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初中英语写作-PPT课件
初中英语写作-PPT课件
初中英语写作
❖ 一、句子的写作（简单句类 型）
❖ 二、句子的写作（简单句和 复合句）
❖ 三、段落的写作：主题与拓 展
❖ 四、文章的结构：开头、主 体和结尾
❖ 五、应用文：书信、电子邮 件
❖ 六、应用文：发言稿、通知
❖ 七、记叙文：写人、叙事 ❖ 八、说明文：介绍人物、事
物的说明文 ❖ 九、议论文 ❖ 十、图表、图画作文 ❖ 十一、提示性作文 ❖ 十二、（半）开放式作文 ❖ 十三、体验中考高分写作
张老师是我遇到的最仁慈的老师。 Mr. Zhang is the most merciful teacher that I have ever seen.
（3）Reading is good for our mind. 读书对我们的心智有益。 做早操对我们有好处。
Doing morning exercise is good for our health. （4）Nothing is difficult to do as long as you want to have a try. 只要
（2）I, him, my, considered, friend, best. I considered him my best friend.
（3）has, homework, he, not, done, his. He has not done his homework.
（4）to, work, finish, we, difficult, the, it, found. We found it difficult to finish the work.
playing basketball, visiting the
初中英语写作
❖ 一、句子的写作（简单句类 型）
❖ 二、句子的写作（简单句和 复合句）
❖ 三、段落的写作：主题与拓 展
❖ 四、文章的结构：开头、主 体和结尾
❖ 五、应用文：书信、电子邮 件
❖ 六、应用文：发言稿、通知
❖ 七、记叙文：写人、叙事 ❖ 八、说明文：介绍人物、事
物的说明文 ❖ 九、议论文 ❖ 十、图表、图画作文 ❖ 十一、提示性作文 ❖ 十二、（半）开放式作文 ❖ 十三、体验中考高分写作
张老师是我遇到的最仁慈的老师。 Mr. Zhang is the most merciful teacher that I have ever seen.
（3）Reading is good for our mind. 读书对我们的心智有益。 做早操对我们有好处。
Doing morning exercise is good for our health. （4）Nothing is difficult to do as long as you want to have a try. 只要
（2）I, him, my, considered, friend, best. I considered him my best friend.
（3）has, homework, he, not, done, his. He has not done his homework.
（4）to, work, finish, we, difficult, the, it, found. We found it difficult to finish the work.
playing basketball, visiting the
初中英语作文写作技巧PPT优秀课件
5．含蓄的内容能加以解说。语句的含 蓄，一 是作者 为了表 达的需 要或某 种目的 ，故意 不直接 表达想 表达的 内容， 而把它 隐含在 字里行 间；一 是运用 了象征 、双关 等修辞 格，采 用婉曲 的手法 来表达 自己的 思想、 观点、 看法。 对此类 材料， 不仅要 理解它 字面的 含意， 而且要 深入挖 掘其 所隐含 的信息 ，即能 用简洁 明白的 语言解 说材料 深层的 内涵。
初中英语作文写作技巧PPT优秀课件
初中英语作文写作技巧PPT优秀课件
检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：
(1) 格式是否有错。 (2) 拼写有无错误。 (3) 语言是否用错。 (4) 时态、语态错误。 (5) 标点错误。 (6) 人称是否用错。
初中英语作文写作技巧PPT优秀课件
初中英语作文写作技巧PPT优秀课件
3.表转折对比关系的：However，but Although+clause( 从句)，In spite of+n/doing，On the one
hand…，On the other hand… Some…，while others… 4.表因果关系的：Because，As，So，Thus，Therefore，As
a result 5.表换一种方式表达：In other words 6.表进行举例说明：For example，句子；For instance，句子；
such as+n/doing 7.表陈述事实：In fact 8.表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion 9.表总结：In short，In a word，In conclusion，In summary
一 、认真审题，确定时态，人称，题材格式
初中英语作文教学ppt课件
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Ex.2. 请写一篇“寻物启示” 提示: 你丢了一辆自行车和一个书包.请拾到者和王海联系,或请到一年二班.谢谢!
Lost A black bike with a school bag was lost yesterday. People who has found it please ring the number 894325. Wang Hai .Or you can come to Class Two , Grade One.
A Note of Asking for Leave December 15th, 2010
Dear Miss ____, ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________
And I love them too. My hobby is playing …and enjoying…, I like making friends with others. Would you like to
make f作原则： 使用自己熟悉的句型，避免汉语式英语
But ……
———————————————
————————————————
Yours,
Li Ming
4 : Write a diary
Friday, December 28th , 2010 Sunny I’m so glad to see my teachers and friend
again.。 ……_____________________________________ _________________________________________ ____________________________
Ex.2. 请写一篇“寻物启示” 提示: 你丢了一辆自行车和一个书包.请拾到者和王海联系,或请到一年二班.谢谢!
Lost A black bike with a school bag was lost yesterday. People who has found it please ring the number 894325. Wang Hai .Or you can come to Class Two , Grade One.
A Note of Asking for Leave December 15th, 2010
Dear Miss ____, ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________
And I love them too. My hobby is playing …and enjoying…, I like making friends with others. Would you like to
make f作原则： 使用自己熟悉的句型，避免汉语式英语
But ……
———————————————
————————————————
Yours,
Li Ming
4 : Write a diary
Friday, December 28th , 2010 Sunny I’m so glad to see my teachers and friend
again.。 ……_____________________________________ _________________________________________ ____________________________
初中英语作文写作课(精编版) PPT课件(共17张)
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
Outline (提纲)
Ending Linking words (连接词)
Outline Retell (提纲)
Beginning
Different people have different ideas about …. First of all learn… from listen to…, enjoy … …also…
Enfferent students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
初中英语作文讲评课件(PPT18张)
injured. When we do sports, do not get ourselves injured. 3. School hallways is always not wide, so don't crowded
when you up and down stairs. School hallways are always not wide enough, so don't
In short, follow what you learnt at school. You can be safe and you can also help save others.
书面表达
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is very important to us students.
1.When we do sports, don't get ourselves injured. 2.School hallways are too narrow, so don't crowd
when we go upstairs or downstairs. 3.Don't quarrel or fight with classmates. 4.Keep clear of fires and don't play with fire. 5.Don't eat junk food.
____________________________________________________人____称______：____第____一______人____称____w____e__，______I________
when you up and down stairs. School hallways are always not wide enough, so don't
In short, follow what you learnt at school. You can be safe and you can also help save others.
书面表达
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is very important to us students.
1.When we do sports, don't get ourselves injured. 2.School hallways are too narrow, so don't crowd
when we go upstairs or downstairs. 3.Don't quarrel or fight with classmates. 4.Keep clear of fires and don't play with fire. 5.Don't eat junk food.
____________________________________________________人____称______：____第____一______人____称____w____e__，______I________
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Compare (比较)
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
The beginning
三段式 The body ----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。【注意使用 （总-分 支持句 连接词】 -总）
The ending
结论句----对全文的总结和概括。 【结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】
Writing skills—seven steps
审清题意 誊写规范
(复述)
Key sentence1
Topic
On the Internet
Body
正文
Most students…
Besides make…more convenient
Supporting sentences Key sentence2
中考英语写作指导优秀课件(共22张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Stage 1: 审 体裁________________ 时态________________ 人称________________
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。 （1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
• Homework : • 1. Correct the composition on the handout. • 2. Finish the composition according to the mind map.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生 在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏 投稿。 （1）在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女 孩买了面包和牛奶。 （2）女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他 看上去又冷又饿。 （3）女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。 （4）乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。 （5）你很感动…… 参考词汇：乞丐 beggar 感动 be moved 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 On a cold morning, while I was…
初中英语作文PPT课件(28张)
六、一致性错误
所谓不一致不仅指主谓不一致，它还包括数的 不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。
例1：Once one have money， he can do what he want to do. 人一旦有了钱，他就能想干 什么就干什么。
析：one 是第三人称单数，因此本句的 have 应改为 has。同理，want 应改为 wants。
四、时态的误用
例：She like it very much and reads it to the class. 她很喜欢它 并且读给同学们听。
析：在书面表达中，应根据上 下文或时间状语来确定动词的时态。
▪ 正：She liked it very much and read it to the class.
writing
书面表达六步法
审
抄
抓
书面
表达
改
扩
连
Writing points
一.审题 (体裁 结构 格式 内容 人称 时态） 二.抓要点 三.扩展句子 四.连句成文 （时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应） 五.查错改错 六.眷写
“中小学生健康 ”为话题写一篇短文 【要求】
(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。 ② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
例：There are many ways to know the society. For example， by TV radio， newspaper and so on. 有许多 方式来了解这个社会，例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。
析：本句后半部分 For example， by TV， radio， newspaper and so on 不是一个完整的句子，仅仅是一些 不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。 正：There are many ways to know the society， for example， by TV， radio， and newspaper and so on.
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ter ,Jack went to a hotel in another city.The room was different.The manager is describing the room to him.
Work in groups of four. Listen and mark the position of the things in Jack’s room.
right-hand left-hand opposite next to corner beside above right left on
Now Jack, on the __r_ig_h_t___ of the door, you’ll find a bed with _a__s_m_a_l_l _ta_b_l_e_b_e_s_i_d_eit. __O_p_p_o_s_i_te__ the bed, there’s a fridge. In the _ri_g_h_t_-h_a_n__d_c_o_r_n_e_r_ of the room, there’s an armchair with a table _b_e_s_i_d_e__ it. __O_n__ the table, there’s _a_p_h__o_n_e_____. On the _l_e_ft_____ of the door, there’s a _c_u_p_b_o__a_rd_. __N_e_x_t_t_o___ the cupboard, you’ll find t_h_e__b_a_th_r_o_o_m. In the _le_f_t_-h_a_n_d__c_o_r_n_e_r of the room, you’ll find _a_T_V__s_e_t___, and there’s a window _a_b_o__v_e____ it. That’s all, Jack. Any questions?
Work in pairs. Look at the picture and complete the sentences.
Jack
the hotel manager
the hotel room
right-hand left-hand opposite next to corner beside above right left on
2. 批改方法可多样化----批改要以 内容为重点，以结构为支撑
1）教师包办传统的批改方式 2）堂上面批 3）学生互相批改的方式 4）“群批”（即多人批改同一篇作文）
5）“抽批”就是把学生分成几个小 组，从每组中选取几份有代表性的 作文进行批改。
作文批改后的 处理办法
1.批改作业中加评语
2.教师改完后让学生把改后的作 文抄一遍，背范文或好句
Writing 教学设计
天荣中学 郑辅雯
教材分析：本单元的写作是复 习方位词，并运用方位词来描 述房间物品的位置。
Jack is blind and he went to a hotel in a city .The hotel manager is describing the hotel room to him.
----对英语写作有畏惧心理
----以汉语思维造词句和谋篇布局，缺乏连贯性，语法错误多
----不重视教师的批改
2、教师方面
----对英语写作不太重视，指导时间少 ----训练方法不当 ----批改学生作文时只注重语言的准确性
三、初中英语写作教学策略
1.训练指导得法
要从学生“学”的角度来设 计教学活动
A plan of my bedroom
computer armchair
desk
chair
light airconditioner
bed
cupboard
பைடு நூலகம்
Dear Tony, I moved to a new house last week. Now I would like to tell you something about my bedroom.
初中英语写作辅导
一、写作教学的重要性
新《课程标准》强调：“激发和培养学 生的学习兴趣，帮助学生树立学英语的 自信心，养成良好的习惯和形成有效的 学习策略，发展学生自主学习的能力和 合作能力。”
写作能力是认识能力、思考能力 和文字运用能力的综合反映
二、当前初中英语写作教学存在 的两个问题
1、学生方面：
3.张贴学生的优秀范文或印发 给学生互相学习
4.让学生坚持写作并给予鼓励， 教师多面批
大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流
可以互相讨论下，但要小声点
1、坚持每单元都有至少一篇写作， 并尽量用一课时完成
创造性使用课本
指导15分钟 限时15分钟内完成作文 10分钟点评
2、精心设计有趣的教学活动， 环环相扣，提高学生的兴趣
3、指导到位
词---句---篇+过渡词+经典句式
4、多选用堂上面批和传统的作 业中批改的方法
5、讲评注意方法
书法，内容，结构，首尾，语法
6、改完后让学生把改后的抄一 遍，背范文或好句
7、张贴学生的优秀范文或印发 给学生互相学习
8、每周坚持面批作文（除单元 写作外的）并进行登记，适度 给予表扬
Unit 3&Unit 4
above below on the left of
over
on
under
on the right of
behind in front of
opposite in
in the left-hand corner of
in the right-hand corner of
What is the room like?
What is the room like?
wardrobe
bookshelf
armchair
air-conditioner
C. Draw a plan（平面图） of your
bedroom. Include at least eight items of furniture. Then, under the plan, write a short letter to your penfriend. Describe your bedroom to him or her clearly.
Work in groups of four. Listen and mark the position of the things in Jack’s room.
right-hand left-hand opposite next to corner beside above right left on
Now Jack, on the __r_ig_h_t___ of the door, you’ll find a bed with _a__s_m_a_l_l _ta_b_l_e_b_e_s_i_d_eit. __O_p_p_o_s_i_te__ the bed, there’s a fridge. In the _ri_g_h_t_-h_a_n__d_c_o_r_n_e_r_ of the room, there’s an armchair with a table _b_e_s_i_d_e__ it. __O_n__ the table, there’s _a_p_h__o_n_e_____. On the _l_e_ft_____ of the door, there’s a _c_u_p_b_o__a_rd_. __N_e_x_t_t_o___ the cupboard, you’ll find t_h_e__b_a_th_r_o_o_m. In the _le_f_t_-h_a_n_d__c_o_r_n_e_r of the room, you’ll find _a_T_V__s_e_t___, and there’s a window _a_b_o__v_e____ it. That’s all, Jack. Any questions?
Work in pairs. Look at the picture and complete the sentences.
Jack
the hotel manager
the hotel room
right-hand left-hand opposite next to corner beside above right left on
2. 批改方法可多样化----批改要以 内容为重点，以结构为支撑
1）教师包办传统的批改方式 2）堂上面批 3）学生互相批改的方式 4）“群批”（即多人批改同一篇作文）
5）“抽批”就是把学生分成几个小 组，从每组中选取几份有代表性的 作文进行批改。
作文批改后的 处理办法
1.批改作业中加评语
2.教师改完后让学生把改后的作 文抄一遍，背范文或好句
Writing 教学设计
天荣中学 郑辅雯
教材分析：本单元的写作是复 习方位词，并运用方位词来描 述房间物品的位置。
Jack is blind and he went to a hotel in a city .The hotel manager is describing the hotel room to him.
----对英语写作有畏惧心理
----以汉语思维造词句和谋篇布局，缺乏连贯性，语法错误多
----不重视教师的批改
2、教师方面
----对英语写作不太重视，指导时间少 ----训练方法不当 ----批改学生作文时只注重语言的准确性
三、初中英语写作教学策略
1.训练指导得法
要从学生“学”的角度来设 计教学活动
A plan of my bedroom
computer armchair
desk
chair
light airconditioner
bed
cupboard
பைடு நூலகம்
Dear Tony, I moved to a new house last week. Now I would like to tell you something about my bedroom.
初中英语写作辅导
一、写作教学的重要性
新《课程标准》强调：“激发和培养学 生的学习兴趣，帮助学生树立学英语的 自信心，养成良好的习惯和形成有效的 学习策略，发展学生自主学习的能力和 合作能力。”
写作能力是认识能力、思考能力 和文字运用能力的综合反映
二、当前初中英语写作教学存在 的两个问题
1、学生方面：
3.张贴学生的优秀范文或印发 给学生互相学习
4.让学生坚持写作并给予鼓励， 教师多面批
大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流
可以互相讨论下，但要小声点
1、坚持每单元都有至少一篇写作， 并尽量用一课时完成
创造性使用课本
指导15分钟 限时15分钟内完成作文 10分钟点评
2、精心设计有趣的教学活动， 环环相扣，提高学生的兴趣
3、指导到位
词---句---篇+过渡词+经典句式
4、多选用堂上面批和传统的作 业中批改的方法
5、讲评注意方法
书法，内容，结构，首尾，语法
6、改完后让学生把改后的抄一 遍，背范文或好句
7、张贴学生的优秀范文或印发 给学生互相学习
8、每周坚持面批作文（除单元 写作外的）并进行登记，适度 给予表扬
Unit 3&Unit 4
above below on the left of
over
on
under
on the right of
behind in front of
opposite in
in the left-hand corner of
in the right-hand corner of
What is the room like?
What is the room like?
wardrobe
bookshelf
armchair
air-conditioner
C. Draw a plan（平面图） of your
bedroom. Include at least eight items of furniture. Then, under the plan, write a short letter to your penfriend. Describe your bedroom to him or her clearly.