基础写作(正反观点对立)

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lack personality 反对：理由2 can’t satisfy taste for fashion It lacks personality. It can’t satisfy student’s taste for fashion.
student’s taste for fashion.
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不赞同
30%
[写作内容] 根据以上内容, 写一篇关于 “学生是否有必要穿校服”的短文。 • 介绍正反两方观点； • 表达自己的看法。 [写作要求] • 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； • 不要逐字逐句翻译所给信息。 [评分标准] • 句子结构准确, 信息完整, 篇章连贯。
认真审题
• 文体：观点对立式议论文 • 人称：兼顾第一和第三人称 • 时态：现在时或者过去时
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• It’s unnecessary to wear the school uniform. • 颜色呆板沉闷 dull and boring color • 款式单一 simple and plain style • 缺乏个性 lack personality • 不能满足时尚品位 can’t satisfy taste for fashion
Homework
1. Review what we have learnt. 2. Polish your composition.
3. Finish the basic writing task on your handout.
Homework
• 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。 以下是正反两方所持观点。
连词成句
开头：引出议论主题
• We had a discussion about/on whether it’s necessary to wear the school uniform. • Recently, in our class there has been a heated discussion about/on whether it’s necessary to wear the school uniform. • Recently our class had an informal debate whose topic is “whether it’s necessary to wear the school uniform”.
• Recently, we have had a discussion/debate about whether it’s necessary to wear the school uniform. • 70% of my classmates are in favor of it., because • The school uniform, tidy and neat, is not only a symbol of the school, but also makes students feel equal, helping them avoid being compared to others about the clothes. • Wearing the school uniform saves the students’ time on choosing what to wear to school, making them concentrate on study and consider it unnecessary to follow fashion. • 30% of the students are against the idea. because / since , • Apart from the dull and boring color, the style is simple and plain. • It can’t satisfy students’ taste for fashion due to lack of personality. • Personally, I prefer to wear the school uniform.
重读检查
1.是否恰好五句话？ 2.是否每句都含必要信息？ 3.可否自由发挥？ 4. pants纠错原则： 1) pattern 2) agreement 3) number 4) tense 5) spelling
1. 认真审题 2. 整合信息
3. 连词成句 4. 连句成篇
5. 重读检查
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save time 赞同：理由2 concentrate on study won’t follow fashion Wearing the school uniform saves the students’ time on choosing what to wear to school. • It makes them concentrate on study. • They won’t follow fashion. / They consider to follow fashion is unnecessary. Wearing the school uniform saves the students’ time which makes making on choosing what to wear to school, and makes them concentrate on study and consider to unnecessary to unnecessary. it follow fashion is follow fashion.
It lacks personality, so it can’t satisfy
It can’t satisfy students’ taste for fashion
because of / due to lack of personality.
表明个人观点
• In my opinion / As far as I am concerned, it is necessary to wear the school uniform. • Personally, I prefer to the wear the school uniform. • As for me, I am for the idea that it’s necessary to wear the school uniform.
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symbol 赞同：理由1 tidy and neat equal, avoid being compared The school uniform is a symbol of the school. It is tidy and neat. It makes students feel equal and helps them avoid being compared to others about the clothes.
表示反对 • 30% of the students are against the idea. • 30% of the students disapprove of it. • 30% of us hold the opposite opinion.
• dull and boring color 反对：理由1 • simple and plain style • The color is dull and boring. • The style is simple and plain. The color is dull and boring, and the style is simple and plain. The color is not only dull and boring, but also the style is simple and plain. Apart from the dull and boring color, the style is simple and plain.
原 因 广交朋友，可自由表达思 赞同 想，利于外语学习。 浪费时间，影响学习，可 不赞同 能上当受骗。
意见
[写作内容] 根据以上内容, 写一篇关于 写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文。 • 介绍正反两方观点； • 表达自己的看法。
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Writing task
• 你的班级对“是否有必要穿校服” 进 行了辩论，以下是正反两方所持观点。
意见 百分比 赞同 70% 原 因 是学校的标志；整洁、大 方；显示平等, 避免攀比； 节省时间，专注学习；不盲 目赶时髦。 颜色呆板沉闷；款式单一； 不能满足时尚品位，不能彰 显个性.
The school uniform, which is tidy and neat, not only
but also is a symbol of the school, makes makes students feel equal ,and helps them avoid helping being compared to others about the clothes.
Besides, / In addition, / What’s more, / Moreover,
However, / On the contrary,
, and what’s worse/ and worse still,
连句成篇
Write the passage again
写作模板
Recently, in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether __________. Some students approve of it because ____________. What’s more/Moreover, _______________. However, others are against the idea since ________, and worse still, ____________. As for me / In my opinion / Personally, I prefer to ______________.