中考英语写作PPT课件
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中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
中考英语写作专题PPT课件-兴趣爱好专题 (20张)
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1.新闻特 写则是 用形象 的事实 说话。 它常常 抓住事 物有特 征的一 面进行 描述， 比消息 更细腻 、更生 动、更 形象。
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2.由于新 闻特写 的画面 感特别 强，因 此常给 读者以 身临其 境的感 受。
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3.“花香蝶自来，题好一半文”，一篇文 章有一 个好的 标题， 就像一 个人有 一双明 亮有神 的眼睛 一样， 留给别 人的是 将是十 分美好 而深刻 的印象 ，同时 也是文 学修养 ，语言 功底， 思想魅 力的最 直接的 流露， 从考试 的角度 来说， 更是作 文质量 高底的 一杆标 尺。
➢I spend most of the free time onfferent people have different hobbies. Some paint pictures, sing pop songs, enjoy Beijing Opera or collect stamps; others plant flowers, go fishing, or spend their time on sports. 不同的人有不同的爱好。有人喜欢画画，喜欢 唱流行歌曲，喜欢京剧或喜欢集邮；还有一些人喜 欢种花，钓鱼，或者花时间运动。
How Do Your Parents Like Your Hobbies ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________
中考英语写作指导I love…… 指导PPT课件(30PPT)
always ready to help me . I love my best friend because she is very considerate and always ready to help me. I love my best friend who is very considerate and always ready to help me.
kind nice outgoing humorous ...
1.Sentences about his/her appearance.(2)幻灯片
6
2.Sentences about his/her personality.(2)幻灯片 7
3.Sentences about his/her occupation.(2)幻灯片 8
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4.对于话题作文的拟题我们一定要多 一些有 针对性 的训练 ，掌握 一定的 技巧， 达到需 要应用 时信手 拈来， 出语不 俗的效 果，感 动自己 ，征服 读者。
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5.这些根据材料提供的话题，进一步 挖深、 提炼出 来的题 目，源 源源于 材料而 高于材 料，加 进去个 体的感 悟与理 解，充 满了理 性的光 辉，于 平凡中 见奇倔 ，也是 很多喜 欢定议 论文的 同学拟 题一种 好方法 ，很有 思想深 度。
When Liu Qian was 7 years old, he fell in love with magic. He did not become a professional magician until he graduated from the university. No one knows that he learns by himself. He works so hard that he even does not have time to relax. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on streets to improve himself. As we know, it is the biggest challenge for a magician.
kind nice outgoing humorous ...
1.Sentences about his/her appearance.(2)幻灯片
6
2.Sentences about his/her personality.(2)幻灯片 7
3.Sentences about his/her occupation.(2)幻灯片 8
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4.对于话题作文的拟题我们一定要多 一些有 针对性 的训练 ，掌握 一定的 技巧， 达到需 要应用 时信手 拈来， 出语不 俗的效 果，感 动自己 ，征服 读者。
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5.这些根据材料提供的话题，进一步 挖深、 提炼出 来的题 目，源 源源于 材料而 高于材 料，加 进去个 体的感 悟与理 解，充 满了理 性的光 辉，于 平凡中 见奇倔 ，也是 很多喜 欢定议 论文的 同学拟 题一种 好方法 ，很有 思想深 度。
When Liu Qian was 7 years old, he fell in love with magic. He did not become a professional magician until he graduated from the university. No one knows that he learns by himself. He works so hard that he even does not have time to relax. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on streets to improve himself. As we know, it is the biggest challenge for a magician.
英语中考人教版作文课件节日(11页PPT)
Feelings about the activities :
happy / have a great time/ excited
I received some flowers from my daughter on Mother’s Day, which made me excited. I lost myself in receiving some flowers on Mother’s Day. It’s really exciting to receive some flowers on Mother’s Day.
国际劳动妇女节 Women’s Day
教师节
Teachers’ Day
国际劳动节 May Day
国际儿童节 Children’s Day
国庆节
National Day
春节 The Spring Festival 母亲节 Mother’s Day 中秋节 The Mid-autumn Festival 圣诞节 Christmas Day 愚人节 April Fool’s Day
The Spring Festival
Children’s Day
The Lantern Festival
The Mid-autumn Festival
The Dragon Boat Festival
How many festivals do you know?
元旦
New Year’s Day
April Fool’s Day falls on April 1st April Fool’s Day comes on April 1st
April Fool’s Day is on April 1st
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
初中英语中考书面表达复习PPT优秀课件
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
【高分揭秘】 1. 习作既有对老师外貌的描写，也给出了喜欢
老师的三个原因，符合写作任务的内容要 求。 2. 习作句式丰富，既有简单句，也有复杂一些 的定语从句。习作中还用了admire, expect, remodel等 较高级的词汇，给习作增色不少。
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
【素材积累】 1. 词汇 外 貌 ： good-looking, pretty, slim, strong, medium build 性格、品质：outgoing, shy, active, friendly, honest, quiet, clever, smart 兴趣爱好：favorite, prefer, enjoy, be interested in, be fond of, show / have a talent for 其他：admire, regard ... as ..., role model
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4．抽象的内容能加以阐发。所谓“抽 象”，是 与“具 体”相 对而言 ，抽象 的也就 是概括 的。所 谓“阐 发”就 是化抽 象、概 括为具 体。阐 发常见 的有两 种形式 ：一是 举出实 例，一 是分析 因果。
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5．含蓄的内容能加以解说。语句的含 蓄，一 是作者 为了表 达的需 要或某 种目的 ，故意 不直接 表达想 表达的 内容， 而把它 隐含在 字里行 间；一 是运用 了象征 、双关 等修辞 格，采 用婉曲 的手法 来表达 自己的 思想、 观点、 看法。 对此类 材料， 不仅要 理解它 字面的 含意， 而且要 深入挖 掘其 所隐含 的信息 ，即能 用简洁 明白的 语言解 说材料 深层的 内涵。
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
【高分揭秘】 1. 习作既有对老师外貌的描写，也给出了喜欢
老师的三个原因，符合写作任务的内容要 求。 2. 习作句式丰富，既有简单句，也有复杂一些 的定语从句。习作中还用了admire, expect, remodel等 较高级的词汇，给习作增色不少。
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
【素材积累】 1. 词汇 外 貌 ： good-looking, pretty, slim, strong, medium build 性格、品质：outgoing, shy, active, friendly, honest, quiet, clever, smart 兴趣爱好：favorite, prefer, enjoy, be interested in, be fond of, show / have a talent for 其他：admire, regard ... as ..., role model
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4．抽象的内容能加以阐发。所谓“抽 象”，是 与“具 体”相 对而言 ，抽象 的也就 是概括 的。所 谓“阐 发”就 是化抽 象、概 括为具 体。阐 发常见 的有两 种形式 ：一是 举出实 例，一 是分析 因果。
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5．含蓄的内容能加以解说。语句的含 蓄，一 是作者 为了表 达的需 要或某 种目的 ，故意 不直接 表达想 表达的 内容， 而把它 隐含在 字里行 间；一 是运用 了象征 、双关 等修辞 格，采 用婉曲 的手法 来表达 自己的 思想、 观点、 看法。 对此类 材料， 不仅要 理解它 字面的 含意， 而且要 深入挖 掘其 所隐含 的信息 ，即能 用简洁 明白的 语言解 说材料 深层的 内涵。
2023年中考英语写作讲评课件(24张PPT)
• 严以律己，自尊自立 be strict with yourself, be a confident and independent person
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
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河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
02
河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
第七步: 誊
誊文章，规范整洁
书 写 注 意 事 项： 1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。 2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、 或用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的 感觉 3、一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线 划掉即可。
eg: He can speker speak English very well.
Ending
Beginning
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
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主要特点
记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明
能力要求
主要问题
要点不全 线索不清
原因：步骤不对
书面表达 六步法
书面表达六步法
审抄抓书面来自表达改扩
连
书面表达六步法
一、审题
确定基本要素:5W1H 何时何地何人为 何如何做了何事
书面表达六步法
二、抓要点 确定主要行为
What happened?
书面表达六步法
③He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.
④The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.
About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
Li Hua
年轻妇女
颜色：黄
AC864
写在最后
成功的基础在于好的学习习惯
The foundation of success lies in good habits
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结束语
当你尽了自己的最大努力时，失败也是伟大的， 所以不要放弃，坚持就是正确的。
When You Do Your Best, Failure Is Great, So Don'T Give Up, Stick To The End 演讲人：XXXXXX 时 间：XX年XX月XX日
书面表达经典示例
假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清 晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一 份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写 出报告。 1、目击者应该准确报告事实； 2、词数100左右； 3、结尾已为你写好。
________________________________________ _ About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
Li Hua
附图
1
2
3
4
At 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000, I saw a woman driving a car hit the man in the street.
第二步 抓要点
一幅图，一要点 抓要点，配动词
时态直达 语态到位 介/副词紧随
第三步 扩展成句
把要点变成完整 的句子。 注意使用介/副词
第四步 连句成文
词与词搭配 句与句相连 增加细节 呼应首尾
第五步 查错改错
主谓一致吗？ 时态正确吗？ 时态正确吗？
有“半截话”吗？
第六步 誊写
卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！
作业选评
要改进吗？ 为什么？
①At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. ②I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.
三、扩展成句 形成基本语义单位 Who did what?
书面表达六步法
四、连句成文
时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应
书面表达六步法
五、查错改错
要尽量剔除错误
书面表达六步法
六、誊写
卷面不工整扣5分
课堂练习
请用六步法 写一篇短文
第一步 审题
认真读题然后找出
五个 “W”一个 “H”
把答案写在题中相应的位置
⑤I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didn't. ⑥Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.
⑦Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. ⑧After that, I went over to check out the old man.
记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明
能力要求
主要问题
要点不全 线索不清
原因：步骤不对
书面表达 六步法
书面表达六步法
审抄抓书面来自表达改扩
连
书面表达六步法
一、审题
确定基本要素:5W1H 何时何地何人为 何如何做了何事
书面表达六步法
二、抓要点 确定主要行为
What happened?
书面表达六步法
③He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.
④The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.
About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
Li Hua
年轻妇女
颜色：黄
AC864
写在最后
成功的基础在于好的学习习惯
The foundation of success lies in good habits
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结束语
当你尽了自己的最大努力时，失败也是伟大的， 所以不要放弃，坚持就是正确的。
When You Do Your Best, Failure Is Great, So Don'T Give Up, Stick To The End 演讲人：XXXXXX 时 间：XX年XX月XX日
书面表达经典示例
假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清 晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一 份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写 出报告。 1、目击者应该准确报告事实； 2、词数100左右； 3、结尾已为你写好。
________________________________________ _ About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
Li Hua
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At 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000, I saw a woman driving a car hit the man in the street.
第二步 抓要点
一幅图，一要点 抓要点，配动词
时态直达 语态到位 介/副词紧随
第三步 扩展成句
把要点变成完整 的句子。 注意使用介/副词
第四步 连句成文
词与词搭配 句与句相连 增加细节 呼应首尾
第五步 查错改错
主谓一致吗？ 时态正确吗？ 时态正确吗？
有“半截话”吗？
第六步 誊写
卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！
作业选评
要改进吗？ 为什么？
①At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. ②I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.
三、扩展成句 形成基本语义单位 Who did what?
书面表达六步法
四、连句成文
时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应
书面表达六步法
五、查错改错
要尽量剔除错误
书面表达六步法
六、誊写
卷面不工整扣5分
课堂练习
请用六步法 写一篇短文
第一步 审题
认真读题然后找出
五个 “W”一个 “H”
把答案写在题中相应的位置
⑤I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didn't. ⑥Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.
⑦Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. ⑧After that, I went over to check out the old man.