop my knowledge and skills in this field. The reputation of your institution, the diverse and experienced faculty, and the wide range of resources available make it an ideal environment for me to thrive academically and intellectually. Additionally, I am particularly drawn to the program's emphasis on interdisciplinary approaches and its focus on practical applications of theoretical knowledge, as this aligns with my passion and career goals.In conclusion, I am confident that my academic achievements, research experience, and personal background make me a strong candidate for the graduate program in international relations at your esteemed institution. I am excited about the opportunity to contribute to the academic community and further my understanding of global politics. Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to the possibility of joining your program.Sincerely,[Your Name]。

出国申请ps范文

出国申请ps范文

一、出国留学申请如何进行PS的写作无意之中翻到了曾经申请大学时的PS。

那叫一个矫情,那叫一个绞尽脑汁班门弄斧,洋洋洒洒一千多字。

没看到一半,我整个人已实力懵逼。

所以,现在想想看,特么的我当初到底是怎么被录取上的。

无限心疼审阅我PS的admission老师……不说了,跪一个先!带你们感受一下,我和我曾经找过的老师合作下的妖孽画风。

这是第一段。

Creativity, tenacity,inspiration ,and passion are the four pillars of my life ,which ,I suppose, will be the very ones leading to my success。

With passion so prevailing ,I preserve in it ;With passion so overwhelming,I fight for it 。

As our great leader Chairman Mao put it and I paraphrased it ,on the way where your passion takes you , if you fail ,you've got to try again and prepare yourself in any way possible and strive for the ultimate triumph。

This is how I try to live the best life I can no matter how life baffles and frustrates me。

卧槽,读完之后,我尴尬癌晚期了好嘛……真特么觉得自己是XX 我这特么都写了些什么当年就这么递交上去了完全不知所云,刻意遣词造句,boring级别max。

宝宝心里苦啊,宝宝尬点被戳穿了,宝宝受不了这尬点唤醒的身体内的洪荒之力,宝宝憋不住了,宝宝一定要说了!第一段一共也就四句话,还特么全部是废话。

美国研究生留学PS是肿么写粗来哒?

美国研究生留学PS是肿么写粗来哒?

美国研究生留学ps,在美国留学文书中占据着非常关键的地位。

那么,既然ps如此重要,申请者应该怎么写才能抓住这次宝贵的机会呢?对此,天道小编专门咨询了天道美国方向的老师,他为同学们整理出了一条美国研究生ps撰写之路:美国研究生留学PS写作第一步:确定主线在下笔之前,先仔细思考这篇美国留学文书打算用到的主线是什么,在自己的文件中写下来你的打算。

所谓主线,没有千篇一律,只有各有千秋。

如果思前想后、想破了脑袋依然没有想法,那就按照最原始但是是最保险的主线捋下来,即:第一段:申请什么专业第二段:为什么申请该专业第三、四、五、六段:为申请该专业做好了哪些准备第七段:做好了准备申请对方学校,对方学校的优势在哪里美国研究生PS写作第二步:确定主线上添枝加叶的素材在主线确定后,依然不要着急动笔去写,你打算用你的哪些素材来为你的主线添枝加叶?这是第二步要思考的问题,通常来说,对于申请研究生的申请者来说,在校学习经历、研究经历、实习经历、海外学习经历、志愿者经历、课外活动经历等都是可以选择的衬托主线的叶子。

如何在这么多的叶子中选出来最适合的那几片?这就是在“学做头脑清晰的人”章节我跟大家说过的关于如何整合素材部分,现在可以派上用场了:选择“所申请专业所需要的能力”和“自己已经具备的能力”的重合点,这是最佳素材。

说到底,对于申请研究生的申请者来说,已经不像申请本科一样,完全可以置“专业”置之不理,整个申请中即使一次都没有提到过专业,也依然可以获得名校录取。

可是申请研究生则不同,申请者已经不能单纯地在PS中讲一个动听的故事,靠动听的故事感动审核者,更多的是要靠“专业”,因此在PS的写作中,通常来说,所有的叶子都是围绕着“专业”来转的。

这就要求广大的申请者,一定要思考,你所申请的专业到底需要的是哪些方面的能力,而自己是否已经具备了,通过哪些素材可以说明自己已经具备了,这三个问题思考清楚了,PS写作中所谓的亮点挖掘就完成了。

sop和ps中文范文

sop和ps中文范文

sop和ps中文范文SOP(Statement of Purpose)和PS(Personal Statement)是申请留学或者申请奖学金时需要提交的重要文件。

下面是一篇关于SOP和PS的中文范文:亲爱的招生委员会:我非常荣幸能有机会向您申请XX大学的XX专业。

我对这个专业有着浓厚的兴趣,并且相信我有能力在这个领域取得优秀的成绩。

通过这封信和我的申请材料,我希望能向您展示我为什么对该专业感兴趣以及我为什么是一个合适的候选人。

我想谈谈我对该专业的兴趣和热情。

从我还是一个孩子的时候,我就对科学和技术产生了浓厚的兴趣。

我喜欢探索新的知识和解决问题的过程。

在高中时,我选择了学习数学和物理作为我的主修科目,并且在这两个领域取得了优异的成绩。

通过学习这些科目,我开始对计算机科学产生了浓厚的兴趣,我热衷于了解计算机科学对现代社会的重要性以及它在不同领域的应用。

我想强调我的学术背景和个人经历。

我在本科阶段选择了计算机科学作为我的专业,并且在这个领域取得了良好的成绩。

我参与了几个软件开发项目,并且通过这些项目锻炼了我的编程和解决问题的能力。

我还参加了一些与计算机科学相关的学术会议和研讨会,积极与其他专业人士交流和学习。

这些经历不仅提高了我的专业知识水平,也培养了我的团队合作和领导能力。

我想谈谈我为什么选择申请XX大学。

我对XX大学的卓越教学和研究声誉非常着迷。

我相信在这个学术环境中学习将会给我提供丰富的学习资源和机会,以及与优秀的教授和同学们互动的机会。

我还对该大学的实践和实习机会非常感兴趣,我相信这些机会将为我提供宝贵的实践经验,并帮助我将理论知识应用于实际问题。

我对XX专业的兴趣和热情,以及我的学术背景和个人经历,使我相信我是一个合适的候选人。

我期待着在XX大学学习并为这个专业做出贡献。

谢谢您对我的关注和考虑。

此致敬礼。

留学申请文书PS范文:适合最重要!

留学申请文书PS范文:适合最重要!

留学申请文书PS范文:适合最重要!申请文书PS的创作,适合的才是最好的,它既不是简单的写作,更不是含糊的照搬。

俗话说,世界上没有两片一模一样的叶子,每个学生也都是独一无二的个体,文书当然也应该是独一无二的!无论是PS或SOT抑或是CV,内容一定要有针对性,要以每个学生的特质、背景和经历为依据,文书老师和学生应当面对面一对一沟通交流,深度挖掘学生身上的闪光点,在这个基础上,用行文的创意与技巧去征服国外大学的教授,这样的文书既是贴合学生身份的,又是熠熠生辉的,怎能不被刮目相看呢?这又岂是那些放诸四海而皆准的文书所能媲美的呢?思为最看不上“一篇打天下”的文书模版,思为只做适合的独一无二的文书,哪怕付出多百倍的努力!如果说好莱坞星光大道留下了无数明星的手印脚印,那么这份文书就是每位学生通往梦想留学殿堂的星光大道,同样打下了他们深深的独一无二的烙印。

朱同学,本科就读于中国药科大学英语专业,辅修药学的她如何能够敲开了佛罗里达大学博士全奖留学的大门呢?当然,这一切离不开她在申请背后不懈的学术和实践方面的努力,但是这一切努力浓缩在一篇不算长的SOT中却绝非易事,下面就请童鞋们品读朱同学的这篇SOT吧,其中借用乔布斯的“dot理论”真是巧妙至极!范文:“Of course it was impossible to connect the dots looking forward when I was in college. But it was very, very clear looking backwards ten years later. Again, you can't connect the dots looking forward; you can only connect them looking backwards.”When I watched the video of Steve Jobs’Commencement Address at Stanford University for the first time, I failed to acquire an exact understanding of the figurative meaning of the dots in our lives, but now, four years later, when I look back, a map of dots with lines connecting them gradually, and yet clearly, appears in my mind - and the next dot is named “Graduate Study in Social and Administrative Sciences in Pharmacy at University of Wisconsin - Madison.”The first dot is about my grandma’s choice of treatment of her liver cancer. I still remember when she was dying,tears sliding down her wrinkled cheeks, she murmured “I should have chosen conservative treatment to die peacefully in bed …I should have…”That unforgettable memory still lingers on my mind and keeps me reflecting on methods of guiding patients to make better decisions, and evaluating the health related quality of life. Therefore, I determined to minor in Pharmacy, to explore the pharmaceutical field further - and this led precisely to the second dot on my journey.In the second year of my college life, I began my minor courses in Pharmacy - a fantastic world of science, and gradually I have acquired a thorough knowledge of Pharmacy. Based on the study of Pharmacology, I started to learn Pharmacotherapy by myself, and progressively got to know the corresponding medication therapies to treat and prevent each kind of diseases, and realized the importance of safe, appropriate and economical drug therapy for achieving outcomes that improve a patient’s quality of life. During this exploring, I encountered another subject -Social and Administrative Sciences in Pharmacy.Later on, a lecture called “Comparison Study of Education in Social and Administrative Sciences in Pharmacy in China and USA”solidified my interest in this discipline. With the guidance of the lecturer, Professor HU, and through searching information about this area, I formulated a clear vision of the purpose of research in this discipline - to improve the use of pharmaceutical products and services, foster the delivery of pharmaceutical care, and shape the health system appropriately, through applying interdisciplinary theories. Exultantly, myundiscovered passion for this field was ignited. Considering my personality, life experience and social conscience, I have no doubt that Social and Administrative Sciences in Pharmacy is the right prospective research area for me. I resolve to pursue my graduate study in this area in the United States - this is the third and one of the most crucial dots on the route of my adventurous voyage.Ever since I made my decision, I have prepared my graduate study in the United States dot by dot. I managed to develop my interest in this discipline without weakening my performance of my major English, and participation in variou activities. I ranked first in the overall performance of my major and minor in Pharmacy, and won the National Scholarship. With regards to activities and volunteer works, student leader forums, English club and summer social practice activities cultivated my strong leadership and organization skills; additionally, debate and speech competitions, and volunteer experience developed my communication and presentation skills, which are my assets that will largely benefit my future study and career development, as well as the graduate program in which I will get enrolled.At the same time, Pharmacoeconomics course and related literature have broadened my insight into Social and Administrative Sciences in Pharmacy. Throughout the process, I developed considerable literature retrieval skills and sharp abilities to grasp new concepts and knowledge quickly. Also, through involving in the Open Experiment in the Enzyme Engineering Laboratory, I learned to be an excellent coordinator, building a bridge between teachers and other research teammates. From March this year, I have taken an active part in the research project on Comparison Study of Chinese GMP 2010 and GMP 1998. During this research I sharpened my analytical abilities, critical thinking skills, as well as built strong team spirit. I will assist the research advisor Professor HU to deliver a series of lectures in our university and pharmaceutical companies. During my colorful college life, I have made a substantial number of presentations at class, department and school levels. And as one of the best students, I have participated in study method seminars for many times to instruct freshmen and sophomores in learning and researching. Therefore, I have the confidence to say that I will be qualified for teaching or research assistantship in my graduate study.Because of the aforementioned skills and knowledge I gained, this month I am participating in the research project the Pharmacoeconomic Evaluation of Diabetes in China, which will pave the way for my graduate research.The further I explored in this area, the more clearly I realized the dire need for talents specialized in Social and Administrative Sciences in Pharmacy - I hope to become one of them, to be in a marketing leadership position in order to push Chinese pharmaceutical enterprises to become global players - this will certainly be a dot on my life expedition.In order to achieve this professional goal, an advanced degree is indispensible, and the Ph.D. program in Social and Administrative Sciences in Pharmacy at University of Wisconsin - Madison is an excellent fit for me. Via a Ph.D. program, I plan to focus my research and study on Pharmacy Marketing, especially on consumer behavior, and pharmacy goods and services promotion. Research on various areas of the faculty in your department is extremely attractive to me, especially Professor Kreling’s research. His research, Now You See It. Now You Don't: Fair Balance and Adequate Provision in Advertisements for Drugs Before and After the Switch From Prescription to Over-the-Counter, which studies the differences in advertising of drugs that have been switched from prescription to OTC from a unique perspective, makes me realize the strong impact of both prescription and OTC drugs advertising on consumers’decisions. Another articleof Professor Kreling, Do Seniors Get The Medicines Prescribed For Them? Evidence From The 1996-1999 Medicare Current Beneficiary Survey, exposes me to the problems of medicine use in the increasing elderly population, an important and growing problem the world over, which I want to explore further during my graduate study.Other Courses offered by your program, will also hone my skills. For instance, Pharmaceutical Marketing and Policy will definitely give me more training on the applications of marketing and policy theories and principles to pharmacy, which will be fundamental for my future research on pharmacy goods and services promotion and marketing during my graduate research and prospective career life. Additionally, courses like Methods of Research and Analysis, will equip me with advanced methods of designing and conducting research, as well as statistic and analytic skills, which will fully prepare me for conducting marketing research on my future career path.In the commencement address, Jobs said that we have to trust that the dots will somehow connect in our future, and thus it will give us the confidence to follow our heart, even when it leads us off the well-worn path. In retrospect, I am surprised to find the dots do connect down the road, and, in this process, I’ve accumulated valuable knowledge and experiences that I can apply into my future study and research. In terms of future, I firmly believe graduate study at University of Wisconsin - Madison will be the next requisite dot on my pursuit of what I love to do. I sincerely hope that I can begin a social, professional and academic relationship with you; one that is sure to be mutually beneficial.。

留学ps范文

留学ps范文

留学ps范文留学PS范文。

尊敬的招生委员会:我是一名来自中国的学生,现在我怀着无比激动的心情写下这封申请信。

我希望能够加入贵校的留学项目,深造学业,开拓视野,为自己的未来打下坚实的基础。

在此,我将分享我的教育背景、个人经历和留学规划,希望能够获得您的青睐。

首先,我毕业于中国一所知名大学,主修国际关系专业。

在大学期间,我通过系统的学习和实践,掌握了国际政治、国际经济、国际法等相关知识,并且取得了优异的成绩。

在校期间,我还积极参与了学生会和国际交流协会的工作,担任过干事和部长职务,锻炼了自己的组织能力和领导能力。

此外,我还利用寒暑假的时间参加了一些社会实践活动,如志愿者支教和社区调研,拓宽了自己的视野,增长了见识。

其次,我在个人经历方面也有一些值得一提的地方。

我曾经参加过一次国际交换项目,去了美国一所大学学习一年。

这段经历让我深刻感受到了不同国家、不同文化之间的差异和联系,也让我更加坚定了出国留学的决心。

在交换期间,我除了认真学习专业知识,还积极参加了各种社团活动,结识了很多国际友人,拓展了自己的人脉。

这段经历不仅让我学到了很多知识,也培养了我独立生活和解决问题的能力。

最后,我想谈谈我的留学规划。

我希望能够选择贵校的国际关系或国际政治专业进行深造,因为我相信贵校的师资力量和教学资源能够帮助我更好地提升自己的专业能力。

在未来,我希望能够成为一名优秀的国际事务专家,为促进世界和平与发展做出自己的贡献。

我相信,通过在贵校的学习和磨炼,我能够成长为一个全面发展、有担当的人才。

总而言之,我怀着一颗渴望知识、渴望成长的心,向贵校提出了自己的留学申请。

我相信,贵校会给予每一位学生公平的机会和严格的教育,我也会用自己的努力和汗水去证明自己的价值。

最后,我衷心希望能够得到贵校的青睐,成为贵校的一员,共同开创美好的未来。

谢谢!。

建筑申请留学PS中英文版本(范文模版)

建筑申请留学PS中英文版本(范文模版)第一篇:建筑申请留学PS中英文版本(范文模版)It is once said that architecture is frozen music, and a nice building is a beautiful poem ever composed on the fragrant ground.The artistic glamour and practical applicability make it a perfect combination of both beauty and practicality.In the long history of mankind's development, pieces of magnificent movements have been constantly composed, and scores of exquisite verses have been written.This is reflected in those marvelous structures as from China's Great Wall to the Parthenon in ancient Greece, and from the Great Arena in ancient Rome to Egyptian Pyramids.All these breathtaking and soul-stirring wonders, as a token of human civilization, have blended the most magnificent element in the universe with the inexhaustible creative ability of mankind.As a little girl, I was deeply attracted by these architectural wonders shown on books.At that time, I was frequently perplexed by one question--“How could it be if these wonders were constructed and erected on the horizon bit by bit by people?” In order to find out the truth, I began to try putting up these splendid buildings with my little and delicate hands, using toy bricks as the materials.It was from that time on that my desire to explore the secret of architecture started to sprout.Along with my growing up, the young sapling of architecture keeps growing in my mind, eventually turning into the direction of my pursuit.In 1990, I was recommended for admission to one of the best departments of architecture in XXX University, thus starting a pilgrimage to the magnificent palace of architectural arts.As far as the five-year study of my undergraduate courses is concerned, I regard it as a process offundamental education in which architectural theories and approaches to both classical and modern architecture are comprehensively taught.By virtue of my keen interest and diligence in acquiring knowledge, during the five-year studies in the university, I have made excellent achievements in my academic studies as the top four in our grade respecting academic scores.From my point of view, the five-year study is not only a long process of knowledge accumulation, but a continuous and happy spiritual journey as well.I am deeply absorbed in the infinite space for imagination rendered by architecture in the aspects of its structure, form, color and material.No matter what I have learned is about basic cartography, model-making, or understanding the architectural thoughts put forward by both eastern and western masters on architecture through my own practice and experiments, I can always find delight in studies and a passion for creation.In the artistic palace of architecture, I persist in my learning with untiring vigor and take heart's content to roam in the treasure-house of architectural arts constructed by those respectable predecessors in the field of architecture.Meanwhile, I have also learned to enjoy the joys brought about by architectural designing and put my heart into it through my personal practice.Therefore, by applying my in-depth studying of theories to practice, I have benefited a great deal in my academic studies.Although my remarkable achievements and an excellent graduation dissertation have helped to bring my five-year academic studies to a successful close, my keen craving for the architectural knowledge spurs me on to pursue an advanced and further study for a master's degree.Whiledoing my M.A.programs, based on my previous solidfoundation of professional knowledge, I continued to make a thorough and profound probe into theoretical learning on architecture.During this period of time, I have made a systematic study of the architectural thoughts and ideas advanced by Smith, Foster and Zumthor.Such a systematic theoretical study has thus enabled a tentative and personal viewpoint on architecture to take shape.Along with it also goes my deep interest in the development history of China's modern architecture, which results in my final decision to take this subject as the orientation of my M.A.dissertation.After in-depth and meticulous investigation and survey on the development history of China's modern architecture, I have completed my dissertation entitled “XXX”.In this dissertation, I have managed t o probe into the impact and influences exerted by the western trend of thoughts in modern architecture's development on China's traditional architecture complex, and summarized several development climax in the history of China's modern architecture.Moreover, the present coexistence state of multi-elements embodied in China's architectural industry is also analyzed in the last part of my paper.My supervisor spoke highly of my dissertation due to its unique perspective, and my paper also won the honorary title, “The Excellent Dissertation”.Apart from this dissertation, I have also pondered over environment-friendly buildings, and then sorted out my thinking results regarding this problem into a paper which was later published in a domestic periodical“XXXXX”.U pon my graduation, my supervisor had once invited me to retain to work in the university and continued my research on the same subject.However, I realized that I need more practice and experimental experience, despite the fact that I have a fairly solid foundation on my theoretical training.As faras an architect is concerned, experience is the source of inspiration.Bearing this thought in mind, I began to work for one of the best architectural companies in China.During my two years' working in the company, I have undertaken many design projects, most of which have been highly appraised.For instance, the scheme of the XXX , in which I have taken part in designing, won the first prize in the Contest of Project Schemes.A large quantity of practice has thus helped to check my architectural ideas.Nevertheless, this has also revealed some weak points existing in China's present architectural industry considering the aspect of its theories, particularly the lack of necessary guidance by applying theory to practical designing.This insufficiency of theoretical guidance will inevitably result in an artistic height hard for the designed buildings to reach.Such acknowledgment has finally facilitated my thought of pursuing an advanced study abroad.By doing so, I hope I can make a thorough and deeper study of advanced theories and methods of western architecture, thus promoting my design ability to a higher level.One essential inadequacy in China's current architectural design is that architects tend to be overly occupied with the external shape and structure of a building.They overlook the application of new construction technology and fail to take into account the properties of new construction materials.For example, steel structures are beginning to be widely applied on domestic buildings, but few architects have developed a sufficient command of the relevant knowledge in this field, resulting in their relatively low designing level when such steel structures are involved.This is an area that a truly well-trained architect can achieve important breakthroughs.Therefore, I also plan to concentrate my future studies on this area.As I was coming to thebottom line of this personal statement, I couldn't help thinking of the little and delicate hands when I was a young girl, together with the scene of my putting up those toy bricks with those little hands.At that time, I must have imagined that, someday in the future, the once clumsy little hands would sure grow stronger and more creative, and would ultimately write the most beautiful architectural poems from the ground.有人曾经说过,建筑是凝固的音乐,一个漂亮的建筑是芬芳大地上华丽的诗篇。

美国研究生申请法律专业ps范文

美国研究生申请法律专业ps范文I am a person keen on challenges. Law will provide me with the kind of constant challenge I have always craved, while helping me to improve my analytical, practical & communication skills. Also my concern and curiosity about society and its people inspired me to pursue this subject for my higher education, as I believe Law plays an essential role in the changing nature of society.My upbringing has honed my perception of society and people leading me to be acutely aware of social injustice, inequality, exploitation, discrimination, and religious fundamentalism, especially in a society such as the one I come from - Bangladesh. I possess a desire, to struggle if necessary through my life in establishing a society which will be free from exploitation and inequality. As such, I have chosen to study Law, for I believe the proper implementation of Law is the only potent weapon to obliterate injustice. I believe throughout the history of the world, working classes have been deceived by the upper class bourgeoisie and the elites - my ultimate goal in life is to establish the rights of the socially deprived classes. I always have wondered why Law has not been used to raise the voice of the working class, and why it has been used to safeguard the interests of people who are exploiting. I seek a new definition of human rights –the true definition, without exploitation and corruption colouring the notion. My greatest wonder is why our society and the legal system, do not point out economic exploitation as an abuse of human rights; for it is the root of poverty, which elicits crime. If the creation of Law is to curb injustice, why has it not been used to eradicate this injustice?Taking law as a subject for higher education will hopefully help me find answers to my questions, and will teach me the proper method of implementation.I am someone who is passionate to evaluate problems. I am not an extremist but I do not hesitate to resort to radical measures if the situation forces it. I believe, in a society, co-operation is more desired than competition; competition doesn’t necessarily bring rapid prosperity. I adhere to a socialistic political ideology, and aim to devote myself in establishing true socialism. I am from a country, which has been subject to military dictatorship for over twenty years after her independence. My political consciousness grew during the time, when my father was imprisoned by the military just because he was a leader of a political party who opposed military regime. Police and military jointly ran a brutal campaign throughout the country to repress politicians, where they imprisoned and sometimes killed thousands of students, politicians, professionals, workers, and even soldiers. These incidents severely affected my family, making my childhood a turbulent time. After the military regime failed, a western style democratic political structure was set up, which gave nothing, yet increased the discontent of the masses, and created some elites, who virtually control the country. Wealth and power both are centralized to them, law is a puppet in their hand, and they control everything, from economy to politics. Millions of people live below the poverty level, and there is nobody, not one strong and resilient political party to represent them. Extreme form of capitalism has taken over our country’s social and human values, and morality is at the brink of extinction. Corruption is everywhere, human rights abuses are innumerable, political repression is paramount, money is powerand power is everything. This indisciplined violent condition of my country created a rebellious nature within me that is why I have set my ambition to restructure the socio-political structure of my country in a radical way. I would like to utilize the knowledge I acquire from my life at university and beyond to clarify and show me the proper way of implementation of my thoughts.I have proved myself as an efficient and responsible student through primary and secondary school, I have been able to maintain and improve my grades, which are consistently good. Currently I am undertaking A’ levels in History, Government & Politics, and Bengali. Being an ambitious and inquisitive person, even after completing a Foundation Programme with an overall A grade, I have chosen to do three A’ levels in one year to study in one of the top British universities. History has always fascinated me; though this is the first time I am studying this subject in detail. In Government & Politics, I am learning about the procedures of law making and the system of politics and government in different countries. Languages have always been of interest to me, and my favoured loyalty is to my mother tongue - Bengali.I have spent my time productively on extra curricular activities. I have keenly taken part in debating, student politics and acting in television dramas. I headed my school’s debating society for one year and independently achieved many prizes in speech competitions at local and national levels. My hobbies include reading, playing cricket and table tennis, web browsing, etc.The principal reason for my desire to study at UK is the quality of teaching here and particularly in my chosen subject,Law. I also find exciting the prospect of joining a university hee with international flavours and exceptional research facilities. I believe University is a place for accumulating more interests, for meeting people, for working hard, for finding a niche in life. I feel I have the commitment and confidence of giving my best during my university career and afterwards。

出国ps范文

出国PS范文前言出国留学是许多人梦寐以求的事情,但是在申请过程中,个人陈述(Personal Statement,简称PS)是非常重要的一环。

PS是申请者向招生官介绍自己的机会,也是展示自己优势的重要途径。

本文将为大家提供一篇出国PS范文,希望能够帮助到正在准备出国留学的同学们。

正文尊敬的招生官:我是一名来自中国的学生,非常荣幸能够有机会向您介绍我自己。

我一直梦想着能够到您的学校学习,因为我相信这将是我实现自己梦想的最佳途径。

我在中国的大学学习了计算机科学,这是一个非常有前途的领域,也是我非常热爱的领域。

在大学期间,我参加了许多项目和比赛,其中最令我自豪的是我参加的一个项目。

在这个项目中,我和我的团队开发了一个基于深度学习的图像识别系统,这个系统能够准确地识别出图像中的物体,并给出相应的标签。

这个项目让我深深地感受到了计算机科学的魅力,也让我更加坚定了自己未来的方向。

除了学术方面,我还非常注重自己的个人发展。

在大学期间,我参加了许多社团和志愿者活动,这些活动让我更加了解社会,也让我更加热爱生活。

我还喜欢旅行,我曾经去过许多国家,这些旅行让我更加开阔了眼界,也让我更加热爱这个世界。

我选择申请贵校是因为我相信贵校能够为我提供最好的学习环境和最优秀的师资力量。

我希望能够在贵校学习更多的知识,结交更多的朋友,也希望能够为贵校做出自己的贡献。

最后,我想再次感谢您能够花时间阅读我的个人陈述。

我相信,如果我有机会进入贵校学习,我一定会全力以赴,为自己的梦想而努力。

结语以上就是一篇出国PS范文,希望能够对正在准备出国留学的同学们有所帮助。

在写PS的过程中,一定要注意自己的语言表达和逻辑结构,同时也要突出自己的优势和特点。

祝愿大家都能够顺利地申请到自己心仪的学校,实现自己的梦想。

个人陈述(PERSONAL STATEMENT)的写作方式

个人陈述(PERSONA L ST A TEMENT)的写作方式个人陈述,(PERSONAL STATEMENT,以下简称PS)是申请美国,加拿大,英国等西方国家的大学/研究生录取时由申请人写的关于自我的一篇漫谈体文章。

当然有的学校要求的文章题目不一定叫PERSONAL STATEMENT,如有的学校让你写出动机(Motivation)兴趣,经历等。

由于在中国的升学体制中,基本上是唯分数论的,因此中国的申请人对这类文件的写作和思维方式不熟悉。

而欧美大学录取学生,发放奖学金,是通过全面综合考察申请者的条件来决定的。

所谓留学文书,如PS,推荐信,RP(Research proposal),CV等是一套文件系统,用以向录取院校从各个角度展现您的求学动机,学术学习能力,工作和研究经历,结合一系列更“客观”,可量化的指标:如GRE,TOEFL,IELTS,GPA等构成您的全貌。

留学文书在西方的文化背景下是申请入学(奖学金)的极为重要的组成部分。

其中PS往往对您的申请是否成功起到很大的作用。

笔者在为数百计的申请人进行留学文书的咨询和写作过程中发现,由于中西方教育体制的差异和网上各种良莠不齐的“范文“的误导,许多申请人的PS写作理念非常混乱,本文结合中国申请人文书写作的常见弊端,简述PS 的写作要领。

PS的长度在欧美,PS归为ESSAY(漫谈)类,是一种短小精悍的文体。

笔者曾深入研究过欧美出版的优秀PS文选,无不短小精悍,内容却非常丰满,文笔优美。

一般来说一篇PS的正常长度为600—800英文单词,而相当多的中国申请人的PS超长。

笔者甚至见到某些人的PS写到3千多字。

很多中国申请人试图把自己的方方面面的优点和成绩展示出来,须知PS不是简历的详细补充,许多信息可以通过其它文件展示(如学习成绩等)。

美国大学的招生人员曾谈到:在留学申请旺季时,面对堆积如山的文件,一般他们审查一个PS 的时间只有2、3分钟,那种长篇大论类的PS只能让人心生厌烦。

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精品文档 . 美国留学申请PS范文赏析。去美国留学生活一直都是中国人们的首要出国留学选择,美国留学申请是大家都很重视的事情,只有成申请成功了大家才能顺利的去美国留学生活,今天天道小编就给大家带来了美国留学申请中ps范文,希望对大家有所帮助。

美国留学申请材料中的个人陈述PS就是个人陈述或说明,要说出你到底喜不喜欢这个专业、喜欢到什么程度、对未来有什么设想,去读研究生、博士一定要谈对这一领域的看法,说出自己对它的热爱。

要注意的有: 1、PS的长度要适中,600—800英文单词。 2、紧扣专业,主线明确,避免盲目个性化。让招生委员会知道你选择该专业的明确和强烈的动机,同时具备充分的条件完成该专业的学习。

3、结构简单,衔接紧密,主线明确,便于理解。谨记:simple is the best。 4、精心安排PS和其它文件的关系。PS,推荐信,简历等文件构成一整套申请文书,既需要相互应证,也需要这些文件各有侧重点。

5、语言表达上,英语要地道、符合英语的思维习惯和文风,避免“中式英语”。 大家一定要注重这些要点,这对你是否可以成功去美国留学生活很重要。下面是ps范文: To live a meaningful life everyday; to continually pursue my predetermined worthwhile goals. -My view of life.

Could I put myself in the life-threatening working environment? Could I sacrifice my life for the benefits of others? Some people may laugh at my crazy question. To me, that is a serious question I have come a long way to find my answer. “I am not sure whether it is worth to answer”; “What is the true meaning of that question?”

When I was a young child, I watched a soap opera that was about court. I was deeply impressed by the judge’s calmness and the lawyer’s eloquence and resource that were showed in this opera. From then on, I hoped to study law some day. Fortunately, I performed well in entrance examination and got enrolled into xx University. Then I chose law as my major without hesitation. At university, I studied hard and got GPA 3.4. What’s more, I broadly read all kinds of books, including philosophy, history etc. My teachers’ instruction strengthened my understanding of law and makes me understand the significance of law to a country. From my studies, I had a lot of fun and got more interested in law. Moreover, I actively participated in practice in holidays from common company to law firm and tried to apply the theory I had learned into practice.

This summer, I had my internship in counselor department in xxx Group Co Ltd which was involved in a business contract dispute, which was submitted to China International Economic and Trade Arbitration Commission for arbitration. As a representative of the requested applicant, I took part in the evidence collection in the early arbitration stage and clearly explained why the 5% balance of goods was not paid on time. After knowing the whole case, I visited my teacher, an Arbitration Law professor, and listened to her opinions. Realizing the counterpart didn’t completely implement their contract duty, I gave reasons 精品文档 . as follows: First, the counterpart company didn’t mention bearing issue, which caused that the delivered machines couldn’t be put into the plant because of the disqualification of workshop. Thus overhaul was necessary, which delayed production and resulted loss. Based on these reasons, the counterpart didn’t completely carry out its duty, so our party did not pay the balance on time. During this time, I found out the evidence and pictures that attested counterpart did not give reasonable suggestion and service, and made a statement in the court. Finally, the arbitration turned out that counterpart compensated our loss, in which the arbiters invoked the reasons that I stated. They had a panel made up of 3 lawyers and 5 company representatives as agents while we just had 3 persons—two lawyers and me. Under such condition, I was able to cooperate with them and clearly stated my opinions without any nervousness, which got their respect. This matter greatly inspired my enthusiasm on study.

In addition, I took part in the contact draft in several companies. In the process, when I met a lot of problems, I

often turned to my teachers for help, which made good impression on them. As I cherished each practice, I studied my specialty and English hard. With effective study method and diligence, I did well both in English and law, which helped me a lot to get scholarship every year. On the other hand, my practice inspired me to study. In practice, I exercised my legal knowledge. I also realize the big gap between theory and its application—sometimes I have master the rules but I didn’t know how to use it in actual case. My practice experiences have not only strengthened what I learned but have supplied new knowledge for me, which is good for my future study and career.

In my study and practice, I admired outstanding lawyers’ eloquence and jumping thinking more and more. However, in China, most of lawyers come from theory study and those who can perform well in practice are insufficient. Moreover, after the China’s entrance to WTO, there are a lot of problems with Chinese law. I think, my internship experience is not enough. In practice, I could combine substantive law with procedural law to analyze case, but I still feel my theoretical foundation is not solid enough. What’s more, comparably speaking, the chances that I have to initiatively study and practice are not a lot. Thereby, I am eager to study further abroad to know more about foreign law, thoughts and lawyer career so that I am able to stand out in fierce competition.

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