高考英语书面表达想得高分,这篇秘籍不得不看!

高考英语书面表达想得高分,这篇秘籍不得不看!
高考英语书面表达想得高分,这篇秘籍不得不看!

高考英语书面表达想得高分,这篇秘籍不得不看!

现在高考都是电脑阅卷,关于高考阅卷老师进行英语作文阅卷的速度,相信大家都很清楚了,可能只有十几秒。在这么短的时间内,如何能迅速吸引阅卷老师的眼球拿到高分?

我们先来看看两篇高考书面表达学生的高分文章。

作文1

(2016年高考河北省满分作文)

这篇书面表达字迹工整、清晰,让阅卷老师眼前一亮。仔细阅读,不难发现这个学生用了很多高级词汇,还有很多地道的词块。

作文2

(2018年高考山东省24分作文)

这篇书面表达虽然因为一个小硬伤被扣了1分,但是令人惊叹的是满篇的词块,甚至还有些非常高级的词块小编都想不起来用。

那么我们来总结一下,除了书写、布局谋篇,其实在书面表达中,学生对词汇的运用能力,尤其是高级词汇和词块的运用,是影响阅卷老师在非常有限的时间内评分的很重要的一个因素。

那今天,我们就来讲讲词块。

到底什么是词块?词块,也叫作搭配,它是在词汇和句子之间存在着同时兼有词汇和句子特征的半固定结构。如下图所示:

英语里,有很多词块(搭配),对英语学习者来说,尤其是高中生,学习搭配非常重要。这是为什么呢?

我们看看下面两幅图,比较一下哪种盖房子的方式效率更高呢?

盖房子就像我们学英语。我们把词块作为整体输入大脑,这样不仅可以提高阅读理解的速度和精准度;再把词块作为整体输出,就可以提高口头表达和书面表达能力,促进语言输出的流利性、地道性和准确性。说的再直接一点,词块稍微加上一点语法,就能生成句子了。

既然词块这么重要,而考纲要求掌握的词汇还有许许多多的词块,那怎么能让教学更有效率,学生能记得更牢又会用呢?

我们推荐老师根据词块的不同特点,用以下几种方式教学:

方法一:词源(文化背景)

词块ring true高阶字典上给的解释是:听起来真实。这个词块,即使配上大量的例句,学生估计也不会很容易理解和掌握。

其实,老师给学生讲这个词块时,不妨试试给学生讲讲ring true背后的故事。

从前用金币、银币的时代,人们怕拿到的硬币纯度不参够,常会两枚互敲一下,听听声音是否清脆悠长。ring指的就是敲击的声音,ring true这个动词词组是指硬币敲击声听起来成色十足,引申为“(事情、说法等)真实可靠”。

看到这里,是不是立刻想起电视上看到的,在过去人们吹银元的情景?

教这种“有(词源)故事”的词块,尝试讲个故事给学生,不仅能活跃课堂气氛,更重要的是学生会理解得更深刻且不容易忘记。

方法二:基本义

2017年全国I卷阅读理解D篇

drop在此处作名词,学生可根据其动词释义“下落”推测出该短语的意思,“下落的水”即为“水滴;水珠”。

对于这类词块,应该侧重培养学生根据基本义,结合具体的语境推测衍生义的能力。

方法三:精准的汉语释义

sit quietly是一个动词与副词的词语搭配,字面意思为“安静地坐着”。根据上下文语境,植物受到攻击时不会“安静地坐着”,即汉语中所说的“坐以待毙”。

像这样的词块,一定要培养学生精准的汉语释义的意识,这样就能产生顿悟的效果,加强学生的记忆效果。

方法四:英语释义

有很多词块,其汉语释义和字面意义不好理解,即使配上例句,仍然不容易理解,这种情况,老师们可以借助英语释义。

方法五:精深小品词

英语中有很多短语动词,可以从其小品词入手学习。例如,take off,可以从小品词off入手学习。

重要提示

提示1:学习词块(搭配),最重要的是建立词块意识。

前面我们也提到了,考纲要求的词汇有千万万万个搭配,光靠老师教、学生记是教不完

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