雅思哥写作干货:7分范文赏析

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2、 There are plenty of options available for spreading news, such as newspapers,radio, TV, Internet and so on. According to your opinion what is the best media to use? Why?报告型:cause,problem,factor,solution,measure,effect,最好的:Internet1:informative and resourceful,give us instant access to information on extensive range of subject.2:revolutionized the communicate .eliminating traditional problems of delayed information and isolation3:interaction with other people,其他传媒只unidirection ,audience 不能comment.便于纠正与监督.问题:1:有些新闻来源不靠谱,特别是网络媒体。

由于人人都可以通过twitter之类的社交网站social networking site来传播信息,因此给谣言rumour的传播提供了可能。

2:甚至有些无良记者unscrupulous journalists为了引起轰动sensation,通过捏造一些假新闻counterfeit journalism来吸引读者眼球。

结论:国家可以出台相关的法律法规related laws and regulations should be constituted,媒体应该进行自我审查impose auto-censorship,来规范媒体和记者的行为。

雅思作文7分标准作文

雅思作文7分标准作文

kidswill have to catch up later on, which is true to some extent.On the other hand, it is scientificallyproved that children tend to learn a language faster before the age of 12. Asfar as I know, my friends who started to learn English when they were six orseven now have a much more satisfactory English level than those who started at12 or 13. So it is wise to have foreign language course in primary schoolcurriculum.Additionally, learning a foreign languageat an earlier age can lay children a solid foundation for future studying.Rather than just learning a language itself, children learn a lot more aboutthe learning methods. As a result, when they enter secondary school, they canexplore more languages and enrich their knowledge by extensive readings.The only disadvantage of learning a foreignlanguage at primary school might be one more course and pressure. However,primary schools can introduce advanced teaching methods to tackle this problem,such as playing games and role play, and ensure that children can enjoy thelanguage learning process.In conclusion, the advantages of learningforeign languages at primary school rather than secondary school outweigh thedisadvantages.注释:[c1]people 和expert是有区别的,注意看题目指的是哪类人[c2]tilTotal: (6.5+6.5+7+7.5)/4=7分(下面评分项里面的小分意在指出你的优势劣势)Task response 6.5 分1. address all parts of the task 7分首先列举的advantages,然后提出disadvantage,紧接着驳斥了这个disadvantage。

雅思满分作文(雅思考官范文):完美解读评分标准

雅思满分作文(雅思考官范文):完美解读评分标准

雅思满分作文(雅思考官范文):完美解读评分标准正在准备雅思考试的小烤鸭们都知道评分标准意味着什么,它就像茫茫大海中引导船舶的灯塔,为他们指出正确的方向。

在写作备考过程中,评分标准的作用不可小觑,对于四项要求:Task Response(Achievement),Coherence and Cohesion,Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range and Accuracy的精确理解和解读有助于让考生的作文更加接近考官的要求,明确自己的写作方向,对提分有帮助。

本文将对考官范文进行解析,看看9分的文章如何出色地完成了其中的所有要求。

剑5 test 2In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in termsof coping with the challenges of student life.However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at the important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course. But overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.1. Task Response:Ø fully addresses all parts o f the taskØ presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas。

雅思写作7分的思路是什么样的

雅思写作7分的思路是什么样的

雅思写作7分的思路是什么样的关于雅思写作成绩的提高可以分为很多模块。

最基本的主要有两个方面:对于话题作文的素材积累和不同题型的谋篇布局。

那是不是说,只要这两个方面都得到解决就一定可以拿到高分呢?我们知道,作文是语言的体现,即使结构清晰,内容充实,如果语言比较贫乏,没有亮点,那么成绩势必会受到影响。

因此,语言是我们在提高写作分数方面必须要重视的一点。

既然评判一篇作文的标准全都体现在官方给我们的评分标准之中,那么我们来看一下,能不能从中找到一些关于语言的提示和启发。

以上这个表格是雅思写作的四项评分标准。

从中我们可以看出,第三项词汇资源(Lexical Resource)和第四项语法的多样性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)都有涉及到语言的层面。

除此之外,评分标准中还提示我们:lTransform simple sentences into more complex sentences by adding more informationluses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms因此,在词汇层面,我们应该体现出使用高级词汇(less common vocabulary),同义替换词(synonyms),单词的搭配使用(collocation/combination)以及正确的单词形式(use the correct word formation)的能力。

除此之外还要注意,这些高级表达的前提都是能够准确和有效地传达我们的想法(you are demonstrating your ability to express and develop ideas precisely and effectively )。

“precisely and effectively”两个词非常重要,不是为了用难词而去用,而是在准确并有效的基础上,再去追求词汇的质量。

雅思写作之7分句段示例解析

雅思写作之7分句段示例解析

雅思写作之7分句段示例解析Detailed description of crimes in newspaper and on television may have negative consequences and therefore should be restrictedTo what extent do you agree or disagree?【句子示例】With the aim of capturing public attention to boost circulation and viewer numbers, the media may sensationalize stories, such as providing graphic details about the brutality of a serial killer.【解析】1. 内容维度(Task Response)这个句子分析了媒体渲染新闻内容,增加细节犯罪描述的动机。

2. 文脉逻辑维度(Coherence and Cohesion)在这个句子之后,写作者可以进一步分析这个现象对于读者和观众的影响,比如引发公众恐慌。

写作者也可以分析报道犯罪细节的其它后果,比如增加受害者的痛苦,或者增加追捕困难。

3. 词汇维度(Lexical Resource)“capture”是动词,表示“引起(注意、想象、兴趣)”。

1“boost”是动词,表示“增强,提高”。

“circulation”是名词,表示“发行量”。

“sensationalize”是动词,表示“使……耸人听闻”。

“graphic”是形容词,表示“图片的”。

“brutality”是名词,表示“残暴”。

“serial”是形容词,表示“连续的”。

4. 语法和句型维度(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)本句的开始是一个目的状语with the aim of……,句子的主语是the media,谓语是may sensationalize,接着是宾语stories。

【美联英语】雅思写作7分句评析

【美联英语】雅思写作7分句评析

小编给你一个美联英语官方试听课申请链接:/test/waijiao.aspx?tid=16-73675-0美联英语提供:雅思写作7分句评析1. 一个人的实际能力才是企业所真正看重的。

It is one's practical capability that enterprises truly value.(这句话用强调句句型表达效果比较好。

)2. 我认为我们发明一种新的语言来取代英语是没有必要的.I don't think it necessary to invent a new kind of language to take the place of English.(这句话有太多的同学用"instead of"来表示“取代”的意思,再次强调,instead of 是介词词组,表示"……而不是……"的意思。

)3. 然而,关于它是一件好事还是坏事,人们有不同的态度。

People, nevertheless, hold various opinions in terms of the issue whether it is a blessing or a curse.(这句话有很多人用"good thing"和"bad thing"表示“好事”和“坏事”,在书面语中推荐用blessing和curse,绝对的less common vocabulary!)4. 很多国家的失业率在不断攀升这一事实是我们无法否认的。

The fact that the unemployment rates in quite a number of countries keep rising can not be denied.5. 在给出我的观点之前,我认为看一看问题的两面是很重要的。

I hold it essential to examine the both sides of the issue before presenting my viewpoint.(这句话有几个重点:首先表示“看一看”不宜用"look at",那是“盯着……看”的意思,examine是“仔细审视”的意思,用在这里正合适。

雅思写作7分范文

雅思写作7分范文

雅思写作7分范文(总1页) -CAL-FENGHAI.-(YICAI)-Company One1-CAL-本页仅作为文档封面,使用请直接删除雅思写作7分范文:个人幸福取决于什么题目:Some people think that personal happiness is directly relatedto economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on completely other factors. Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.In recent years, the discussion of whether personal happiness is directly associated to economic success has become a controversial issue. Notions toward it differ widely from person to person.Some people believe that happiness is related to economic success because only money can make people’s life more enjoyable. When it comes to economic success, the majority of people believe that money means a luxurious life. To begin with, if someone owns great success on economic, that means he can spend more money on whatever he likes and spend more time on his hobbies. Emotionally, money can buy happiness at least to some extent. That is to say, you can buy things that you like in order to fulfill your needs and vanities and this makes you feel happier. You can also enjoy the best education and social welfare. Thirdly, economic success implies high social class and status, which can make people feel happy and respectable.()Opponents, however, hold the view that happiness does not depend on economic success but completely other factors. First of all, numerous studies show that happy individuals are successful acros阿s multiple life domains, including marriage, income, work performance and health. The happiness exists not only because economic success makes people happy, but also because positive affect engenders happiness. What’s more, It is indisputable that there are millionsof people who still have a miserable life and have to fact thedangers of starvation and exposure, but some of them sill lead a happy life because they keep the happy spirit. Last but not least, money can not buy everything, such as friendship, true love and health. You can buy things corporeal, but you can never spend moneyto ask for more time.In the final analysis, both sides have sound foundations. However, if asked to make a choice, I will not hesitate to assent to thelatter. I firmly believe that happiness is not only related to economic success but also links to other factors which are much more significant.字体:大中小2。

G类雅思写作7分范文欣赏

G类雅思写作7分范文欣赏

G类雅思写作7分范文欣赏Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldn't. Which do you think is good practice.One of the topics in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer is the question is that it is better for them not to.Firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.Secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on matters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and international issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.Last but not the least, adult children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse ifthe adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that if the parents and their adult children do not live together, both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, live a life they like, and keep intact their affections for each other.。

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雅思哥写作干货:7分范文篇1Nowadays some people have the anti-social behavior and are lack of respect to others. What are the reasons? What are the solutions?Today there is a large increase in anti-social behavior, such as stealing, robbery and bullying, in almost every country. Also, irresponsibility and disrespect to others are common. Thereason for the anti-social behavior are both complicated and varied.One possible reason for people to show anti-social behavior is that they may be dissatisfied with certain policies made by the government, so they choose an extreme way to express theirdissatisfaction. For example, a local government does not punish the businesses that cause pollution to the environment just because these companies pay a large sum of tax every year. As aresult, some people intentionally hurt employees working for these companies as a warning. Another reason is that some people lack education in learning how to respect and how law works whenthey were young, so they fail to realize what harm their behavior would cause to others. I think this explains why they appear harmful to the society.To address this problem, the government should listen to public opinions with an open mind, taking the benefit of all parties into consideration before making policy, and make every effort tomeet people’s demand in fields like living environment, price index and working benefits. Public media should broadcast noncommercial advertisements to convey the importance of showing respectto others and obeying the law. Also, schools and parents ought to put emphasis on cultivating law-abiding consciousness and let youngsters know that only respecting others can obtain others’respect.In sum, any anti-social behavior is regarded as a threat to social order. Mostly , the ones that misbehave lack a good understanding in manners and law.So the government media and educationinstitutions need to join hands to solve this problem.雅思哥写作干货:7分范文篇2In recent years, young people in many countries choose to live by themselves. What are the reasons and is it positive or negative for the development of the society?Traditionally , young people often lived with other people. Now , more young people are choosing to live by themselves. Some people question whether this trend will have a negative orpositive impact on the development of society.Some people are choosing to live by themselves for convenience purposes. Maybe they have a lengthy commute back and forth to work and it is no longer reasonable to live such a distance away.They want to live close to where they work and a roommate or someone to live with is not an option. Some people choose to live alone because they dislike the inconveniences of cohabiting withsomeone who has different living habits. Other people choose to live alone simply because they are introverts and they do not enjoy social contact.Although a person should certainly have the right to determine whether they live alone or not, it is important to note that human contact and social interaction remain important to a person’sdevelopment and well-being. Human beings are social creatures and studies have shown that we can all benefit from social interaction. Many of us think that we can enhance our lives withcomputer time, television time, or smartphone time, but face-to-face interaction can still be beneficial and enriching.It remains to be seen if there will be any long-term effects from the current trend of people living alone, but there is a possibility that this trend may have a negative impact on people’sability or interest in social interaction.雅思哥写作干货:7分范文篇3An increasing number of people are changing their careers. What are the reasons? Do you think it is positive or negative?Some people wonder why career changes are becoming more prevalent and whether those more frequent changes are having a positive or a negative effect. Although one can certainly argue aboutthe positive or negative effects, I believe that these changes can be positive, if the person making the career change is doing so for the right reasons.Admittedly, companies come and go in our fast-paced world economy. So itis probably no longer realistic for a person to think that they will be ableto start and finish working with the samecompany. Along the same lines, it should be noted that many companiesand employers do not value loyalty as much as their counterparts from previous generations.This trend can be positive if people change jobs for the following purposes. First, they make career changes in an attempt to find moresatisfaction or fulfillment with their new career.Second, they made a mistake in the previous career they chose for themselves but it is no late to pursue a more suitable one. Lastly, somepeople make career changes in search of a moredesirable lifestyle, more career advancement or a higher income.If people choose a different career path so they can be happier or more fulfilled in their career. I support them to do so. Happy and fulfilled employees are more productive and theiremployers will be benefited. Everyone deserves the chance to have abetter career development. If career change is the key to their future success, they should not hesitate to make the change.雅思哥写作干货:7分范文篇4Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people maintain that their governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and disease.It is obvious that environment pollution can create widespread illness. Studies have shown that poor air quality can create illness, including cancer, and those illnesses can reduce ourquality of life and our lifespan. The same can be said for water pollution, as many disease and illnesses are a direct result of poor water quality. Unfortunately, in many countries the waterand air quality is already poor due to years of abuse or negligence. Government efforts to ensure air and water quality can be quite expensive, as a lot of cleanup is required.In regards to a lack of quality housing, that can result in similar health problems and concerns, as people who are homeless or living in the street are certainly more prone to disease andillness.That being said, a government cannot spend all of its financial resources in curbing pollution or creating affordable housing. The government has other priorities and problems to consider,including transportation, education, employment and health care. If these priorities are ignored, other problems will arise. Bad roads or bad bridges may impact the economy. Uneducated andunemployed citizens are also sure to have a negative impact on the economy. If a society is unable to care for its sick population, the society will also suffer.With this in mind, it seems that the government is best served in establishing a balance in determining which problems and areas to focus on. Although they may never be able to solve all ofthose problems at ones, maybe they can make enough progress so that someday those problems will be in the past.雅思哥写作干货:7分范文篇5Some people claim that newspaper is the best way to get the latest information because it has more influence that other forms of media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people claim that the latest information is mostly from newspapers, but I would say television is a better way to get news and other information.立场:不赞成纸媒体不能及时把新闻信息第一时间传播出去纸媒体好处:更多细节,读者可以反复阅读电子类媒体:更新及时,视频的方式报道,让人们更直观的了解到事件的进展On behalf of newspapers, newspaper stories are generally more detailed and more in-depth than other media accounts of the same stories. A television or radio newscast has limited time inwhich to tell a news story. If the television news is only 30 minutes or 60 minutes in length, the television network can use only a limited amount of time for each story. Newspapers, on theother hand, often have more time and space to offer for a specific story. Also, newspaper stories are written instead of spoken like television or radio stories. If a person is reading anewspaper story and they are unclear about some of the facts in the story, they can go back and read the story again.On behalf of other forms of media, it is important to point out thatprinted newspapers are usually printed only once a day. Although some newspapers now have internet sites where they candisseminate news as fast as other forms of electronic media. Electronic media such as television, radio and internet news sources have the ability to deliver news much more quickly thannewspapers. As a medium, television and radio offer unlimited video and audio accounts of news stones, but printed newspapers lack these forms of accounts.Although newspapers have traditionally been a main source for information. Other electronic media, especially television, are now challenging newspapersin this role. Television can providenews immediately while it is happening. Besides, television can do sowith video and audio presentations that are not available in newspaper.感谢您的阅读,祝您生活愉快。

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