高考英语二轮复习 专题五 书面表达 第二讲 专题强化训练
高考英语江苏专版二轮专题复习三维课件:增分篇+专题五+书面表达+第二节+第一讲+如何避免常见错

第二类 语法类错误
1.时态错误 误:In the morning, we had bicycled in the suburbs to plant trees. 正:In the morning, we bicycled in the suburbs to plant trees.
2.语态错误 误:Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 正:Children who are raised in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 3.主谓一致错误 误:My hobby is widespread, which include drawing, collecting stamps and so on. 正:My hobby is widespread, which includes drawing, collecting stamps and so on.
5.动宾搭配不当 误:They are trying their best to improve their production. 正:They are trying their best to increase their production. 6.形容词和名词搭配不当 误:We walked a far way before planting trees. 正:We walked a long way before planting trees.
高考英语二轮专题复习:书面表达训练建议信PPT

friendship. ❖ (变换多种句式,增加闪光点)
高考英语二轮专题复习:书面表达训 练(建 议信) (25张P PT)
高考英语二轮专题复习:书面表达训 练(建 议信) (25张P PT)
❖ Dear Li Ming, ❖ I am glad to learn that you are studying in a new
高考英语二轮专题复习:书面表达训 练(建 议信) (25张P PT)
表达建议常用句式:
1. If I were you, I would …… 2. As far as I am concerned, …… / In my
opinion …… 3. Why not ……? 4. It would be a good idea if …… 5. In the first place / Firstly / First …… Secondly
高考英语二轮专题复习:书面表达训 练(建 议信) (25张P PT)
高考英语二轮专题复习:书面表达训 练(建 议信) (25张P PT)
❖ Do not worry if you have no real friends right now. Although you are not an outgoing boy and have different life experiences from your present classmates, it is not impossible to make good friends as long as you take the following tips.
❖ First of all, you can make friends with others if you can share their joys and sorrows.
2020版高考英语二轮复习专题强化练(五)(含解析)

专题强化练(五) 阅读七选五Passage 1(2019·山东临沂高三模拟)The man who could see the futureThe ability to predict the future is a rare talent.American author Isaac Asimov (1920—1992), one of the great science fiction writers of his age, had such a talent.____1__Now that we're here, let's see what he got right.____2__ Asimov thought computers would cause a revolution comparable to the industrial revolution of the 19th century. Specifically, he said that “mobile computerized objects” would be an important part of everyday life.Here, he clearly predicted our world of smartphones, tables and other devices.He also had a great deal to say about space exploration.____3__How did Asimov develop his special sense of future developments?__4__ He read the newspapers and magazines sold in his parents' candy store.His scientific interest gained sharper focus at Columbia University in New York.Asimov went to study chemistry, but became bored with pure laboratory science.Instead, he thought hard about the social implications(作用) of science.He wanted to communicate his ideas to the public.__5__ Asimov had his finger on the pulse(脉搏)of both scientific and social change.He had a clear vision of what was coming around the corner for humanity in his works like the Galactic Empire series(《银河帝国系列》).“His predictions are absolutely fascinating,”Calum Chase, an English writer, told BBC News.“He was a genius.”A.As a smart boy, Asimov taught himself to read at the age of five.B.Space exploration really can make our life more convenient and comfortable.C.Back in 1983, he was asked to predict what the world would look like in 2019.D.On the role that computing would play in the future, he was amazingly accurate.E.Asimov has developed a great interest in computer programming since childhood.F.As an author, his books would feature the theme of social change caused by technology.G.The International Space Station proves his prediction that we would not simply visit space but seek to stay there.【语篇解读】这是一篇说明文。
2019年高考英语天津专版二轮复习文档:专题五 书面表达 第二节

第二节 方法运用于命题一、提纲类作文 (2017·天津)假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师MrsGreen一直保持联系。
近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);(3)希望她有机会重访天津。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:第十三届全运会the13thNationalGames法宝1 “五审”定调子(1)体裁:告知类应用文,注意告知类邮件的格式;(2)人称:以第一人称为主;(3)时态:以一般现在时和一般将来时为主;(4)要点:介绍学习和生活;成为志愿者;邀请重访天津;(5)层次:分为四段:第一、二段问候并介绍自己的学习和生活以及成为在津举办的全运会的志愿者;第三段邀请外籍教师重访天津;第四段为结束语。
法宝2 “韵色”得高分该文除简单句外,还可使用并列句、省略句及复合句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句),做到句式多样。
法宝3 黄金“三步曲”1.遣词hear from sb./tell sb.sth.about.../in detail/to begin with/be around the corner/be busy doing sth./prepare for/volunteer/be held at.../in order to/spend/in the library/no doubt/enhance/invite/appreciate2.造句(1)I’msogladtohearfromyou.(2)Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyselfindetail.(3)ThefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecornersoIambusypreparingforit.(4)Ihavealreadybeenavolunteerforthe13thNationalGames.(5)ItwillbeheldattheendofAugustinTianjin.(6)InordertoexpandmyknowledgeofTianjin,IspendeverysparemomentIhaveinthelibrary.(7)ThereisnodoubtthatIwillenhanceitsreputationthroughmyefforts.(8)I’llappreciateitifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.3.成篇DearMrsGreen,I’msogladtohearfromyou.Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyselfindetail.Tobeginwith,thefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecornersoIambusypreparingforit.W hatIwanttostressisthatIhavealreadybeenavolunteerforthe13thNationalGameswhichwil lbeheldattheendofAugustinTianjin.InordertoexpandmyknowledgeofTianjin,suchasits history,traditionandfood,IspendeverysparemomentIhaveinthelibrary.ThereisnodoubtthatIwillenhanceitsreputationthroughmyefforts.Isincerelyinvit eyoutocomehereagain.I’llappreciateitifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Yours,LiJin (2016·天津)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。
2020新课标高考英语二轮专题强化训练:专题五书面表达 层级二 第一讲 靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达

层级二低档作文如何升级为五档作文,策略告诉你书面表达得分较低的学生的写作特点:1.只使用简单的词或短语; 2.句式单一,单句较多;3.缺乏承上启下的词语和句子;4.不会使用从句;5.不会正确运用谓语动词或短语;6.不会使用倒装和强调句型。
高考书面表达侧重考查考生的语言运用能力,这就要求考生能够正确运用高级的词汇和语法结构并能够熟练运用句与句之间的连接成分以使行文流畅。
因此,平时的写作训练中,要学会恰当地运用高级句式和过渡语,使文章“闪亮登场”。
第一讲靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达英语书面表达第五档作文中提到:语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。
换句话说,如果考生使用高级词汇或句型,即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误,也可不扣分,文章还是属于最高档次。
因此,为了让文章档次高,首先要学会使用高级词汇。
高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感。
它会大大提升文章的档次,从而帮助考生获得高分。
要做到准确使用高级词汇,应该注意以下几个方面:一、使用亮点词汇的4种策略[策略1]“语”众不同,避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
①(2019·北京卷书面表达)I’m very glad to know that you’re coming to tour in China.→I’m more than delighted to know that you’re coming to tour in China.②(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)I hope you can consider my application and allow me to be a volunteer.→I hope you can take my application into consideration and allow me to be a volunteer.③(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)So I can serve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery and I am sure that I am fit for the job.→So I can serve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery and I am convinced thatI am qualified for the job.④(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)As a result, enough preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.→As a consequence, adequate preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.⑤(2019·天津卷书面表达)I want to make my voice heard.→I feel an urge to make my voice heard.⑥Only when you do more reading and writing can you succeed in improving your English.→Only when you do more reading and writing can you make it in improving your English.⑦To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and appealing, but our school life is also richand colorful.→To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and attractive, but our school life is also rich and colorful.⑧(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Great changes have taken place in our school in the last few years. And the news came that a short film will be shown in our school.→Our school has witnessed great changes in the last few years. And word came that a short film will be shown in our school.[策略2]更新换代,避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语,要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。
山东省高考英语二轮复习 题型技法指导专题专题五 书面表达

题型技法指导专题五书面表达真题试做(2012山东高考)假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。
校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上,介绍你课外学习英语的经验。
请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文:1.参加英语角的益处;2.坚持写英语日记的作用;3.英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)对你的帮助。
注意:1.词数:120~150;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 考向分析年份提示方式文章体裁写作内容字数要求基本要点2008 文字提纲应用文—书信给新转来同学写信,提出建议解决无法融入新集体的问题。
120~150 32009 文字提纲应用文—书信写信寻求老师联系方式和邀请同学来华,感知中国文化。
120~150 32010 文字提纲应用文—电子邮件写邮件为爽约表示歉意,解释原因,再约时间见面。
120~150 32011 文字提纲应用文—电子邮件写邮件询问对方情况,提出自己的困难并请求帮忙。
120~150 32012 文字提纲应用文—稿件给英文版面写稿件,介绍你课外学习英语的经验。
2020版高考二轮复习专题五书面表达层级三第二讲读后续写专题强化训练(英语 解析版)
A阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
He met her at a party.She was so outstanding, with many boys around her, while he was so ordinary, with nobody paying attention to him.At the end of the party, he invited her to have coffee with him.She was surprised, but out of politeness, she agreed.They sat in a nice coffee shop.He was too nervous to say anything, and she felt uncomfortable,__thinking, “Please let me go home.”Suddenly he asked the waiter, “Would you please give me some salt? I’d like to put it in my co ffee.”Everybody stared at him.So strange! His face turned red, but, still, he put the salt in his coffee and drank it.She asked him curiously, “Why do you have this hobby?”He replied,__“When I was a little boy, I was living near the sea.I liked playing in the sea, and I could feel the taste of the sea, just like the taste of the__salty__coffee. Now every__time I have the salty coffee, I always think of my childhood. I miss so much my hometown and my parents who are still living there.”While saying that he couldn’t hold back his tears.She was deeply touched.That’s his true feeling, from the bottom of his heart.A man who can speak out his homesickness must be a man who loves home, cares about home, and has responsibility for his family.Then she also started to speak about her faraway hometown, her childhood, and her family.That was a really nice talk, also a beautiful beginning of their story.They continued to date. She found that actually he was a man who met all her demands: he was kindhearted,__warm and careful.He was such a good person but she almost missed him!Thanks to his salty coffee!Then the story went on just like every beautiful love story: the princess married the prince, and then they were living in happiness...And, every time she made coffee for him, she put some salt in the coffee.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2023届高考二轮总复习试题英语(适用于老高考旧教材)专题五短文改错题组练(二)
题组练(二)Passage1(2022黑龙江齐齐哈尔一模)My schedule is tight than ever because I’m in a final year of high school.However,I still manage to do what I can help my parents with the housework.I’ve gotten into the habit of washing dishes after dinner when I turned ninth.I also do thing like washing and folding clothes.I even begin to cook for my family last month.I find that doing housework with my parents is extreme fun and rewarding.We can chat with and sometimes even sing together!Doing housework with them also let me learn to take responsibility at home and,in the long term,in society.Passage2(2022安徽安庆二模)I love doing handwork.Three days ago,I visit my uncle’s small factory what produced Chinese traditional carpets.I found it hard and more dangerous than I had thought.Workers used knives,scissors and other tool.With my uncle’s permission,I gave it try.When I did it,the knife was very much close to my hand,so I had to be carefully.I did the same thing again and again.But it took me a lot of patience.It’s easier said than did.I think my uncle is great and she is my good example.Passage3(2022四川绵阳三模)My mother is always my role st Sunday,I find that she put some food into the bag and went out with it.I followed her and saw her gave the food to the street children.One of my neighbor told me that my mother was very kind to these children,but they even regarded her as their own mother.When we returned to home,I talked to my mother about it.She shared me some sad stories about those poor children.For much years,she helped those children by giving their food and care.I was deep moved and was proud of my mother.Passage4(2022广西南宁二模)Last week,I chosen to compete in an English-speaking contest by my school.I worked very hard and unfortunately I was beaten in the final.I felt discouraging and even lost confidence in my English study.But my English teachers always cheers me up and encourages her.She helps me where I am in trouble.Now,I know,there is no reason to feel guilty.In fact,I should feel really proud of represent my school.In addition to,I shouldn’t attach so much importance to winning.As the saying goes,“It is not the winning,but the taking part that count.” It’s impossible to win all the time and everyone must learn to accept failure peaceful.Passage5(2022陕西榆林三模)Dear Peter,I’m gladly to receive your letter where you asked me about my school rules.Here I’ll tell you something about it.There are several rules to obey there,including wearing school uniforms daily,attending and leaving school on times,and not carrying cellphones.These rules are so important we are extremely careful to follow them.Who breaks them will be have punished to do extra cleaning for a week.We all knew these rules are set up to help us forming good habits and improve our self-awareness.How do you find the rules?Looking forward to hear from you.Yours,Li Hua题组练(二)Passage1第一句:tight→tighter解析考查比较级。
2021届新高考英语二轮复习教学案:专题五书面表达(共4节)含解析
试卷年份体裁话题题材内容命题趋势全国卷Ⅰ2020 记叙文身边的人值得尊敬和爱戴的人 1.选题特点:以应用文为主,选材内容均与学生学习及生活密切相关。
重视加强对考生体育、美育及“劳动光荣”观念的引导。
2.命题形式:较为稳定。
提纲类写作成为主流,提示内容为汉语,表达简洁。
3.最新变化:2020全国卷Ⅰ,Ⅱ都摒弃了传统的书信体,采用了记叙文,Ⅰ卷记人,Ⅱ卷叙事,且都给出了写作题目。
2019 申请信社会实践当志愿者2018 回复邮件文化礼仪做客习俗全国卷Ⅱ2020 记叙文文体活动介绍采摘活动2019 电子邮件文体活动排球比赛安排2018 书面通知学校生活观看英语短片全国卷Ⅲ2020 求助信文体活动请外教指导短剧改编2019 邀请信文体活动校园音乐节2018 介绍信文体活动校园体育第五档21~25分完全完成了试题规定的任务。
覆盖所有内容要点。
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
(一)如何理解“覆盖所有内容要点”就是要求考生在写作时要认真审题,确保要点“全而不漏”,要点全面是作文得高分的必要条件。
(二)如何理解“应用了较多的词汇”是指词汇使用的多样性,如词性的多样性、高级词汇的使用、同义词与反义词的使用、短语的使用等。
(三)如何理解“应用了较多的语法结构”“较多的语法结构”就是指句式结构的多样性。
毋庸置疑,单调的句式和结构、长度相近的句子会使文章呆板单调,缺乏生气和活力,而灵活多变的句式则使行文丰富多彩、生动、自然、流畅。
感叹句、倒装句、复合结构、强调句型、定语从句、非谓语动词短语等语法结构的正确使用,可以使文章的语言充满层次感,从而较好地反映出作者的语言运用能力。
(四)如何理解“上下文的连贯性”评分标准指出,书面表达应能“有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑”。
新教材2024届高考英语二轮专项分层特训卷第一部分专题强化练专题二阅读七选五强化训练十五逻辑推断法
强化训练十五逻辑推断法(A)In 2013, digital media consultant Baratunde Thurston launched an experiment. He decided to disconnect from his online life for twentyfive days: no Facebook, no Twitter, not even email. He needed the break. __1__It didn't take him long to adjust to a disconnected life. By the end of that first week, he was less stressed about not knowing new things. __2__ He enjoyed food without Twittering the experience. But the end came too soon. After the twentyfive days, he had to restore his online presence.His experiment summarizes two important points about our relationship with social networks like Facebook and Twitter. The first point is that we increasingly recognize that these tools fragment (碎裂) our time and reduce our ability to concentrate. __3__ But the problem is especially serious if you're attempting to improve your ability to work deeply.To fight back against these distractions, Thurston felt his only option was to quit the Internet altogether. But the problem is that no one is meant to actually follow Thurston's lead.__4__ That is to accept our current distracted state as unavoidable. This brings me to the second point summarized by Thurston's story: it didn't take him long once the experiment ended to slide back into the fragmented state where he began.This rule proposes a third option: accepting that these tools might be vital to your success and happiness, but meanwhile accepting that most people should be using fewer such tools. I won't ask you, in other words, to quit the Internet altogether like Thurston did. __5__ There is a middle ground, and if you're to develop a deep work habit, you must fight to get there.A.He struck up conversations with strangers.B.It is a real problem for many different people.C.“I was burnt out, fried, and done,” he explained.D.This reality accounts for the remaining alternative.E.He had to return to the online world with books to market.F.But I'll ask you to reject the state of highly distracted connectedness.G.Fortunately, you will break the habit of surfing the Internet gradually.[答题区]1.________ 2.________ 3.________ 4.________ 5.________(B)Want a relaxing but fun challenge at home? __1__ Puzzles have been around for more than 250 years and the challenge of working out where each piece goes and carefully recreating the scene on the box lid can keep you busy for hours, days or even weeks.Puzzles come in a huge range of sizes and difficulty levels. For beginners, a 100piece puzzle is usually a good starting point. __2__ Try grouping pieces with the same colours or designs because they will probably go in the same area oncethe puzzle takes shape.__3__ Those pieces are easier to find because they have a straightside. Stay patient as you search through and try to make it fit together. You maynot find any connecting pieces for ages but then several may suddenly appear.For a real test, puzzles that have 1,000 pieces or more are a tough taskand it's best to complete them with friends or family if you can. Choosing a scenethat interests you, such as a favourite film, sport or location, can help keep you interested and determined to work to the final piece. You can get fun educational puzzles, too. __4__Some of the best places to pick up puzzles are charity shops. They're oftenon sale for less than $5. Once you have completed a puzzle, it's nice to exchangeit with a friend. __5__ You just upload an image, such as a familyscene, and they will make a puzzle from it and post it to you. It makes a lovelyand unusual present.A.So others can have a go.B.You can't beat a good puzzle.C.Some companies make personalised puzzles.D.However, a good start doesn't always lead to a good result.E.Most people like to start by getting the four edges of a puzzle laid out.F.It can get you used to sorting out how the shapes, patterns and coloursgo together.G.For example, you may try a map of the world, historical timelines or theperiodic table.[答题区]1.________ 2.________ 3.________ 4.________ 5.________(C)The arrival of autumn has left me charmed once again by its generous harvestof pomegranates (石榴). While pomegranate juice had always been a favourite of mine,for a long time, I couldn't say the same for the actual fruit. __1__ How couldanyone possibly take pleasure in eating that? But by chance, I changed my mind.A handful of small pomegranate trees grow just outside the gate of myhusband's family home in rural Zhejiang. __2__ So one autumn, mymotherinlaw gave me and my husband a bag filled with pomegranates she had pickedherself.At first, I rejected the seemingly burdensome pile of fruit on ourdinner table. __3__ He continued to bite on pomegranates and offerme a taste of the seeds, and eventually curiosity won. I popped a handful in my mouth,and found myself surprised in the best possible way.The seeds were filled with that familiar rich and sweet flavour. __4__ Moreover, it was superior to anything I had encountered in liquid form. Later,I'm always fascinated to discover the many locales in China also touched by the sweet pleasures of the pomegranate.__5__ At that time in my life, moving around left me toomuch stress, which usually left me with the discomfort of a nervous stomach. Butamong the many health benefits of the pomegranate is that it can naturally improve digestion. Regular consumption of the fruit had comforted my gut (肠道) so much. If you've yet to be addicted to the delights of the pomegranate, it's not too late to try.A.One taste turned me into a lifelong fan just like that.B.I had thought it's a bunch of soft and juicy little seeds.C.The branches are overhanging with the fruit every fall.D.My husband still attempted to persuade me to take a bite.E.It's the season's finest freshlysqueezed juice from the fruit.F.The healing properties of the fruit I experienced added to its charm.G.That was the same taste I had come to treasure about pomegranate juice.[答题区]1.________ 2.________ 3.________ 4.________ 5.________强化训练十五逻辑推断法(A)【语篇解读】本文是一篇说明文。
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读后续写(一)(建议用时:每篇25分钟)A阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
He met her at a party.She was so outstanding, with many boys around her, while he was so ordinary, with nobody paying attention to him.At the end of the party, he invited her to have coffee with him.She was surprised, but out of politeness, she agreed.They sat in a nice coffee shop.He was too nervous to say anything, and she felt uncomfortable,__thinking, “Please let me go home.”Suddenly he asked the waiter, “Would you please give me some salt? I’d like to put it in my coffee.”Everybody stared at him.So strange! His face turned red, but, still, he put the salt in his coffee and drank it.She asked him curiously, “Why do you have this hobby?”He replied,__“When I was a little boy, I was living near the sea.I liked playing in the sea, and I could feel the taste of the sea, just like the taste of the__salty__coffee. Now every__time I have the salty coffee, I always think of my childhood. I miss so much my hometown and my parents who are still living there.”While saying that he couldn’t hold back his tears.She was deeply touched.That’s his true feeling, from the bottom of his heart.A man who can speak out his homesickness must be a man who loves home, cares about home, and has responsibility for his family.Then she also started to speak about her faraway hometown, her childhood, and her family.That was a really nice talk, also a beautiful beginning of their story.They continued to date. She found that actually he was a man who met all her demands: he was kind-hearted,__warm and careful.He was such a good person but she almost missed him!Thanks to his salty coffee!Then the story went on just like every beautiful love story: the princess married the prince, and then they were living in happiness...And, every time she made coffee for him, she put some salt in the coffee.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:After 40 years, he passed a w ay, lea v ing her a letter.____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:Learning the truth w hile reading the letter,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ One possible version:Paragraph 1:After 40 years, he passed a w ay, lea v ing her a letter. It said, “My dearest, please forgive my only lie I told you—the__salty__coffee.Remember the first time we dated? I was so nervous that I said salt.Actually I wanted some sugar.” He said many times he wanted to tell her the truth, but he was afraid of losing her.He also told her having her with him was his biggest happiness in his life.If he could live for a second time, he still wanted to marry her.Paragraph 2:Learning the truth w hile reading the letter, she wept, with tears down her face, making the paper totally wet.Never had she doubted it.Thinking that every__time he drank the strange taste of coffee, her heart ached a lot.Her husband was such a kindhearted and considerate man that he hid the truth for his whole life.How deeply he loved her! Someday, someone asked her, “What’s the taste of salty coffee?”“It’s sweet,”she replied.B阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
In 2004, my husband, Joe and I worked in a design company in Arizona.One day, when we got back home after work, my tenyearold daughter Becky, and Joe were united in their desire for a dog.As for me, I shared none of theirs.“But why,”they pleaded(恳求).“Because I don’t have time to take__care__of a dog.”“But we’ll do it.”“Really? You’re going to walk the dog? Feed the dog? Bathe the dog?”“Yes, yes, and yes.”“I don’t believe you.”“We will.We promise.”They didn’t. They wanted to walk the cute dog that first day.From day two, neither of them thought to walk the dog.While I was slow to accept that I would be the one to keep track of her shots, to feed and clean her, Misty knew this on day one.As she looked up at the three newhumans in her life, she calculated,“The medium one is the most reliable.”Quickly, she and I developed something very similar to a Vulcan mind meld(心灵相通).She’d look at me with those sad brown eyes of hers, send her need, and then wait, trusting I would understand—which, strangely, I almost always did. In no time, she would extend across my stomach as I watched television, and snored on my homeoffice couch as I worked on my design.Even so, part of me continued to reject walking duty. Joe and Becky had promised.“Not fair,”I said to myself as she and I walked.“Not fair,”I’d loudly remind anyone within earshot upon our return home.In September, 2008, the Great Depression hit Arizona.With that, my husband and I were both laid off overnight.During the following six months, Joe and I hurriedly rushed here and there to seek a new job, doing anything and everything we could to request employment.Every part of my life changed;__no part of my old routine remained.However, Misty still needed walking.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。