老师比家长更适合训练小孩

Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A 老师受过专业训练（specialized training）
B 知道怎么利用学生的学习能力（capitalize on cognitive abilities）
C 提高学习成绩（improve learning outcomes）
A 老师制定校规（impose school rules）
B 提高小孩的社会技能（social skills），遵循社会规则（social rules）
C 对小孩的社会发展有好处
A1 父母是榜样（role models）
A2 也决定了孩子参加的社会活动（social activities）
B 小孩可以提高社会技能（skills for social life）
C 对小孩的社会发展有好处
开头段
Teachers are sometimes believed to have a greater impact on
Children’s academic performance and social skills than parents do. I agree with this idea, although it is important to recognize the role parents play in children’s social development. 主体第一段
A 老师受过专业训练（specialized training）
B 知道怎么利用学生的学习能力（capitalize on cognitive abilities）
C 提高学习成绩（improve learning outcomes）
A+C B+C 举例对比
1、As a general rule, teachers have received specialized training. So they are able to help students improve learning outcomes.
2、They understand how to capitalize on learners’ cognitive abilities and contribute to their attainment. (B+C)
3、For example, experienced teachers are able to adopt different devices and tailor teaching materials to ensure that children can acquire knowledge effectively. (举例)
4、In contrast, parents are not familiar with these teaching
skills, so most of them trust their intuitions and sometimes take the wrong approach to instruct their children. (对比)
主体第二段
A 老师制定校规（impose school rules）
B 提高小孩的社会技能（social skills），遵循社会规则（social
rules）
C 对小孩的社会发展有好处
礼貌：habitat ; good manners
A+B 解释对比
1、Teachers also impose and enforce school
rules, which can make it possible to improve children's
social skills and require them to follow social
norms. (A+B)
2、These students (代词的使用) will gain an insight into
how to communicate effectively with each other and show
good manners on important occasions. (解释)
3、While these young ( 代词的使用) children can practice
these skills in broader community, they may not be able to
do so in the home environment. (对比)
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题目的类型：（3 种）1.观点类2.论述类3.报告类
A1 父母是榜样（role models）
A2 也决定了孩子参加的社会活动（social activities）
B 小孩可以提高社会技能（skills for social life）
C 对小孩的社会发展有好处
A1+解释A2+解释B+C
1、On the other hand, Parents are role models, and this means that how they interact with neighbors, colleagues and other
members of family can have a strong impact on their children's interpersonal skills. (A1+解释)
2、They also decide social activities, such as ceremonies and community activities that their children attend. (A2+解释)
3、Their choices play a vital role in passing on important skills for social life from generation to generation. (B+C)
结尾段
In conclusion, the role of teachers is prominent in children’s
development, but the importance of parents should not be underrated. (c)。