英语五大功能段落

五大功能段落

现象段：

In contemporary society/families, it has become a trend for __话题相

关人/物_ to _____. In the meanwhile, an increasing number of _相关人/物

_ find/deem it _形容词（感受）_ to ______. Taking a look around _相关场所_, we can notice a great many examples like this: _具体例子（没有例子的话，请将冒号改为句号结束该句）_____

原因段：

A number of factors could account for these dishonest behaviors. Among the most convincing reasons identified is that countless people neglect the moral values in pursuit of their own interests. Another contributing factor is that we lack effective laws and regulations of supervision so that a great many dishonest people can escape punishment. Consequently, the problem of dishonesty becomes very serious.

好处段：

As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of limiting the use of disposable plastic bags. First of all, it enables us to protect the living surroundings, build a healthy society and promote low-carbon life. Additionally, it will definitely promote the development of environmentally friendly materials by manufacturers, thus making the development sustainable, which otherwise would be impossible.

坏处段：

Apparently enough, there are some negative impacts which we should not ignore/neglect. To begin with, more visitors may impair the objects in exhibition. Besides, free admissions to museum means a grave amount of economic burden for museums to run as usual without any profits from the visitors. If we let this situation continue as it is, the quality of museum exhibition will not be as satisfactory as expected.

解决方案段：

As a customer, I am convinced that there are various ways in which we can enhance online shopping. First and foremost, it is essential that regulations should be worked out and enforced to guide the online transactions. Then, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates, and acquaintances to be alert

when shopping online. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of shopping online will be promising and hopeful.

四级作文讲义

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2013年5月13日

一、要写什么样的四级作文？

内容、结构、句型、单词、语法、清晰、简洁、模板、连贯、漂亮

二、审题时我要做哪些事情？

看清英文题目里的重要信息，比如On Stress里“on”是什么意思，“stress”就是压力，不需要你再费劲脑力地想pressure, “O”和“S”为什么要大写？

三、如何提高我的作文水平？

背诵模板并改写、研究范文、老师批改、背诵四级作文单词

四、四级作文30分钟如何使用？

审题、翻译、想观点、行文、修改

五、如何用模板？

先背诵、再应用、再改写，主要背诵功能段落，如现象、原因、利、弊、解决办法、我的选择等。

六、四级用哪些句型？虚拟、被动、倒装、从句、强调、分词

七、写作有哪些方法？举例、比较、排比、定义、解释、比喻\

八、如何写图表作文？

先仔细研究图表及上面的英文信息，不要跑题，大家要相信自己的智商，只要你肯花时间研究，一定是看得懂图的。如果图都没看懂，这篇文章就白写了。对于不给中文大纲的作文题，如图表作文和只给英文题目作文，你要先构思自己的每段大意，自己列中文提纲，一般就是在现象、原因、利、弊、解决方案、我的选择等功能段里选择，其实没那么难的。

四级写作高频词汇

challenge, chance, technology, social, fame and wealth, high-quality education, culture, economic development, medical care, high salary, convenience, comfort, less stress, less pollution, environment, mental and physical health

功能段落

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (A has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。（或者是一个例子）。

Some people are in favor of the idea of doing A. They point out the fact that 支持A 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持A 的另一个原因。

However, other people stand on an opposite ground. They consider it

harmful to do A. By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。

There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of A overweigh the disadvantages.

(The former/latter opinion holds more weight.)

Say No to Fake Commodities

1. 目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣产品。

2. 说明假冒伪劣产品对消费者个人或社会产生的危害。

3. 如何有效地解决这一问题。

Our contemporary society witnesses fake commodities flood into markets. When purchasing commodities such as cell phone, food, drinks or even medicine, people are often in a dilemma of distinguishing whether they are fake or genuine.

Negative impacts brought by fake commodities should never be ignored. To begin with, as consumers, we could be harmed by fake commodities both physically and mentally. It’s common that new parents would spend time and energy selecting the best milk power just to prevent their dear babies from being hurt by the fake one. Also, it would be a great waste of money to buy such commodities of little use. In addition, as for the whole society, if this phenomenon continues to exist, the whole system of values will collapse, leading to severe consequences.

How can a prosperous country be built with everyone getting used to modeling rather than creating?

In view of the seriousness of the situation, effective measures should be taken before things get worse. On the one hand, it is high time that laws and regulations were worked out and enforced to ban fake commodities and punish those illegal producers. On the other hand, it is critical that consumers say no to fake commodities.

Topic 6: First-tier City or Second-tier City?

1．大学毕业后，有人选择去一线城市工作，有人却选择二线城市2．分析两种选择的优缺点

3．我将来的选择

First-tier City or Second-tier City?

When considering where to work, graduates are often in a dilemma of choosing between the first-tier city and the second-tier city.

It is generally thought that a first-tier city is a wise choice. It goes almost without saying that there are more job opportunities in mega-cities, which offer higher salaries as well. In addition, life is more colorful in that first-tier cities provide more choices of products and services. However, people are shifting their focus to second-tier cities. First, the living costs are much lower, which makes up for the lower salaries.

Second, with smaller population and less pollution, second-tier cities offer more comfortable environment.

For my part, a first-tier city will suit me better, despite its crowdedness and high living costs. The promising career development and colorful life there have a great fascination for me.

背诵句子

1.Jinan, the spring city, is a famous tourist city.

2.Other people may give us instrumental support –financial aid,

material resources, needed services –that reduces stress by helping us resolve and cope with our problems.

3.Only if these conditions are fulfilled can the application proceed to

the next stage.

4.The bicycle is like the air, water and sunshine, and cannot be parted

with a moment in our life.

5.When considering where to work, graduates are often in a dilemma

of choosing between the first-tier city and the second-tier city.

6.It is generally thought that a first-tier city is a wise choice.

However, people are shifting their focus to second-tier cities.

7.For my part, a first-tier city will suit me better.

8.What we can do is to adapt to the stress rather than avoid it.

9.Others argue that stress isn’t as bad as it often supposed to be.

10.have difficulties/troubles in doing sth.

11.Children who live in the country's rural areas are very likely to be

poor.

12.U ntil she spoke I hadn't realized she wasn't English.

13.When it comes to …

14.It’s … that/ who…

15.instead of

16.not only… but also…

17.with/ without

18.In case

19.When it comes to…

20.There are people doing….

21.Weather permitting, we will go to the park.

22.Those who are diligent will make it.

23.The more…, the more…

24.Whatever/ whenever…

Error Correction

1.大小写What makes the success of the song?

2.单复数

3.时态一致

4.人称数一致He have

5.冠词用法a, an, the

6.代词yourselfs, me, ours, she’s

7.分清名词、动词、形容词、副词friendly, hard, like

8.句子中有多少谓语动词？

9.两个独立完整的句子不准用逗号连接

10.慎用！，不要用！！！！！

11.不要用缩写e.g.

12.言之有物，不要过度重复。

13.C hinglish: Some of them we like more.

14.研究好题目

15.名字大小写Li Yuchun

16.要写句子，不要写短语。Because of empathy ability better spread.

连接词Coherence

?First, second, third，to begin with, finally, at length, meanwhile ?Besides, in addition, furthermore

?Since, due to, because of, thanks to

?Therefore, consequently, as a result, thus, accordingly,

?Anyway, however, while, but, although

?To conclude, in sum, in brief,

?For example, for instance, such as, like

?Compared with, in contrast