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雅思精讲写作班精讲班第1讲讲义

雅思精讲写作班精讲班第1讲讲义
雅思精讲写作班精讲班第 1 讲讲义
第一章 第一章 写作概述
60 分钟
Task 1 150w G: letter A:graph 1/3
Task 2 250w Essay
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评分标准(四要素作文法)
Task
Grganization
Idea
Language
第二章 第二章 议论文----概述
一、字数、时间 250-300 words 35-40m
As one of the most important inventions of the past century, TV is playing a more and more important role in modern life. However, some people are starting to worry about its negative effects on traditional families. I am convinced that the existence of TV has brought about alienation among family members.
Those who strongly approve of the ban lay too much emphasis on the rights of nonsmokers. They ignore smokers’ rights. Smoking is just a personal hobby and amusement. It is a kind of lifestyle. It is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers. Furthermore, for smokers, nothing seems more difficult and painful than giving up the habit.

雅思写作课程讲义

雅思写作课程讲义

雅思写作课程讲义1. 导言雅思写作作为雅思考试的一部分,在考生中具有重要的地位。

良好的写作能力不仅可以帮助考生在雅思考试中取得好成绩,也对考生今后的学习和工作具有重要意义。

因此,在雅思写作课程中,我们将会对雅思写作的基本技巧、常见题型和考试策略进行详细讲解,帮助考生提升写作水平。

2. 雅思写作的基本技巧2.1. 语法和词汇雅思写作中,语法和词汇是考生最基础的要求。

在写作过程中,考生需要注意自己的句子结构是否清晰,用词是否准确。

为了提升语法和词汇水平,考生可以多读写英语文章,积累一些常用的词汇和固定搭配。

2.2. 句子的连贯性在雅思写作中,句子的连贯性对于提升写作分数至关重要。

考生需要合理使用过渡词、连接词以及代词等,使句子之间有逻辑关系,并且流畅地表达自己的观点。

2.3. 长短句结合在文章中,考生可以使用长句和短句结合的方式,以增加文章的变化性和层次感。

适当使用长句可以展示考生较高的语言水平,而短句则可以突出主题,增强表达的力度。

3. 雅思写作常见题型3.1. 图表题雅思写作中,经常会出现关于图表的题目,例如柱状图、饼图、表格等。

对于这类题型,考生需要学会正确解读图表,并且能够准确描述图表中的数据变化和趋势。

3.2. 讨论题雅思写作中的讨论题要求考生就某个观点或者议题进行阐述,提出自己的观点并给出支持理由。

在这类题型中,考生需要灵活运用各种句型,展示自己的观点和论证能力。

3.3. 任务型题任务型题是雅思写作中的一种常见题型。

在这类题型中,考生需要完成一系列写作任务,例如描述过程、解决问题等。

考生需要根据题目要求,合理组织文章结构,并进行清晰的逻辑分析。

4. 雅思写作的考试策略4.1. 时间管理在雅思写作考试中,时间管理是非常重要的。

考生需要在规定的时间内完成写作任务,因此,合理安排写作时间,控制好每个部分的时间分配是必要的。

4.2. 注意字数雅思写作要求考生在规定的字数范围内完成写作任务。

因此,考生需要在考试前熟悉每个部分的字数要求,并在写作过程中限制自己的篇幅,确保不超出或者不达到字数要求。

雅思写作基础讲义

雅思写作基础讲义

雅思常用词组1be conducive to 对,,,,有好处的 (be beneficial to)All the above merits are conducive to their self-betterment and self-realisation.2 be detrimental to 对,,,,有害的Besides, staying in front of the computer too long will be detrimental to children’s health,particularly the eyesight. In particular3 pose threat to 对,,,,构成威胁If criminals are set free, they will pose threat to the safety of average citizens. (普通公民)4 nothing seems more,,,, than sth. 没有东西比,,,更,,,,For smokers, nothing seems more difficult than giving up the habit.5 lay too much emphasis on 太强调Those who are strongly against the practice lay too much emphasis on the right of animals.6 there is no evidence showing the direct link between A and B没有证据显示了A和B之间的直接联系。

There is no evidence showing the direct link between smoking and some seriousdiseases.7there is a clear link between A and B 有一个显然的联系It is well known that there is a clear link between smoking and some kinds ofserious diseases.8give priority to sth 给,,,,优先权We should give priority to the development of public transportation.9have easy and quick access to sth 容易快速的接触到With the Internet, we have easy and quick access to the latest information worldwide. 10attach greater importance to 更重视After analyzing the causes and effects of juvenile delinquency, we may easily draw a conclusion that we have to attach greater importance to the problem.11be of overriding importance 某事极其重要We must recognize that the cultivation of children’s high moral values is of overriding importance.12a glut of sth 过量的某物We are confronted with a glut of violent films.13 be saturated with sth 充斥着,,,,A considerable proportion of Hollywood blockbusters are saturated with pornography and violence.14lose sight of sth 不重视某事Some companies lose sight of the environmental rules and regulations in pursuing maximum profit.15be more vulnerable to something 更容易成为,,,的受害者The youngsters are more vulnerable to pornographic TV programs.16impel sb to do sth 促使某人做某事。

《基础雅思写作》课件

《基础雅思写作》课件
通过广泛阅读和积累词汇,学生可以进一步扩大 知识面和语言基础。
加强实际应用和实践
学生可以在实际生活和学习中多加运用英语写作 ,提高实际应用能力。
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结尾段
简明扼要地提出主题,引起读者兴趣 。
总结全文,回应开头,给出结论或建 议。
主体段
详细阐述观点,提供证据或例子支持 。

长句与短句
表达简洁,避免冗长复 杂句。
使用从句、并列句等结 构丰富句子层次。
用逗号或并列连词连接 两个或多个简单句。
根据需要交替使用,增 强文章节奏感。
语言丰富性
考生使用词汇和语法的多样性
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雅思写作技巧
写作流程
构思
在脑中形成文章的大致框架和 要点。
撰写
根据草拟的提纲,展开段落, 完成全文。
审题
仔细阅读题目,明确写作要求 和主题。
草拟
在纸上写出文章的提纲和主要 观点。
检查与修改
通读全文,检查语法、拼写错 误,调整句子结构和用词。
段落组织
开头段
《基础雅思写作》ppt课件
contents
目录
• 雅思写作简介 • 雅思写作技巧 • 雅思写作题型解析 • 雅思写作常见问题及解决方案 • 雅思写作练习与模拟题 • 总结与展望
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雅思写作简介
雅思写作考试目的
评估考生在学术英语 环境下的写作能力
为考生进入更高层次 的学习提供证明
检测考生是否具备在 英语国家攻读本科及 以上学位所需的写作 技能
雅思写作考试形式
考试时长:1小时 考试题型:图表说明、议论文、书信等
写作任务:考生需完成两篇作文,第一篇为图表说明,第二篇为议论文或书信

雅思基础写作教学课件

雅思基础写作教学课件
Answer-3 choices: agree, disagree, or balanced opinion (when possible)
It is sometimes argued that high school students should be made to do some work in their local communities. In my opinion, it would be wrong to force teenagers to do any kind of unsalaried work.
Opinion
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Plan: Topic-community service for all teenagers
Opinion
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Plan: Topic-community service for all teenagers
Discussion
Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

雅思写作基础课补充讲义

雅思写作基础课补充讲义

雅思写作基础段课程补充讲义资料赵光伟001. 现在,越来越多的孩子都是从小学开始学习外语,而不是中学。

002. 在许多国家,青年人通常要用四年时间完成本科学习,两年以上时间完成研究生学习。

003. 一般来说,在国外获得的学历可以帮助青年人找到更好的工作。

004. 大学的课程总体是由必修课和选修课组成的。

005. 诸如经济学(economics)之类的科目是大学商科类(business)课程的重要组成部分。

006. 大学应当为学生同时提供理论性知识和实践性知识。

007.在大学的第一年学习中,学生主要获取公共基础知识,而不是专业知识。

008. 有优秀(excellent)学习成绩的学生通常都对基础的理论和原理有比较好的掌握。

009. 以学生为中心的教学方法很关注学生的实际需求(real needs)。

010. 教师应当鼓励学生积极地(actively)参与到课堂活动中来。

011.网络资源(online resources)可以有效(effectively)激励学生对学习外语的兴趣。

012. 各个学校应当尽最大努力(make every effort to)培养孩子们的全面发展。

013. 孩子们的身心健康和他们的学习成绩是同等重要的(of equal importance)。

(倒装结构)014. 鼓励独立思考(independent thinking)能帮助培养孩子们的创造力和解决问题的能力。

015. 道德教育能帮助孩子们形成(shape)积极的(positive)性格特征。

016. 雄心,热情和坚持是我们事业成功的三个重要因素(important factors to)。

017. 对于应当培养(foster)孩子们的合作意识(a sense of )还是竞争意识一直存在争论(there exists a debate)。

018. 家长和学校应当一齐努力(make a concerted effort to)教育孩子们分辨是非。

【小站教育】雅思写作基础讲义

【小站教育】雅思写作基础讲义

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1 变化:上升 Itrises/increases /climbsup/...... Sharply/dramatically/gradually/slightly/......from ...in ...to...in... 2 变化:下降 Itfalls/decreases/drops/...... Sharply/dramatically/gradually/slightly/......from ...in ...to...in... 3 变化:波动 Itremainedunsteady/ fluctuatingwithan......overtheperiodfrom ......to...... 1 平缓 Itremainedstablebetween......and...... 4 个基本点:起点、最高点、最低点、终点 Itstarted/haditsstartingpoint at......in......, Itreachedthehighestpoint/peakedat......in.......; Itreachedthelowestpoint at......in....../tothefoot/atthebottomin...... andthengaveitsfinishingpoint at......in....... 如果在表述数字无法精确取读时, 可以使用模糊词汇在数字面前,可以更加体现出写作时的 学术严谨性,模糊词汇: around/ about/almost/nearly/approximately......

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♦试图使用不常用词汇,但有时使用不准确 ♦在拼写及 /或构词方面有错误,但不影响交流 ♦综合使用简单句式与复杂句式 ♦在语法及标点符号方面有一些错误,但这些错误很少影响交流 5 分作文: ♦基本上能就写作任务作文,但某些地方写作格式有时存在不当之处 ♦(学术类)机械地描述细节,缺乏清晰的概述;有时未能提供数据支持所描述的内容; ♦(培训类)信函有时能体现特定的写作目的,但有时目的不清晰;行文语气变化不定,且 有时不得体; ♦呈现但不能充分地涵盖主要内容 /要点;有时出现着重表述细节的倾向 ♦有一定组织性地呈现信息,但总体来说有时缺乏清晰的总体行文推进 ♦衔接手段不足、不准确或过度使用 ♦由于指代和替换不足显得行文重复 ♦使用词汇范围有限,但能达到进行写作任务的最低限度 ♦在拼写及 /或构词方面可能出现明显的错误,且可能会对读者造成一定的阅读困难 � 雅思 Academic Writing 需要掌握的语法知识: 词汇: 小作文:数据对比和趋势描述词汇掌握, 大作文:动词的多样化/ 名词的准确性/ 形容词副词修饰恰当/ 介词短语精确使用 句型: 简单句的精准表达。 并列句的并列恰当。 复合句的使用,以此避免简单句的啰嗦,使主从句思想分明的基 础上,结构更加紧凑。 分词结构的点缀使用,当然要根据自己写作分数的要求做句型的合理安排。 集萃正餐:写作细节描述 WritingTaskOne � GeneralStatement

新东方雅思写作讲义

新东方雅思写作讲义

雅思写作完全攻略Total Solution of IELTS Writing俞伟国-2009-雅思考试作文部分题型课时安排:Marking SystemEssay WritingIntroductionBodyConclusionStructureReport Writing近年雅思考试中国大陆考区作文部分得分情况(From Mat Clark)Band4 or below: 15%-20% Band5: 60% Band6: 15%-20% Band7: <5% Band8 or above: RareKey Language Features in Marking SystemTask Response:1. No evidence of digression/irrelevant content2. Adequate Words3. Position + Supporting Ideas + DevelopmentCoherence and Cohesion1.Logical overall structure2.Topic Sentence3.Cohesive devicesLexical Resource1.Accurateness2.Authentic Vocabulary (Less-common Vocabulary)3.VarietyGrammatical Range and Accuracy1.Accuratenessplex Sentence3.Variety欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Chapter One-Essay Writing第一章. 议论文完全攻略______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Part One-Introduction-闪亮开篇--Version -Structure of Introduction1. Background Information(1). Lead-in Sentence (Introduce the subject of the topic)(2). Public Opinion2. Statement(State your position)1.主体背景(Background Information)(1) In the last century, the first man walking on the moon said: “It is a big step for mankind”. However, some people think it ma de______________________________, when ________________________________________________________________for the first time, he _____________________________________________________ that it was a great step for mankind. Nowadays, however, some people believe that it actually _____________________________________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase方法之一-具体化(笼统概念-缩小范围)(2) Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some people think the methods used to do this may have negative effects on local communities and be dangerous to human health.Nowadays people can _______________ food far more _______________ _________________________ more _______________ fertilizers and machinery. Nevertheless, some people hold the methods used may ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:Paraphrase 方法之二-单词转换(优先考虑三大词类:)Paraphrase方法之三-句型转换(方法1 )(方法2)(3) Many people say teachers should only teach students academic subjects;Others say teachers should also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is right and wrong.Some people hold the opinion that ______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________While some argue that ______________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Language Skill: 句型转换(方法3)(4) Some people believe that air travel should be prohibited as it uses up fuel resources and causes pollution. Do you agree or disagree with the statement You should use your own experience to support your argument.According to some __________, air travel should be _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase思路顺序:单词转换>句型转换>具体化(5Some people propose that___________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法4)(6). In modern society, there are more and more old people, do you think its benefits outweigh its disadvantages______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:信息量偏少的Topic Introduction写作对策追根溯源法-Factor(s) [因]-Phenomenon (Subject) [果]2. 总论点(Statement)Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punishedAverage Example:In my opinion, the parents should not be punished. Decent Example:In my opinion, the parents should not be punished except that (unless) they are those who purposefully teach the child to behave badly.Topic-Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools. But others feel that it has negative effects on them. Discuss the both viewpointsFrom my point of view, it is an ideal choice to send children to private middle schools ______________________________Exercise1: Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法5)Exercise2: Topic-Should college students be encouraged to take up part-time jobs ______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法6)3. Report-Introduction写作对策Today, the phenomenon that_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________has aroused growing concern.In my opinion, a lot of factors contribute to the problem and in this article, I would like to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________*This phenomenon, as far as I am concerned, can be attributed to the following causes, which could be regarded as the apple of discord.Structure of Report Introduction1. Lead-in Sentence (Paraphrase the first sentence in the topic)2. Plan A: Essay StatementPlan B: Linking SentenceExercise1:Exercise2: Topic-Pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to studyExercise3: Topic-欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Part Two-Body-中流砥柱--Version -分论点的要求:1.字数要求:One complex sentence preferred. Around 20 words.2. 分论点四项基本原则:(1). 内容原则:分论点应该体现为一种_____________________________并且与总论点为_________________关系。

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雅思基础班写作讲义【观点型作文模板】首段部分:一,(背景句)In this day and age, 主题词is advancing at an amazing rate in a host of arenas.二,(观点导入句)As to/ Concerning the issuewhether…or…, people from all walks of life can hardly reach an absolute consensus. whether+ 从句…or not, there exists a fierce controversy among people.三,主旨句讨论①If it is up to me, my objective analyses for their views will be based on the following parts.②Personally, I think that both of their views have reasonable/rational exposition.单边讨论①For my part, the boons brought by far outweigh its bane. (事物)②Personally, I think that their view has both merit and demerit. (观点)纯倾向①As I see it, my view will be identical with the advocates'/objectors'.②Personally, I am inclined to the advocates'/objectors' view.主体部分:讨论A(第二段)The advocates hold a view that 正面观点,based on the following reasons. To begin with, 理由一;拓展2-3句话Additionally, 理由二;拓展1-2句话Lastly, 理由二;拓展1-2句话讨论B(第三段)The objectors,however, argue that 反面观点, with the following supporting reasons.In the first place, 理由一;拓展2-3句话In the second place, 理由二;拓展1-2句话In the third place, 理由二;拓展1-2句话单边讨论型第二段Admittedly, 话题can bring about numerous benefits to us.In the first place, 理由一;拓展2-3句话In the second place, 理由二;拓展1-2句话In the third place, 理由二;拓展1-2句话Undeniably,doubtless to say,单边讨论型第三段However, it would be erroneous if we failed to acknowledge its drawbacks. On one hand, 理由一;拓展1-3句话On the other hand, 理由二;拓展1-3句话纯倾向(第二段) First and foremost, no one can fail to take into account that +句子(理由一)拓展 3-4句话纯倾向(第三段) In addition, it goes without saying that + 句子(理由二)拓展 3-4句话纯倾向(第四段) Last but not least, there is no denying the fact that +句子(理由三)拓展 3-4句话结尾部分:单边(倾向)To conclude, I concede that we can profit from the advantages of …… immensely. Yet, we should not neglect its disadvantages. On balance, we should seek out the most effective approach to make full use of its advantages and avoid its disadvantages. Ignore, lose sight of ...双边In a nutshell, we can draw a conclusion that both their views have reasonable exposition/elaboration. As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to …, but I will not concede that ….纯单边Taking all the reasons into consideration, all the evidence lends the strongest support to my convincing conclusion that +句子(结论)救命结尾模板:To put all into one nutshell,there is no rose without thorns, has no exception.Whether it is ablessing or a curse is dependent on how moderately or appropriately we employ . What we should do is to figure out the balance between them, bringing its strengths into full play and diminishing its weaknesses into least extent.★模板不是千篇一律的,要活用模板!很多观点型作文模板可以相互套用!【现象问题型模板】首段部分:一,背景句In this day and age, 主题词is advancing at a staggering rate in a host of arenas. 二,导入问题,现象句It has been cast into sharp focus that + 句子 . 三,说明句vexing/perplexing problem confronting the modern people. acute/severe/grave/serious This has become a(n)thorny/buring/pressingprominent/striking/noticeableConfront sb with sth, sb confront sth主体部分:分析原因(第二段)As I see it, there are some causes to explain such a phenomenon as the followed.(分析原因,过渡句)【或者】From my own perspective, the causes leading to 现象are manifold/diverse/twofold.First and foremost, 原因一mainly contribute(s) to the phenomenon of ……. (分论点1)拓展部分What's worse/more, we partly attribute the problem of现象to 原因二. (分论点2)拓展部分Lastly, 原因三is also the culprit of the phenomenon of …(分论点3)拓展部分分析后果(第二段)As I see it, 现象、问题perhaps will breed/generate several consequences/effects as the following parts.(主题句1)【或者】From my own perspective, if such a phenomenon is not appropriately disposed of, many problems/dangers/perils/hazards will ensue.In the first place, the phenomenon of ……will mainly spawn the 后果一. (分论点1)拓展部分In the second place, the phenomenon of ……will contribute to 后果二. (分论点2)拓展部分In the final place, the phenomenon of ……will engender 后果三. (分论点3)拓展部分解决措施(第三段)Given the severity of such a problem, we should adopt effective measures without any delay to eliminate the problem as the followed.(主题句2)【或者】With a view to solving such a problem, we have no alternative but to take immediatemeasures as the followed.On one hand, 措施一(分论点1)拓展部分On the other hand, 措施二(分论点2)拓展部分救命结尾措施模板:To walk out of such difficult situation, we have no alternative but to adopt immediate measures to eliminate the serious problem. What the government or authorities concerned should do is to 政府措施. Meanwhile, as an individual, we should 个人措施.【范文1】Nowadays, impacts energy fuels, such as petrol, natural gas and coal, exert on the development of human society are profound on a large scale.(背景句) It has been cast into sharp relief that the development of human society is increasingly demanding for energy fuels.(话题导入句)As I see it, such a phenomenon will breed three main consequences as the followed. (主旨句)In the first place, such a phenomenon may give rise to the rampantover-exploitation of energy fuels.(后果一) More often than not, human society is developing by leaps and bounds with the large depletion of natural energies. Obviously, the surging demand for natural resources will definitely lead to the increasing prices of natural resources. Hence, a growing number of people will over-exploitate these resources for the sake of maximum profits.In the second place, the phenomenon of increasing consumption of energy resources will engender a large quantity of pollutants.(后果二)For example, the process of refining the energy fuels: petroleum, will emit a huge amount of fumes, which include carbon dioxide and sulfur dioxide. Particularly, the sulfur dioxide is the culprit of acid rain which may devastate the forest and crops. Thus, it will exert a negative influence on environment.In the final place, such a phenomenon will generate the regional conflicts.(后果三)Since the energy fuel is limited, more people or nations will be involved in potential conflicts for the precious resources. So, regional confrontations are inevitable.To walk out of this difficult situation, some effective and feasible measures should be adopted without any delay. What the authorities must do is to pass laws and regulation to alleviate the surging demand for energy fuels. And meanwhile, individuals should spare no efforts to economize the use of energy fuels.[314 words]【或者结尾】Given the severity of such a problem, we should adopt immediate measures without anydelay to eliminate the problem as the followed. On one hand, international society and authorities concerned should make joint efforts to alleviate the surging demand for energy fuels.On the other hand, as an individual, we should spare no efforts to economize the use of energyfuels.【范文2】In present-day society, advertisement industry is advancing by leaps and bounds in a host of arenas(背景句). It has to be admitted that there exists a fierce controversy among people as to the issue whether we can get benefits from the ban of all forms of advertisements or not(观点导入句). For my part, the advantages brought by advertisings far out weigh its drawbacks.(主旨句).Admittedly, advertisements have some disadvantages in our society.(主题句①). On one hand, advertisement is annoying(理由①). Internet is always awash with Spam which is disturbing our surfing internet. Besides, TV programs are often interrupted by a sudden advent of advertisements. So it is annoying for us. On the other hand, some advertisements provide some misleading and distorted information to the audience(理由②). For example, some advertisements have exaggerated the products, which cheat the consumers misled by the advertisements. This has infringed on the rights of consumers. Hence, it is proper to ban some irritating and fraudulent advertisements.However, it would be erroneous if we failed to acknowledge advertisements' advantages.(主题句②). In the first place, advertisements will create a win-win situation to both manufacturers and consumers(理由①). In fact, some consumers demand for a specific commodity, but they are notinformed about which product is suitable for them. Meanwhile, some manufacturers will sell their products but no one knows their products. Under such a circumstance, can advertisement help manufacturer to publicize their commodities and give information to consumers which product can be purchased. In the second place, some non-commercial advertisement is serving for social welfares(理由②). For example, somenon-commercial advertisements educate the public to be aware of the importance of charity or environment protection. In the final place, advertisement is one of the most pervasive industries(理由③). It will contribute a vast amount of money to people and support the huge industry of media. Without advertisement, most of forms media will soon disappear. Thereby, it is not convincing to prohibit all kinds of advertisements.To conclude, I concede that some advertisements serve no useful purpose, or even misleading information in various media, yet we should not neglect the blessings brought by advertisements. As far I am concerned, the ban of all forms of advertisement should be prudent(总结个人看法). On balance, we should seek out the most effective method to make full use of the benefits of advertisements and avoid their drawbacks as possible.【或者结尾】To put all into one nutshell, there is no rose without thorns, advertisements have no exception. Whether it is a blessing or a curse is dependent on how moderately or appropriately we employ them. What we should do is to figure out a rational balance between them, bringing its strengths into full play and diminishing its weaknesses to the least extent.【范文3】In this day and age, technology is revolutionizing the way that we live, and especially communicate. (背景句) Concerning the issue whether e-mail will completely replace the letter-writing or not, people from all walks of lives can hardly reach an absolute consensus.(导入观点句) Some people think that new technology, such ase-mail, will eliminate the letter-writing gradually, while some others say that letter-writing will be retained in future. (提出正反两个观点) Personally, my objective analyses for their views will be given as the followed.(主旨句)Now that e-mail brings about numerous strengths to our communication, the advocates hold their view based on the following cogent reasons.(主题句①:正方观点) First and foremost, using e-mail can augment the working efficiency during the process of going about daily routines.(理由①) For example, it usually takes at least a week to send a letter from China to the U.K, but sending an e-mail is always simultaneous and instant with receiving e-mail in different places of the globe. So, using e-mail is time-saving and efficient. Furthermore, the security of using e-mail can be assured on a large scale. (理由②) Compared with letter-writing, sending an e-mail is processed in the digital programs, not by various means of transportations: ship, plane and car. Lastly, using e-mail is cost-effective. (理由③) In China, it costs at least 1yuan (about 10 pence of the U.K) to send a postcard, but it almost free to send an e-mail to one of your friends. Obviously, using e-mail is money-saving. However, given that letter-writing has its own advantages, the objectors hold such a viewpoint grounded as the following reasons.(主题句②反方观点) In the first place, business letters are very formal paper documents that need to be kept in archives.(理由①) As a case in point, business contracts should be sent。

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