高中英语新高考-英语作文:调查报告题的写作思路和技巧指导

高中英语新高考-英语作文:调查报告题的写作思路和技巧指导请认真阅读下面有关“不同年龄达到不同能力巅峰”的研究结果,并根据要求用英语写一篇150 字左右的文章。

“At almost any given age, most of us are getting better at some things and worse at others,”Joshua Hartshorne, an MIT cognitive science researcher and the lead author of a study looking at how intelligence changes as we age, told Business Insider. The team behind that study quizzed thousands of people aged 1090 on their ability to do things like rememberinglists of words, recognizing faces. Their results suggest that no matter what your age, there’s almost always a new peak on the horizon.【写作内容】1. 用约30 个单词概述图表和上文的主要内容;2. 用约120 个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:(1)谈谈“不同年龄达到不同能力巅峰”这一研究发现的意义(至少两点);(2)结合自身实际,说明如何在现阶段把握你的优势。

概括:1、审题:这是调查报告概括,所以要关注两点:目的,结果。

再结合图表,会发现内容就是对结果的具体描述,可以作为举例来呈现。

2、提取:关键句:how intelligence changes as we ageno matter what your age, there’s almost always a new peak on the horizon.观察:这两句表达意思其实一样,就是能力的高峰期和年龄的关系。

图表:选取18岁和70岁的结果即可。

3、合并The peak of our capacity in different aspects depends on our age. Just as the research shows, we have the best memory at 18, the largest vocabulary at 70. (30个词)4、比较自己写完后,一定要和答案范文认真比较,看自己哪儿还可以再改进:A research, which involves thousands of subjects aged 10-90, reveals that people reach different capacity peaks at different ages with teenagers blessed with good memories and the elderly possessing a large vocabulary. (32 words)我们可以看出来:范文最后把图表的例子用with的结构来表达,这样显得很紧凑,这个和13年的高考作文比较相似:With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups: “For”and “Against.”正文:第二段思路:人在不同阶段的能力巅峰不一样,这个启发就是:学会利用。

在不同阶段做符合这个阶段的事情。

除了此之外,可以心理感受去阐述,即既然你已经知道18岁不可能达到40岁某个能力的巅峰,何必自寻烦恼?总之,心理方面和品格方面的是写作常见的思维发散点。

思维点一:品质词块:Make the best use of,cultivate….; develop the potential to the fullest思维点二:心理Reduce pressure,there is no point in worrying about our weaknesses第二段:The findings cast light on how we make use o f our intelligence in the current level of state. First, we are expected to develop thepotential to the fullest based on a good understanding of our strengths in different stages. Second, there is no point in worrying about the impractical height we hope to reach. Hopefully, it can help relieve our pressure and help us maintain a good mental stability.词汇:cast light on有助于理解或明白make use of利用be expected to应该develop the potential to the fullest充分发挥潜能a good understanding of充分理解there is no point in doing....做某事无意义reach...height达到……高度relieve pressure缓解压力maintain a good mental stability保持好心态其它可能用到的词块:表示重要性:Play a big part in…Play an important role in…Be vital to…Pave the way for…Lay a solid foundation for…Contribute to…Help do…第三段思路:我怎么去做?毫无疑问,我应该好好学习,打好基础,因为此时记忆力是高峰期。

但是,光凭记忆给人死记硬背感觉,所以还要灵活运用才能发挥记忆力的优点。

请读者看我如何展开:可能用到的词块:关于能力和知识的常用词块:Tap into potentialIndependent and critical thinkingObtain knowledge and skillsBecome competitive in the job marketAchieve life valueLearn by roteCultivate judgments on…Receive a well-round knowledgeFacilitate the cultivation ofArouse our thirst for…Develop intelligenceGive full play toGet enlightened from第三段:As for me, being 18 years old is a golden age for memory, so I spare no effort to accumulate knowledge by reading widely(说明方式).Instead of learning by rote(提供选择), I also give high priority to independent and critical thinking with acquired information. It, to a big degree, facilitates my character development.词块:spare no effort to努力accumulate knowledge积累知识learn by rote死记硬背give high priority to重视independent and critical thinking 独立和批判思维facilitate有助于对比范文:The remarkable findings of the research are extremely beneficial. To begin with, clearly understanding their own strengths, people of different ages can develop their potential to the fullest. For instance, middle-aged adults have the greatest capacity to stay focused and work out arithematic problems. Furthermore, the findings will boost confidence of the aged, who find their ability in vocabulary reaching a new high.As a teenager, I shall make the most of my memory peak to gain an edge over others. Skills like critical thinking and analysis can only develop on the basis of factual knowledge. Therefore, I’ll spare no effort to expose myself to books and memorize as much as possible. Hopefully, my memory peak will lay a solid foundation for my overall growth. (123 words)。

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高中英语新高考-英语作文:调查报告题的写作思路和技巧指导

高中英语新高考-英语作文:调查报告题的写作思路和技巧指导

高中英语新高考-英语作文:调查报告题的写作思路和技巧指导请认真阅读下面有关“不同年龄达到不同能力巅峰”的研究结果,并根据要求用英语写一篇150 字左右的文章。

“At almost any given age, most of us are getting better at some things and worse at others,” Joshua Hartshorne, an MIT cognitive science researcher and the lead author of a study looking at how intelligence changes as we age, told Business Insider. The team behind that study quizzed thousands of people aged 1090 on their ability to do things like remembering lists of words, recognizing faces. Their results suggest that no matter what your age, there’s almost always a new peak on the horizon.【写作内容】1. 用约30 个单词概述图表和上文的主要内容;2. 用约120 个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:(1)谈谈“不同年龄达到不同能力巅峰”这一研究发现的意义(至少两点);(2)结合自身实际,说明如何在现阶段把握你的优势。

概括:1、审题:这是调查报告概括,所以要关注两点:目的,结果。

再结合图表,会发现内容就是对结果的具体描述,可以作为举例来呈现。

2、提取:关键句:how intelligence changes as we ageno matter what your age, there’s almost always a new peak on the horizon.观察:这两句表达意思其实一样,就是能力的高峰期和年龄的关系。

高中英语新高考-英语作文:英语写作的简单逻辑的分析和表达

高中英语新高考-英语作文:英语写作的简单逻辑的分析和表达

高中英语新高考-英语作文:英语写作的简单逻辑的分析和表达写作的传授重点是:简单逻辑的分析和表达。

授课目标:1、如何分析要点之间的逻辑2、如何写好句子3、总结写作中的各种错误题目假定你校学生会近期就“互联网对学生学习的影响”这一问题展开校园调查。

请你根据下图的调查结果写一份调查报告,并针对学生上网学习给出合理的建议,发表在校英文报上。

注意:1. 词数120左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Recently, the student union conducted a survey on the influence of the Internet on studying.写作过程写作步骤:1、列要点2、加工要点,分析其中的逻辑3、写句子,润色1.上网找资料很方便,互联网对学习有益列要点:surf the internet; find information; convenient; be good to逻辑:surf the internet; find information; (so) convenient; be good to或者:convenient; be good to; (because, for example) convenient; be good to措辞:convenient: it is convenient for sb to do…surf the internet; find informationsurf the internet for information合并:The Internet can benefit us in many ways. For example, it is convenient for us to surf the internet for information.多少人认为:about 45% of the students think / argue / hold that…最后成句:About 35% of the students think / argue / hold that the Internet can benefit us in many ways. For example, it is convenient for us to surf the internet for information.2.功课紧,平时很少接触互联网列要点:too much homework; seldom use / have access to逻辑:too much homework; (so) seldom use / have access to措辞:They have too much homework, so they seldom use the Internet.润色:With too much homework, they seldom have the chance to use the Internet.合并:About 20% of the students hold that with too much homework, they seldom have the chance to use the Internet.3.使用互联网学习容易分心,互联网对学习有负面影响列要点:can’t focus / distract attention from study; have bad effects on / influence…n egatively逻辑:词块:have bad effects on / influence…negatively -->(导致as a result)can’t focus / distract attention from study; (举例) play gamesThe following suggestions, if carried out, will make a big difference. It is suggested that we should make proper use of the Internet and make it a habit to spend limited time on it just for study instead of burying ourselves in it. After all, the internet acts as a useful tool.4.建议合理使用和养成好习惯,(例如)不要沉迷,(因为)网络是有用的工具。

写“调查报告”的高中英语作文(2)

写“调查报告”的高中英语作文(2)

写“调查报告”的⾼中英语作⽂(2)1.最近,你对班⾥60名同学(男⼥各半)进⾏了关于上⽹⽬的的调查。

2. 上周,我们学校对所有学⽣进⾏了⼀次调查,了解他们对于开设英语⾓的看法。

(set up…) Recently, I’ve conducted a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my class on their purposes of surfing the Internet.Last week, our school carried out a survey among all the students to find out their opinions about setting up an English corner.1. 你⾃⼰的上⽹⽬的及理由。

2.你是否同意循环使⽤旧课本及理由。

(recycle used textbooks)As for myself, I often go online to search some information useful for my study, because I think we should make the best use of it and learn more knowledge.As far as I’m concerned, I am in favor of recycling used textbooks because by doing so, we can help to save lots of natural resources⽇前,针对学⽣的零⽤钱(pocket money)的消费⽅向,你对你们市某中学的⾼中和初中的部分学⽣进⾏了问卷调查.得出数据如下表。

现请你⽤英⽂给某报社编辑写⼀封信,反映这⼀情况,并呼吁中学⽣树⽴正确的消费观。

注意:1.书信中不必⼀⼀列举具体数字,只要抓住主要问题和数据说明问题即可。

高考英语写作复习建议和答题技巧

高考英语写作复习建议和答题技巧

高考英语写作复习建议和答题技巧高考英语写作复习建议和答题技巧导语:在与考生沟通的过程中,我们发觉他们的书面表达的思维实力并非不活跃,只是在他们的记忆库中存储的相应表达方式不足,或记忆有误,或根本是空白。

拿到作文题目后,不愁没内容可写,只愁没词可用,或是写了不知是否正确,因此在表达过程中,要么被迫放弃,要么依据汉语的结构硬译,以致造成短文词不达意,错误地传递信息,分数也受到影响。

下面是为大家整理的高考英语写作复习建议和答题技巧,希望对大家有所帮助。

更多相关的学问,请关注CNFLA学习网!一、复习建议(一)明确写作实力的培育和提高是一个日积月累的过程。

书面表达是一项综合性的测试。

要写好一篇短文,考生不仅要具备娴熟的谴词、造句和谋篇实力,而且须要依据不同的写作策略。

假如从高三班级起先打算,则必需保证有科学、全面的训练支配和足量的写作实践,在这方面,笔者要求学生从相识句子成分,到谴词成句,到练习基本句式,再到语段语篇的'这样一个过程。

当然有些学生在这过程中也坚持写日记,然后笔者给他们都进行了具体批改。

这样学生既听从了老师的支配和指导,也没有忽视自己的独立实践与总结。

(二)留意平常的练笔。

近几年考题的话题包括外国交换学生在华学习生活支配、少年健康问题、中学生业余生活、人们的生活变更、环境爱护、中学生庆祝20xx年奥运会申办、举办胜利等。

对于这些话题,每个考生都不会感到无话可说,只要平常细致进行一些写作实践,就不难具备应付这类话题所必要的写作实力。

(三)明确写作方向。

从近几年的状况来看,试题并没有特定的语篇或文体要求。

虽然短文会用到记叙、说明或争论等表达方式,但这终归只是一个区区几十字的文段,远不足被称为记叙文、争论文、说明文或某种特定文体的文章。

例如:20xx年湖南作文要求依据一首诗的内容,描述其中的这位老师,这是单纯的记叙文;20xx年作文写毕业赠言,其中首先要求表述好友在你心中的印象,并用一两个事例加以描述,然后表达祝福,这其实也是记叙文;20xx年则是让学生描述一位伟人,并说明自己喜爱他或她的缘由,这是记叙文。

英语调查报告类书面表达写作方法

英语调查报告类书面表达写作方法

英语调查报告类书面表达写作方法英语调查报告类书面表达写作方法高考中调查类写作常用“少量文字+表格或图表”的形式来命题。

一、篇章结构1.开门见山地交待调查的时间、对象、主题等。

2.描述调查结果,一般是描述表格中数据所反映的情况,数据间的主要差异或趋势,或有的还要求谈谈数据所反映出来的问题,并分析原因。

3.提出个人观点或对解决该问题提出建议。

4. 一般用一般现在时态。

二、模版句式1.交代调查的时间、对象和主题的套语。

首先要交待某人在什么时候在哪些人中就什么问题进行了调查。

常用套语有:(1) I have recently made a survey among 300 boys and 300 girls in my class about their purposes of surfing the Internet. 最近我对我班的30名男生和30名女生进行了调查,看他们上网做什么。

(2)Last week,we did/conducted/carried out a surveyamong all the students in our school on the time they spent in sleeping every day. 上周,我们就每天的睡眠时间对全校学生进行了调查。

(3)Recently the safety of school buses has attracted more and more public attention, and it is becoming a serious problem, so in our class we have held a heated discussion on the causes and solutions.(4) Recently in our school we made a survey which shows that more and more students have become near-sighted. According to the survey we find that ...(5) Recently in our school we made a survey on whether middle school students should wear long hair.2.描述调查结果的套语。

高考英语写作技巧和方法归纳整理

高考英语写作技巧和方法归纳整理

让知识带有温度。

高考英语写作技巧和方法归纳整理2023高考英语写作技巧和方法归纳信任英语写作对许多人来说都是一个难点,你的作文总得不了高分,或许并不是由于你的基础功不好,而是你没有把握其中的技巧。

下面是我为大家整理的关于高考英语写作技巧和方法归纳,欢迎大家来阅读。

高考英语写作指导1. 仔细审题,把握要求。

在审题的过程中,应留意把握试题所供应的条件、要求(通常以文字的形式消失)、体裁、词数、人称形式等。

2. 细读材料,把握中心。

一般说来,所给出的试题材料都是围绕一个中心绽开的。

它叙述的通常是一个小故事或小大事。

这个小故事或小大事就是这我们所要表述的中心。

3. 初步构思,考虑用词。

在把所握文章的中心后,形成一个基本的框架,再考虑使用恰当的词语,包括恰当的短语和句型,以充分地表达文章的内容。

在用词方面,应尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型,还应留意适当使用高级词汇、简单的结构等,这在近年的高考阅卷过程中反复强调了这一点。

4. 联词成句,组段成文。

运用适当的单词或短语正确表达文章中各个要点。

然后使用正确的过渡词将单个的句子来连接起来。

连接时,要留意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句,以使语句间的联系更为紧密,过渡更加自然。

5. 反复审读,修改错误。

一篇文章写好后,最好进行检查,看第1页/共3页千里之行,始于足下。

短文中是否有错误,如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。

怎么写出高分英语作文1.书写要美丽,卷面干净。

和语文作文一样,卷面是最重要的,不要消失污痕、错字,保持卷面的洁净干净,给阅卷老师留下好的印象。

字体不做要求,清晰,便于辨认,工整就足够了。

平常可以多练书写,字体就会越来越美丽。

2.背诵范文,尽量做到完整默写。

背范文可以教你如何写作文,如何使用句型,对提高语感也有关心。

遇到类似的作文就可以往范文上靠,久而久之就找到感觉了。

3.平常多练习。

平常肯定要多写,有范文的可以和范文比较,看看自己的差距。

写完后记得找老师批改,找出自己的错误和不足。

新高考一卷英语作文答题方法和技巧

新高考一卷英语作文答题方法和技巧Title: Tips and Techniques for Writing the English Essay in the New College Entrance ExaminationIntroduction:The English essay is an important part of the new college entrance examination. It requires students to demonstrate their writing skills, critical thinking, and ability to express themselves effectively. In this document, we will discuss some tips and techniques for writing a successful English essay in the new college entrance examination.1. Understand the Question:The first step in writing a successful English essay is to understand the question. Make sure you read the question carefully and identify the key points. Pay attention to the instructions and requirements, and ensure that your essay addresses all aspects of the question.2. Plan Your Essay:Before you start writing your essay, it is important to plan your ideas and structure. Take some time to brainstorm and make a rough outline of your essay. Decide on the main pointsyou want to discuss and the order in which you will present them. This will help you stay focused and organized while writing your essay.3. Start with a Strong Introduction:The introduction is an important part of your essay as it sets the tone for the rest of the piece. Start with a strong opening sentence that grabs the reader's attention. Provide some background information on the topic and clearly state your thesis or main argument.4. Use Clear and Concise Language:When writing your essay, it is important to use clear and concise language. Avoid using overly complex words or jargon that may confuse the reader. Be straightforward and to the point, and make sure your arguments are well-supported with evidence and examples.5. Support Your Arguments:In order to write a strong English essay, it is important to support your arguments with evidence and examples. Use relevant facts, statistics, and quotes to back up your claims. Make sure to cite your sources properly and demonstrate critical thinking by analyzing and interpreting the information.6. Structure Your Essay Properly:A well-organized essay is easier to read and understand. Make sure your essay has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Each paragraph should focus on a single point and be well-connected to the overall thesis. Use transition words and phrases to guide the reader through your argument.7. Edit and Revise:After you have finished writing your essay, take some time to edit and revise it. Check for spelling and grammar errors, and make sure your argument is clear and coherent. Ask a friend or teacher to read your essay and provide feedback. Make any necessary changes to improve the quality of your work.Conclusion:In conclusion, writing a successful English essay in the new college entrance examination requires careful planning, critical thinking, and strong writing skills. By following the tips and techniques mentioned in this document, you can improve your essay writing and increase your chances of success in the examination. Good luck!。

调查报告英语高考作文

调查报告英语高考作文
English:
The investigation report is an essential skill for students to master, especially for those who are preparing for the English high school entrance examination. The report typically involves conducting surveys, interviews, or collecting data to analyze and present findings. Students need to be able to comprehend the purpose of the investigation, gather relevant information, and draw conclusions based on the data. This type of writing requires clarity, organization, and critical thinking skills, which are crucial for students' future academic and professional success.
中文翻译:
调查报告是学生必须掌握的重要技能,特别是那些正在准备英语高中入学考试的学生。

该报告通常涉及进行调查、采访或收集数据以分析和展示调查结果。

学生需要理解调查的目的,收集相关信息,并根据数据得出结论。

这种写作需要清晰的逻辑、组织性和批判性思维能力,这些对学生未来的学术和职业成功至关重要。

新高考一卷英语作文答题方法和技巧

新高考一卷英语作文答题方法和技巧In the context of the new college entrance examination, the English composition section presents a unique challenge, requiring not only a proficient command of the language but also an understanding of how to structure and present ideas effectively. As students prepare for this section, it's crucial to understand the answering methods and techniques that can help them achieve their best possible score.**1. Understanding the Prompt**The first and foremost step is to carefully read and understand the prompt. Determine the type of composition required, whether it's an argumentative essay, a narrative, or another genre. Identify the key points and argumentsthat need to be addressed, and take note of any specific requirements or limitations.**2. Planning the Structure**Before beginning to write, it's essential to plan the structure of the essay. This typically includes anintroduction, a main body with several paragraphs, and a conclusion. Sketch out the main ideas and arguments that will be included in each section, ensuring that the essay flows coherently and logically.**3. Writing an Engaging Introduction**The introduction should capture the reader's attention and provide a clear overview of the essay's main ideas. Begin with an attention-grabbing hook, such as a surprising fact, a quotation, or a personal anecdote. Then, introduce the topic and briefly outline the key points that will be discussed.**4. Developing the Main Body**In the main body of the essay, expand on the ideas introduced in the introduction. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea, supported by evidence and examples. Ensure that the transition between paragraphs is smooth, and that the essay maintains a logical flow.**5. Crafting a Conclusion**The conclusion should sum up the main points and arguments of the essay, providing a sense of closure. Itshould not introduce new ideas but rather restate the key points in a different way, leaving the reader with alasting impression.**6. Revising and Editing**Once the essay is complete, take time to revise andedit it. Check for grammar and spelling errors, as well as for clarity and coherence. Ensure that the essay adheres to the specified word count and that it meets all the requirements of the prompt.**7. Practicing and Preparing**Finally, the best way to improve one's performance inthe new college entrance examination's English composition section is through regular practice. By writing multiple essays on different topics and genres, students can familiarize themselves with the various writing styles and techniques, and develop their ability to think critically and express their ideas effectively.**新高考一卷英语作文答题方法与技巧**在新高考背景下,英语作文部分提出了独特的挑战,它不仅要求学生熟练掌握语言,还要求他们了解如何有效地组织和表达思想。

高考英语书面表达训练---调查报告


1. 注意审题, 转换图表。撰写调查报 告时, 通常需要结合图表, 观察、对 比调查数据, 并把调查结果和数据转 换为文字表达, 并按写作内容给出的 要点按顺序进行写作 。
2. 确定时态, 规范全文。引出报告结果或数 据时,发表议论和个人观点, 通常用一般现 在时。若出现具体的时间状语, 如last year, next year, recently等时, 应根据具体使用适 当的时态。 3. 变换表达, 丰富语汇。调查报告中多出现 相同内容的描述或分析, 为避免重复, 建议使 用不同语言和句式表达同类信息。
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写作内容中出现“主要原因”和“结论” 这些重要的写作线索, 考生应该尽量使用 与之相应的语句进行翻译, 如“...for the main reason that...; ...mainly because; In conclusion; Finally, we arrive at the conclusion that...”, 使阅卷老师对写作信 息一目了然,以获取高分。
[例题导写] 1. 认真审题, 理清要点。第一点写作内容“调 查时间、调查问题以及调查对象”是在表格 以外的写作引入说明部分找到具体信息, 第二 至四写作点中, 要求找出男女生数据的“差 异”,写作时要一语中的, 第五点写作内容则 让考生自由表达观点。
2. 第五点写作内容, 给予考生很大的发挥空 间,也是体现考生写作水平的很好机会。考生 尽量避免使用“I like Jay Chow because he is handsome.”等语言简单、观点肤浅的句子, 而应该运用高级语句, 争取高分, 如:My idol is Langlang because he is a person with strong determination. 或The person I admire most is Gou Jian because he is able to realize his dream with his courage and strong will.
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