高考英语书面表达讲义及训练(20)参考范文 巧练写作,提高表达水平
英语高考书面表达应用文指导与演练
英语高考书面表达应用文指导与演练八、普通电子邮件英文电子邮件和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同，电子邮件类试题的要求一般都是只写正文，其写法比较简单，开头第一行写称呼，顶格写，称呼后面用逗号；正文部分从称呼下一行开始写起，从左边起空两格。
正文后面是署名，署名写在正文下一行或二行处，靠右写(同信件的署名)。
具体写作结构如下：1．Thank you for your e-mail.谢谢你的电子邮件。
2．I’m very glad/pleased to tell you that...我很高兴地告诉你……3．I am very glad to have received the e-mail you sent me last night.我非常高兴收到你昨天晚上发给我的电子邮件。
4．How are you getting along with your study?你的学习进展怎样？5．I’m very glad to tell you something about...我很高兴告诉你一些关于……的事情。
6．Please e-mail me soon and tell me about your...请尽快给我回电子邮件，告诉我关于你的……7．I’m looking forward to your reply.我盼望着你的回复。
8．If so，please e-mail me in response...如果是这样，请给我回复邮件……假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。
请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。
内容包括：1．时间和地点；2.内容：学习唐诗；3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
满分佳作名师点评Dear Leslie，I am delighted to know you are interestedin Tang poems.Now I’m writing to tell youthe plan for the next class.Actually I am very fond of Tang poems.I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you.We are to meet on Sunday morning in the People’s Park，where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful.We will learn from 8∶00 am to10∶00 am.Besides，I advise you to go to the library to borrow a history book and learn the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance，which will help you better understand the poems to be learned.If you have any questions，please let me know.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua 1.邮件的开头点出写信目的，使用了套语Now I’m writing to tell you the plan for the next class.。
高中英语2024届高考复习应用文写作练习与讲解系列0920(共四篇)
高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、投诉信：对口语培训随机分组有意见假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan要举办口语培训班，让练习口语的所有的学生两人一组练习，随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，说说原因和提建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
2.写作思路：三段论。
第一段开门见山提出写作目的：对口语培训课随机分组提出意见；第二段写自己认为随机分组不妥的原因并提出建议；第三段期待外教能够考虑自己的建议。
【参考范文】Dear Rhan,I'm Li Hua, a student from your class. I am writing to discuss the grouping of the oral practice class.Your method of asking us to practice in pairs will undoubtedly improve our oral English faster. However, your decision on randomly selecting two to form a group, in my opinion, is improper. For one thing, the two students may be strangers to each other, which will greatly reduce the effect of our oral practice. For another, The two students with different English levels and interests will make it challengeing to practice our oral English. Therefore, it is preferable for us to choose our own teammates, from which we willget twice the result with half the effort.I hope you will give my advice your full consideration. Thank you! (130 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的瑞恩老师：我是您的学生李华。
2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练(1)及参考范文：如何提高英语写作
2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（1）及参考范文：如何提高英语写作(2011·山东卷)假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。
七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。
请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。
注意：1．词数：120～150；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文Dear Tom，I have missed you very much.How about your study and life in China?I should tell you that I have something to be helped by you.In July, I will take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in Beijing in summer vacation.I want to make a speech about American scientist Thomas Edison.But I don't know about him deeply.Could you tell me about some background about him, especially how hard he studied science.Please tell me more about his spirit to devote to science, his story to innovation in science.I wish I could become a scientist like Thomas Edison to invent many new things to the world.And please tell me how to use the American motto and logion, which can make my speech more vivid.I will visit you after the speech contest.Thanks a lot!Faithfully yours，Li Hua*************************************************************结束如何展开你的文章是英文写作必不可少的一步。
高中各类型英语书面表达学习讲义与范文
第五章书面表达张腊明高考对写的要求：写作是四项语言技能中不可分割的一个重要组成部分，更是语言生成能力的重要表现形式。
高考英语书面表达部分要求考生根据情景和提示，书面表述事实、观点、情感和想象。
要求考生应能围绕主题，准确应用语法结构和词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的思想。
----摘自《福建省高考考试说明》高考书面表达的写作方法：高考的书面表达写作时，应抓住以下四个要点：(一)认真审题（Carefully read the directions.）明确要求。
审题是做好书面表达的前提，题前应先认真阅读提示/题示，理解和明确题目要求，审题时主要从这么几个方面入手。
①审文体：弄清要写何种体裁的文章，如记叙文、说明文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、条）议论文等。
以及该用什么时态。
②审格式：书面表达中一定的体裁有特定的格式，比如书信有信头、称呼、正文、结尾、署名等部分须写完整。
③审人称：即弄清书面表达要求用何种人称来写，是第一人称、第二人称、还是第三人称。
(二)抓住要点（Mainly catch the points.）紧扣主题。
是书面表达的评分依据之一，因此，弄清题意的基础上，应逐条地、完整地将内容要点写全，必要时在紧扣主题时可适当发挥。
(三)合理组织（Closely organize the passage.）行文连贯。
写作中要点要写全，合理安排，分清文章的层次，弄清先说什么，后说什么，并使之连贯，过渡要自然，注意使用恰当的连接成分。
(四)准确表达（Accurately express the ideas），遣词造句。
一篇好的书面表达应做到开门见山，切中题意，文章结尾应起到画龙点睛的作用，文章内容的表达要甄酌用词，做到表达准确。
写作中应避免用一种句型显得单调，注意前几句和后几句，文章要有亮点，可以套用阅读理解短文中的好句子。
高考书面表达的几点备考策略：(一)练书写；记录高中英语中的高频使用但又是自己经常拼写错的词汇。
高中英语2024届高考复习应用文投稿写作讲解和练习
高考英语应用文投稿写作讲解和练习【写作指导】把握投稿的写作框架。
其写作框架如下：第一段：开门见山，引出话题。
第二段：介绍主题人或事物细节。
第三段：表达愿望。
【素材宝库】词汇积累之第一段词汇积累第一段：引出话题1.as we all know,..../ as is known to all,....众所周知......2.it is widelyacknowledged that....人们普遍认为...3.Nowadays, with the development of..../ with the increasing popularity of ...如今，随着...的发展/流行 when it comes to ....当谈到...时4.In the long span of the Chinese history...在中国漫长的历史中......5.When it comes to protecting the ocean, it is well-known that ocean plays an important part in our life.说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。
第二段：介绍主题细节1.Not only does exercise build up our bodies but also helps us stay energetic.锻炼不仅能锻炼我们的身体，还能帮助我们保持活力。
2.Only if we take action to exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future .只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。
3.My favorite scientist is Qian Xuesen, a ________, __________________________ scientist.我最喜欢的科学家是钱学森，一个________，__________________________科学家第三段：表达愿望1.I sincerely hope Youth will achieve greater success and enjoy more popularity.我真诚地希望青年能取得更大的成功，更受欢迎。
高三英语书面表达精品范例
书面表达范文精选假定你是李华，你校今年开设了蔬菜栽培、传统工艺(handcraft)等实践课程。
请你给外国好友John写一封邮件，内容包括:1.你的参与情况;2.你的体会。
Yours sincerelyLi Hua Dear John,I hope you're well! Exciting news from here: our school introduced practical courses this year, including vegetable cultivation and traditional handicrafts.I've embraced both with enthusiasm. Diving into the world of gardening, I've developed a newfound respect for the patience required in nurturing life from seed to harvest. It's been both challenging and rewarding to see my efforts bloom.The handicraft course has been equally enriching, offering me a hands-on experience in preserving our cultural heritage through traditional crafts.These experiences have been incredibly fulfilling, teaching me not just about planting or crafting, but about growth, patience, and the importance of preserving our cultural legacy. I look forward to sharing more about this journey with you.Yours sincerely, Dear John,I hope you're doing well! I’d like to share something exci ting from my school.Recently, my school introduced practical courses on vegetable cultivation and traditional handcrafts, and I've enrolled in both. It’s been a fantastic journey so far. In the vegetable cultivation class, I've learned how to grow vegetables from seeds, which has been incredibly rewarding. It's amazing to see the fruits of my labor literally come to life in the school’s garden .On the handcraft side, I've been exploring the art of making traditional Chinese crafts.This experience has been eye-opening, giving me a deeper appreciation for our cultural heritage. Both courses have not only taught me valuable skills but also instilled in me a greater respect for nature and tradition.I can't wait to show you some of the crafts I've made and perhaps share some fresh vegetables when you visit!Yours sincerely,Li Hua。
高考英语书面表达(写作)模板12篇
高考英语书面表达（写作）模板12篇黄金模板一：对比观点题型（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1．有一些人认为……2．另一些人认为……3．我的看法……The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following threereasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me,the former is surely a wise choice.（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）. For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason canbe the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing,⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)．Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．黄金模板二：阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．１．阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．２．分析并举例使其更充实．The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds usthat ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore, ------------------(理由三)．In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you under stand itand apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.黄金模板三：解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径１．问题现状２．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally,I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is a waiting us because --------------(带来的好处).黄金模板四：说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）１．说明事物现状２．事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）３．你对现状（或前景）的看法Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(Ａ的优点之一). Besides-------------------（Ａ的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．Tomake mattersworse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)．Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)．(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)．)议论文的框架黄金模板五：不同观点列举型（选择型）There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Further more,in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubtthat___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that__观点一或二______. It isnot only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.黄金模板六：利弊型的议论文Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects asfollows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.Just as a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To beginwith, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.黄金模板七：答题性议论文Currently, there isa widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.黄金模板八：谚语警句性议论文It is well know to us that the proverb:" ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not onlyin our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The sayingcan be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( alsotheoretically )A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance topractice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science andtechnology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it isalso of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the morebenefits we will get in our daily study and job..黄金模板九：图表作文的框架As isshown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in thetable(graph/picture/pie/chart),___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadilyrising/decr easing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From thesharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On theone hand, ________. On the other hand,_______is due to the fact that ________.In addition,________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonlyconvincing.As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.黄金模板十：实用性写作（申请信)Your addressMonth, Date, yearReceiver's addressDear ...,I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the positionin .... And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confidentthat I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising..../ I feel I am competent to meet therequirements you have listed. On the one hand, .... On the other hand, .... Iam enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offerme a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a responsefrom you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies atyour earliest convenience.Best regards for your healthand success.Sincerely yours,X X X黄金模板十一：现象说明文Recently_______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________. There are many reasonsexplaining__________________________.The main reasonis____________________.what ismore_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As aresult_______________.Considering allthere,________________________.For onething_____________________,foranother____________.In Conclusion____________________.黄金模板十二：高考英语作文热点话题词汇话题一：中学生的爱好与兴趣Sparetime(业余时间), favorite(最喜欢的), Interest(兴趣),hobby(爱好), appetite(嗜好),taste(口味),read novels(也小说), play football/basketball(打足球/篮球),surf the internet(上网), chat online(在线聊天), play games(玩游戏),collect stamps(集邮), makee-friends(交网友),climb mountains(爬山), watch TV(看电视), enjoypopular music(喜欢流行音乐),be interested in(对…感兴趣),develop an interest in(在…方面发展兴趣), be fondof(喜欢…),be keen on(喜欢…), have lovefor(喜爱…), have a taste in(对…有兴趣)等。
高中英语2024届高考复习应用文写作练习与讲解(共六篇)
高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、假定你是李华，你在上周日搭坐102号公交车，该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很愤怒。
于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。
要点如下：1.司机的不文明行为(大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等)。
2.希望尽快查清此事。
Dear Sir,I am Li Hua.I am writing to complain about one of your bus-drivers’ improper and rude behaviors.Last Sunday, I was taking the No.102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast.So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving, but he didn’t pay any attention.What’s worse, he drove even faster.Then another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind.But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance.However, he didn’t apologize but said rudely “It’s none of your business.”I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.Sincerely yours,Li Hua【词汇亮点】plain about sth.投诉……2.rude behaviors 粗鲁的行为3.keep on doing sth.一直做某事4.advise sb.to do sth.建议某人做某事5.what’s worse 更糟糕的是6.bear 忍受，容忍7.keep sth.in mind 牢记8.lose one’s balance 失去平衡9.investigate this incident 调查这件事10.take measures 采取行动11.prevent sb.from happening again 阻止……再次发生二、假定你是李华，你校的英语报正在征稿。
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同学们也许认为英语写作十分难。
要么拿到题目，自己无从下手；要么自己洋洋洒洒下笔千言，却没有几句是正确的。
其实，掌握具体技巧，经过一定时间训练，英语写作是可以征服的。
1. 扎实基本句型的训练写文章以句子为开始，因此我们要学会用句子来表意，大量练习写句子。
英语有五种基本句型：（1）主+谓；（2）主+谓+宾语；（3）主+系动词+表语；（4）主+谓+间接宾语+直接宾语；（5）主+谓+宾语+宾补。
当然还有许多常用句型，如There be句型，What / How 引导的感叹句，祈使句，倒装句，强调句等。
我们可以通过造句，汉译英等练习方式反复操练。
2. 加强词汇学习，凝练英语表达方式语言离不开词汇，如果没有词汇，就无法用英语进行表达；如果没有一定的词汇数量，就无法准确而又灵活地表意。
因此我们要扩大自己的词汇量，并经常进行词汇训练，形成良好的表达习惯。
如果可以学会用英语解释词汇及句子，背诵些好词好句，默写些课文中重要句型，经典段落等会更好。
***********************************************************结束【记叙文写作训练01】1．请仔细看一下下面的图画，注意图画中的细节：Pollution does harm to us all!A chemical factory lies near my home. The manager was criticized by the government because the factory gave out lots of harmful smoke every day, but he paid no attention. Then the factory was forced to stop production and the manager said angrily, “Is there any evidence to show that we did harm to people's health? In fact, we haven't.”Just then, a doctor came, with the result of the medical exam, saying the manager was suffering a lung cancer. It is very clear that the pollution has harmed not only the people around the factory but also the manager himself. The manager regretted having caused so much pollution. Now he has realized the importance of keeping the air clean.******************************************************结束【记叙文写作训练02】2．根据图画写一篇短文，叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。
One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don't do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” Another day, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be. And Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their minds. They should not only care for their children's health, but their minds. They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right?***********************************************************结束3. 多训练口头表达，实现"说写"转换我们知道，"写"是口头表达的文字记录。
如果我们口头表达能力强，写作也会十分顺利。
因为我们口语中反复使用的句型结构和表达方法就是我们写作的基础。
在日常生活中，我们应该随时有意识地使用英语，大胆开口。
另外还可以多参加些英语角活动，进行英语演讲、英语辩论等活动来有意识地锻炼自己。
4. 扩大阅读量，开展多方面的写作训练大量地接触原汁原味的英语文章，并揣摩西方思维方式，这有助于我们写出地道的英语文章。
当然，阅读后，我们可以结合文章的内容进行缩写、改写、仿写或写读后感。
5. 有计划地进行文体训练一般有三种最基本的文体：记叙文、说明文和议论文。
写作之前，先要确定其文体，然后认真审题，分析表达要点，从而进行谋篇布局。
不同文体有不同写法，分别有计划地进行训练。
如记叙文中如何描述地点、人物、事情；说明文中以怎样的说明方法连段成文；议论文中写什么主题句、次主题句等。
6. 注重修改，及时记录反馈情况完成作文后，可以交给老师批阅或同学们之间互改，并认真记录写作中所出现的典型错误，当然，我们还有必要掌握以下几种具体写作技巧：1) 多用词组表达单个词义The dog was killed in the accident. →The dog lost his life in the accident.2) 避免用相同词汇My father likes reading and my mother likes cooking, but I like playing games. →My father likes reading and my mother enjoys cooking, but I am fond of playing games.3) 简单句复杂化，即尽量用较高级的表达方式①He is learning English and I am sitting beside him. →He is learning English with me sitting beside him.②That boy is very young. He can't go to school. →That boy is too young to go to school.4) 使句子开头多样化①You should work very hard to pass the exam. →To pass the exam, you should work very hard.②They have made a decision after they discussed. →After discussing, they have made a decision.③The house looked very d ifferent, dark and empty. →Dark and empty, the house looked very different.5) 巧用连接词，圆滑过渡My holidays in Jigang Mount were not only interesting but also relaxing. I fishedevery day. Usually my wife, children and I had time to take long walks in the woods. Meanwhile, I taught my children to identify many trees as well as flowers. Every night my wife and I talked late, watching the stars in the sky.6) 注重英语写作中起、承、转、合的特定词It is said that / To take... for example / On the contrary / As far as I can see / It follows that / The important thing is / There is no doubt that...7) 长短句交插We can imagine the beautiful surrounding. There are many trees along the streets. There is a clean river in the city. There are many fishes in the river. There are willow trees on the one side. There are some pieces of grassland on the other side. There are many flowers on them.修改后的段落：Just imagine the beautiful surrounding if we make our cities greener. Green trees line the streets. A clean river winds through the city, in which a lot of fishes abound. On the one side stand rows of willow trees. On the other side lies a stretch of grassland with many yellow and red flowers.修改后的这一段中，不仅句子长短交插，而且句型结构变化很大，使文章流畅自然，生动活泼。