高中“简单”话题作文讲评1
高中作文_作文讲评(7)
二、最重要的 要走出困境，最重要的是要有信心，有实干精神。自古以来．所有能成就一番 事业的人无一不是脚踏实地、吃苦耐劳的人。古语有云：临渊羡鱼，不如退而结 网。这就告诉我们：唉声叹气不是办法，幻想憧憬不是办法——只有信心十足地 去干，才能走出困境。正所谓“靠天靠地不如靠自己”。如果不去干，建国初期， 我们也不会建起大庆、胜利等大油田，使我国摆脱靠进口钢铁、洋油过日子的困 境；如果只是干等干靠，比尔· 盖茨也不会当上微软公司的总裁．一跃成为世界首 富。这样的事例太多了!爱迪生花了整整十个年头，经过五万次左右的实践。发明 了蓄电池；狄更斯不管刮风下雨，每天到街头去观察谛听，记下行人的只言片语， 写出许多文学巨著，著名科学家竺可桢70多岁还到野外考察，获得第一手资料， 直到1974年2月6日临终的一天还不忘做科研记录。不靠自己．能行吗? 有飞来的山、落镜的湖．有背来背去的王屋太行。名山大川自可以用传说来解 释，唯有长城不能。因为只有“干”才能用一块块真真实实的“青砖”筑起万里 长城。因此，我们应该说：困难算什么?只要我们能干! 三、百折不挠 古今中外．能成功的人从来都是敢于承受挫折的人。如果一个人的内心脆弱· 不 能承受轻微的震颠．那他必会成为困难的俘虏，永远一事无成。周文王受拘禁而 演《周易》；司马迁忍受遭宫刑之痛之辱完成《史记》；贝多芬克服耳聋的巨大 障碍．写成了世代不朽的《命运交响曲》，如此事例，不胜枚举。敢于直面人生 挫折，勇于接受困难的挑战。即使眼看山穷水尽，仍会峰回路转．柳暗花明。 按上之所言而为，还怕什么困境?
作文讲评一:困境
话题精选 ★阅读下面的材料。根据要求作文 有两个人做生意折了本。仅剩下一文钱。其中一人准备扔掉时， 另一个灵机一动，说：“有办法了。”于是他们用一文钱买了几张 彩色纸．再捡起些树枝，做成了一些小玩具风车，拿到集市去卖， 很快便销售一空。而后他俩用所得的钱做本钱，继续做这不起眼的 生意。几年过后，他俩成了富翁。 事情就是这样，眼看山穷水尽，却有峰回路转，柳暗花明。我们 也会遇到各种各样的困境，如生活上的困境，学习上的困境，情感 上的困境……如何看待困境，怎样走出困境，请以“走出困境”为 话题写一篇文章，谈谈你的看法。 注意：1所写内容必须在这个话题范围以内。2立意自定。3文体 自选。4题目自拟。5不少于800字。
“习惯与人生”话题作文讲评与范文点评优秀作文
个人来到黑海边，开始寻找点铁成金石。海边的石头很多，为
了避免重复捡到他摸过的石头，他每捡到一块冰凉的石头就往
海里扔，这样一天天、一月月、一年年过去了，他不气馁，继
续捡石头。有一天，他捡起一块石头，是温的！他仍然随手扔
到了海里，因为他已经养成了往海里扔石头的习惯。
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我们平时是不是有某种习惯使我们做出了令人遗憾的事呢？
“习惯与人生”话题作文讲 评
2005.10.28
作文话题
❖ 阅读下面文字，根据要求作文。（60分）
❖பைடு நூலகம்
一个人从亚历山大帝王图书馆买下了一本书。这本忆夹着
一张纸，纸上写着点铁成金石的秘密。谁要是在黑海边找到了
这块小点金石，谁就可以将任何金属点成纯金。纸条上说，这
块奇石的外观与其他石头没有区别，只是它摸起来是温的。这
❖ ——文章题目很美。本来主体部分所写的六种习惯是很 可以结合“人生”发议论进而写出一篇起码符合要求的 作文的，但作者也许就因为缺乏话题意识，因而眼睁睁 看着大好“时机”一一错过而无所作为，结尾依然不知 所为地谈没有“好习惯”、“大习惯”，论“自我的风 采”（而不是“人生的精彩”、“精彩的人生”抑或 “充实的人生”——“靴子”都不想穿，可惜！可叹！！ 可恼！！！），说得不客气点，真可谓“至‘死’不 悟”。
（二）“病文”例析之二
❖ 《习惯决定人生》： ❖ 文章开头写道：“性格形成习惯，习惯决定人生。
这是我的座右铭，是我从伤与痛之间的教训。”但 主体部分写的却是回忆一件因自己多疑而致使与好 同学友谊破裂最后终于重归于好的故事，结尾这样 写：“现在的我，把心里的伤痛隐藏于深处，把阳 光的笑容留给每个人。不管怎样被攻击，不管怎样 被误会，我都会对我的朋友说：‘我相信你！’” ❖ ——文章明显有乱套旧作之嫌。开头写得还不错，简 洁且能扣题。但主体基本与“习惯”不沾边，“多疑” 只能说是“生性”，很难说成“习惯”。再看结尾， 不懂得照应题目、照应开头、扣话题议论作结，而是 完全脱离“习惯与人生”的话题中心空发议论，如此 则连“穿靴戴帽”（这本已是话题作文的大忌）都够 不上了。作者审题之粗心，选材之草率，可见一斑。
高一语文作文讲评
3.着眼于“深”。
要深入挖掘材料本身的意义，并把这种影 响施加给读者，以期引起一种感情上的共鸣。 要想深入挖掘材料的意义、价值，除了自己的 思考，还要多读书，弄明白成功的作品是怎么 做的，模仿、借鉴会对提高自己的水平有很大 帮助的，正如梅兰芳所说“不看别人的戏，就 演不好自己的戏”，写作也是这样。
当时的中国犹如一直沉睡的雄狮，列强几 经来“打扰，如果没有邱少云他们的保护，我 们的祖国会变成现在这样强大吗？
爱，深藏在心底的爱，不是用来怀念，而 是用来保护。
我又何尝不爱我的祖国，我知道他的痛苦， 我明白他的无奈，我领会到他的艰辛，对于祖 国的爱不是要用说的，而是要来体现在实际行 动上的。
我不善言辞，但我懂得歌颂祖国，我懂得 化压力为动力，我懂得吸取前人之教训，我懂 得保护我的祖国，我不允许有人辱骂我的祖国。 我对祖国的爱和抗日英雄们对祖国的爱是一样 的，他们在战场上保护祖国，我在国际地位上 保护祖国，我要把对祖国的爱变成保护，要在 现在的社会中为了祖国能更加强大，我愿付出 所有。爱他就要保护他，他曾经那么沧桑。
整体构思
动笔前一定要想一下要写的人和事，需 要从哪点展开叙述？重点安排什么材料？在 何处、做怎样的议论和抒情？怎么收尾？
怎样选择材料
1.着眼于“小”。
在写作时，不一定要写大人物、大事件， 生活中的平凡人、平凡事，只要我们感受 独到，写出来就是一篇好文章。
所谓大师，就是这样的人，他们用自 己的眼睛去看别人看过的东西，在别人司 空见惯的东西上，能够发现出美来。
下课铃好似冲锋的号角，我和其
他脱缰的战马一样向食堂疾驰而去在 这熟悉的人海中我迎着波涛流而上， 终于到达了打饭队伍的彼岸。
队伍长的我竟一眼不能望穿，百 无聊赖，我打量起了周围。蓦然，一 个不曾关注的身影映入了我的眼帘。
作文讲评1 虎妈战歌
Sample 1 (A12 陈思臣)Recently, a book called Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother has caught many people’s attention. The author, Amy Chua, who is a Chinese American professor of Yale, managed to cause te discussion on whether Chinese way or American way is better for children’s education, using her story about raising her two daughters in a traditional Chinese way. The book came out in the year 2010 and was introduced into China at the start of 2011. According to the latest news, Amy’s elder daughter has just got the offers from both Yale and Harvard. To some extent, it seems that the traditional Chinese way has received great achievement, but most Chinese moms doesn’t agree with what author did because its brutality.Sample 2 (A12 曹庭赫)Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, which was written by Amy Chua, professor of Yale, first came out in 2010. In the book, the Chinese American tells of how she has brought up her two daughters with traditional Chinese methods, leading to a wide range of discussion on whether Chinese or American ways to educate are better to the kids. It became available on Chinese market at the start of 2011 and soon became one of the best sellers in the country known for strict and stressful education. Most Chinese mothers, to everyone’s surprise, held a negative attitude towards the Tiger Mother’s methods, for they would rather let children grow up in a happier and freer atmosphere. Despite all the disagreement and criticism, Amy Chua’s 17-year-old daughter has received offers from Harvard and Yale.Sample 3 (A 12 曾奕博)Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, a book written by Amy Chua, a Chinese American professor from Yale, has captured the attention of the public since its coming out in 2010. The story that Chua’s two daughters have been educated in a traditional Chinese way arouses a heated discussion on strengths and weaknesses between Chinese and American method of teaching.The Chinese version was on sale at the beginning of 2011, however, only to get the result that most mothers in China tend to disapprove of the measures Chua took.. Hence, when words came that the 17-year-old elder daughter had been admitted to Yale and Harvard, the public are lost in a deeper thought than it has ever been.Sample 4 (A 11 陈硕)The book Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, which came out in 2010, now leads to a discussion about the difference between Chinese education style and American education style. The writer, Amy Chua as a Chinese American and a professor in Yale, recorded the story that she educated her two daughters in a traditional Chinese way. However, with the Chinese version available at the beginning of 2011, most of Chinese mothers don’t agree with what the writer did despite the fact that Amy’s 17-year-old elder daughter has been admitted by both Yale and Harvard. Sample 5 (A11 陈晓宇)A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010. Its author is Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor in Yale, who tells of stories in her book about how she educates her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has sparkled a debate as to which way of educating is superior, the traditional Chinese way or the American way. The Chinese version of the book came onto market in China in early 2011, but surprisingly a vast majority of Chinese mothers are not in favor of the writer’s practice despite the fact the Amy’s elder daughter, 17 years old, has been admitted to both Harvard and Yale.Sample 6 (A 11 李铂垚)The book Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, which was published in 2010 is written by Amy Chua, a Chinese American professor in Yale. The content includes the experiences of the author bringing up her two daughters in a traditional Chinese way, which leads to a discussion and argument about the advantages and disadvantages between the Chinese and American educational method.In addition, the book began to be on sale in China in the early 2011. To everyone’s surprise, most Chinese mothers hold negative attitude to what the author did, even if the method has made great achievements—her 17-year-old elder mother has been admitted to both Yale and Harvard. Sample 7 (A 10 任冬旭)Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother written by a Chinese American called Amy Chua was first published in 2010. The author who works in Yale University as a professor tells us a story about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way, which leads to a heated discussion on which educational method is better, the Chinese one or the American one.In 2011, the Chinese edition of this book came out in China. To everyone’s surprise, most of the mothers in China hold an opposite opinion to the book. But according to the latest news, the author’s elder daughter has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale at the age of 17.Sample 8 (A 9 曹欣然)Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, published in 2010, is written by Amy Chua, a Chinese American who is now a professor in Yale. Amy Chua tells of her own story about how she has educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way in the book. The book soon caused a discussion on the advantages and disadvantages of Chinese and American education.After the book coming out in Chinese a year later, to our surprise, most Chinese mothers tended to show their negative attitude towards Amy’s way of teaching. However, according to the latest news, the writer’s 17-year-old elder daughter has been admitted to both Harvard and Yale. Sample 9 (A 7 李雨桐)Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother written by a Chinese American named Amy Chua, a Yale University professor, came out in 2010 in the USA and has brought about widespread concern without a doubt. It is surely based on an honest story of the author’s experience in sparing no effort to educate her two daughters in what she described as a traditional Chinese upbringing way. It also has led to a heated discussion over which one is better, Chinese or American ways of education. But to our surprise, the majority of Chinese mothers were against her views when the book went into China in early 2011. However, the latest news showed that her daughter of 17 years old had been admitted to Harvard and Yale, which seemed to have proved her success in education.Sample 10 (A3 张沛锦)Recently there’s a book that tells a story how the writer uses Chinese traditional educating way to teach her two daughters, which draws people’s attention and even causes a discussion on whether Chinese educating style is better than that of America.Amy Chua, the writer of the book and professor of Yale, is a Chinese American and had the booked published in 2010. To people’s surprise, as the Chinese version was available in China in early 2011, most Chinese mothers weren’t in favour of what Amy did in her book. Instead, they stick to their own methods which are less strict. In spite of that, the latest news shows that Amy’s elder daughter aged 17 has been admitted to both Yale and Harvard.Sample 11 (A2 陈栎杉)A book named Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother came out in 2010, in which the writer, Amy Chua, a professor of Yale, tells the story of her personal experience of educating her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way.As soon as the Chinese version began to sell in 2011, the book aroused the attention of the public and led to a keen discussion on the issue whether the Chinese education is better than the American one. Surprisingly, most Chinese parents stand against this ruthless way of education, even though the latest news come out that Amy’s seventeenth-year-old daughter is accepted both by Harvard and Yale.Sample 12 (A2 张瑞佳)In 2010, the publication of Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother has aroused a heated controversy about the differences between Chinese and American education modes and their respective merits. As the author of this sensational book, Amy Chua, a Chinese American working for Yale as a professor, vividly recorded her bittersweet experience in bringing up her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way.The Chinese version has been on sale since early 2011. But much to our surprise, most Chinese mothers hold a negative attitude to it. While the battle between the two education styles is till in a full swing, a latest report showed that Chua’s 17-year-old daughter has got her offers from Yale and Harvard.Sample 13 (A 5 耿丹)Recently there is a book coming out in China and drawing people’s attention. Written by Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor of Yale University, this book named Battle Hymn of Tiger Mother talks about how the writer educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese style, and unexpectedly caused a discussion on which is better, American style or Chinese style.As its Chinese version was available in China at the beginning of 2011, to Amy’s surprise, most Chinese mothers aren’t in favour of what the writer did in her book. However, according to the latest news, Amy’s elder daughter has been admitted to both Harvard University and Yale University by now. Sample 14 (A 5 杨悦宁)Battle Hymn of the Tiger, the book published in 2010, is written by Amy Chua as a Chinese American and professor of Yale University. In her book, Amy Chua tells the story about how she raises two daughters in her own traditional Chinese way and the book aroused a discussion about the differences between Chinese and American education methods.Chinese readers have already read the book since its Chinese version was published in early 2011. To our surprise, a large number of Chinese mothers reckon that Amy’s education method isn’t suitable for their children. Nevertheless, the latest news is that Amy’s 17-year-old daughter has been received by Harvard and Yale.常见错误：1. A book published in 2010 and caused a discussion.2. A book had been first published in 20103.old/ older daughter4. a Chinese American profession5.Chinese issue6. A book which written by ….7.The book tells a story about the writer educated/educate/educates her two daughters has causeda discussion8.…has been admitted by Yale9.the book’s publishment made a discussion that between American and Chinese education stylewhich is better.10.… has been enrolled/recruited by Harvard11.a book broke out12.by Chinese education waycate her daughters with Chinese education14.the book was came out in 201015.…leading to a discussion whether the ways of Chinese or American education are good or not16.lead to the discussion that which is better or worse between the means of educating in Chineseway and American one.17.The mother is really successful because of the fact that is the writer’s 17-year-old daughter hasalready been admitted to Harvard and Yale.18.By talking about teaching the two daughters in traditional Chinese way, the book has led to aheated discussion about teaching the children in which way is better.19.It leads to people to discuss the Chinese education compares with the American’s which isbetter.。
以“小确幸”为话题作文讲评1
几天前还只是长着新芽的楸树，转眼间已是满树繁 花；还有，我和我的家人都健健康康地活着，因血缘而 有着情感的关联，相互支持走过人生旅途。有这些，我 很知足。 “小确幸”是要用一颗敏感而积极的心去体会的， 像去感受每一次脉搏的跳动，因为那与我们的生命息息 相关。把眼光放得太高只会郁郁终老，人至晼晚，该是 能感觉到这几十年会因为这些细微的存在而变得充实、 有意义。 再看看自己的掌纹，这三条粗线不正是由细小的线 积聚而成的吗？其实，“生命”就是活着就比逝 去好； “事业”就是努力做自己该做和想做的事；“爱情”就 是相互的包容和依赖。这么想来，幸福似乎并不是那么 困难的事。 当我握紧自己的手，便发现，原来我的“小确幸” 都被抓在自己的手心里了。
早上看到晾衣杆上一只大鸟在给一只小鸟喂虫子， 第一次见，觉得新奇又美好。 加班回家的时候，经过一个广场，卖唱歌手正在唱 着一首我喜欢的歌。 打车回家一路都是绿灯，出租车司机说，我们真好 运，一个红灯都没吃。 想买的东西降价了，而且还不是一点点，是打对折。 周末的时候把冰箱装得满满的，家里打扫得干干净 净的。 平常很拥挤的地铁却一整个空车开进了站，我不急 不忙地挑选了一个靠角落的座位。 春节过后，忽然收到一个包裹，打开才记起是自己 节前买的一条裙子，里面有一张很可爱的小卡片，上面 写着“对不起，我们迟到了”，还有一份额外的礼物。
阅读下面的文字，根据要求，选择一题作文， 不少于800字。（60分） 有一首诗这样写道：“一个人∕要活得像一 支队伍∕对着自己的心灵招兵买马∕不气馁∕有 召唤∕爱自由。” 请以“一个人活得要像一支队伍”为题，写 一篇命题Fra bibliotek文，文体自选。
拾起飘落的“小确幸” 在日本文学中，似乎每个作家的生命意识都与某种 敏感的情绪相关—生活中的那些细节的幸福，可以在俗 世中流走，却每每被他们仅仅攫住，成就了别样的美。 是的，我爱这“小确幸”—愿把握生命中微小的细节， 抓紧这幸福。 感念逝去的生命，还记得在地坛公园一个偏僻角落 努力思索人生的那位作家吗？我曾在一个黄昏被清平湾 那世外桃源的美景和人情感动；也曾为四合院中那一颗 母亲与孩子合种的合欢树流泪；更为在地坛中仰头看天， 用自己独特生命体验将地坛与自我在精神沟通的力量感 动。我永远都忘不了青春岁月中结识的那位语文老师， 是他，带给我这样的小幸福；但整个班级朗朗的读书声 在地坛回响，我第一次体验到生命、文字可以这样紧密 的在原点融合。
话题作文讲评
曾几何时，人们的心态变得如此浮躁， 把过去的脚踏实地的实干精神都丢了，都 想在“直路”上飞奔。什么“秘诀”、什 么“妙法”都是人们追求的。他们绞尽脑 汁，变换手中的魔法，寻求着发财的捷径， 寻求作成功的捷径，结果却走到了人生的 反面。人们向往暴发户，却没看到许多的 官员因腐败而落马；人们想望一举成名的 英雄，却没看到就是在第27届雅典奥运会 期间，因兴奋剂事件而毁没自己人生道路 的运动员多达两位数。
唐代诗人张继一生充满了挫折与艰辛。 他落第的时候，坐在路旁的江水边， 落魄的学子思绪驰骋，愁情翻涌，面 对江枫渔火，遥望月落，细闻乌啼， 或许他的心中已经不是怨恨，而是对 忧伤哀婉的享受。于是，一首《枫桥 夜泊》显耀于世。更多的是对生活的 体验以及对生命图画的丰富。假如没 有挫折或苦难，人生就会黯然失色， 正因为有了这些挫折与艰辛，才奠定 了张继在我国文学史上的地位。
唐代诗人张继拥有一条曲折回旋的考 科举之路，当这条路在拐最大的一个 弯时，也便是张继落第的时候，坐在 路旁的江水边，落魄的学子思绪驰骋， 愁情翻涌，面对江枫渔火，遥望月落， 细闻乌啼，或许他的心中已经不是怨 恨，而是对忧伤哀婉的享受。于是， 一首《枫桥夜泊》显耀于世，熠熠生 辉，牵人肚肠，却丰富了诗宴大餐。 张继的学路之弯，给他带回去的远不 是悲痛哀伤，更多的是对生活的体验 以及对生命图画的丰富。
人们总习惯选择平坦宽阔的大道，人们 总习惯在直线上奔驰，他们追求秘诀， 他们渴望一步登天，事实上往往事与 愿违。看看世界上的真正成功人士， 谁没有经历坎坷崎岖的小路？爱迪生 试用了一千多种灯丝才发明了灯泡， 他的成功之路真可谓曲折；越王勾践 “卧薪尝胆”，一步一步终于走到了 自己成功的彼岸，他的道路真可谓艰 难；明朝皇帝朱元璋一生历经坎坷， 凭着自己的的坚定信念，凭着自己的 执著追求终于登上皇帝的宝座，难道 他的路就很直吗？回答是否定的
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从历史的 角度再次 从反面入 据
听说太平洋彼岸一只蝴蝶简单地挥 一下翅，一场风暴就会由而在千里之外 发生。 听说古代一个国王，就只是因为坐 骑少了一个简单的马钉而失去了整场战 争，也失去了一个国家。 听说无数的奥运健儿都 只是因为 一次简单的失误而与金牌失之交臂。 听说－－－－ 够了，朋友们善于把握简单的人是 智者，盲目忽略简单的人是傻子。历史 将续继不断地展现出简单的魅力，朋友， 你能用简单来改变这世界吗？
流星划一道简单的狐 线却带给了世界耀眼 的光芒；蝴蝶用简单 的撕咬，却给世界带 来了缤纷的美丽，荷 花简单地固守，却给 世界带来了高洁的芬 芳。 一生二，二生三，三 生万物，这个世界就 是由这些简单的一二 而变得丰富多彩。一 个善于把握简单的人 必将成就伟业，一个 视简单如儿戏的人必 将被历史淘汰。
有一对模范夫妻相敬一生，从未因为大事小事 红过脸。当别人问起他们能相爱一生的决窍时， 男的说：”很简单，每天她下班回家后，我就用 手把她因为奔波而有些散乱的头发轻轻地抚起， 整理好。说一声：‘辛苦了你了‘。“我也一样。 “女的接着说。旁人略吃一惊。然后若有所 思…… 这就是简单的爱。朴实无华，但最为感人，当 然，这样的爱也是天长地久的。 简单爱，就是男孩对女孩说：“如果我有一块 饼，我把它掰成两半。一半给我妈，一块给你。” 简单爱，就是女孩在男孩打完篮球后，赶紧跑 去商店，然后气喘吁吁地跑回来，手里拿着一瓶 像女孩的心一样纯净的水……“
鲁迅先生也曾说：“我哪里是什么天才， 我只是把别人用来喝咖啡的时间用在工作上 罢了。”还有众多的科学家、文学家、各界 名人为了工作，理想废寝忘食的事例不胜枚 举。
深受人民敬爱的毛主席在指挥抗日战争 时期长期居住于延安窑洞，过着简朴勤俭的 生活，却写出了《论持久战》等不朽著作指 明着抗日战争的出路，终于引导人民取得了 胜利。
作文讲评1-How to protect animals in danger
How to Protect Animals in Danger?
写作要求： 请以“How to Protect Animals in Danger?”为题， 写一篇60～80词的作文。要求包括如下要点： How difficult is the situation? Why should we protect them? What can we do to protect them？
How to Protect Animals in Danger?
As students, we should do our best to protect the environment from very little things., such as don't throw garbage everywhere, and stop taking away their land, so that animal have a good place to live in. The government should set up more nature parks to feed more endangered animals, and call on people to stop killing animals for money or for food. And lay down laws to punish people who hunting animals illegally.
How to Protect Animals in Danger?
范文：
There are 794 kinds of wild animals in the world. However, about 300 kinds of them are in danger now. Of course there are lots of reasons for it. One of the main causes is the environment they live is getting worse and worse, and the othg.
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①结构单纯；头பைடு நூலகம்少；与复杂相对；容易理解、使用 或处理：情节～ㄧ～扼要 ㄧ这种机器比较～ㄧ他简简单 单说了几句话。
②（经历、能力等）平凡（多用于否定式）：李队长 主意多，有魄力，可真不～。
③草率；不细致：～从事。
④对自然规律的一种理解和追求。如自然定律的简单 性。 基本解释
可以 从书法中“一字最难写”的道理说开去，辩证论
述简单与复杂的对立统一关系。一根木棍子，横着放，便 成了“一”。然而在书法家的眼里，这个“一”字奥妙无 穷，只此一笔，起、承、转、接的笔法尽在其内；只此一 笔，书法家的喜、怒、哀、乐，皆在其中。这个“一”或 许就连贯整篇书法的气势，体现通篇文章的风格。因此李 苦禅由衷感叹：“一”字最难写。
5.一种现代审美。如～人生、～法则。 6.基本的，不能缩小或减少的。如～再生产、～分
吗组、～物质等。 7. 中国古代哲人对世界的一种理解。 聂文涛说：《系辞上》认为乾卦通过变化来显示智
慧，坤卦通过简单来显示能力。把握变化和简单，就把握 了天地万物之道。所以“乾以易知，坤以简能。”“易简， 而天下之理得矣。”古人以此研究天地、万物、社会、生 命和健康。辨证的世界让我们对每件事的拿捏都要恰到好 处，简单有时就是容易，简单有时却恰恰是不容易。
事务又简单。老了干不动时，我想谋这份差使。” 巴金 《探索集·春蚕》：“我的经验很简单，很平常，一句话： 不说谎，把心交给读者。”
2. 谓经历、能力等平凡。 巴金 《军长的心》：“ 朝鲜 人，志愿军，这都不简 单啊！” 峻青 《海啸》第二章：“ 小于 ，你真是好样 的，一口气能在水里憋那么长的时间，真不简单。” 3. 疏略草率。如：简单从事。 4.中国古代哲人对世界的一种理解。 聂文涛说：《系辞上》认为乾卦通过变化来显示智慧， 坤卦通过简单来显示能力。把握变化和简单，就把握了天 地万物之道。所以“乾以易知，坤以简能。”“易简，而 天下之理得矣。”古人以此研究天地、万物、社会、生命 和健康。辨证的世界让我们对每件事的拿捏都要恰到好处， 简单有时就是容易，简单有时却恰恰是不容易。
存在的问题： 1、立意不恰当。 简单的承诺，一生的行动 让坚持与坚定成就不简单 文明，够简单 简美 平凡其实不简单 态度决定简单 简单长存
2、表意不准确，不明了；意思逻辑混乱。 A . 用最简单的方法去应对解决某个问题确是能提高 效率。 B. 正真的快乐生活在于简单的心灵满足。 C. 孔子曾说过：“勿以恶小而为之，无以善小而不 为。”说的是不要因为坏事太小而去做，不要因为好事太 小而不做。在我刚接触文言文时，当我读起这句文言文， 我一下子就明白了其中的意思。 D. 大道至简是极其简单的，简单到一两句话就能说明 白。所谓“真传一句话，假传万卷书”就很好地体现了这 个道理。 E. 一片落叶的简单凋落，收到了“化作春泥更护花” 的效果，一场春雨的简单落下，也能“随风潜入夜，润物 细无声”的成效。 F. 常听到一句广告词：“简约而不简单。”简单， 可不能等同于单一。
3、用例不准确 A.有一个旅行团到沙漠中旅行，沙漠天气 酷热难耐，每个人都挥汗如雨。当大家都步 伐沉重，痛苦不堪的时候，却有一个人仍然
哼着小曲，快乐地走着。于是大家都惊诧地
问他：“你为什这么惬意？”他说：“因为
我带的东西最少，步伐最轻逸。”其实，快 乐很简单，不要斤斤计划就可以。
B.想必大家对“田忌赛马”这个故事都能 耳熟能详，田忌之所以打败对手，靠的的是
上的微笑的小熊告诉我：让生活变得快乐其实很简单， 只要你怀抱简单的心态，学会简单的生活。
可以阐述简单是一种美，是人生中的一种境界。古代的 颜回“一箪食，一瓢饮，在陋巷”生活可谓简单，“人不 堪其忧”，颜回却以之为乐，孔子赞之曰“贤”。当代学 术界泰斗季羡林先生衣食简单，也是以之为乐。他们都是 洞察人生的智者。
当然，我们还可以反向联想。如揭露官僚作风，互相推 诿、扯皮，把原本简单不过的事情无端复杂化了。
现实生活中，人们常常把简单问题复杂化， 复杂问题简单化，殊不知，简单中蕴含着复杂， 复杂中也有简单，二者是辩证的。重视复杂， 复杂就变成了简单；忽视简单，简单就变成了 复杂。所以我们在做事时既要重视复杂，也要 重视简单，这样才会走向成功。
自然界中，一星一月，一虫一鸟，一草一木， 看似简单，却蕴含着无穷的奥秘。需要我们慎 重对待。学习和生活中，也有许多看似简单， 容易被人们忽视的问题。有的忽略了也许无关 大局，但有的忽略了就可能引起严重的后果。
巧妙地思维。田忌只是将马的出场顺序简单 的调换一下，便轻而易举地成为赢家。由此 可见，简单是何等重要。
优秀范文： 简单生活
“只有在树叶掉光的冬日，才可以躺在柔柔软软的
落叶上，才可以看到一整片的蓝天和白云，才可以有一 个没有知了，小虫吵闹的下午，晒晒太阳，做一个白日 梦。”
这是《听几米唱歌》里的一个段落。画里躺在落叶
8.一种现代审美。如～人生、～法则。 9.基本的，不能缩小或减少的。如～再生产、～分 吗组、～物质等。 10.动词。有简化的意思。如，把问题～一点。有简化 的意思。如，把问题～一点。
【母题解说】 简单虽然表面上简单，但蕴含的道理深刻，
需要你准确阐释。现代社会中，很多人往往会 忽视简单的事物，认为简单就是单纯而不屑一 顾。其实，这是认识上的一种误区，有很多时 候恰恰是简单让我们悟出了自身的价值，迸发 出许多睿智的见解，使我们的心灵受到深刻的 洗礼，让我们领略人生的无限精彩。简单不是 糊涂，而是智慧；简单不是平庸，而是深邃。 简单就是一本泛着墨香的书，一杯冒着热气的 绿茶，一把缓缓摇摆的躺椅，一个温馨的家， 一种心灵上的宁静与满足！
1. [simple;sketchy]∶不复杂;头绪少 。简单的操作 2. [casual;oversimplified]∶草率;不细致 。简单从事 3. [commonplace;ordinary]∶平凡
能做到这个程度,真是不简单
详细解释 1. 单纯；不复杂。 茅盾 《宿莽·陀螺》四：“她的那间屋子多么精致，