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批改网作文正文禁止粘贴

批改网作文正文禁止粘贴

批改网作文正文禁止粘贴说起写作文,我最近可真是被批改网给“折腾”得不轻。

你说这批改网,别的都还好,可就是那个“作文正文禁止粘贴”的规定,真让我抓耳挠腮。

前几天,老师布置了一篇议论文,题目是“科技改变生活”。

我这人吧,平时就喜欢在网上东看看西瞧瞧,积累些素材。

所以这次写作文前,我在网上搜罗了一大堆相关的资料,心里想着,这次肯定能写出一篇精彩的作文。

我把找到的那些精彩段落、有力论据,整整齐齐地复制粘贴在一个文档里,看着那丰富的内容,我心里别提多美了,感觉胜利在望。

可当我信心满满地打开批改网,准备把这些“心血”粘贴进去的时候,却发现根本就没有粘贴这个选项!当时我就傻眼了,这可咋办呀?没办法,只能老老实实地一个字一个字往里面敲。

这可真是个大工程啊!一边敲字,我一边在心里抱怨:“这什么破规定啊,多浪费时间!”但抱怨归抱怨,作文还是得写。

敲着敲着,我发现了一个问题。

之前复制粘贴的时候,觉得这些资料都特别好,可真正自己动手输入的时候,才发现有些地方根本就不符合我的思路,有些句子甚至读起来都不太通顺。

没办法,只能边敲边改,这可比单纯的敲字更费神。

比如说,我找到一段写智能手机如何改变人们沟通方式的内容,粘贴的时候觉得特别完美。

但自己输入的时候,就发现里面有些例子太陈旧了,现在都已经不适用了。

于是,我就得绞尽脑汁地想一些新的例子,像现在流行的视频通话、社交软件的新功能等等。

还有啊,在敲那些论据的时候,我得不断思考怎么把它们和我的论点紧密结合起来。

之前粘贴的时候,根本就没考虑这么多,反正先堆上去再说。

现在可不行了,每输入一句话,都得琢磨琢磨它在整篇作文里的作用和位置。

就这么吭哧吭哧地敲了半天,终于把作文的初稿弄好了。

我长舒了一口气,心想:“这可比平时费劲多了!”不过,再仔细看看这篇完全由自己一个字一个字敲出来的作文,还真和以前那些粘贴拼凑的不太一样。

以前的作文,虽然看起来内容丰富,但总觉得有点生硬,像是各种材料的生硬堆砌。

批改网的作文看相似度

批改网的作文看相似度

批改网的作文看相似度咱就说,现在这科技可真是越来越发达了,连写个作文都有批改网这种神奇的东西来帮忙。

以前咱们写作文,老师拿着红笔勾勾画画,现在可好,直接给你来个相似度检测。

我记得有一次,老师布置了一篇关于“家乡的美景”的作文。

我那叫一个文思泉涌啊,哗哗哗地就写了好几页。

写的时候,我心里还美滋滋的,觉得自己这文笔,怎么着也能得个高分。

交上去之后,就盼着老师的表扬。

结果,等作文发下来一看,我傻眼了。

上面除了老师的正常批改,还有批改网给出的相似度检测结果。

好家伙,相似度居然有 30%多!我当时就懵了,心里直犯嘀咕:“这咋可能呢?我可是自己一个字一个字写出来的呀!”我赶紧仔细看了看检测报告,发现问题出在了一些描写家乡景色的常用词句上。

比如说“青山绿水”“鸟语花香”这种词,用的人太多,就被算进相似度里了。

我这心里可委屈了,谁写家乡美景不用这些词呀?我又认真看了看自己的作文,发现除了这些常用词,还有一些段落的结构和表达方式跟网上的某些文章有点相似。

其实吧,我真不是故意抄袭,就是写的时候没注意,一不小心就写成那样了。

这可把我给愁坏了,我就去找老师解释。

老师倒是挺耐心的,听我说完之后,跟我说:“相似度检测呢,不是说要故意为难你们,而是为了让你们养成独立思考、独立创作的习惯。

”我听了点点头,心里还是有点失落。

回到家,我就下定决心,下次写作文一定要避开这些坑。

我开始大量地阅读各种书籍,积累自己的词汇和表达方式。

等到再写作文的时候,我那叫一个小心翼翼,每写一句话都要琢磨琢磨,是不是跟别人太像了。

写着写着,我发现这样其实也挺好的。

以前写作文,可能就是凭着感觉来,现在呢,因为要避开相似度的问题,我不得不更加用心地去思考,怎么才能写出有自己特色的东西。

比如说,以前写春天的花,我可能就会写“桃花红,杏花白,梨花像雪一样美”。

现在我就会写“桃花像是害羞的小姑娘,红着脸躲在绿叶后面;杏花呢,大大方方地展示着自己的洁白,像个优雅的公主;梨花则像一群调皮的小精灵,簇拥在一起,又像是从天上飘落的雪花”。

英语批改网范文

英语批改网范文

英语批改网范文English:In today's digital age, the internet has become an integral part of our daily lives. From communication and research to entertainment and shopping, the internet has changed the way we live and interact with the world. While the internet provides countless benefits, it also brings about certain challenges and risks, especially for young people. One major concern is the issue of online privacy and security. With the abundance of personal information shared online, there is an increased risk of identity theft, cyberbullying, and other forms of exploitation. Additionally, the internet can also be a breeding ground for misinformation and harmful content, leading to potential harm to young and impressionable minds. Therefore, it is crucial for parents, educators, and policymakers to prioritize the education and awareness of online safety for young people.中文翻译:在当今数字时代,互联网已成为我们日常生活的重要组成部分。

批改网作文10篇

批改网作文10篇

1The children of migrant workers418587The children of migrant workers who have remained in their hometowns whilst their parents work in the cities are known as the "left-behind children" in China.Since it's the summer holiday, a lot of these children have to travel afar, often to a remote city and only for a short visit to see their parents.As a social phenomenon that is derived from rapid urbanization, related administrative departments are providing support to enable these children to realize such family reunions. Li Dong has more.Every summer, a large number of left-behind children in rural areas flock to cities like Shenzhen and Guangzhou to meet their migrant worker parents. Most of them are escorted by relatives.To make things easier for the children's families, a long distance bus terminal in Jinan city, capital of Shandong Province has launched a green channel for these children since 2006.Han Jie is the China Communist Party Secretary of Jinan long distance bus station."We will remind our staff on the bus to take care of these children. Besides, when they arrive at the destination we will also arrange staff at the terminal to contact parents who will come to pick their children."But meeting their parents doesn't mean these children are going to enjoy a fulfilling summer holiday. Many of their parents are busy migrant workers who work in roles such as construction worker and vendors.Most of these children are aged between 6 and 12, so obviously leaving them home alone is not a safe choice. Many parents opt to take their children with them even when they are working.Sending the left-behind children to summer camp or taking them to amusement parks may cost a lot of money, so even when these children visit their beloved parents, most of them spend the holiday watching TV or going to the library.However, many of the summer schools are already too packed due to large number of children of migrant workers flocking into the city.Cai Yaoqi, a volunteer teacher at this nursery says the capacity of their summer school is unable to meet the demands of many migrant workers."The students already outnumber the space we have. But we still try our best to accept more children. The situation is that 2 students have to share one desk."At another community at Yuhang, volunteers at the summer school face the same problem. They are considering moving the school to a nearby factory, where they can have more classrooms to accommodate the growing number of these visiting left-behind children.2Whom Do You Turn to When in Trouble?418588Just as the saying goes: life is not all roses, all of us will need someone else’s help to deal with problems that we encounter in our life. Here comes the question: whom will you turn to for help? Some say they will ask their classmates or friends for help, because they are peers, thus they can understand each other easily.However, others have different choices when in trouble. They are inclined to tell their teachers and parents the difficulties they are faced with. In their opinion, teachers and parents who are much older than them can give them a hand with their rich experience.As for me, close friends are always the people who come to my mind firstly when I’m intrigued by something that can not be solved by myself. If we can not figure out a solution by our joint effort, I will go to my teachers or parents for help. With their suggestions or instructions, I can finally find the best way to cope with my troubles.3the impact of the Internet on learning418586范文二:It is frequently observed that many people keep looking down at their mobile phones whateve r they are doing. It is true that mobile phones have brought great convenience to us as we can send short messages, check e-mails, surf the Internet, or watch videos almost anywhere. However, the overuse of mobile phones also leads to some serious problems.The over-dependence on mobile phones can harm the relationship among friends and family. With mobile phones, people do not talk as much as before. For example, sometimes at dinner table s, instead of chatting and laughing with each other, many people choose to chat with other friends online. In other words, mobile phones help people contacting friends far away more easily at theex pense of reducing the communication with those who are sitting right next to them.In conclusion, mobile phone can be a useful tool in modern life, but overusing it damages int erpersonal relationship. There is no point to lose our intimacy with friends and family to modern t echnology.4living without an aim is like sailing without a compass418584For a single person,aims are the major source of motivition.Like a compass hold by a brave explorer guiding his owner safely arcoss the mysterious ocean,aims do the same affairs that compasses do.Without a aim,one may get lost in the very hectic daily life,and may thoroughly lose faith,not knowing what to do.Thus,he can never succeed. All in all,we should have a aim---no matter what it is,we should have a faith to hold,to believe.That will do a lot in our choosing a major direction to head for.And after a long fighting process,we will do achieve our ambition and get what we want at last!5outline given below in Chinese418429Nowadays more and more young people are going to study abroad. Like everything else, studying abroad has both favorable and unfavorable aspects.Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows.Firstly, they think by attending a college in a foreign country they can learn not only useful knowledge, but also the culture and customs of other nations.Secondly, they can take advantage of this opportunity to gain a goodcommand of the foreign language they are learning very quickly. Moreover, they can meet different people and experience different cultures, which may help to broaden their views.Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. The costs are much higher than those in their native country. Most overseas students have to work for a living, which can't allow them to pay all their attention to study. What's more, they may feel very lonely.Through above analysis, we can see that the positive aspects outweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I am in favor of going abroad to study.6My Views On The life of aged people418581Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: an aged grandma sits in front of mirror, looking at "herself" in the mirror and saying to herself, "I feel rather lonely when my son goes to work and my grandson studies in school. "Obviously, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of children's accompany for aged parents: if elderly people intend to enjoy happiness, it is advisable for their children to spend more time in parents. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for young people to be busy with their work and study. Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it difficult to have spare time to accompany lonely parents. However, it is adult children's accompany that enables aged parents to build up adequate hope, love and enthusiasm for life. As a matter of fact, young people in large numbers have not come to realize the loneliness of aged people.As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to accompany aged parents, no matter how busy we are. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to love, respect and care all elderly people.7My English study plan418427English is becoming more and more important under the trend of globalization, especially for us who often need to read a number of academic thesis in English and will work in the filed of IT finally. However, my English is not as good as I wish it were actually. I have learned English for over ten years, but focus the most time and energy on preparing for English exam, so that I didn't grasp how to use English really. In my opinion, there are several reasons as following. Firstly, I can't stick to learning English by myself. To tell the truth, I spent little time learning English unless there is an Englishexamination. Secondly, I have no opportunity to talk with other people in English, and it's seemed that there is no use of English in my life except passing the examination before I become a postgraduate. The present situation already differed from the before, I should read plenty of academic paper in English to get more information and knowledge in my research field.It's heard that we should always communicate with foreign consumers and partners in English inthe work. Therefore, it's urgent for me to take efforts to improve my English. I will write no less than one piece of English blog each week on average and do more other practice to improve my English listening, speaking, reading, writing skill. I firmly believe that I'll master English freely by my hard work and persistence in the near future8Lectures or Discussions418583There are mainly two styles of teaching at universities -- lectures and discussions. Each has its own characteristics.Lectures are actually the teacher's talk to a class for the purpose of teaching. In this kind of class, the teacher plays a central role, while the students are mainly the listeners. Compared with lectures, discussions are more flexible. Students can examine and argue about a subject with each other in this kind of class. Lectures are especially suitable for big classes hecause it will be easier to keep the students under control, while discussions are typically for small classes for the reason that they are more likely to go out of control.9Recently the issue has aroused great concern among post-holiday 418582syndrome among students. Many students have some difficulties in keeping their mind on the job beyond the holidays.The syndrome refers to a general feeling of depression before returning to work, which is caused by irregular lifestyles during the vacation. When people starting their short vacation, they usually wants to have a rest and go out for a traveling. During a vacation, they make themselves happily. Some students choose to stay at home during the vacation. So relaxed holiday so that the students don't adapt to pay attention to studying. Some students choose to go out for a traveling. After traveling, they may feel tired and not to pay more attention in studying.In my opinion, this phenomenon is inevitable. So, we should enable us to adapt as soon as possible. Making our vacation more cheerfully and our work more successfully.10The Celebration of Western Festivals418580No one can have failed to notice the fact that Western festivals gain ever-increasing popularity in China. An increasing number of Chinese are fond of celebrating Western festivals today. On Valentine’s Day, many people, especially the young, give flowers or chocolate to the one they love; when Christmas approaches, nearly every store put on decorations like Santa Claus, snowflakes and even Christmas trees, not to mention the millions of people immersed in the thrilling atmosphere of festival on Christmas Eve; even such holidays as Halloween and the Easter Day are becoming known and celebrated by more and more Chinese. In comparison, such traditional Chinese festivals as the Spring Festival, the Festival of Lanterns and the Mid-Autumn Day seem to be losing their attraction.In view of such a situation, many are worried that Chinese culture will be ignored or even ruined by the invasion of Western festivals. Personally, I believe that we needn’t be over worried. Actually, the increasing popularity of some Western festivals in China is nothing accidental, but some thing justifiable.First, it is a part of cultural globalization. With the development of communication science and technology and along with more and more nations opening up to the outside world, the world today has turned into a global village, with many national things becoming international. China is no exception. While we are absorbing advanced science and technology from foreign countries, we are also taking in different cultures.Secondly, it is a sign of China’s rejuvenating. As a nation boasting a civilization of 5,000 years, Chinese have been known for their spirit of accommodation oropen-mindedness. China used to be a melting pot of cultures as the U.S. is today. In the prosperous Tang dynasty, China was host to travelers and settlers from over the world. Actually, being accommodating is a sign of any thriving nation. Therefore, we should be pleased rather than upset to see Chinese people embracing foreign festivals.It is true that some traditional Chinese festivals are losing their appeal to many people, but this does not necessarily the ruin of Chinese culture. Actually, a closer inspection reveals that most Chinese celebrate Western festivals merely out of the wish to seek novelty, to find a new way to entertain themselves or to express their identity in the face of the older generation. On the other hand, most Chinese have not ignored their native festivals. A convincing proof is that the Spring Festival still sees the largest flow of population in the world as most Chinese rush to their homes for family reunion .In a word, while we are giving priority to the preservation and development of traditional Chinese culture, we needn’t worry too much about the inflow of foreign culture.。

2024批改网杯全国大学生英语作文

2024批改网杯全国大学生英语作文

2024批改网杯全国大学生英语作文全文共10篇示例,供读者参考篇1Hey guys, have you heard about the 2024 Correcting Net Cup for college students? It's this super cool competition where students from all over China show off their English skills in writing essays. It's like a big battle of the brains, but with words instead of swords!I was so excited when I found out about this competition because I love writing in English. I think it's so cool that we can use words to express ourselves and communicate with people from all over the world. Plus, writing essays is a great way to practice our English skills and improve our vocabulary.In the competition, we have to write an essay on a given topic and then submit it online for judging. The judges are all experts in English language and they give us feedback on our writing to help us improve. It's like getting free English lessons from the pros!I've been working really hard on my essay for the competition. I chose to write about the importance of educationin today's society because I think it's such an important topic. Education is the key to unlocking our potential and achieving our dreams, so it's crucial that we value and prioritize it.I can't wait to see how my essay stacks up against the others in the competition. I know there are so many talented writers out there, but I'm not going to let that discourage me. I'm going to give it my all and hope for the best!I'm so grateful for the opportunity to participate in the 2024 Correcting Net Cup. It's such a great way to challenge myself, improve my English skills, and connect with other students who share my passion for writing. I hope that my essay will inspire others to pursue their love of writing and never stop striving for excellence.Well, that's all for now. I've got to get back to work on my essay. Wish me luck in the competition! Bye for now!篇2Hey guys, guess what? I recently participated in the 2024 National College English Essay Competition and I want to tell you all about it! So, the competition was super exciting because there were so many talented students from all over the country showing off their amazing writing skills.First of all, the competition was divided into three rounds. In the first round, we had to write an essay on a given topic within a limited time frame. I wrote about the importance of environmental protection and how we can all do our part to save the planet. It was really fun to think about different ways to help the environment and share my ideas with others.After the first round, I made it to the second round where the top performers from each region competed against each other. This time, we had to write a persuasive essay on a controversial topic. I chose to write about whether or not students should have to wear school uniforms. I had to research both sides of the argument and make a strong case for my opinion. It was challenging, but I was proud of my essay.Finally, the top students from the second round made it to the final round where we had to write a personal narrative about a meaningful experience in our lives. I wrote about the time I volunteered at a local animal shelter and how it changed my perspective on compassion and helping others. It was a really emotional essay to write, but I poured my heart into it.In the end, I didn't win the competition, but I had so much fun participating and challenging myself to become a better writer. I learned a lot from the experience and I can't wait to seewhat other writing opportunities come my way in the future. Who knows, maybe one day I'll be a famous author or journalist!So, that's my experience with the 2024 National College English Essay Competition. It was a blast and I can't wait to see what next year's competition has in store! Thanks for listening, guys!篇3Hi guys! Today I'm gonna tell you all about the 2024 National College Students English Writing Competition hosted by the Peer Edit Network Cup. It was super cool, and I had so much fun participating in it!So the competition was for college students from all over the country to showcase their writing skills in English. We had to write an essay on a topic of our choice, and the essays would be judged on grammar, creativity, and organization. I chose to write about the importance of education in shaping our future. I talked about how education can help us develop critical thinking skills, learn new things, and prepare us for the challenges of the future.After submitting our essays, we had to wait for the results to come out. It was nerve-wracking, but also really exciting to see how everyone else did. Finally, the day of the results came, and Ifound out that I had won first place! I was so surprised and happy, and I couldn't believe it!I got to attend the awards ceremony where I received a trophy and a certificate for my achievement. It was such a great feeling to be recognized for my hard work and dedication to writing. I also got to meet a lot of other talented writers and make some new friends along the way.Overall, the 2024 National College Students English Writing Competition was a fantastic experience for me. It pushed me to challenge myself and improve my writing skills, and I had a lot of fun participating in it. I can't wait to see what other opportunities come my way in the future, and I'm excited to continue growing as a writer.Thanks for listening to my story, guys! I hope you all have the chance to participate in a competition like this someday. Keep writing and following your dreams! Bye!篇4Hey guys! Guess what, I recently joined the 2024 Batch Correction Cup for college students all over the country, and I want to share my experience with you. So, buckle up and get ready for some awesome English writing fun!Last week, I received an email from my English teacher about the competition and decided to give it a shot. The topic was "How Technology Has Changed Our Lives", and I was super excited to start brainstorming ideas.I began by outlining the changes technology has brought to communication, education, and entertainment. I talked about how social media has made it easier to connect with friends and family, how online classes have revolutionized the way we learn, and how streaming services have transformed the way we enjoy movies and TV shows.After I was done with my outline, I started writing the essay. I used lots of examples and personal experiences to support my points, and made sure to include a strong introduction and conclusion. It took me a few days to complete the essay, but I was really proud of the final result.Finally, the day of the competition arrived. I submitted my essay online, and waited anxiously for the results. When they were announced, I couldn't believe it - I had won first place! I was over the moon with excitement and couldn't wait to share the news with my friends and family.Overall, participating in the 2024 Batch Correction Cup was an amazing experience. It challenged me to think creatively andimprove my writing skills, and I had a lot of fun in the process. I can't wait to see what other competitions I can participate in the future.So, if you're a college student who loves writing, I encourage you to join competitions like this one. You never know - you might just surprise yourself with what you're capable of. Good luck, and happy writing!篇5Hey guys, guess what? I recently participated in the 2024 National University English Essay Contest! It was super exciting and I wanted to share all about it with you.First of all, let me tell you about the topic of the essay. We had to write about the impact of social media on our lives. I thought it was a really interesting topic because social media is such a big part of our daily lives now. I wrote about how social media can connect us with friends and family, but also how it can sometimes make us feel lonely or left out.After writing my essay, I submitted it online and waited anxiously for the results. Finally, the day of the results came and I was so thrilled to find out that I had won the first prize in my agegroup! I couldn't believe it, I was jumping up and down with excitement.The next part of the contest was the oral presentation. I had to stand in front of a panel of judges and deliver my essay in English. I was so nervous, but I practiced a lot and tried to speak confidently. The judges asked me some questions about my essay and I answered them as best as I could.Finally, after all the presentations were done, they announced the winners. I was so happy to hear my name called out for the first prize in the oral presentation category! I couldn't stop smiling, I was so proud of myself.Overall, participating in the 2024 National University English Essay Contest was an amazing experience. I learned so much, met new friends, and gained a lot of confidence in my English writing and speaking skills. I can't wait to participate again next year and see what new adventures await me.So, guys, if you ever get a chance to join a writing contest, don't hesitate! It's a great way to challenge yourself and improve your English skills. Who knows, you might even win a prize like I did!篇6Hey guys, guess what? I took part in the 2024 Correction Cup for College Students English Essay Competition and had a blast! Let me tell you all about it.So, the competition was super exciting. Students from all over the country submitted their essays and I was one of them. I wrote about my summer vacation and how I had so much fun going swimming, playing with my friends, and just enjoying the sunshine. It was so much fun to write about!Then came the waiting part. I was so nervous waiting for the results to come out. But finally, they did and guess what? I won! I couldn't believe it, I was so happy! My essay was chosen as one of the best and I even got a prize for it.I learned so much from this experience. I learned that hard work and practice really do pay off. I also learned that it's important to believe in yourself and your abilities. And most of all, I learned that writing can be really fun and rewarding.I can't wait to enter more competitions in the future and see where my writing can take me. Who knows, maybe one day I'll be a famous author! But for now, I'm just happy to have had this amazing experience and to have learned so much. Thanks, 2024 Correction Cup! It was the best!篇7Hey guys, do you know what happened in the 2024 Correcting Net Cup for National University Students? Let me tell you all about it!So, like, the competition was super cool with tons of university students from all over the country joining in. They had to write essays in English and show off their awesome writing skills. I mean, it's not easy to write in a different language, right?The topic of the competition was all about the environment and how we can protect it. The students had to come up with creative ideas and solutions to help save our planet. They talked about things like recycling, using less plastic, and planting more trees. It was so inspiring to see how passionate they were about making a difference.And guess what? The essays were all really well-written and thoughtful. I was super impressed by how smart and talented these students are. They even used fancy words and phrases to make their essays sound super professional.In the end, the judges had to pick the top three essays. It was such a tough decision because all the essays were so good. Butfinally, they announced the winners and everyone cheered and clapped. It was such an exciting moment!I think the 2024 Correcting Net Cup for National University Students was a huge success. It showed us that young people really care about the environment and want to make a difference.I can't wait to see what amazing things these students will do in the future.So, let's all do our part to protect the environment and make the world a better place. We can all be like those awesome students who wrote those amazing essays. Let's go, guys! Let's save the planet together!篇8Title: My Experience in the 2024 National College English Essay CompetitionHey everyone, guess what? I recently participated in the 2024 National College English Essay Competition and it was so much fun! Let me tell you all about my experience.First of all, I was super excited when I found out that I was selected to represent my school in the competition. I couldn't believe that I was going to compete against students from allover the country. I spent a lot of time preparing for the competition by practicing my writing skills and learning new vocabulary words. I even asked my English teacher for feedback on my essays to make sure they were the best they could be.On the day of the competition, I was nervous but also excited to show off my writing skills. The competition was held at a big university, and there were so many students there who had also worked hard to get there. The first round of the competition was a written essay, and I felt pretty confident about my essay topic. I wrote about my experience learning a new language and how it had changed my perspective on the world. I also made sure to use some of the new vocabulary words I had learned in my essay.After the first round, there was a break for lunch and I had a chance to meet some of the other students competing. It was so cool to hear about their experiences and learn about different writing styles. In the afternoon, there was a second round of the competition where we had to do a spoken presentation on a different topic. I chose to talk about the importance of education in today's society, and I felt really good about my presentation.At the end of the day, the judges announced the winners of the competition. I was so nervous as they read out the names,but when they called my name as one of the winners, I couldn't believe it! I was so proud of myself for doing my best and it felt amazing to be recognized for my hard work.Overall, participating in the 2024 National College English Essay Competition was an experience I will never forget. I learned so much from the other students, improved my writing skills, and gained more confidence in my abilities. I can't wait to continue practicing and competing in more competitions in the future. Bring it on, world of writing!篇9Wow, the 2024 Batch Correcting Website Cup National English Essay Competition was so much fun! I can't believe I made it to the final round! It was a super cool experience to be able to compete with so many talented students from all over the country. The competition was tough, but I learned a lot and had a great time.In the competition, we had to write an essay on a given topic within a limited time. It was challenging to come up with ideas and write everything down before the deadline, but I managed to do my best. The topic was about the importance of protectingthe environment, and I was really inspired to write about how we can all do our part to make the world a better place.I talked about how we can reduce waste, recycle, and use renewable energy sources to help save the planet. I also shared some personal experiences and stories to make my essay more interesting and engaging. It was so much fun to put my thoughts and ideas into words and share them with others.When the results were announced, I was so nervous! But when they called my name as one of the winners, I was over the moon! I couldn't believe it - I had actually won a prize in a national competition! I felt so proud of myself and grateful for the opportunity to showcase my writing skills.Overall, the 2024 Batch Correcting Website Cup National English Essay Competition was a blast! I had so much fun writing my essay, meeting new friends, and learning from others. I can't wait to participate again next year and see how much I can improve. Thank you to the organizers for such a great experience!篇10Oh my gosh, I can't believe I'm writing an English essay for the 2024 Correcting Net Cup National College Student EnglishComposition Contest! It's like the biggest competition ever for us college students!So, like, the topic is about the impact of technology on our daily lives. And I think it's super interesting! Technology has totally changed the way we do things, right? Like, we have smartphones that can do everything for us, from ordering food to finding directions. It's so cool!But, you know, there's also a downside to all this technology. Like, sometimes I feel like we're always on our phones and we forget to talk to each other in real life. And, like, cyberbullying is a real problem too. It's like technology can be good and bad at the same time.I think we need to find a balance, you know? Like, we should use technology to make our lives easier, but also make sure to spend time with our friends and family without our phones. And we should always be kind and respectful online, because cyberbullying is just not cool.Overall, I think technology is pretty amazing, but we need to be careful about how we use it. Let's use it for good and make sure it doesn't take over our lives. So yeah, that's my essay for the 2024 Correcting Net Cup National College Student English Composition Contest. I hope I win! Yay!。

批改网高分作文--范文--十分之9.5

批改网高分作文--范文--十分之9.5

批改网高分作文--范文--十分之9.5Love brighten worldWhen there is love, there comes hope. The picture depicts a common sense of a lamp brightening the darkness, telling a philosophy to us as to love. As we can see, evidently, love compared to be a lamp and when the darker surrounding is, the brighter it will be. Though conspicuous, the drawing is undoubtedly meaningful and pays to think that have we ever attach importance to love surrounding us.It goes without saying that love is of essential for everyone, whereas only when our condition is rougher will the love become more significant. A case in point is the Brooklyn bridge, built by John Roebling and his son and considered as one of the most unbelievable miracle in architecture. On account of an accident, Roebling died of tetanus and his son, called Washington Roebling, was completely paralyzed. However, Washington was encouraged by his wife who gave him love and support him to overcome the obstacles in his path. Without her help and affection, he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and not to mention the reward he can take pride in.What's more, the Brooklyn indeed light up the world, so do their love.As far as I am concerned, it is universally acknowledged that love is of consequence, while loving each other is our obligation and being loved is our privilege. For one thing, on no account can we be indifferent to other's pain since they might go through some surge. That is the reason why we should hug and counsel them to restore their confidence. For the other thing, we may as well go all out to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate the darkness of their hearts as well. T o conclude,only when we fall into the darkest place, will we truly understand how precious love is. For your information, it is love that contributes to the harmony and wealthiness of a nation, that results in our power and ability to tackle the challenge and finally cope with it once for all, that leads to a considerable number of people struggle to achieve their goals.A letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on CampusDate: November 21,2013 Dear president, I am an undergraduate of Beijing Institute of Graphic Communication. The reason why I write this letter is to complain about the canteen service on campus. On account of that they fail to provide healthy food for us. It goes without saying that we should attach importance to the quality of food, furthermore I have to indicate that the price is definitely unacceptable. What's more, the waiter's attitude to consumers is fairly rude.First and foremost, it is universally acknowledged that quality is of essential,especially in business of restaurants. Whereas, it is confirmed that college canteen rather take advantage of the illegal cooking oil in defiance of the harmful impact on our health than ensure their economic income.Besides, the waiters do nothing but chatting. It is highly desirable for these waiters submitting themselves to the rules of canteen, established to remind their employee that consumers' interest should be taken into account permanently. Last but not least, the food price is far beyond the standard we can accept, puzzling me over about the reflection of their management style.To conclude, I insist that it is the integrity that contributes to success of Amazon corporation, that results in a nation beingrespected, that leads to the harmony in a society. Only when we go all out to take steps to tackle this problem can we have a harmonious campus. Needless to say, integrity, making continuous improvement in our society, is of essential to business, and that is the reason why we may as well take food safety into account.PickpocketIn this composition, I will describe an event about pickpocket which I witnessed on the last year. That was an extremely cold morning, when a shocking event about pickpocket happened to me. I aboard a bus with the hustle and bustle of large crowds. It was so terrible that whenever it comes to my mind I will tremble with enormous fear.I still remember clearly that I stood against the handrail, listening to a quiet song. Everything seems as usual, for insurance, the bus was crowded and adults get the utmost out of spare time to chat. Suddenly I felt someone is scrabbling about me with his hand and I immediately knew what horrible thing happened to me, trying to grasp the thief's wrist at once, but it was too late. I had to recognize that he is so sensitive that once he realized I became conscious, he turned to run as fast as he can. Recalling the matter, it goes without saying that it has a profound impact on both individuals and society and that is the reason why we should attach importance to pickpocket. What's more, for a harmonious society, justice is of the essential.It is universally acknowledged that pickpocket, which is the initiator of evil, is nothing but a crime. Whereas, thefts are common occurrences, and on account of that, it is high time that we took some measures to tackle this problem. Needless to say, those who violate the constitution should be punished sincerobbers have a negative impacts on people's psychological health. That is to say, we may as well go all out to prevent theft from happening. Meanwhile, we cannot emphasize the importance of protecting people's property and health too much. On no account can we ignore the value of justice and that is the reason why we look forward to government taking steps to protect our rights, which in return can contribute to the whole society. Deserve to be mentioned, an advantage of upholding justice is that it can make our society harmonious.More Haste, Less SpeedAs a proverb goes, "more haste, less speed ", that is to say that we can interpret as haste make waste. It goes without saying that we all attach importance to efficient, whereas if we give priority to efficiency and in defiance of the consequence, we always realize that things go athwart. In addition, it is self-evident that things will develop in the opposite direction when they become extreme. That is the reason why we use to say that great minds mature slowly.There are numerous examples supporting this argument. A case in point is the Great Leap Forward in China, which is nothing but a disaster to China's economy, had caused many Chinese people starving to death. Needless to say that on no account can we ignore that development must be step by step, furthermore, we should take advantage of our patience and enthusiasm to seek perfection. For another example, it is universally acknowledged that Edison severed training and hammering to choose his materials appropriately. He might feel anxious, but he worked with perseverance and looked forward to achieving his goal and all the work hard pays off in the end.Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw theconclusion that soft fire makes sweet malt, on account of that on the way access to success, we should take patience into account. Though time is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make our work better. What's more, we may as well go all out to do something meaningfully but please remember that do not act in haste or be hot-headed. To conclude, more haste, less speed.Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good DeedIt goes without saying that there is no complete agreement among people about whether one should expect a reward for doing a good deed.Supporters prefer to the viewpoint that one should offer help without looking forward to being awarded. On the contrary, opponents insist that reward is preferable, on account of that Samaritan deserve to possess reputation and award. What's more, a reward can stimulate increasingly people to go all out to do good and get ready to help others through fair and foul. On the other hand, it is universally acknowledged that a favorable social environment is far beyond what we need to pay. Deserve to be mentioned, it pays to improve public morals by rewarding their enthusiasm and attach importance to encourage citizen tomaintain good ethical behavior.Nevertheless, overwhelming majority of supporters stubbornly and arbitrarily cling to their own viewpoint. First and foremost, they maintain that one can take pride in doing good, nonetheless, on no account can we look forward to being rewarded. To put it another way, we cannot take advantage of doing good. Besides, they point out that if anyone do a good deed should take into account, there will be a mass of people doing nothing but to help others on a daily basis.Weighing up these two arguments, I cannot agree with theopponents more. The reason why I stick to my opinion is that there are a number of phenomena in our society and it is high time that we took some measures to tackle these problems. Needless to say that doing good is not only citizen's obligation, but is the cardinal virtue to build a society which is abounded with harmony. To conclude, we may as well set a good example, appealing everyone to take ownership of doing good deeds to improve our community.The Celebration of Western FestivalsIn recent years, a number of chinese people are fond of western festivals. For instance, not a few chinese lovers get caught up in the valentine's day, furthermore, a crowd of young people is attracted by the Chirstmas's day. In brief, it goes without saying that, western festivals have become increasingly popular all around china, especially for those people who are looking forward to living as westerners.As far as I am concerned, many different reasons contribute to this phenomenon. First and foremost, the reason why people in favour of western festivals is that an increasing number of people are beginning to realize the significance of globalization, which is the key parts of our daily life.Besides, we may as well try to blend some western culture in with our society. Last but not least, we can not only take advantage of western festivals, but it also can contribute to the development of China. Needless to say that it pays to attach great importance to the lifestyle of Westerners to improve our own culture, meanwhile, it can exert a significance influence on keeping pace with the times.From my perspective, everything has pros and cons, nonetheless, there is no limitation to what culture could accomplish, since its benefits is far beyond its disadvantage. Onon account can we throw out our traditional culture, we should take pride in it. However, it is not wise for us to reject western culture, such as festivals, on account of the active role it played in the world civilization. To make a long story short, we should hold a positive attitude to western festivals, which is available for raising the culture level in our country.。

批改网学生互评英语作文

批改网学生互评英语作文

批改网学生互评英语作文Sure, I can help you with that! Let's start with the English feedback first.First of all, your essay demonstrates a strong grasp of English language skills. Your ideas are well-developed and organized, and you've made good use of vocabulary and grammar throughout the piece.Your introduction effectively sets the stage for therest of the essay, providing a clear overview of the topic. However, I would suggest adding a bit more detail or context to engage the reader further.In terms of content, your arguments are logical and supported by evidence. You've done a commendable job of presenting different perspectives on the issue and offering your own insights.One area for improvement is the coherence and flow between paragraphs. While your ideas are solid, transitions between them could be smoother to enhance the overall readability of the essay.Additionally, consider varying your sentence structure and incorporating more complex sentences to add depth and sophistication to your writing.Now, let's switch to Chinese for the feedback.首先,你的作文展现了扎实的英语语言能力。

批改网90分作文范文

批改网90分作文范文

批改网15分作文得多少分算过Dear Health Expert(Dr.who),Please help me.I'm looking forward to your reply.Thanks.YoursXXX批改网对作文不满意后,如何对作文进行提高活动"作文真难!"这是小学生的普遍反映。

作文到底难在哪里?经过多年的探索和实践,笔者发现,小学生作文之所以这么"难",原因不外乎两个:一是小学生缺乏写作兴趣;二是写作素材平时积累不足。

为此,本人从这两个方面入手,对作文教学进行了改进。

一、培养兴趣,加强平时训练。

教育家赞可夫说:"只有在学生情绪高涨,不断要求向上,想把自己独有的想法表达出来的气氛下,才能产生出使儿童的作文丰富多彩的那些思想、感情和词语。

"可以说,兴趣是提高学生写作的内动力。

在平时的教学中,生动有趣的素材积累也是影响学生作文的一个极为重要的因素。

笔者以为,教师应该有目的、有计划地教给学生观察和写作的方法,培养学生兴趣,加强平时训练。

1.复述故事写作文小学生都爱听故事,为了让他们兴趣盎然地进入写作状态,形成轻松的写作氛围,笔者告诉学生,作文就是把听到的主要内容记录下来,让别人看了清楚明白。

接着再给学生讲一个故事,学生听得聚精会神。

之后,请两名同学上台复述,台下同学可以提示补充,最后让学生把故事写下来。

同学们都满怀信心地完成了本次作文,文章大都通顺流畅、具体,笔者不失时机地给予他们表扬和鼓励。

这样的训练使学生心情愉快,既有了成功的体验,又减轻了对作文的畏惧心理,也提高了语言文字的表达能力。

2.创设情景写作文三、四年级学生最怕作文,因为一、二年级训练的是看图说话,现在面对题目要学生写一段话甚至一篇文章,学生自然感到无从下笔。

鉴于这种情况,教师必须为学生创设情景,让学生写出自己看到的、听到的和想到的,从具体到抽象,从易到难,减轻作文的难度。

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批改网作文范文篇一:句酷批改网作文范文2标题:How to Improve Your English字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字满分: 100要求:字数180字左右,给出分论点后需用举例手法论证English is an important language to communicate with individual from other countries. Therefore, it is our obligation to improve English if we are eager to develop our ability to communicate with foreigners. My suggestions about improving English as follows.(转自: 千叶帆文摘:批改网作文范文)In thefirst instance, you ought to read more English books in place of Chinese books. It is a wonderful ideal for you to increase vocabulary and expand vision from foreign literature. My brother was absorbed in foreign literature in university and read a large number of books about it. He can communicate with foreigners in daily life fluently even he will work in the United States next month.Watching English movies or listening to English music is a great way that must be taken into consideration. The most rewarding result of doing it for me is that I got gold medal in the English speech contest. It is a simple thing for you to listen to music in your spare time or watch English movies relax yourself when you feel tired.Whether your study got along well or not, always remember to improve your Engliah, it connects you with your future as a bridge.标题:Living alone or Living with Roommates字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字满分: 100要求:Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on whether college students should live alone or with roommates, following the outline given below.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.1( 有人认为大学里应独自生活2( 另一些认为大学里应与别人同住3( 你的看法One of the controversial issue today is whether college students should live alone in daily life rather than share room with classmates.Some individuals take it for granted that students should learn some life skills and know how to deal with life problems that we meet. Therefore, it is a wonderful chance to train them bystaying alone in university. Others adopt a totally different view that students should be advocated to live together with classmates. Itis significant for students to eich their experience and it can improve their ability in communicating with others.As far as I concerned, I agree with the second opinion to some extent. We can become more mature, more tolerant and more optimistic bystay with others. It can also help us to enter the society easily in the future.篇二:句酷批改网作文范文标题:大学生参加社会实践字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字满分: 100要求:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled College Students Should Take Part in Social Practice following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.1、很多大学生缺乏社会实践2、大学生应该参加社会实践3、我的观点范文:According to a survey, in recent years, many universitiesignored the phenomenon that college students did not have enough chance to take part in social practice leaded to they lacked the ability to adapt to society in the future. When we asked college students whether they had engaged in social practice, most of them said no. I take it for granted that social practice can bring many benefits to college student. In the first instance, social practice can offer students adequate chance to meet various people in society. They can accumulate enough experience and use it in the future career. The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that it is a greatopportunity for them put theory into practice and improve their In a word, I take the attitude that social practice is a critical thing for university students and they should also learn how to balance between study and work.标题:Five(Three) Famous Symbols of Chinese Culture字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字满分: 100要求:字数200字左右,须有中心,围绕一个中心选取三至五个具有中国特征的事物描写As we know, China is one of the countries with the longest historyof ancient civilization in the world. Our ancestors made a contribution to our country even world with a wealth of culturallegacy.One of the famous symbols of Chinese Culture is the Yellow River. It is the second longest river in China and considered as Mother river of Chinese individual. It is generally recognized that Huang Di was born here and Nu Wa was made by mud from Yellow River.Chinese knot is also a famous symbol in culture. Our ancestors usedit to record things but now it is mainly used for decoration in the Favorite Spring. It must be emphasized that Chinese knot represents love, harmony and marry.The last symbol that must be taken into consideration is The Great Wall. The Great Wall was built by ordinary people to avoid othercountries attacking ourselves at the beginning. It is called as world miracle was made by intelligent individual.The Yellow River, Chinese knot and The Great Wall, represents Chinese outstanding culture and it is just a part of the Chinese excellent culture. I hope everyone from the world could learn the acknowledgeable about Chinese culture.篇三:批改网高分表达It goes without saying that whereas only when our condition is rougher will the studying abroad become more significant. A case in point, we can have it. On account of an accident, he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and not to mention the reward he can take pride in. What's more , it is universallyacknowledged that studying abroad is of consequence. For one thing, on no account can we be indifferent to other's pain since they might go through some surge. That is the reason why we should hug and counsel them to restore their confidence. For the other thing, we may as well go all out to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate the darkness of their hearts as well. For your information, it is love that contributes to the harmony and wealthiness of a nation, thatresults in our power and ability to tackle the challenge and finally cope with it once for all, that leads to a considerable number of people struggle to achieve their goals.What,more 提高文章连接性 studying4.1 When there is love, there comes hope. [修改][学习提示] 易混词汇: affection, love, attachment 均含“爱,热爱”之意。

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