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初三英语高分写作技巧
文章的结尾没有固定的模式，同学们可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般情况下，记叙文和说明文经常采用自然结尾的方法;但夹叙夹议和发表观点类的文章则往往有结束语，以使文章首尾呼应，结构完整。文章结尾的形式也因文章类别和开头的风格而灵活多变。
1. 自然结尾，点明主题
随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman(帮助警察)”的结尾可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy。再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)”的结尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
2. 首尾呼应，升华主题
在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题，深化主题，起到“画龙点睛”的`效果。如“i Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是：i love my hometown, and i am proud of it。
3. 反问结尾，引起深思
这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，而且具
有一定的强调作用，可引起他人的深思。如“Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)”的结尾可以是：if we learn English well, we can …don’t you think learning Eng- lish is great fun?
4. 表达祝愿，阐述愿望
这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中，表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是：i hope the farmers’life will be better and better.
另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语：Best wishes;i wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;i wish you have a good time等。
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