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英语读后续写讲评公开课课件ppt

英语读后续写讲评公开课课件ppt
选取合适的文本,激发学生对故事的兴趣和想象力。 引导学生分析文本中的情节和人物特点,为续写做好准备。 让学生尝试续写故事,并给予指导和建议。 对学生的作品进行点评和分享,帮助他们提高写作能力和创造力。
案例二:情感表达续写
学生作品展示 原文情感表达分析 续写内容与情感表达 点评与总结
案例三:语言运用续写
写作指导等
实践:在读后续 写的教学中,可 以尝试选择一些 有趣的素材,引 导学生发挥想象 力,鼓励他们大
胆尝试写作
效果:通过这些 措施,可以有效 地提高学生的写 作兴趣和信心, 提高他们的写作
水平
学生写作能力差异较大
定义:学生之间存在写作能力的差异 原因:语言基础、学习态度、学习方法等 对策:分层教学,针对不同水平的学生提供不同的指导和资源 实践案例:分享分层教学经验,提供具体操作方法
运用多样化的教学策略:采用讲解、示范、案例分析、小组讨论等多种教学策略,帮助学生更 好地理解和掌握知识。
保持与原文风格一致
写作技巧
展开合理想象
突出重点,详略得当
语言生动,引人入胜
语言运用
续写语言与原文风格一致 运用适当的修辞手法 避免语法错误和拼写错误 表达清晰、连贯、流畅
案例一:故事情节续写
背景介绍:介绍故事背景和人物关系 语言运用:分析文本中的语言特点和修辞手法 续写思路:根据故事情节和人物性格,提出合理的续写思路 点评与反思:对续写结果进行点评,并反思教学过程中的优点和不足
学生缺乏写作兴趣与信心
原因:可能因 为写作难度较 大,或者是对 写作的主题不
感兴趣
对策:可以采取 一些措施来激发 学生的写作兴趣, 例如选择适合学 生的主题,提供 写作模板,给予
教学策略

新高考题型读后续写作文讲解(共17张PPT)【优秀课件】共20页文档

新高考题型读后续写作文讲解(共17张PPT)【优秀课件】共20页文档
❖ 知识就是财富 ❖ 丰富你的人生
71、既然我已经踏上这条道路,那么,任何东西都不应妨碍我沿着这条路走下去。——康德 72、家庭成为快乐的种子在外也不致成为障碍物但在旅行之际却是夜间的伴侣。——西塞罗 73、坚持意志伟大的事业需要始终不渝的精神。——伏尔泰 74、路漫漫其修道远,吾将上下而求索。——屈原 75、内外相应,言行相称。——韩非
新高考题型读后续写作文讲解(共17张 PPT)【优秀课件】
61、辍学如磨刀之石,不见其损,日 有所亏 。 62、奇文共欣赞,疑义相与析。
63、暧暧远人村,依依墟里烟,狗吠 深巷中 ,鸡鸣 桑树颠 。 64、一生复能几,倏如流电惊。 65、

读后续写讲解课件

读后续写讲解课件

多做模拟试题
熟悉考试要求
反思与改进
通过模拟试题熟悉读后续写的考试形 式和要求,了解答题步骤和时间分配 。
完成模拟试题后,要认真对照答案进 行反思和总结,找出自己的不足之处 ,并加以改进。
注重解题技巧
在解题过程中,要掌握一些实用的解 题技巧,如快速阅读理解、准确把握 文章主题等。
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技巧
在阅读材料时,要特别注意结尾部分,以便把握文章主旨和情感色彩;在写作时,要注意与阅 读材料的衔接,保持情节连贯;在语言表达上,要尽量使用高级词汇和复杂句型,提高语言质 量。
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读后续写技巧解析
文章结构分析
01 总结文章主题
在开始续写之前,需要先理解文章的主题和主要 内容,总结出文章的中心思想。
如何把握文章主题?
总结词:关注细节
详细描述:除了理解文章的主题和中心思想,还要关注文章中的细节描写,如人物、情节、环境等,以便在续写时能够延续 这些细节。
如何把握文章主题?
总结词:逻辑连贯
详细描述:在把握文章主题的基础上,要注意续写内容的逻辑连贯性,确保情节发展合理、自然,符 合逻辑。
如何展开合理想象?
总结词:发挥创意
详细描述:读后续写需要一定的想象力,要充分发挥自 己的创意,根据文章的主题和情节,合理展开想象,构 思出新的情节和细节。
如何展开合理想象?
总结词:补充细节
详细描述:在展开想象的过程中,要注意补充和 完善文章中未提及的细节,使续写内容更加丰富 、具体。
如何展开合理想象?
01
总结词:延续情节
02 划分段落层次
分析文章的段落结构,理解作者的思路和逻辑, 有助于把握文章的脉络。
03 识别关键信息

高中语文复习课件:读后续写(共19张PPT) (1)

高中语文复习课件:读后续写(共19张PPT) (1)
babysitter or the little son, especially the little son---he was hurt or he was killed... • More questions about the first paragraph:
• Para 2 • Hearing the noise from the dog, the babysitter
• 其次,还存在的问题是学生续写的内容在情节安 排方面不合理,这是因为高中生相对来说生活阅 历不够,文化水平还没有达到很高水平,导致学 生在进行文章写作时,文章顺序比较混乱,情节 设置上也不合理。
• 再者,学生在文章续写时,在语法和词汇的使用 方面还存在着一定的错误,影响了整篇文章的美 观。
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构 一个完整的故事。 注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键
词语。
A Faithful Friend
• Neil loves to travel and he was so fond of forests. Whenever he plans for a holiday, he would choose a place that is blessed by Mother Nature. To celebrate his son’s second birthday, he decided to stay and enjoy the celebration in woods, located at the lap of a mountain. He with his family and friends, reached the village located near the woods and had his stay in the cottage. The cottage was located at the entrance of the dense forest, where the guests can see wolves wandering in the nearby place.

读后续写和概要写作课件01-2020高考英语新题型读后续写+概要写作精选课件(上)(共12张PPT)

读后续写和概要写作课件01-2020高考英语新题型读后续写+概要写作精选课件(上)(共12张PPT)
高考英语
读后续写 1
续写体裁:叙事
读后续写题型是高考新题型,2016 年10 月 在浙江高考中开始使用。读后续写是一篇记叙 文截去后面部分,让考生续写截去的部分。
读后续写的体裁一般采用记叙文。记叙文更 贴近生活,更具趣味性,有更大的想象空间, 连贯性更强,语言的难度适中,因此更适合学 生进行读后续写。
案例分析:情节
During a bullfight, a drunk suddenly wandered into the middle of the ring. The crowd began to shout, but the drunk was unaware of the danger. The bull was busy with the matador at the time, but it suddenly caught sight of the drunk who was shouting rude remarks and waving a red cap. Apparently sensitive to criticism, the bull forgot all about the matador and charged at the drunk. The crowd suddenly grew quiet. The drunk, however, seemed quite sure of himself. When the bull got close to him, he clumsily stepped aside to let it pass. The crowd broke into cheers and the drunk bowed. By this time, however, three men had come into the ring and they quickly dragged the drunk to safety. Even the bull seemed to feel sorry for him, for it looked on sympathetically until the drunk was out of the way before once more turning its attention to the matador.

读后续写公开课ppt

读后续写公开课ppt

其他经典作品续写
《围城》
《红楼梦》
《哈姆雷特》
读后续写实践与挑战
写作实践:根据给定故事开头续写
理解故事背景和人物特点 确定故事发展方向 运用语言和描写技巧 反复修改和完善
写作挑战:自由选择一部经典作品进行续写
挑战原因:经典 作品具有深厚的 历史背景和文化 内涵,续写难度 较大
挑战分析:需要对 作品的主题、人物、 情节等方面有深入 的了解和把握,同 时还需要考虑与原 作风格、语言、结 构的协调与衔接
添加标题
添加标题
了解故事情节和人物关系,梳理故 事发展脉络
注意细节描写,通过细节分析人物 心理和情感变化
确定故事走向和结局
仔细阅读文本,了解故事情节和人 物性格
考虑多种可能的结局,选择最符合 故事主题和人物性格的结局
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添加标题
确定故事的核心冲突和发展方向
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制定详细的情节发展计划,确保故 事走向和结局的连贯性和可信度
续写过程中发现与原作不符怎么办?
重新阅读原文,确 保对故事情节和人 物性格有准确理解。
寻求帮助:请教老 师或同学,了解其 他人是如何处理这 个问题的。
重新构思续写内容: 在理解原文的基础上 ,重新构思续写内容 ,确保与原作保持一 致。
不断修改和完善:在 续写过程中不断修改 和完善,确保续写内 容与原作保持一致。
如何提高语言水平和文学素养?
阅读经典文学作品, 提高语言感知能力
学习语法和词汇, 增强语言基础
参加写作课程和培 训,提高写作技巧 和表达能力
增加阅读量,拓宽 知识面,丰富文学 知识储备
总结与展望
总结:回顾课程内容和收获

读后续写最新优质PPT课件

读后续写最新优质PPT课件

1. Feeling happy/sad/angry/guilty/depressed…,
2. Driven by curiosity/a sense of regret/sympathy…. 或者是
Deeply touched/ moved by…
3. …., full of regret/anger/fear/gratitude/sadness…
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读后续写和概要写作课件22-2020高考英语新题型读后续写+概要写作精选课件(上)(共45张PPT)

读后续写和概要写作课件22-2020高考英语新题型读后续写+概要写作精选课件(上)(共45张PPT)

在写作方面,学生的词汇、语法运 用单一现象有所好转,规划、监控、 选择、组织和整合能力有所提高, 较恰当地布局篇章结构,形成有效 的交际篇章。
联想词较丰富 更多使用同义词达到衔接的目的
综合语言素质包括了交际语言能力,同时包括: 知识, 指对世界的认知以及社会文化知识、跨文化意识, 是全部交际活动的基础; 指跨文化的技能与应变、应用性技能与应变;
以写促读-以读助写 自主建构-合作输出
教学模式
话题 激思
文本 拓知
词块 择取
语段 输出
实施策略
创设与学习内容密切相关的真实性问题 开展话题驱动的窄式循环阅读 突出词汇短语的显性提炼和运用 聚焦完成意义建构的最终学习目标
研讨活动
读写1
语法2
课例3
课例4
课例5 课例6 课例7
Making a better world Improving our lives
模块八 模块九
模块十 模块十一
Appreciating literature and art Communicating with other cultures
Understanding society Preparing for the future
5. 学校生活 (School life)
6. 兴趣与爱好 (Interests and hobbies)
7. 个人感情 (Emotions)
8 .人际关系 (Interpersonal relationships)
9. 计划与愿望 (Plans and intentions)
10. 节假日活动 (Festivals, holidays and celebrations)
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写作思路解读
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写作思路解读
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写作思路解读
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