八九年级英语作文比赛范文及评分标准
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ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้15
满分档(15分)：文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、结构规范、条理清楚、逻辑严密，词汇丰富、没有任何语法错误。
第五档(12—14分)：文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、结构规范、条理清楚、逻辑严密，词汇丰富、没有少量语法错误。
第四档(9—11分)：文本长度符合要求、书写规范，基本涵盖要点、行文基本连贯，词汇不够丰富、有一些语法错误。
First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life.If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends ,don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself.Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence.Sometimes the one who beats you is not others,but yourself.And smile can also keep you healthy.
第三档(6—8分)：文本长度与要求有明显距离、书写不规范，要点不完整、行文不连贯，词汇量不足错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。
第二档(3—5分)：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。
第一档(0—2分)：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of which is“Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile.
Second,learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people.Smiling at others makes you happy as well.
In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people.Live with a smile,and every day will be shiny.
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ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้15
满分档(15分)：文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、结构规范、条理清楚、逻辑严密，词汇丰富、没有任何语法错误。
第五档(12—14分)：文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、结构规范、条理清楚、逻辑严密，词汇丰富、没有少量语法错误。
第四档(9—11分)：文本长度符合要求、书写规范，基本涵盖要点、行文基本连贯，词汇不够丰富、有一些语法错误。
First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life.If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends ,don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself.Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence.Sometimes the one who beats you is not others,but yourself.And smile can also keep you healthy.
第三档(6—8分)：文本长度与要求有明显距离、书写不规范，要点不完整、行文不连贯，词汇量不足错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。
第二档(3—5分)：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。
第一档(0—2分)：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of which is“Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile.
Second,learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people.Smiling at others makes you happy as well.
In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people.Live with a smile,and every day will be shiny.