初中英语写作PPT课件.ppt
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初中英语书面表达 PPT课件 图文
6.表示对比：Instead,not…but 7.表示举例：for example/instance,such as 8.表示顺序：to begin with,first(of all),second,since
then,from then on,finally,in the end 9.表示强调：what's more,in fact,besides,actually 10.表示总结：all in all,altogether,in a word
Step 1: 审
亚洲区
Work
Stay at Home
Travel
Visiting Friends or Parents
Step 2: 列
根据所划关键词及图表特点，用简单的句子 列出文章的要点。
※ 调查报告 ※ 倡议假日休闲
亚洲区
Stay at Home Work
Visiting Friends
Step 5: 美
选好词句，美化文章
Step 5: 美
l How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. • According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.While,Some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. Besides,some people visit friends or parents to make themselves relaxed. However, A few people have to work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
初中英语作文写作课(精编版) PPT课件(共17张)
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
Outline (提纲)
Ending Linking words (连接词)
Outline Retell (提纲)
Beginning
Different people have different ideas about …. First of all learn… from listen to…, enjoy … …also…
Enfferent students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
初中英语作文范文20篇ppt课件
The Spring Festival The Spring Festival comes in winter. It is the most important traditional festival in China. People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives. Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn't go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
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No. 2
亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求：1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及 学习感悟；2.词数80左右。
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【优秀满分范文】
My English Study How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study. When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn't master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English. In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
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No. 2
亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求：1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及 学习感悟；2.词数80左右。
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【优秀满分范文】
My English Study How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study. When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn't master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English. In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
初中英语作文10篇,带翻译。 ppt课件(推荐)
• 10.乡村游记-a trip to the country
i
went to the countryside to spend my
summer holidays this year. i liked green
plants, clear rivers lovely amimals there.i
• 8.乡村游记-a trip to the country
i went
to the countryside to spend my summer
holidays this year. i liked green plants,
clear rivers lovely amimals there.i
there. i am used to getting up early in the
morning, breathing the fresh air,listening to
the birds singing, enjoying the green trees,
red flowers the river. i like fishing with my
example,last summer i learned to swim.this summer i might study
computers or english.summer vacation flies by fast,so it's important to
do as as you can.
色，而且喜欢那里的人。我帮他们干农活， 帮助邻家的孩子复习功课。孩子们对英语 很感兴趣，他们在读、写方面很好，但听、 说不好。我帮助他们提高听、说能力，他 们的父母高度赞扬了我。我意识到农村确 实需要知识。
2023年中考英语写作讲评课件(24张PPT)
• 严以律己，自尊自立 be strict with yourself, be a confident and independent person
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
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河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
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河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
初中英语作文 PPT课件 图文
谢谢！ 学妹给我打电话，说她又换工作了，这次是销售。电话里，她絮絮叨叨说着一年多来工作上的不如意，她说工作一点都不开心，找不到半点成就感。 末了，她问我：学姐，为什么想 找一份 自己热 爱的工 作这么 难呢？ 我问她上一份工作干了多久，她 说不到 三个月 ，做的 还是行 政助理 的工作 ，工作 内容枯 燥乏味 不说， 还特别 容易得 罪人， 实在不 是自己 的理想 型。 我又问了她前几份工作辞职的原 因，结 果都是 大同小 异，不 是因为 工作乏 味，就 是同事 不好相 处，再 者就是 薪水太 低，发 展前景 堪忧。 粗略估计，这姑娘毕业不到一年 ，工作 却已经 换了四 五份， 还跨了 三个行 业。 但即使如此频繁的跳槽，她也仍 然没有 找不到 自己满 意的工 作。 2 我问她，心目中理想型的工作是 什么样 子的。 她说， 姐，你 知道苏 明玉吗 ？就是 《都挺 好》电 视剧里 的女老 大，我 就喜欢 她样子 的工作 ，有挑 战有成 就感， 有钱有 权，生 活自由 ，如果 给我那 样的工 作，我 会投入 我全部 的热情 。 听她说完，我尴尬的笑了笑。 其实每一个人都向往这样的成功 ，但这 姑娘却 本末倒 置了， 并不是 有了钱 有了权 有了成 就以后 才全力 以赴的 工作， 而是全 力以赴 工作， 投入了 自己的 全部以 后，才 有了地 位名望 钱财。 你要先投入，才会有收获，当你 真正投 入做一 件事后 ，会明 白两件 事：首 先你会 明白， 把一件 事认认 真真做 好，所 获得的 收益远 大于同 时做很 多事； 你会明白，有人风风火火做各种 事仍未 有回报 ，是因 为他们 从未投 入过。 从“做 了”到 “做” ，正如 “知道 ”到“ 懂得” 的距离 。 3 之前单位有一个姑娘，工作特别 拼命， 只要说 起她的 名字， 大家都 会赞不 绝口： 这姑娘 工作拼 命的程 度，连 男人们
初中英语作文PPT课件(28张)
六、一致性错误
所谓不一致不仅指主谓不一致，它还包括数的 不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。
例1：Once one have money， he can do what he want to do. 人一旦有了钱，他就能想干 什么就干什么。
析：one 是第三人称单数，因此本句的 have 应改为 has。同理，want 应改为 wants。
四、时态的误用
例：She like it very much and reads it to the class. 她很喜欢它 并且读给同学们听。
析：在书面表达中，应根据上 下文或时间状语来确定动词的时态。
▪ 正：She liked it very much and read it to the class.
writing
书面表达六步法
审
抄
抓
书面
表达
改
扩
连
Writing points
一.审题 (体裁 结构 格式 内容 人称 时态） 二.抓要点 三.扩展句子 四.连句成文 （时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应） 五.查错改错 六.眷写
“中小学生健康 ”为话题写一篇短文 【要求】
(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。 ② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
例：There are many ways to know the society. For example， by TV radio， newspaper and so on. 有许多 方式来了解这个社会，例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。
析：本句后半部分 For example， by TV， radio， newspaper and so on 不是一个完整的句子，仅仅是一些 不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。 正：There are many ways to know the society， for example， by TV， radio， and newspaper and so on.
初中英语写作辅导省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖PPT课件
职。
She works part time in a department store three afternoons a week. 在我十岁那年我和家人经历了一次奇妙旅 行。
I took a fantastic trip with my family when I was ten years old.
thus, therefore 5、强调：really, indeed, surely 6、其它插入语：worse still/what’s worse, after
all, if possible,
第8页
培养英语思维---词搭配
• 大雨 • 大桥 • 大楼 • 大错 • 大写 • 大病 • 大地震
heavy rain long bridge
high rise/large building big/terrible/serious mistake
capital letter
serious illness major earthquake
第9页
句表示
注意汉英差异： 一、状语 e.g. 她一周有三个下午在一家百货企业做兼
e.g. Yesterday I did my homework. It takes me
three hours.
took
His father thought he is good at math. was
She started her new job last week. She
liked it. likes
第11页
三、主语 e.g. 活到老，学到老。 One is never too old to learn. 极难说谁对谁错。 It’s hard to tell who is right and who is wrong. 昨天找到了丢失钢笔。 The lost pen was found yesterday. 上饭店吃饭很贵。 It’s expensive to eat out. 乘飞机旅行更舒适、便捷。 Travelling by plane is faster and more convenient.
She works part time in a department store three afternoons a week. 在我十岁那年我和家人经历了一次奇妙旅 行。
I took a fantastic trip with my family when I was ten years old.
thus, therefore 5、强调：really, indeed, surely 6、其它插入语：worse still/what’s worse, after
all, if possible,
第8页
培养英语思维---词搭配
• 大雨 • 大桥 • 大楼 • 大错 • 大写 • 大病 • 大地震
heavy rain long bridge
high rise/large building big/terrible/serious mistake
capital letter
serious illness major earthquake
第9页
句表示
注意汉英差异： 一、状语 e.g. 她一周有三个下午在一家百货企业做兼
e.g. Yesterday I did my homework. It takes me
three hours.
took
His father thought he is good at math. was
She started her new job last week. She
liked it. likes
第11页
三、主语 e.g. 活到老，学到老。 One is never too old to learn. 极难说谁对谁错。 It’s hard to tell who is right and who is wrong. 昨天找到了丢失钢笔。 The lost pen was found yesterday. 上饭店吃饭很贵。 It’s expensive to eat out. 乘飞机旅行更舒适、便捷。 Travelling by plane is faster and more convenient.
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One possible version
How to get on well with others ❖ As we know, students should learn to get on well with
❖ 6、案例分析
例题：你班进行了一次综合实践活动。通过活动， 同学们收获很大，尤其是李华同学进步最快。请 你根据表格内容写一篇关于李华的短文。词数80 个左右。
过去的表现 经常与别人吵架 乱扔垃圾 沉溺于电脑游戏
现在的表现 与别人相处融洽 爱护环境 积极参加各种活动
中考英语书面表达综述
❖ 参考作文对比，注意划线部分。
初中英语写作
初中英语写作
❖ 一、句子的写作（简单句类 型）
❖ 二、句子的写作（简单句和 复合句）
❖ 三、段落的写作：主题与拓 展
❖ 四、文章的结构：开头、主 体和结尾
❖ 五、应用文：书信、电子邮 件
❖ 六、应用文：发言稿、通知
❖ 七、记叙文：写人、叙事 ❖ 八、说明文：介绍人物、事
物的说明文 ❖ 九、议论文 ❖ 十、图表、图画作文 ❖ 十一、提示性作文 ❖ 十二、（半）开放式作文 ❖ 十三、体验中考高分写作
中考英语书面表达综述
❖ 3、题型特点
（1）指导性/辅助性写作(guided writing)
❖有必要的说明, 对写作的目的、对象、时间、地点、内 容等情景给予简要的提示
（2）足够的发挥余地
❖Hale Waihona Puke 4、教学现状布置写作任务→学生个人写作→教师批改→背诵 范文
词汇贫乏、搭配不当、句型误用、语法不通、信 息不全、条理紊乱、谋篇布局不合理
playing basketball, visiting the
active part in all kinds of activities,
others. But in what ways? First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own ways to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it’s important for us to communicate with each other and share happiness and sadness. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble. ❖ In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in this way can we get along well.
2019年安徽省中考英语试题中的书面表达
❖ 英语课堂上，老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开讨论。 请根据以下你所在的小组讨论结果，以“How to get on well with others”为题，写一篇英语短文。 Suggestions：Learn to share Respect (尊重) others Communicate with each other … My suggestion
he played computer games for a playing computer games. After this
very long time. But now, he can activity, Li Hua has changed a lot. He
make good friends with others.
other students, and never said
with others. He threw litter about
sorry to others. He always threw and made our classroom dirty. After
trash in the classroom. Sometimes, class, he usually lost himself in
（1） ❖ 十四、体验中考高分写作
（2）
前言
❖ 发展学生的英语语言技能，培养学生良好的 英语交际能力。
❖ 听、说、读、写密切联系，相互渗透，互为 基础。
中考英语书面表达综述
❖ 1、题型目的
测试考生的笔头运用，即语法知识、词汇知识掌 握的程度及遣词造句和用英语进行思维的能力。
❖ 2、新课标要求：
能根据写作要求，收集准备素材；能独立起草短 文短信等；能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑 关系；能简单描述人物或事件；能根据所给图示 或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。
三类一般作文
一类优秀作文
We are very glad that Li Hua has We are very glad that Li Hua has
made great progress. Before the made great progress. But he used to
activity, he often quarreled with be impolite and even often quarreled
gets on well with others and is ready
Also, he is very active in taking
to help them. He also takes good
part in a lot of activities, such as care of the environment. He takes an
中考英语书面表达综述
❖ 5、中考书面表达答题步骤
步骤1: 认真审题。内容包括：
❖ 文字信息 ❖ 表格、图标信息
步骤2: 巧妙构思。
❖ 利用列提纲确定写作中心、组织/筛检材料。
步骤3: 信息转换
❖ 以词及点： ❖ 连词成句： ❖ 连句成文：
步骤4: 检查修改。 步骤5: 规范抄写。
中考英语书面表达综述
One possible version
How to get on well with others ❖ As we know, students should learn to get on well with
❖ 6、案例分析
例题：你班进行了一次综合实践活动。通过活动， 同学们收获很大，尤其是李华同学进步最快。请 你根据表格内容写一篇关于李华的短文。词数80 个左右。
过去的表现 经常与别人吵架 乱扔垃圾 沉溺于电脑游戏
现在的表现 与别人相处融洽 爱护环境 积极参加各种活动
中考英语书面表达综述
❖ 参考作文对比，注意划线部分。
初中英语写作
初中英语写作
❖ 一、句子的写作（简单句类 型）
❖ 二、句子的写作（简单句和 复合句）
❖ 三、段落的写作：主题与拓 展
❖ 四、文章的结构：开头、主 体和结尾
❖ 五、应用文：书信、电子邮 件
❖ 六、应用文：发言稿、通知
❖ 七、记叙文：写人、叙事 ❖ 八、说明文：介绍人物、事
物的说明文 ❖ 九、议论文 ❖ 十、图表、图画作文 ❖ 十一、提示性作文 ❖ 十二、（半）开放式作文 ❖ 十三、体验中考高分写作
中考英语书面表达综述
❖ 3、题型特点
（1）指导性/辅助性写作(guided writing)
❖有必要的说明, 对写作的目的、对象、时间、地点、内 容等情景给予简要的提示
（2）足够的发挥余地
❖Hale Waihona Puke 4、教学现状布置写作任务→学生个人写作→教师批改→背诵 范文
词汇贫乏、搭配不当、句型误用、语法不通、信 息不全、条理紊乱、谋篇布局不合理
playing basketball, visiting the
active part in all kinds of activities,
others. But in what ways? First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own ways to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it’s important for us to communicate with each other and share happiness and sadness. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble. ❖ In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in this way can we get along well.
2019年安徽省中考英语试题中的书面表达
❖ 英语课堂上，老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开讨论。 请根据以下你所在的小组讨论结果，以“How to get on well with others”为题，写一篇英语短文。 Suggestions：Learn to share Respect (尊重) others Communicate with each other … My suggestion
he played computer games for a playing computer games. After this
very long time. But now, he can activity, Li Hua has changed a lot. He
make good friends with others.
other students, and never said
with others. He threw litter about
sorry to others. He always threw and made our classroom dirty. After
trash in the classroom. Sometimes, class, he usually lost himself in
（1） ❖ 十四、体验中考高分写作
（2）
前言
❖ 发展学生的英语语言技能，培养学生良好的 英语交际能力。
❖ 听、说、读、写密切联系，相互渗透，互为 基础。
中考英语书面表达综述
❖ 1、题型目的
测试考生的笔头运用，即语法知识、词汇知识掌 握的程度及遣词造句和用英语进行思维的能力。
❖ 2、新课标要求：
能根据写作要求，收集准备素材；能独立起草短 文短信等；能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑 关系；能简单描述人物或事件；能根据所给图示 或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。
三类一般作文
一类优秀作文
We are very glad that Li Hua has We are very glad that Li Hua has
made great progress. Before the made great progress. But he used to
activity, he often quarreled with be impolite and even often quarreled
gets on well with others and is ready
Also, he is very active in taking
to help them. He also takes good
part in a lot of activities, such as care of the environment. He takes an
中考英语书面表达综述
❖ 5、中考书面表达答题步骤
步骤1: 认真审题。内容包括：
❖ 文字信息 ❖ 表格、图标信息
步骤2: 巧妙构思。
❖ 利用列提纲确定写作中心、组织/筛检材料。
步骤3: 信息转换
❖ 以词及点： ❖ 连词成句： ❖ 连句成文：
步骤4: 检查修改。 步骤5: 规范抄写。
中考英语书面表达综述