环球雅思写作笔记
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环球雅思邓绪新作文讲解5
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雅思写作范文环球雅思
雅思写作范文环球雅思Global IELTS Writing SampleThe world today is more interconnected than ever before. With the rapid advancement of technology, people from different countries can easily communicate, trade, and travel across borders. This increased global interconnectivity has both positive and negative impacts on people's daily lives.On the positive side, the global interconnectivity allows individuals to access an unprecedented amount of information. The internet has made it possible for people to learn about different cultures, languages, and perspectives simply by searching online. This knowledge broadens people's horizons and fosters cultural understanding and tolerance. It also enables individuals to connect with like-minded people from around the world, forming virtual communities and exchanging ideas. This global exchange of ideas can lead to innovation and progress in various fields.In addition to knowledge sharing, global interconnectivity has also revolutionized trade and commerce. Companies can now market their products and services to a global audience using online platforms. This allows businesses to reach consumers in different countries, leading to economic growth and job creation. Moreover, global supply chains enable the efficient production and distribution of goods, benefiting both producers and consumers. This interconnectedness also encourages international collaboration and cooperation, fostering a sense of unity among nations.However, there are also negative aspects of global interconnectivity. One significant concern is the increased vulnerability to cyber threats and scams. As more personal and financial information is shared online, individuals are at a higher risk of identity theft and fraud. Moreover, global interconnectivity has resulted in the spread of misinformation and fake news, making it challenging for people to distinguish between accurate and false information.Furthermore, the global interconnectivity has created a digital divide between developed and developing countries. Not everyone has access to the internet or the necessary skills to navigate the digital world. This digital divide exacerbates existing social and economic inequalities, limiting the opportunities available to those in developing nations.In conclusion, global interconnectivity has both positive and negative impacts on people's daily lives. While it provides access to a vast amount of information and facilitates trade and cooperation, it also poses various challenges such as cyber threats and the digital divide. It is crucial for individuals and governments to manage these challenges effectively to maximize the benefits of global interconnectivity.。
雅思英语写作科技类笔记及作业
科技类一、原因状语从句1. Since computer science has been developing so fast in the modern society, numerous students choose this major as their inclination when they attend universities.2. People need not have frequent face-to-face contact with each other in business as they do in the past, fo r computers can handle and convey majority of information which once must be dealt with at a meeting.3. Computers are widely accepted by people in the information age, as they, to some extent, make many things which are considered as unaccomplished tasks in the past become available and true in the present.4. Majority of people impute/attribute the great social transformation to the development and revolution of science and technology which is closely related to their daily life.二、条件状语从句1. If robots can be manipulated much more precisely and flexibly by computers to accomplish some sorts of tasks which may be dangerous or complex to the human being, our work will be more secure and simple with highproductivity as well.2. Provided/suppose that the usage of multi-media technology is widely adopted by schools during teaching and learning, the teaching level will be enormously heightened in the long run.3. The computer software industry will develop much more healthily in the future in China on condition that the authorities concerned strengthen the protection of the copy right.三、核心词汇e-commerce电子商务cyber safety网络安全online transaction在线交易net/cyber/internet网络e-learning在线学习distance learning 远程教育，远程学习discussion room讨论室computer-assisted learning计算机辅助学习mobile phone手机、移动电话bluetooth蓝牙ring tone电话铃音electromagnetic field电磁场MP3 playback Mp3播放Invade privacy侵犯隐私Wireless technology无线技术SMS: short message service手机短信、短信服务Motivation动机Laptop笔记本电脑、便携式电脑Hacker黑客Online shopping网络购物Security issue安全问题Distance education远程教育Online course在线课程，网络课程Online forum网络论坛Internet infrastructure网络基础设施Cellular telephone移动电话、手机Radiation辐射Built-in camera内置摄像头Internet browsing网页浏览Memo备忘录Microwave emission放射微波Wireless fidelity: Wi-Fi无线保真Surf on the net上网Hi-tech features高科技功能Website网站Convenient方便的Productivity生产力Geographical barrier地理障碍Digital数字、数码Electronic电子的Virtual world虚拟世界Infringe the privacy侵犯隐私Pirate['paiərit]剽窃Security安全With the click of a mouse/ present鼠标轻点In a virtual world在一个虚拟的世界An information age信息时代Be lost in迷失于、沉湎于Stay in touch with保持联系Cause damage to one’s healt h损害某人的健康Log on the Internet登陆互联网Have/gain access to any information or knowledge获得任何信息/知识Cutting-edge technology尖端科技Information explosion信息爆炸Due to the proliferation of the Internet由于互联网的普及With an increasing popularity of mobile phones随着手机的不断流行Innovation创新Labor-saving machinery劳力节省机械Biotechnology生物技术Telecommunication电信、远程通讯Space exploration太空探索Hacker黑客Conventional method常规方法Online retailer网络零售商Netizen ['netizən]网民Cost-effective划算的、成本节约型Blog博客Cybercrime网络犯罪Offensive攻击的、无礼的Pornography [pɔ:'nɔɡrəfi]色情Violence暴利Illegal gambling非法赌博Questionable contents可以内容、有问题的内容四、万能思路Positive impacts:1. improve work efficiency2. convenience, with the click of a mouse, cost-effective3. promote and facilitate communication4. obtain information in vari ous ways, enrich one’s knowledgeNegative impacts:1. invade one’s privacy2. less quality family time, increasing work pressure3. security issue, cyber crimes4. questionable contents, pornography, violence5. physical problem, radiation, weaken eyesight, less outdoor exercise6. psychological problem, indulge in virtual world, become solitary, be isolated from the real world, weaken the relationships with family members and friendsEg. 1The range of technology is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. To what extent do you agree?Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.提纲：观点：不是科技而是社会财富分配不均导致的。
雅思写作之写作笔记纲要
雅思写作之写作笔记纲要一、小作文：1.首段：1-2句（90%一句简单句或者复杂句均可）2.中间段1：2-3句（一般2句复杂句，1句简单句）中间段2：2-3句（一般2句复杂句，1句简单句）注:复杂句95%为并列句，偶有状语从句。
3.末端：1句（简单句或者复杂句均可）4.全篇150-180字，160字左右最佳。
简单句平均15字，复杂句平均30字。
中间段、复杂句隔离分析。
以上数据加上中间段复杂句的单独分析，于是不难解决一个重大问题：小作文数据信息的择取问题——这也是小作文写作的核心问题。
小作文最难的地方在于如何取舍有效数据。
哪些该表达，哪些不需要。
数据多时，如何取重要的；数据少时,如何榨搅。
5.解决方法：中间段只写两大信息点。
每个大信息点用两个小信息点并列式组成。
这样构成2个复合句。
其余信息用一个简单句补充。
二、大作文：1.首段：2-3句：需要表达自己观点时-3句，不需要就2句。
其中1-2个复杂句，1个简单句。
2.中间段1：3-4句：2-3句复杂句，1-2句简单句。
80%复杂句为并列句、状语从句、名词性从句、另外，多插入语。
介词短语和分词短语。
中间段2：（同上）3.末段：2-3句。
（2个复杂句，1个简单句）4.全篇：250-290字，270字左右为最佳。
简单句平均14字，复杂句平均28字。
中间段单独分析。
中间段考官从未采取列点法写作。
该方法容易给人空洞感。
现在的考官需要实在的逻辑分析，而不是列几点，然后每点给一句话的解释。
这些完全是不够的。
考官的论证方法如下：1. 观点——正面递进——举例论证——结论2.观点——反面驳论——正面论证——举例3. 观点——正面递进——正面再递进——结论以上可以看出考官看任何一主题段从来都只谈一点，然后充分谈透（给出严密的论证过程）。
结论段给论点也是高分的亮点，考前应充分准备几个常用观点。
第三步，素材准备。
对于像我这样写作没有什么功底，又很少练习的，要想到考试时间紧张的情况下写出高质量的句子，用高级的词汇。
雅思大作文Task2 心得笔记
雅思大作文Task2 心得笔记具体问题具体分析的能力是很多官方作文有所体现的一种思维素养。
1.Refer to… =can be defined as/…is regarded as 这个词组在高分作文中经常用来在主体段对某一概念下定义2.It is suggested that 是一种不指明观点持有人的提问看法的形式，在论文中极为常见。
类似的有: It is argued that…;It is advised that…; It is believed that…3.Tend to是雅思作文中一个极为常用的动词短语：倾向于怎样做= be inclined to4.Accordingly 相应地，经常用于议论文的句首5.In terms of 在官方范文中常用，意为“就…….而言，在……方面”，经常用在句首引出状语提前句式=with regard to e.g. Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today.e.g. To conclude, growing up in poor families may be in fact anchildren’s development because it helps to cultivate some qualities that adult success requires.e.g.In terms of their career, these teachers and doctors may think of themselves as complete failures because they may beunable to keep up with their colleagues after spending some time in the countryside.5. (1) Regardless of 后面除了跟从句外还可以跟名词或者名词短语, “无论……，不管……”e.g. Others think the true function of a university should be give access to knowledge for its one sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to employersIt is true that space missions satisfy human curiosity about other planets and the rocks brought back by astronauts may serve useful experimental purposes, regardless of how odd-shaped they are.(2) For the sake of = for the purpose of improvinge.g. Today, numerous/a host of/ a vast number of(修饰可数名词) elderly people prefer to live in the countryside for the sake of their health.6. I would be hard-pressed to imagine…(后面跟观点相反的情况)e.g. I would be hard-pressed to think of any traditional games that can hone such a mixed variety of abilities within such a short period of time.Specifically/More precisely 具体来说7.Require, 当句子主语是事物而不是人称时经常用来代替need8.Rather than, instead of是雅思作文中极为关键的一个连词词组，表示是前面一种情况而非后面一种情况的取舍关系。
雅思环球雅思强化写作范文笔记
4.in the international spectrum=all over the world
3.significant=critical 3.chief=main
4.utilize=get use of lions of =many
5 destroy=lead to a disaster to 5.the excess of=too many/too much
副词：dramatically, exactly, comprehensively, accordingly, seriously
复合词：空
范文评语：
1. 复合词处为空，降低范文的总评印象，指标未完成。
2. 范文内替换为空，作者行文过程没有自主替换意识，相同概念全部避开，虽然词汇绕开了重复的可能，但variety由于该组空缺，不尽完美。
范文内替换（作者实力） 自身替换（读者实力）
1．Be poised on the brink of=face 1.contribute a lot to=lead to
2.growing population=more an d more people 2.the largest wave of=large
强化写作范文笔记
词法篇（五类技术指标）
第一篇：单边支持第一宝-八股文
题目：强化讲义8页some people claim that the increasingly frequent business and cultural communications are positive whereas others hold a different opinion. Discuss.
环球雅思写作笔记
写作笔记评分标准：一、审题二、描述（主要指小作文，小作文不可以添加任何评论性言语）三、论点、论证能力（大作文的论点控制在2-3个左右）四、清晰的表达能力大作文结构:开头段落（50个字左右）：背景信息（2-3句话）个人观点（个人观点控制在一句话左右，务必简单明确）个人观点分为三种：同意反对中立（完全中立和偏向性中立）主体段落（150个字左右）：2-3个自然段每个自然段：开头第一句话为主题句第二句话至末尾为论述句结尾段落（50个字左右）：suggestion or restatement 建议或者重述(3-4句话) 主流题型：PROBLEM/SOLUTION1、Beginning: Background InformationYour Opinion(概括)Body:问题以及解决方法分别陈列P1 P2 P3 …S1 S2 S3Conclusion: Restatement(重申时不要引出新话题)2、Beginning:同上Body:每个问题各写一段进行详细陈述P1 P2 P3Conclusion:总写解决方案S1 S2 S3例子：课本24页Nowadays, more and more children are becoming obese. Give possible reasons and suggestions.AGREE OR DISAGREE/ADVANTAGE OR DISADVANTAGEBeginning: Background InformationYour Opinion(中立具有偏向性)Body: 三分之一篇幅写与自己相反的观点三分之二篇幅写与自己相同的观点先写反，后写正，中间一行过渡段。
Conclusion: Suggestion例子：课本37页Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?主流话题：年轻人（30102，P6）It is right that university graduates should earn higher salary than less well-educated members. But they should pay all the full cost. To what extent you agree or disagree?女性话题（90 P3）A recent research indicated that the rate of crimes committed by young females has been on the rise all over the world. Please give some possible reasons for this sudden increase in crime rate. Also, make some suggestions on how to deal with this social phenomenon.公众类话题（08奥运，体育91 P3）Last year many famous sports professionals earned millions of dollars each. On the other hand, most people in some “ordinary” professions like nurses, doctors and teachers earn only a small fraction of the incomes of these “start”. What do you think about sports stars receiving very high salaries? Is it fair that people with jobs that directly help people are paid much less?科技类话题（98 P4）传统科技模式与现代科技模式的冲突Some people say that the age of book is over and all information will be presented by video, computer, television, film, etc. However, others think that books and the written words will still be necessary for spreading information and completing education. What is your opinion about this issue?环境类话题（79 P3）Waste disposal presents increasing problems, especially in the urban areas of most big cities. Do you think it is true? Give some suggestions for the government and individuals on how to reduce the amount of rubbish.教育类话题（119 P5）In most universities there are a very small number of male students in certain majors like tourism while females students in many science subjects are hard to be found. Therefore, some people think that universities should enroll equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give your reasons.媒体类话题（30109 P6）The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue?国家类话题（100 P4）(110 P5)Many people think that countries in the world have a moral obligation to help each other, while others argue that financial aid to poor countries is often misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion.(30106 旅游重点)Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people form different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?当一个考题涉及一个事物的两个侧面，写作原则必须是中立带有偏向性的观点。
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写作笔记评分标准：一、审题二、描述（主要指小作文，小作文不可以添加任何评论性言语）三、论点、论证能力（大作文的论点控制在2-3个左右）四、清晰的表达能力大作文结构:开头段落（50个字左右）：背景信息（2-3句话）个人观点（个人观点控制在一句话左右，务必简单明确）个人观点分为三种：同意反对中立（完全中立和偏向性中立）主体段落（150个字左右）：2-3个自然段每个自然段：开头第一句话为主题句第二句话至末尾为论述句结尾段落（50个字左右）：suggestion or restatement 建议或者重述(3-4句话) 主流题型：PROBLEM/SOLUTION1、Beginning: Background InformationYour Opinion(概括)Body:问题以及解决方法分别陈列P1 P2 P3 …S1 S2 S3Conclusion: Restatement(重申时不要引出新话题)2、Beginning:同上Body:每个问题各写一段进行详细陈述P1 P2 P3Conclusion:总写解决方案S1 S2 S3例子：课本24页Nowadays, more and more children are becoming obese. Give possible reasons and suggestions.AGREE OR DISAGREE/ADVANTAGE OR DISADVANTAGEBeginning: Background InformationYour Opinion(中立具有偏向性)Body: 三分之一篇幅写与自己相反的观点三分之二篇幅写与自己相同的观点先写反，后写正，中间一行过渡段。
Conclusion: Suggestion例子：课本37页Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?主流话题：年轻人（30102，P6）It is right that university graduates should earn higher salary than less well-educated members. But they should pay all the full cost. To what extent you agree or disagree?女性话题（90 P3）A recent research indicated that the rate of crimes committed by young females has been on the rise all over the world. Please give some possible reasons for this sudden increase in crime rate. Also, make some suggestions on how to deal with this social phenomenon.公众类话题（08奥运，体育91 P3）Last year many famous sports professionals earned millions of dollars each. On the other hand, most people in some “ordinary” professions like nurses, doctors and teachers earn only a small fraction of the incomes of these “start”. What do you think about sports stars receiving very high salaries? Is it fair that people with jobs that directly help people are paid much less?科技类话题（98 P4）传统科技模式与现代科技模式的冲突Some people say that the age of book is over and all information will be presented by video, computer, television, film, etc. However, others think that books and the written words will still be necessary for spreading information and completing education. What is your opinion about this issue?环境类话题（79 P3）Waste disposal presents increasing problems, especially in the urban areas of most big cities. Do you think it is true? Give some suggestions for the government and individuals on how to reduce the amount of rubbish.教育类话题（119 P5）In most universities there are a very small number of male students in certain majors like tourism while females students in many science subjects are hard to be found. Therefore, some people think that universities should enroll equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give your reasons.媒体类话题（30109 P6）The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue?国家类话题（100 P4）(110 P5)Many people think that countries in the world have a moral obligation to help each other, while others argue that financial aid to poor countries is often misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion.(30106 旅游重点)Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people form different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?当一个考题涉及一个事物的两个侧面，写作原则必须是中立带有偏向性的观点。
开头段写作方法：一、注意事项：开头段不宜过长，控制在5句话内。
不要直接提出对于问题的解决方案，而是应该类似这样表达：My arguments for this point are listed as follows:二、转换技巧：将题目中文字转换为开头段，不可以照抄题目，而是应该将题目中的单词用另外表达方式，陈列在开头段，转化有以下三种方法：主谓宾------ 主系表主动句------ 被动句近义词互换例如，题目如下：At present it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree?利用转化技巧写的开头段如下：Nowadays college students often have difficulty in finding a satisfactory job when they graduate. A large number of people are of the opinion that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography. I agree with this opinion for the following reasons.三、开头段写法：1、定义法：A、解释某一单词的意义B、引用题目部分内容进行改写C、提出个人观点定义法注意事项：定义的单词必须与主题相关，所选取进行定义的单词必须方便定义，不可太抽象。
例如，题目如下：Creative artists should be given extra freedom to express their ideas(words, pictures, music and films). However, some people think the government should put some restrictions on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree this opinion.定义法写作的开头段如下：Art is always regarded as abstract and symbolic works which need people’s imagination and originality. Therefore, many people argue that artists should be given additional freedom to fully express their creativity through characteristic words, pictures, music or films. From my point of view, I think somewhat differently.2、提问法：A、提出和个人观点相反的问题B、做出回答C、提出个人观点例如，题目如下：Many countries establish a system of single-sex education in which boys and girls go to separate schools. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it. 提问法写作的开头段如下：Should students be separated into single-sex schools to spend their childhood? Many par ents’ answer is “yes” because they see many advantages for a segregated education. However, I can’t endure a single-sex education system.3、名人名言法，不建议使用。