丁往道英语写作手册范本
丁往道 英语写作手册 Part One Manuscript Form
Part One Manuscript FormAs you are learning to write, you should have a clear idea of what is good manuscript form. You should do everything —writing the title, leaving margins, indenting, capitalizing, and dividing words—according to generally accepted rules. Whenever you write something, work carefully, write neatly and clearly, and try to make as few mistakes as possible. Before handing in your essay or exercise, proofread it once or twice, because you may need to make some final corrections and changes. If you always work in this way, you are sure to make progress.I. ArrangementEither lined exercise books or regular office paper (size 19×27 centimeters) may be used. To make your handwriting easy to read and provide room for corrections, you had better write on every other line, and write on only one side of the paper if it is thin.Leave a margin on each side of the paper—about two centimeters at the top and a centimeter and a half at the left, the right and the bottom. In an exercise book the top and bottom margins are already there, so you need only to draw a vertical line to mark the left margin.You cannot make the right margin very straight, but you must not write to the edge of the paper. When there is not enough space left for a word, write it on the next line if it cannot be divided. In other words, there must be some blank space on the right side of the paper.Write the title in the middle of the first line. Capitalize the first and last words of the title and all other words (including words following hyphens in compound words) except articles, coordinating conjunctions (and, or, but, nor, for), prepositions, and the to in infinitives.My First Visit to the Palace MuseumThe People without a CountryRules to Abide ByDickens and David CopperfieldWhat Can the Artist Do in the World of Today?What Reform Means to ChinaThe Myth of a “Negro Literature”The English-Speaking People in QuebecNo period is used at the end of a title. Use a question mark if the title is direct question, but do not use one if it is an indirect question. Use quotation marks with quotes or titles of articles; and underline (or italicize if you use a computer) names of books.Indent the first line of every paragraph, leaving a space of about four or five letters.For paging use Arabic numerals without parentheses or periods in the upper right-hand corner of all pages. The first page need not be marked.Do not begin a line with a comma, a period, a semicolon, a colon, aquestion mark or an exclamation mark. Do not end a line with the first half of a pair of brackets, parentheses, or quotation marks. The hyphen that indicates a divided word is put at the end, not at the beginning of a line.II. CapitalizationCapitals are used mainly at three places: the first words of sentences, key words in titles, and proper names.Not only a complete sentence, but a sentence fragment treated as a sentence, should begin with a capital letter.The first word of quoted speech (words put between quotation marks) is capitalized. If a quoted sentence is broken into two parts and put in two pairs of quotation marks, the second part does not begin with a capital letter unless the first word is a proper noun or an adjective derived from a proper noun:He said, “My trip to Mount Tai was interesting but tiring.”“My trip to Mount Tai,” he said, “was interesting but tiring.”I asked, “ When do you usually go home?”She answered, “At weekends.”Common nouns that are parts of proper names are capitalized:Common Nouns Proper Namesa famous university Peking Universitya broad street Chang’an Streeta large lake Lake Eriethe president of the university President Brownmiddle, age the Middle Ageslabor, day Labor Daypeople, republic the People’s Republic of China Words derived from proper names are usually capitalized:Marxist Darwinism HegelianConfucian Latinize VietnamizeBut proper names or their derivatives may become common nouns, verbs or adjectives:mackintosh (after Charles Mackintosh, a Scottish chemist)chauvinistic (derived from Nicolas Chauvin, a devoted adherent of Napoleon)quixotic(after Don Quixote, hero of the novel of the same name)anglicize(from the Latin word Anglicus, meaning English)III. Word DivisionWhen you write near the edge of the paper, take a look at the space left. If it is not enough for the word you are going to write, you have to decide whether to divide the word or to write it on the next line. Never squeeze a word into the margin.The general principle is to divide a word according to its syllables and never put the hyphen at the beginning of a line. Pay attention to thefollowing:One-syllable words like through, march, brain and pushed cannot be divided.Do not write one letter of a word at the end or at the beginning of a line, even if that one letter makes up a syllable, such as a•line, trick•y.Do not put a two-letter syllable at the beginning of a line, like hat•ed, cab•in.Avoid separating proper names of people or places, like Chi•na, Aus•tin.Divide hyphenated words only at the hyphen: father-in-law, empty-handed.Do not divide words in a way that may mislead the reader: pea•cock, re•ally.Do not divide the last word on a page. Instead, write the whole word on the next page.Divide words with prefixes or suffixes between the prefix or suffix and the base part of the word: re•state•ment, u n•relent•ing.Divide two-syllable words with double consonants between the two consonants: strug•gle, shat•ter.Dividing words is not always easy. When in doubt, consult a dictionary.IV. PunctuationHow to use different punctuation marks will be discussed in detail in Part Ten. The following are a few basic rules which all students learning to write should remember:Use a period (full stop) at the end of a complete sentence, however short it is.Do not use a comma to join two coordinate clauses; use a comma and a conjunction, or a semicolon.Make your commas different from your periods. A comma has a little tail (,); a period is a dot (.), not a tiny circle (。
丁往道《英语写作手册(中文版)》考研真题详解(命题作文)【圣才出品】
◆命题作文<社会热点类>题1 [四川师范大学2015研]In September 2014, the Chinese e-commerce giant Alibaba’s flotation in the US has caused a stir in the work. Undoubtedly, Ma Yun becomes the center of attention in public again. What do you know about Ma Yun and what inspiration you’ve gained from his life ex perience and success? Write an essay of about 400 words on the topic. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.【参考范文】The Unstoppable Power of PersistenceIn last September, Alibaba, a counterpart to eBay or Amazon in China, floated on the stock market with a value of £140 billion approximately. With such a record-breaking IPO, Ma Yun, the founder of this prosperous company, has become the centre of public discussion again. From my perspective, it is his persistence in chasing his dreams that impresses me most.Throughout his life, Ma Yun himself admitted that he had experienced rejections for many times, including less good performance in entry exams for colleges in China, setbacks in finding a job and so on. However, being clearly aware of his strengths and weaknesses, he chose to sharpen his proficiency in English. Inspite of the limited resources and less ideal environment for learning English, he managed to practice his oral English as well as broaden his horizons by giving foreign tourists free guide every morning in his hometown Hangzhou. And this experience lasting for nine years proved to be conducive to both the improvement in his languages abilities and the formation of a brand new world view.While working as a translator for a US trading company, Ma Yun decided to start his own online business in China, aiming to build a large Internet market to connect consumers and companies from different regions or countries. And that is how Alibaba began. At the beginning, there were only fifteen employees in 1999. But by now, this Chinese e-commerce giant has, according to Ma Yun, directly or indirectly created 40 million jobs in China. And its founder plans to expand market abroad. Nevertheless, the transformation from a startup to a listed company with the largest initial public offering in history, did not proceed smoothly. If he had not manages to attracted investment in 2000, Alibaba could have failed like many other Internet companies did at that time. What’s more, rumors or doubts have never completely disappeared, whether it was at the early stage or at the prosperous period of Alibaba. As for Ma Yun, scarcely does he allow these noises to overwhelm his inner voices. It’s his persistence and commitment that make his dreams come true in the end.To sum up, just as the old saying goes, constant dropping wears the stone. As long as we pursuit our dreams like what Ma Yun does, nothing could stop us from realizing them, since persistence not only gives us the hope to hold on to ourdreams, but also enables us to fight against obstacles all along.【范文点评】题目要求围绕阿里巴巴在美国成功上市这一事件，谈谈作为中国互联网巨头传奇人物马云，他的经历给了你怎样的启发，撰写一篇约400词左右的文章。
北外教授丁往道告诉你英语写作最重要
北外教授丁往道告诉你英语写作最重要注重写的练习。
强调听和说，听说领先，是对的；经常阅读，大量阅读，也是必要的。
但对于排在“四会”末尾的“写”，千万不要认为它可有可无。
“写”在学英语的过程中有其特别重要和不可替代的作用。
只要是写一篇短文，就得思考内容和观点，组织材料，安排层次，斟酌词句，这是极好的锻炼。
而且写对语言的正确性和表达的准确性的要求比口语要高些，因为可以考虑和修改。
这对提高语言质量十分有益。
要关心中国文化。
中国人都应关心中国文化，主修英语或别的外语的朋友们更要注意对中国文化的学习和钻研，因为在外语上用很多时间，可能会忽略中国文化的学习，结果是对所学语言国家的情况和文化特点知道得多，而对中国的文化特点知道得反而少。
中国文化源远流长，有很多宝贵的成份，我们应该珍视这份遗产，努力予以发扬光大。
中考书面表达专题指导：说明文说明文是中考写作题中常见的形式。
主要目的在于对所写事物进行解释，回答"为什么"或"怎么样"。
在初中阶段说明文主要的是让学生将活动、人物或地点进行清楚的描述，考察学生的观察能力和将表格或所给提示词转化为完整文字信息的能力。
说明文具有直观，具体等特点；它要求语言简明扼要，通俗易懂，说明过程讲究条理性和层次性。
常见的说明文考题有以下两种形式：1. 通过图表式形式，将所要说明的人物或事物的信息特点表达出来，如介绍一个新的同学或朋友，介绍如何使用某一具体的器材等。
2. 以提纲式呈现写作材料，主要是根据汉语提示来完成写作。
怎样写出一篇合要求的说明文？一审。
要做到文章切题、要点齐全，审题至关重要。
同学们在下笔之前就要将所给的材料看清楚，看准材料所要表达的内容或情景，写出符合要求的文章，如果提示语较多，就要严格按照要求来写。
二定。
一定要点：根据所给材料要点，定出中心句。
要特别注意首尾句，注意适当发挥，避免逐字逐句翻译。
二定方法：常用的说明方法有举例法、过程分析法、分类法、因果分析法、比较法、细节法等。
英语写作基础教程(1)
第 二 章 用 词 (Using Proper Words)
第三章造句
(Making Correct and Effective Sentences)
第四章
段 落 (Developing Paragraphs)
第 六 章 完 整 的 作 文 (Composing Essays)
第七章 应用文(Writing for Practical Purposes)
Chapter one
Manuscript Form and Punctuation 1. why is it important to write in correct
manuscript? 2. What are the rules for titles?
Focus 1 Manuscript Form (P1)
学习方法例举
根据自己的情况，选择不同的学习方式： 方式一：如果你能够写出语法基本正确的句子和
段落，那么，你就可以直接开始学习第六章（完整的 作文）或第七章（应用文写作）。将前面四章的学习 内容作为自学内容，如：标点符号的运用、信件的格 式等；
方式二：如果还没有自信能写出语法基本正确的 句子和段落的同学，可以从第一章开始逐章学习。基 础学习准备好后，对教学重点的内容也就容易把握了。
教学重点
1. 第六章“短文的写作” (Composing Essays) 2. 第七章“应用文的写作” (Writing for Practical Purposes)
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丁往道英语写作手册
Part1 Manuscript Form 文稿格式
1 Arrangement 安排 2 Capitalization 大写 3 Word Division 移行 4 Punctuation 标点 5 Handwriting 书法
What is a good manuscript form?
writing the title 写标题 leaving margins 纸边留空 indenting 段落开端缩进 capitalizing 大写 dividing words 词的移行
1 Arrangement 安排
About titles关于题目
P 35 Ⅱ. Type of Sentences 句子类型
(use)
1. Declarative, interrogative, imperative, and exclamatory sentences 陈述句、疑问句、祈使句和感叹句
1. declarative sentence 陈述句 She is my fiance.
P35 Ⅱ. Type of Sentences 句子类型
(structure)
2 .simple, compound, complex, or compound-complex sentences 简单句、并列句、复合句或并列复 合句
simple sentence 简单句
It has one subject and one predicate verb. To see is to believe.
丁往道《英语写作手册(中文版)》复习笔记(造句)【圣才出品】
第三章造句Ⅰ. 完整句和不完整句1. 完整句（1）完整句的语法结构必须完整，即一个完整句必修至少有一个主语和一个谓语动词；如果该谓语动词是及物动词，还得有一个宾语；若是个系动词，则必须有一个表语或补语：He came.She wrote a letter.Dr. Smith is a professor.（2）一个完整的句子以大写字母开始，以句号结束。
2. 不完整句有时为取得特殊效果可用到不完整的句子。
如：It is hard to hear a new voice, as hard as it is to listen to an unknown language...Why? Out of fear. The world fears a new experience more than it fears anything. Because a new experience displaces so many old experiences. And it is like trying to use muscles stiff for ages. It hurts horribly.—D. H. Lawrence He was, I think, very handsome. I gather this from photographs and from my own memories of him, dressed in his Sunday best and on his way to preach a sermon somewhere, when I was little. Handsome, proud, and ingrown, “like atoe-nail,” somebody said.—James Baldwin 在上面第一篇中有三个不完整的句子(“why?”“Out of fear.”以及“Because a new experience...”)，在第二篇中有一个(“Handsome，proud”)。
Lecture 2 manuscript form 《英语写作手册》丁往道编 外研社
★ Do not begin a line with a comma, a period, etc.
★ Do not end a line with the first half of a pair of brackets, quotation marks, or parentheses.
Summary—Arrangement
11.capitalize v. ['kæpɪtəlaɪz]
12.capital n.
13. lower v.
14. lowercase n. [,ləʊə'keɪs]
标点符号 并列连词
大写 大写字母
小写 小写字母
I. Arrangement
1.Margin 2.Indentation 3.Punctuation
II.Handwriting Principles of Handwriting
1. Write clearly, neatly and legibly. 2. Clearly distinguish between capitals
Excercise
Find out what is wrong in the manuscript form of the following paragraph.
For city dwellers, dragon lanterns can be seen only on grand ceremonies on TV. In my hometown, however , putting on a dragon latten show is a very popular per -formance. To celebrate the Spring Festival, many villages make preparations for the dragon lantern show( special food, religious sacrifice…).
the whole composition
2. Try to find a proper thesis or theme.
3. Look at the list of facts again, eliminate those unnecessary or unimportant ones.
4. Rearrange them in a logical order, and write an outline.
1.开门见山法：
Jobs and work do much more than most of us realize to provide happiness and contentment. We’re all used to thinking that work provides the material things of life---the goods and services that make possible our modern civilization. But we are much less conscious of the extent to which work provides the more intangible, but more crucial, psychological wellbeing that can make the difference between a full and an empty life
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(1) Emphatic sentences 整句强调
1. short sentences 短句 2. sentence fragments 不完整句 3. inverted sentences 倒装句 4. parallel constructions and balanced sentences平行结构和对称句 5. periodic sentences 圆周句
My National Day
P41 Ⅲ. Effective Sentences 有效句
1. Unity 统一性 2. Coherence 连贯性 3. Conciseness 简洁性 4. Emphasis 强调性 5. Variety 多样性
P41 1. Unity 统一性
A unified sentence expresses a single complete thought. It does not contain ideas that are not closely related, nor does it express a thought that is not complete by itself.
3) (including words following hypens in compound words包括复合词中在连 字符后面的词)
About titles关于题目
4）except articles, coornidating conjunctions, short prepositions, and the to in infinitives. 但冠词、并 列连词、介词和不定时的to除外
2. interrogative 疑问句 Who is your favourite author?
3. imperative sentence 祈使句 Don't touch me.
4. exclamatory sentence 感叹句 How well you look! What a mess!
compound-complex sentence 并列复合句
A Day to Remember
P 37 Ⅱ. Type of Sentences 句子类型
(rhetorical 修辞的 point of view)
3. loose, periodic, and balanced sentences 松散句、圆周句（掉尾句）或 对偶句
compound sentence 并列句
It consists of 2 or more simple sentences and linked by and, but, or,etc. Honey is sweet, but the bee stings.
complex sentence 复合句
Ⅲ. Effective Sentences有效句
1. Unity 统一性 2. Coherence 连贯性 3. Conciseness 简洁性 4. Emphasis 强调性 5. Variety 多样性
P49 4. Emphasis 强调性
When there is an important idea, it should be expressed with emphasis.
对偶句
When a sentence contains two parallel clauses similar in structure but contrasted in meaning, it is a balanced sentence.
Loose sentences are easier, simpler, more natural and direct.
4) confusing shifts in person and number or in voice,tense and mood. 人称、数、语气和语态上的变动混乱
Ⅲ. Effective Sentences有效句
1. Unity 统一性 2. Coherence 连贯性 3. Conciseness 简洁性 4. Emphasis 强调性 5. Variety 多样性
松散句
A loose sentence puts the main idea first, and lets the reader know what it is mainly about when he has read the first few words.
圆周句
In a periodic sentence, the main idea is expressed at or near the end of it.
P35 Ⅱ. Type of Sentences 句子类型
(structure)
2 .simple, compound, complex, or compound-complex sentences 简单句、并列句、复合句或并列复 合句
simple sentence 简单句
It has one subject and one predicate verb. To see is to believe.
鸡肉炒面 Chicken chow mein
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Part 2 The Sentence
Ⅰ. Complete Sentences and Sentences Fragments 完整句和不完全句
P 46 3. Conciseness 简洁性
A sentence should contain no unnecessary words.
If the idea is fully expressed, the fewer words are used, the better.
Wordiness only obscures the idea.
Indent the first line of every paragraph, leaving a space of about 4 or 5 letters. 每段的开头应缩进，即留出4 到5个字母的空白。
Part1 Manuscript Form 文稿格式
1 Arrangement 安排 2 Capitalization 大写 3 Word Division 移行 4 Punctuation 标点 5 Handwriting 书法
It contains one main(principle) clause and one or more dependent (subordinate) clause .
Whoever comes is welcome. The question is how he did it. I believe that I can fly. All that glitters is not gold. You are able to go wherever you like.
P42 2. Coherence 连贯性
1) faulty parallel constructions 平行结构使用有误
2) pronouns with ambiguous reference
代词指代不明
Hale Waihona Puke 3) dangling(mispalced) modifiers 垂悬修饰语（使用不当的修饰语）
英语基础写作
English Writing
Wu Haiping (武海平)
A game to start with...
A game to start with
Titanic is going to sink...
There are 8 passengers. However, there are only 7 seats in the lifeboat.
P 35 Ⅱ. Type of Sentences 句子类型
(use)
1. Declarative, interrogative, imperative, and exclamatory sentences 陈述句、疑问句、祈使句和感叹句
1. declarative sentence 陈述句 She is my fiance.
Periodic sentences are more complex, formal and literary.
Balanced sentences are impressive.
They are mainly used in formal writing, like expository 说明的 and argumentative 议论的 prose and speeches.
1) write the title in the middle of the first line. 题目应写在第一行的中间
About titles关于题目
2）capitalize the first and last words of the title and all other words.题目的 第一个和最后一个词应用大写字母开始。
The passengers :
1 a cleaner 2 a doctor 3 a farmer 4 a singer
5 a teacher 6 a pregnant woman 7 a policewoman 8 a college student
Part1 Manuscript Form 文稿格式
About titles关于题目
7） use quotation marks with quotes or titles of articles 题目中的 引用词语或文章的标题，应加引号。