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2019年雅思写作小作文流程图解析及范文:废纸回收

2019年雅思写作小作文流程图解析及范文:废纸回收

2019年雅思写作小作文流程图解析及范文:废纸回收The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.范文:The flow chart shows how waste paper is recycled. It is clear that there are six distinct stages in this process,from the initial collection of waste paper to the eventual production of usable paper.At the first stage in the paper recycling process, waste paper is collected either from paper banks, where members of the public leave their used paper, or directly from businesses. This paper is then sorted by hand and separated according to its grade, with any paper that is not suitablefor recycling being removed. Next, the graded paper is transported to a paper mill.Stages four and five of the process both involve cleaning. The paper is cleaned and pulped, and foreign objects such as staples are taken out. Following this, all remnants of inkand glue are removed from the paper at the de-inking stage. Finally, the pulp can be processed in a paper making machine, which makes the end product: usable paper.(160 words, band 9)。

雅思小作文之流程图范文

雅思小作文之流程图范文

雅思小作文之流程图范文You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The diagram below shows the method of obtaining water outdoors.You should write at least 150 words.1. The chart describes how water is obtained outdoors.2. According to the figure, the first step of obtaining water outdoors is to find a hole with green plants on its bottom. Next, remove the green plants in the middle and put a container there. Then, cover the hole with a plastic sheet and place two stones on both ends of it to secure its position. A third stone is laid on the middle of the plastic sheet so that the middle part is also the lowest part.3. When the sun shines on the green plants in the hole, water evaporates from these plants. The vapor rises up and then cools down to form water drops on the plastic sheet. When there is more and more water, it flows along the sheet to accumulate onthe lowest part. Finally, water falls down into the container directly under the middle stone. Thus, water is collected successfully through evaporation from green plants.流程图的重点:1.平时的格式As is displayed in the flow chart, the process/principle, etc of _____ can be explained/ analyzed/ specified as follows.There are ____stages in ______.First,Second,NextLast/Finally/In the end(Thus, the new circle begins.)As to/for, As far as …is concernedIn respect/aspect of, in approach to, in regard toConcerningOnThrough a brief introduction of ______, we come to realize how______//the ___ of ______.Having a glimpse of the general process of _____, we are fascinated/impressed by the ____ of _____//the fact that ________.2) 句式的丰富多用被动语态2 次多用定语从句2 次多用状语从句1~2 次多用分词短语2 次多用介词短语2 次3) 过渡的自然4) 准专业的词汇(词汇量)5) 适当的展开加联想The chart describes how water is obtained outdoors.(主谓宾平实结构)According to the figure, the first step of obtaining water outdoors is to find a hole with green plants on its bottom. Next, remove the green plants in the middle and put a container there. Then, cover the hole with a plastic sheet and place two stones on both ends of it to secure its position. A third stone is laid on the middle of the plastic sheet so that the middle part is also the lowest part. When the sun shines on the green plants in the hole, water evaporates from these plants. The vapor rises up and then cools down to form water drops on the plastic sheet. When there is more and more water, it flows along the sheet to accumulate on the lowest part. Finally, water falls down into the container directly under the middle stone. Thus, water is collected successfully through evaporation from green plants.。

雅思小作文流程图分析思路及写作方法

雅思小作文流程图分析思路及写作方法

雅思小作文流程图分析思路及写作方法题目给出的是流程图,就是以图示的方法把一个过程或流程清楚地显示了出来,现在要求考生做的是把该流程图还原成说明文。

由此可见,我们实际上要做的就是看图作文。

而大家都知道,看图作文是我们在小学最初学写作文时的入门做法。

照着图来写,省却了要自己想象和构思的过程,这自然比起写议论文的挑战度要低一些。

所以,大家应该更有信心去对付流程图作文,毕竟实际上所做的是“看图作文”。

流程图写作基本原则流程图作文就是以对流程的叙述居多的。

全文的精心安排通常分成两个主要部分:开场白段和主体部分。

开场白段就是用以并作概述的,了解该流程图则表示了一个什么什么的过程,常用的句型居多语+谓语+宾语模式。

然后视情况可以多提一句说道整个过程可以分成若干个阶段。

开场白段只需一段,通常就是这么一二句话。

主体部分是文章的核心部分,主要是说明该流程,所以是说明文式的行文。

主体部分可依照整个流程分成几个阶段而大体相应地分为几个自然段。

主体部分的写作原则如下:1. 把图看懂这是首要前提,理解了流程图表示的是什么以及是怎样的一个过程,才谈得上用文字表达出来。

能否看得懂图取决于几方面的因素:词汇量,知识面,生活经验和常识等。

考生平时要有心地做一下这些方面的积累和准备。

一般来说,流程图是不难看懂的。

万一有些什么地方卡住了,也要大胆地合乎逻辑地去猜测,推想,判断,要灵活机敏。

2. 按图示的顺序写下流程图会表示一个过程的流向顺序。

因此,不难按照图示的顺序来写。

若是分成几个阶段的,就按顺序逐个阶段来描述,通常就相应地分成几个自然段落。

3. 将图所提供更多的词拓展(或串成)成句子流程图中会提供一些关键的说明性的词,比如步骤或环节的名称,怎样做,添加什么原料,去掉什么,输送到哪儿等等。

我们就可以直接利用这些关键词写成句子,方法有两类,依照图的情况而分别采用之。

如果流程图比较简短,用扩展的办法,就是以一个关键词为核心词,扩展成一个甚至两个句子,以达到字数的要求。

雅思小作文-流程图

雅思小作文-流程图

雅思小作文——流程图出现频率:低难易程度:高流程图和普通图表的区别在于:●流程图基本上不会出现数据,文字信息占主要地位●流程图以描述为主,比较的概率比较少●流程图需要把图中出现的信息都做描述,而普通图表则不需要将每一个数据都表述●流程图的时态比较单一,主要是用一般现在时●流程图的分段比较灵活,只要不同阶段之间的差距很明显,就可以另起一段●流程图可以不写总结段【如果写总结段,可以把步骤稍微总结一下】流程图注意事项:1)注意掌握段落连接或者不同阶段之间的说法(sequence expression)表示首阶段的一些说法:①The process starts from (名词or动名词)②At the first/initial stage + 句子③At the beginning of the cycle + 句子④During the initial phase + 句子⑤The beginning of the whole cycle is marked by (名词or动名词)⑥(名词or动名词)is the first step in (名词or动名词)表示次阶段的一些说法:①The second stage is(名词or动名词)②The next step in the process is (名词or动名词)表示最后阶段的一些说法:①(名词or动名词)is the last step in the procedure②The final phase of the procedure is about (名词or动名词)③In the final phase + 句子④Entering the final phase + 句子⑤(名词or动名词)is the final stage2)单词的转换主要体现在名词转换成动词。

流程图经常会出现一些器具的名词,如“grinder”“mixer”“heater”,考生需要改动成名词使用,如”ground”, “mixed”和”heated”例:The powders are delivered to the grinder, where they are ground into cement.3)注意流程图读图的顺序,很多是以循环形式出现4)除了连接词外,还可以使用分词结构和状语从句来表示顺序,如:下面几句话的意思是一样的,●Liquor butter is filtered, before being converted into solid butter.●Once liquor butter is filtered, it is converted into solid butter.●Liquor butter is filtered, until it is converted into solid matter.5)常用被动语态●误:Put these materials in the heater.●正:These materials are put in the heater.6)工序图的叙述流程图可以遵循下面的步骤:步骤1:确定材料步骤2:确定工具步骤3:确定动词,然后将这些信息写成一句话。

雅思小作文范文--流程图写作详解!

雅思小作文范文--流程图写作详解!

流程图写作雅思小作文范文今天我们就利用一篇经典的考官的雅思小作文范文,来向同学们展示一下关于令大家非常头疼的流程图的写作带给我们的启示:流程图其实一点都不难,掌握好了其中的语法知识点,我们甚至可以拿高分。

雅思写作中,和它联系最为紧密的就是语法。

雅思写作四项评分中,语法作为重中之重被提及。

语法基础不好,难有好作文的形成。

如果一篇英语作文中反复出现低级的语法错误,那么无论你的观点多么吸引人,原本的写作立意多么新颖精彩,生产的都只是一篇有缺陷的英语作文,多会让阅读者对你文章的整体印象打折扣:-一个连基础语法都错误连连的作者,会有能力写出一篇思维严谨的作文吗?读题分析:由于蚕的生命旅程并不是哪一个特定时刻发生的事情,而是一个公认的自然常识。

它是作为一个流程而时时刻刻都在发生的事情,因此采用时态中的一般现在时来表达整篇文字就是最适合不过了考官范文:The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworm. First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts forup to 6 weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about 3 weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again.详细分析:一、首先准备流程图的写作时,先考虑一下文章结构的完整。

2019年雅思写作小作文流程图解析及范文:太阳能

2019年雅思写作小作文流程图解析及范文:太阳能

2019年雅思写作小作文流程图解析及范文:太阳能The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.范文:The picture illustrates the process of producing electricity in a home using solar panels.It is clear that there are five distinct stages in this process, beginning with the capture of energy from sunlight. The final two steps show how domestic electricity is connected to the external power supply.At the first stage in the process, solar panels on the roof of a normal house take energy from the sun and convert it into DC current. Next, this current is passed to an inverter, which changes it to AC current and regulates the supply of electricity. At stage three, electricity is supplied to the home from an electrical panel.At the fourth step shown on the diagram, a utility meter in the home is responsible for sending any extra electric power outside the house into the grid. Finally, if the solar panels do not provide enough energy for the household, electricity will flow from the utility grid into the home through the meter.。

雅思小作文流程图讲解 满文例文

雅思小作文流程图讲解 满文例文

Writing task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
【流程图特点之一:介绍过程要使用一般现在 时】
Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of South America, Africa and Indonesia. The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans.
Then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break up the big chunks of clay into much smaller areas, which fall through the metal grid onto a roller, whose motion further segregates the bits of clay. Sand and water are added to make a homogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds or cut into brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter.
【开头不能一上来就直接介绍cacao tree,而是通过主题 词chocolate引出,否则显得太唐突】

雅思写作流程图满分写法(参考模板)

雅思写作流程图满分写法(参考模板)

雅思写作流程图满分写法朗阁海外考试研究中心丁仡然很多同学常常对雅思小作文流程图的写法感到困扰,虽然市场上有很多关于雅思流程图指导的书,但是笔者想要强调的是我们还是要用好剑桥1-10这十本最官方的书,仔细研究其中的考官范文就不难发现,其实流程图只是一只纸老虎,没有同学们想象的那么可怕。

本文中,朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家就为各位考生分析一篇剑桥10考官所写的最新流程图满分范文,希望借这篇文章对大家的雅思小作文有一定的帮助和提升!我们来看一下小作文题目(剑桥雅思10, Test 4, P101)The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.该图表描述了某一种大型鱼(三文鱼)的生命循环过程。

解题步骤:在写流程图的时候,大家首先要把题干看三遍,然后一定要花时间分析一下这幅图,一定要把图中每个步骤都看懂,然后深入理解每一步骤要表现的内容是什么。

注意:1. 图中所有的信息点都要讲到,不然会被重点扣分;2. 图中的信息千万不能写偏,不能写出和图中描述不符合的信息;3. 不要在小作文里面写自己的观点,这是很大的忌讳之处;4. 流程图也要写overview, 这点非常重要!这篇文章总体分为三段:第一段写了最上面的那个图:也就是三文鱼在上游时候最初的形态。

第二段写了中间和下面那个图:也就是三文鱼在下游和游到大海里,以及最后游回到出生地的过程。

第三段:整篇文章总体的overview和三幅图之间的比较和差异。

考官范文分析:在第一段里面考官在一开始就写到:salmon begin life as eggs on a pebbly riverbed, hidden among reeds in the slow-moving upper reaches of a river. 大家注意考官写的这句话是一种9分的流程图表达方式:就是用一句话把图中的好几个信息点都串进去,我们可以看到,这句话里面:图中有的salmon eggs, small stones, upper river slow moving都写进去了,所以从这句话中考生们可以学习一种技能,就是尽量一句话中多串几个图中的信息点。

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2019年流程图写作原则的雅思小作文高分技巧分享-word范文模板
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== 本文为word格式,下载后可方便编辑和修改! == 流程图写作原则的雅思小作文高分技巧分享
雅思作文想拿高分,就必须重视开篇小作文。

作为给考官的第一印象,小
作文的成败与否直接关系着整个作文分数的高低。

而小作文中的流程图似乎已
逐渐成为同学们心头挥之不去的梦魇。

笔者认为,流程图的写作精髓在于
“3w1h(when,what,where,how)+被动+从句”的灵活应用,只要大家熟记这
个原则,在实战中打败流程图这个“纸老虎”就能事半功倍。

下面,就让我们跟着新东方老师以下图为例来分析一下“3w1h(when,what,where,how)+被动+定状从句”原则在流程图中的应用。

The information in the diagram below describes the bread making process。

这幅图说的讲得是面包的制作过程,由图可知,制作面包一共需要六个步骤,所以我们开头段可以作如下表述:
The diagram given demonstrates a process by which the bread is made via six consecutive phases。

之后我们需要根据图的顺序来分析每个图的“3w1h”,需要做到尽可能地全面。

第一幅图的“3w1h”:
When:首先(In the first/initial/original step; First of all = Firstly = initially = originally)
What:要使用的主要材料是温水和糖(warm water, sugar)
Where: 盛有酵母的容器(yeast这个单词很多烤鸭可能不认识,抄之即可)
How: 把材料放入容器以达成发酵的目的(to activate yeast)
考虑“被动+从句”,整幅图可以写作如下:
In the first step, warm water and sugar, which are the chief materials of bread making, are added into a container where yeast exists for the purpose to activate it. 这样的一句话既有被动句…are added into… ,又兼顾了定语从句which和状语从句where的使用。

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