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problems 2. 迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏
Main body
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opinions ------
suggestions 1. 合理安排时间
2. 参加兴趣小组
Conclusion
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中考专题复习课
Writing
书面表达: 是中考英语中的必考
题，占卷面总分的12.5%，分 值为15 分 。
分析文章的形成过程
文章的形成过程：
单词 句子
短语，结构 +符号
段落
文章
如何把这些组织一篇文章？
首先，我们必须在头脑中构成一幅mind map. 在map的帮助下，我们就能有效的到达我们的 目的地。
How to give this writing an end?
Let’s make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!
Why not put our free time to better use ? It is a good way to have a more colorful future.
第三步：抓住要点，列关键词
1.List some keywords about problems. Phrases: ______________________________ _______________________________
2. List some keywords about opinions. Phrases: ______________________________ _______________________________
2022年中考英语作文专题(建议型议论文)课件
If we get hurt, we must tell our teachers or call our teachers or call 120 for help in time. In a word, sports asfety is very important. Be sure to keep sage in doing sports.
课堂演练
新冠疫情提醒人们更加重视健康。越来越多的人请你给校报的英语栏目English Corner投稿，号召同学们 重视运动安全。
要求： 1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息： 1.运动安全的现状和重要性； 2.运动安全的建议（着装、热身、规则……）； 3.……. 参考词汇：热身运动 warming-up exercise
作文专题
作文专题—议论文
（建议型议论文）
写作思路
1.点明主题，提出题目中要你给出建议的问题。 2.分析问题，给出自己如何解决该问题的建议。 3.总结全文，事情最终的发展方向。 注意：写作内容可根据题目要求和具体情况进行增补或取舍。议 论文强调逻辑顺序，注意逻辑词、顺序词、连接词的使用
表达建议的句型
1. Why not do ... / Why don’t you do... 为什么不…… 2. How about/What about doing ... ? ……怎么样？ 3. You’d better do.../You’d better not do... 你最好做……/你最好不要做…… 4. Would you like to do ... ? 你想要……？ 5. You need/should/can/must/needn’t/shouldn’t/cann’t... . 你需要/应该/能/必须/没必 要/不应该/不能…… 6. Let’s do... 让我们一起…… 7. I advise you to do.../I suggest doing... 我建议你去做……/我建议…… 8. It’s a good/great idea to do … 做……是个好主意 9. In sb’s opinion/view/point of view…在某人看来…… 10. As for as sb’s concerned, …在某人看来
课堂演练
新冠疫情提醒人们更加重视健康。越来越多的人请你给校报的英语栏目English Corner投稿，号召同学们 重视运动安全。
要求： 1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息： 1.运动安全的现状和重要性； 2.运动安全的建议（着装、热身、规则……）； 3.……. 参考词汇：热身运动 warming-up exercise
作文专题
作文专题—议论文
（建议型议论文）
写作思路
1.点明主题，提出题目中要你给出建议的问题。 2.分析问题，给出自己如何解决该问题的建议。 3.总结全文，事情最终的发展方向。 注意：写作内容可根据题目要求和具体情况进行增补或取舍。议 论文强调逻辑顺序，注意逻辑词、顺序词、连接词的使用
表达建议的句型
1. Why not do ... / Why don’t you do... 为什么不…… 2. How about/What about doing ... ? ……怎么样？ 3. You’d better do.../You’d better not do... 你最好做……/你最好不要做…… 4. Would you like to do ... ? 你想要……？ 5. You need/should/can/must/needn’t/shouldn’t/cann’t... . 你需要/应该/能/必须/没必 要/不应该/不能…… 6. Let’s do... 让我们一起…… 7. I advise you to do.../I suggest doing... 我建议你去做……/我建议…… 8. It’s a good/great idea to do … 做……是个好主意 9. In sb’s opinion/view/point of view…在某人看来…… 10. As for as sb’s concerned, …在某人看来
中考英语作文指导ppt课件
We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are
going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the
school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. ( 扩 展 句 ) Let’s have lunch in a
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根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你 的同学关于你们郊游的计划。
时间
星期日（７月１０日）
地点
人民公园
交通工具 坐公共汽车前往
出发时间 早上７：００
到达公园时 早上８：３０ 间
活动安排
上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐 下午：英语角活动（English corner activities）；照相
5、内容的完整：一般供料作文包括一定数量的 内容点，漏写某一点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审 题要细心观察，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注 意某些夸张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写 出的内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍，做到 详略得当。此外，80词左右的英语作文至少需 70词，最多不能超过完9整版0p词pt课件，少词或多词则要扣4
begin and how much does it cost? ( 扩 展 句 )
Where will the class be held? (扩展句) Also, do
you have any more information about what we
going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the
school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. ( 扩 展 句 ) Let’s have lunch in a
完整版ppt课件
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根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你 的同学关于你们郊游的计划。
时间
星期日（７月１０日）
地点
人民公园
交通工具 坐公共汽车前往
出发时间 早上７：００
到达公园时 早上８：３０ 间
活动安排
上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐 下午：英语角活动（English corner activities）；照相
5、内容的完整：一般供料作文包括一定数量的 内容点，漏写某一点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审 题要细心观察，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注 意某些夸张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写 出的内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍，做到 详略得当。此外，80词左右的英语作文至少需 70词，最多不能超过完9整版0p词pt课件，少词或多词则要扣4
begin and how much does it cost? ( 扩 展 句 )
Where will the class be held? (扩展句) Also, do
you have any more information about what we
中考英语作文写作指导省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件
join a sports club
Friends fun
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注意“四定”
1.定内容。 2.定时态。 记叙文、日志惯用普通过去时； 说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用普通现在时； 计划等用普通未来时。 3.定人称。 用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。 4.定句型、定词语。 应依据内容,先定句型后定词语。
Middle 正文 Ending 结尾
supporting sentences支持句 用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、 讨论。
concluding sentence 结论句 对全文总结和概括。
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例1: 利弊型作文——Microblog利与弊 Para1: （综述）with the development of
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例3: 学校 “English center” 是同学们练习英语 场所。这里 “teenager hotline” 天天都能收不 到不少同学咨询电话。作为热线一名志愿者，请你 依据当初统计，首先描述两位同学碰到问题，然后 给一位同学提出详细提议并说明原因。
主要内容: 问题、提议、原因 限制: 描述两位同学问题，给一位同学提提议 关键词: problem、suggestion、reason
写作步骤：
1 审题 2 选材 3 列提要 4 写作 5 复查
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第一步 审题
审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。假如审 不清主题, 就有可能出现“下笔千言, 离题万里” 情况。
在审清主题基础上, 还需注意要审清文体。 审题不准, 丢关键点, 失分惨重。
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例1: A special gift I’m looking forward to 强调这份“礼品”是“我所期待”, 而非我已拥有一份礼品。 假如慌忙动笔就轻易将文章写成 “My favorite gift”.
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
中考英语作文讲评课(优秀课件)
The environment is important to us all. We need fresh air,
clean water and so on. There used to be many trees around
us, the air was fresh and the river was clean, but now they
2. Which way do you think is the best one to
make you happy?
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at
least two reasons)
内容（7分）+语言（8分）+文采（3分） 一、认真审题，结构合理
*写什么 (题目，参考问题）
Free talk
What should we write about? What shouldn’t we (only) write about?
1. My school life 2. My dream teacher 3. The thing I hate to do 4. My opinions of keeping pet dogs 5.The best way to make me happy
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at
least two reasons)
内容不全
there are a lot of ways to make me happy. The best way to make me happy is to play basketball. To play computer games is also a way to make me happy. Everyday we have PE lesson. These are a lot of interests in it. So I feel happy in this way.
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
第七步: 誊
誊文章，规范整洁
书 写 注 意 事 项： 1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。 2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、 或用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的 感觉 3、一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线 划掉即可。
eg: He can speker speak English very well.
Ending
Beginning
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
九年级英语作文讲解ppt课件
• 3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;
• 4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.
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（二）加分点
• 根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。
• 只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分。而这1分的亮点，是 可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句 型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用 到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。
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有效的句式学习
基本句式。”五大“帮助学生掌握认清 .1 背、听写、加强中考相关话题必备佳句的朗读 .2 。句子翻译以及课外佳句的积累、诵、仿写 的句式变换中不断积攒实战经”多样“让学生在 .3 验。
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句子
3. “多样”的句式变换
）合并为简单句；1
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三、对考生的要求
• 1、内容要完整。 • 2、语句流畅。 • 3、没有语法错误。 • 4、书写规范。 • 能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的
高分。
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四、评分标准
• 第五档(17—20分)：表达清楚，行文连贯，语言基本无误。 • 第四档(13—16分)：表达基本清楚，行文基本连贯，语言有
Eg: My brother helped me in maths. I made great progress.
I made great progress in maths with the help of my brother .
）学会使用感叹句；2 It is necessary to help others. How necessary it is to help others.
• 4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.
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（二）加分点
• 根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。
• 只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分。而这1分的亮点，是 可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句 型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用 到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。
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有效的句式学习
基本句式。”五大“帮助学生掌握认清 .1 背、听写、加强中考相关话题必备佳句的朗读 .2 。句子翻译以及课外佳句的积累、诵、仿写 的句式变换中不断积攒实战经”多样“让学生在 .3 验。
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句子
3. “多样”的句式变换
）合并为简单句；1
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三、对考生的要求
• 1、内容要完整。 • 2、语句流畅。 • 3、没有语法错误。 • 4、书写规范。 • 能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的
高分。
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四、评分标准
• 第五档(17—20分)：表达清楚，行文连贯，语言基本无误。 • 第四档(13—16分)：表达基本清楚，行文基本连贯，语言有
Eg: My brother helped me in maths. I made great progress.
I made great progress in maths with the help of my brother .
）学会使用感叹句；2 It is necessary to help others. How necessary it is to help others.
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Tips on writing topic sentences
1.Topic sentence is usually the f_ir_s_t _sentence of a paragraph.
2.Topic sentence should _te_l_l _th_e__m_a_in__id_e_a_ of a paragraph.
girl
on the right is from Japan.
The girls in the picture are from different countries.
Example 2
Topic sentence tells the main idea of a paragraph. My family members have different hobbies. My father loves collecting stamps. My mother is interested in cooking. My sister likes watching TV, and my grandparents enjoy traveling.
中考专项写作复习之--How to write a topic sentence ?
topic sentence
Example 1
1.Topic sentence is usually the_f_ir_s_t sentence of a Tpahreagirral pinh.red comes from America. The girl in
A. I had a busy day yesterday. B. I was very happy yesterday morning. C. I was quite busy yesterday morning. D. I was busy writing postcards yesterday morning.
Example 3 Topic sentence should
主题范围恰当
not bet_o_o_b_r_o_a_d_(宽_ )or _t_o_o_n_a_r_ro_w_.
every day weekends
Saturdays
I enjoy_________. I can sleep late on Saturday
A. Alice is a studeபைடு நூலகம்t. B. Alice is a friendly student. C.Alice is a hard-working student.
Example 6
_____________________________ I got up at 6:30. At 7:30a.m. I arrived at the office. First, my boss asked me to write thirty postcards for him. Then I had to go to the post office. After that, I went to have a meeting. By 12:30 p.m., I was very tired, so I decided to have a long relaxing lunch.
white T-shirt is from Spain. The girl who has 2.Topic sentence tells_th_e__m_a_i_n_i_d_e_a_ of a
beautiful golden paragraph.
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usually go for a ride with my brother.
Example 4
_________________________ When we read books we can know some famous places like Tibet, London, New York and so on. We can also meet great persons and learn from them by reaTdoipnigc sbeonotkesn.cBeosohkosualdlsotetlel ltlhuesmneawin widaeyasotfoa doptahriangrsaapnhd. make us know ourselves better. A. WeTocpainc lseeanrtnenacleotsbhyoureldadbiengsnimewplsepaanpdercsl.ear. B. We can learn a lot from books. 简单清晰 C. Books tell us famous places, great persons and many other things.
Example 5
_________________________ She gets up early in the morning and then reads English for half an hour. In class, Alice listens to the teachers carefully and takes notes at times. After finishing her homework, she teaches herself new lessons every night. On weekends, Alice usually goes to the city library to read books.
mornings. I needn’t do my homework on
weekends. Instead, I can do everything I like. I
can go shopping, visit my friends and go to the
movies with them. On Saturday afternoon, I