读写任务之怎样写好主题句
助你完成读写任务2的十六字诀
对于读写任务的发表看法部分，有的考生还懵懵懂懂，不得其法。有的考生虽然功底不错，但是总会出现要点不全，部分偏题，段落间逻辑混乱等情况，最终导致这部分难以得高分，甚至难以及格，让人扼腕痛惜。针对这些情况，我们总结出16字决供考生参考。
1、各为一段
高考中读写任务的发表看法或进行议论的任务2，迄今为止都是三个要点，且用(1)(2)(3)标明。为方便评卷教师一眼看出要点齐全，我们建议将三个要点依次各自单独为一段，即三个要点写三段，让三个要点跃然纸上，条理清晰。(注：万一出现只有两个要点，我们就只依次写两段，万一出现四个要点，我们就依次写四段。)
2、顺序写作
即不要轻易打破试卷上给出的要点顺序。英语试卷中要点先后给出是有一定逻辑关系的。第一个要点先写，第二个要点后写，按照顺序来，逻辑关系相对紧密。
3、开段点题
构思好段落和写作顺序后，就需要“开段点题”，写好每个段落的中心句或上下段的衔接句。就算是不写出中心句，也要与要点紧密相关。
4、层层深入
考生在每个段落中心句写完以后，要紧紧围绕该中心句展开写作，展开方式有因果法、并列法、顺承法等。考生在写作时，须牢牢记住每个句子皆是为要点服务，围绕要点来写。
读写任务之写好主题句
在读写任务中, 每段的开头需要写好主题句,这是关系到是否能把握要点的关键。
一．写好主题句的重要性：
写作时，要让压力山大的阅卷老师不用刻意寻找而能一眼就看到文章中的要点。最好是在每段的开头就点题，并且要紧靠主题句加以拓展修饰润色，以达到画龙点睛的效果。
好句背诵：用于文章的主题句
1. It goes without saying that…不用说……
It goes without saying that our success depends on diligence. 不用说，我们的成功取决于勤奋。
2. There is no denying the fact that…. 不可否认这个事实……
=No one can deny…谁也不可否认……
There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind. 不可否认, 成功的关键在于健康的身心。
3. I am greatly convinced (that)…=I am greatly assured (that) …我深信……
I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure. 我深信预防胜于治疗。
4. Among various kinds of…=Of all the …在各种……之中, ……Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular. 在各种运动中, 我尤其喜欢慢跑
5. In my opinion…=As far as I am concerned, …在我看来, ……
In my opinion, playing computer games not only takes up much time but also is harmful to our health. 在我看来, 打电脑游戏既花费也有害健康。
6. According to my personal experience = Based on my personal experience根据我个人经验
According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of good. 根据我个人的经验, 微笑带给我很多好处。
7. Of all the people I know, perhaps none deserves my respect more than…在我认识的人当中, 也许没有一个人比……更值得我尊敬。Of all the people I know, perhaps none deserves my respect more than Miss Zhang, my English teacher. 在我认识的人当中, 也许没有一个人比我的英语老师张老师更值得我尊敬。
8. In the course of my schooling, I will never forget …在我的求学过程中, 我忘不了……
In the course of my schooling, I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English. 在我求学的过程中, 我忘不了学习英语的巨大困难。
9. With the increase / growth of the population, …随着人口的增加, ……
With the advance of science and technology, …随着科技的进步, ……
With the rapid development of our economy, …随着我国经济的快速发展, ……
With the rapid development of our economy, people are getting richer and richer, and many can afford to buy their private cars. 随着我国经济的快速发展, 人民生活水平逐渐提高, 许多人买起了私人车。
10. In the age of information and communication, …plays an important role.在这信息年代, ……扮演重要的角色。
In the age of information and communication, the computer plays an extremely important role. 在这信息年代, 计算机扮演着非常重要的角色。
11. Nothing in the world can delight me so much as …世界上没有什么比……更令我高兴。
Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fast food restaurants. 世界上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡包更令我高兴。
12. It is necessary/ important /proper that S. (should) V. ……是必要的/重要的/适当的。
It is necessary that we master a foreign language.我们掌握一门外语是必要的。
13. It is said /thought /reported /believed (that)…据说/人们认为/
据报道/人们相信
It is believed that health is above wealth.人们相信健康重于财富。
15. The main reason why/for …is (that)………的主要原因是……
The main reason why he failed was that he didn't work hard.他失败的主要原因是他不努力。
16. To…, there are at least three things we can do.要…, 我们至少要做三件事。
To keep healthy, there are at least three things we can do every day. 要保持身体健康, 我们每天至少可做三件事
如何写好主题句呢？以下介绍7种方法：
模式1：直接回答要点写作要点是询问考生的看法时，对提问直接作出回答。
例1.：假如你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反应？
直接回答：假如我是野生动物园里的动物，当游客一直与我拍照，我会不开心。（2009广东高考读写任务要点2）
If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel unhappy when people keep taking photos with me.
例2：你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？
As for me, my ideal college life is wonderful/relaxing.
即学即练1：
1.假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？（13年广东高考读写任务要点2）
.Nobody could imagine what an bad environment we would live in if there were no cleaners.
There is no denying that what an bad environment we would live in if there were no cleaners.
2.上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师？（12年广东高考读写任务要点1）
This passage reminds me of my Chinese teacher, Mr. Li, who helped me a lot.
Of all the people I know, perhaps no one deserves my respect more than Miss Zhang, my English teacher.
模式2. 表明立场明确表示对某观点支持、赞同或反对。
例1: 你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。(2009年广东高考读写任务要点3)
I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned.
例2：你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。(2010年广东高考读写任务要点1)
I agree with the idea of using money to encourage kids to get good marks.
I disagree with the idea that people use money to
encourage kids to get good marks.
表示支持或赞同的句型：
I agree with the statement/idea that …
I am in favor of …
I appreciate the idea of
I agree with what the writer said/says.
表示反对或不赞同的句型：
I disagree with the idea that…
I am opposed to the idea that …
I disapprove of the idea that…
What the writer said sounds reasonable,but…
你怎样看待老师对学生的影响？（12年广东高考读写任务要点3）
From my own experience, I can safely draw a conclusion that a good teacher plays a
really important role in students' lives.
模式3. 重述要点不直接回答写作要点，而是翻译要点作为段落主题句。
例1：描述清洁工工作的艰辛。（13年广东高考读写任务要点1）There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is harder compared with any other jobs in the society.
例2：在生活中谅解他人有何重要意义.
From the story I learn that understanding and forgiving others plays an important role in our life.
2.要点：中学生活和大学生活的差别.
As we all know, the college life is widely different from the middle school life.
It goes without saying that there is a big difference between the college life and middle school life.
模式4. 总述原因
例:人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照(2009年广东高考)
When people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs with animals for the reasons as follow. First,…. Secondly,…. Thirdly,…
句型提示:
The reasons for this are obvious/various……的原因显而易见,/…的原因有多种
…for the reasons as follows …的原因如下The reason why…is that…
即学即练4
你支持青少年应该与父母分享秘密的理由是什么？
I think that teenagers' secrets should be shared with their parents for the reasons as follows.
It is necessary that teenagers should share their secrets with their parents for the reasons as follows.
引出经历用来引出记叙文的具体事例。
例1：讲述一次你（或你朋友）想家的经历。(11年高考) The story reminds me of my similar experience of being homesick .
例2：描述你或你的朋友在此灾难发生时的一次经历。(14年惠二调)
It reminds me of my own experience during the typhoon which hit my hometown several days ago.
常用句型：
It reminds me of my own experience when …
It reminds me of the time when…
It reminds me of an accident which happened several days ago.
After reading the story above, I recall the experience of my friend who…
The story above reminds me of one of my experiences.
Take my personal experience of...... for example.
即学即练5
写作要点：叙述一次你宽恕他人或被宽恕的经历；
It reminds me of my similar experience of being forgiven by others.
I would like to share my experience of being forgiven by others .
叙述你学英语的经历。
Take my personal experience of learning English for example.
模式6. 引出措施、方法、步骤、建议等
例1：你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的(2010年读写任务)
My parents often adopt some effective ways to encourage me to study hard.
例2：如何才能获得快乐？
I would like to share some advice/suggestions on how to make ourselves happy.
常用句型：
●We should take some effective measures to solve the problem.
●We should try our best to overcome the difficulties.
●We should solve the problems that we are faced with.
●It is necessary that proper action should be taken to end the phenomenon.
●I would like to share some advice/suggestions on.......
. 2010年读写任务: 要点(3)你认为政府应该怎样才能更好地解决住房问题？
.As far as I am concerned, the government should take action to solve the housing problem.
It is necessary that proper action should be taken to solve the housing problem.
说说人们对环境保护所采取的措施。
Luckily, people are taking more and more measures to protect the environment.
模式7.说出感受
例1：(07年高考题)以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：(1)读信后的感受；
I was deeply moved after I read your letter.
例2：(08年高考题)以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括：(1) 对中学生活的感受；
As for me, the middle school life is hard but meaningful and colorful as well.
relaxed（放松的）nervous（紧张的）happy ,pleased,glad, delighted （高兴的）
angry，annoyed（生气的）unhappy，sad（不开心的，不高兴的）Grateful ,thankful （感激的）worried，anxious（担心的，焦虑的）upset （烦心的，不安的）surprised, amazed，astonished（惊讶的）confident（自信十足的）frustrated （沮丧的）frightened, scared, afraid（害怕的）proud （自豪的）
determined （下定决心的）hopeful（充满希望的）hopeless （毫无希望的）
disappointed （失望的）moved(感动的)
你读这篇演讲稿的感受。(如：读完这篇讲稿，我为中国人感到自豪。) .After reading this speech, I felt really proud of Chinese people.
你希望与你的父母之间的关系是怎样的；6 mins
In my opinion，the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love，care and understanding，in which parents and children show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind，parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their parents and give voice to their feelings frankly.
你是怎样看待挫折的？ 5 mins
In my opinion, setbacks are harsh teachers, but the lessons we learn from them can be invaluable. When setbacks happen，we should be brave and stay optimistic.
对专门修一段仿造城墙让游客付高价留言的做法你是赞成还是反对，并简要陈述你的理由。6 mins
So personally I quite agree with this brilliant project though it has caused criticism from some people. The Great Wall would be ruined one day if we didn’t take any steps to protect it. The fake wall is a really good idea because it will protect our relics as well as making profits from the project.
当然，考生要得到一个满意的分数，还需在用词、句式、逻辑关
系等方面下功夫，做到用词地道，“洋气”十足，句式多样，错落有致，上下连贯，结构紧凑。
写作主题句
主题句的写作要求 1.完整的结构 Fragment: Teaching a child good manners. Complete: Teaching a child good manners is fun. / Teaching a child good manners is no easy task. (分别以这两句为主题句的段落，其发展方向肯定会不同。) Fragment: The importance of blood. Complete: Blood serves our body in three important ways. 2.明确的观点 Unclear: I know Smith. Clear: Smith has a good sense of humor. Smith is the meanest man I ever know. Unclear: People care about sports. /Sports influence our life. Clear: Sports can keep people healthy and strong. Sports benefit us in many ways. Sports have their negative aspects. Sports sometimes can do some harm to people. 3.具体的内容 General: Electricity is important. Specific: Electricity has become an essential part of modern life. /If there were no electric power, our modern world would be in trouble. 练习： I 选出与下列主题句不符的扩展句： 1.. The sense of humor is mysteriously bound up with national characteristics. A Frenchman, for instance, might find it hard to laugh at a Russian joke. In the same way, a Russian might fail to see anything amusing in a joke which would make an Englishman laugh to tears. A. There are always different jokes. B. My brother often makes jokes. C. Jokes, despite their differences, have the same humor. D. Whether we find a joke funny or not depends on where we have been brought up. 2.. Retirement gives one a feeling of uselessness. Such a psychological problem often brings physical problems. It is the feeling of emptiness that gradually kills the retired. With retirement there will be a decrease in income. Unless they plan carefully, the retired will get into economic problems. A. The retired are a problem of our society. B. People should not retire until unable to work. C. Retirement can bring many problems for the retired.
作文主题句训练
写作框架训练 好的作文离不开好的框架，为此，我们专门开辟此区供学生练习搭建作文的框架。考生不必写出完整的作文，应先着重锻炼审题能力，根据所给的作文题目搭出作文的大体架构。每个练习的审题时间最好控制在2分钟之内。 练习一 Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading selectively or extensively?You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline.(given in Chinese )below 1．有人认为读书要有选择； 2．有人认为要博览群书； 3．我的看法。 练习二 Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Advantages of Job Interview .You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline.(given in Chinese )below 1．现在找工作一般都要面试，面试者和应试者可以互相了解； 2．面试者可以向应试者介绍情况，如工作性质、条件、待遇等； 3．应试者可通过自我介绍给对方留下最初的印象，如介绍教育背景，工作能力等来表现自信。 练习三 Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic To Be Busy or To Be Idle .You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline.(given in Chinese )below 1．有人认为忙点好，可以让生活充实； 2．有人喜欢悠闲，认为会休息才会工作； 3．你的观点 练习四 Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Teenage Smoking Soars You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline.(given in Chinese )below 1．现在吸烟的青年人越来越多； 2．分析造成这种现象的原因； 3．你的建议。 练习五 Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline. (Given in Chinese) below 1．面试在求职中的作用； 2．取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是--- 参考答案
英语写作技巧学习：主题句
英语写作技巧学习：主题句 I. 用于文章主题句 1. ……是不可能的，无法…… There is no Ving =There is no way of Ving. =There is no possibility of Ving. =It is impossible to V. =It is out of the question to V. =No one can V. =We cannot V. 例：不可否认，成功的事业关键在于健康的身心。 There is not denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind. 2. 不用说... It goes without saying that 子句 =(It is) needless to say (that)子句 =It is obvious that 子句 =Obviously, S. + V. 例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。 It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours. 3. 我深信…… I am greatly convinced (that)子句 =I am greatly assured (that)子句
例：我深信预防是于治疗。 I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure. 4. 在各种……之中 Among various kinds of ..., ... =Of all the ..., ... 例：在各种运动中?我尤其喜欢慢跑。 Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular. 5. ……是很容易证明的 It can be easily proved (that)子句 例：时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。 It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time. 6. ……无论如何强调都不为过 ... cannot be overemphasized 例：交通安全的重要性无论如何强调都不为过。 The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized. 7. ……就我的看法……;我认为…… In my opinion, ... =To my mind, .... = As far as I am concerned, .
英语写作之主题句
Definition of Topic Sentence ★ 1866 年,Alexander Bain 首次提出英语段落主题句的概念为“a collection of sentences with unity of purpose” ,即主题句统领段落的主题,决定了段落的一致性。 ★根据Brooks and Warren ,主题句是“a kind of backbone ,a spine ,which supports the body of the paragraph and around which t he rest of the structure is formed” ★一般说来,为了保证段落的统一性,每个段落应有个中心思想(central idea) ,这是写作者要表述的主题思想。在大多数情况下段落的中心思想是由主题句表述的。起提纲挈领的作用。 ★在对语言的掌握得心应手的作者手中,主题句可以应用自如,不用主题句也可以使段落中所有的句子统一、连贯,中心思想突出、明了。但是“In the hands of the less experienced writer ,this controlling idea had better be expressed in the first sentence. ” Composition of Topic Sentence ◇主题句一般由两部分构成: ( 1) 主题( Subject)和( 2) 关于该主题的观点或态度。也就是说, 一个恰当的主题句不仅讲述某一主题, 同时还应阐明作者对该主题的看法或者态度, 而这种看法就决定了什么内容可以放在该段中。所以, 有的修辞学家也把主题句称作“支配性思想”。 ◇例如:( 1 ) Smoking cigar ettes can be an expensivehabit.该句作为一个段落的主题句, 由两部分组成:“Smoking cigaret tes”是主题, 而“an ex pensive habit”则表明作者对该主题的看法或态度, 这种看法决定了只有与“吸烟浪费钱”有关的内容才能放在围绕该主题句展开的段落中。而吸烟引起的其它问题, 比如危害健康或污染环境, 则不能放进去。 The Place of Topic Sentence ◎人们一般认为, 主题句可以放在段首、段中、段未, 甚至可以隐含在文中。这种观点实际上缺乏对主题句重要性的认识。 ◎根据Wesbster 's New World Dictionary 的定义, 主题句是“一个段落或篇章一部分的主要句子, 提出( 段落的) 主要思想, 通常位于段首, 尤其适用于说明文体”。 ◎根据对美国出版的Reader's Dig est 和T imes 的两本期刊中的100 篇短文的调查，其中仅有2 篇短文主题句较为模糊, 而68 篇的主题句位于段/ 文首, 其余30 篇已经将段落的主题句升格为小标题。由此可见, 主题句在英文段落和篇章写作中占有相当重要的地位。 Characteristics of Topic Sentence ⊙一个好的主题句应该具备三个主要特征, 或者说有三个功能. [1] 对文章走向的前瞻性。 [2]对文章结构的支配性, [3] 对作者的制约性。 ⊙前瞻性(predict) 好的主题句应能前瞻文章总的走向是否有前途,并暗示作者应提供什么样的细节、论据、事例等以对主题加以展开或者论证。如果主题句为:Horses are bigger than rabbits. 马比免的个儿大, 显然是毫无前途的, 因为任何读者都是不会对这个连三岁小孩都明白的道理感兴趣的。而且, 除了孤零零的主题句外, 作者还能写什么呢?当然,这只是个非常极端的例子, 借以说明类似的主题句只能使文章走进死胡同。 ⊙下面再举几例主题句 In our country, pop stars are greatly admired. Automobile accidents cause many injuries and deaths. College students in dorms are restricted by hours regulations.
任务型写作指导与训练.doc
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