雅思新东方写作笔记整理

一、概括：

1.写作考试介绍：

Time: 60mins 20mins TASK1 150words

40mins TASK2 250words

2.考试题型：

TASK1

Process 和Introduction 题目罕见出现。

TASK2

I. Discuss

Eg: 2005年7月9日

Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but other people do not think it the government’s responsibility. Discuss both and give your opinion.

II. Advantages and Disadvantages

Eg: 2005年5月14日

Some school leavers go to travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for their studies?

III. Agree or Disagree

Eg: 2005年6月25日

People think that the news media has influenced people’s lives nowadays, and it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IV. Your Opinion

Eg: 2005年3月5日

Some academic subjects are useful for children’s future career while others such as music and sports are not so useful. What is your opinion. Give your reasons.

V. Problem, Reasons and Solutions

Eg: 2005年1月22日

Statistics suggest that nowadays an increasing number of crimes are committed by the young people. Explain the reasons for this and give solutions.

二、小作文解析（T ASK 1）：

1．通用格式：

⑴OPENING—1SENTENCE--- A. Paraphrase 5W

& B. Overall trend

Ⅰ.Line phases

Ⅱ.Pie classification

Ⅲ.Bar the gap between A&B

e.g. The graphs and charts tell us a clear overview of the characteristics and trends of……

It can be seen from the table that…..

详细见白书P6/下，“Referable IELTS Writing opening &writing”

●RULE 1：

A.不可以抄题目

B.不可以写“According to ….”，只能写“In that figure….”

C.不可以写“below/following”

D.不可以写“that/this”

E.第一段不出现数据

⑵ENDING--- 1SENTENCE--- A. Repetition / Feature

B. Hidden characteristics(查找图表等中的隐性特质)

e.g. What is worth mentioning is that since the overall percentages exceeded

100%.It can be indicated that some adults chose several seasons for

study.

C. Exception (All rise, with the exception of A, a decline by…..) 拿高分的

同位语

D. No ending (多可爱的结尾啊，当然前提是字数够了)

⑶BODY --- 6-8SENTENCES A. 整体趋势：分阶段描述（白书P7）

e.g. The number of marriage in Scotland fell very sharply between 1960 and 1970, and

continued to decline until around 1985 though at a slower rate. From 1985

onwards there was a gradual increase in the number of marriage which leveled off

in 1984.

B．导入数据方式：整体趋势+数字（白书P8）

●RULE 2：

A.不可以有Objective (主观意见)

B.不可以出现“cause\therefore\thus\hence”

C.不可以用“I/We”等

D.用TIME（时间）做主语会有高分

e.g. The past decade saw/witnessed a dramatic/moderate/gentle increase of sth.

白书P11/ Recite increase n / a.b.c

●RULE 3: CAREFUL

B．用1分钟—看Rubric、X/Y轴、单位、图例、排列顺序。

C．精确性—图例中常常出现technical tramp，特别表现在数据的描述上。

若某一年份的数值指向不明确，不可以绝对化。以“before\after\approximately\nearly”代替●RULE 4: 时态

一般现在时（开头）（结论）/ 一般过去时（如1998年等过去的年份）

当有过去与将来时同时出现，则通篇使用一般现在时。

2.各个击破

⑴PIE CHART

1 PIE 见示例

多PIE Different topic , 各写各的,隐蔽的significant 放在最后

e.g. The total losses equal the total inputs to maintain a balance within the

body. (红书P81)

The same topic

示例:

Single pie

(分类) classification --- 比例大小\图例性质\COUNTRIES(发达\发展中)\TRENDS\合并相似项\相反项Ranking (排名)

(蛋糕占得最大的是老大,要单独列开)

白书P12. … dominated…./… occupied the majority of…..

剩下的( the remaining of sth….)

占(be\make up\amount to \ account for\ stand at) …%(可以改为分数,nine of the ten\a lion’s share)

( 线图中也可使用)