【读后续写】语篇素材积累
【读后续写】语篇素材积累(一)
【读后续写】语篇素材积累（一）The Swimming TestNila sat alone on the bus. Her older sister, Lexi, was one seat ahead,acting as if this was the best day ever. But for Nila, it was the worst. It was the last day of swimming lessons. Test Day.“If I pass my test, I can sign up for Junior Lifeguarding over the summer,”Nila heard Lexi telling her friend Jess.“You’re the best swimmer in the class,”Jess said. “There’s just no way you wouldn’t pass.”Maybe she could talk to Lexi about the test, who passed Level 4 several summers ago.“I thought sisters were supposed to help each other actively,”Nila whispered to the window. An hour later,she held the edge of the pool, shaking.“For the last part of the test, you’ll all be swimming the width of the pool,”the instructor,Nate, told the class. “Can we swim in the shallow end?”Nila asked. “Nope,”Nate said cheerfully. “To pass Level 4,it has to be the deep end.”Nila was nervous.She didn’t know if she could swim all the way across without touching the bottom. “I’ll be watching from the other side,”Nate said. “Ready?”No! Nila thought.But Nate put the whistle to his lips and blew. Nila took a deep breath and pushed off. Lexi moved up and down,feeling light.She completed smoothly and passed Level 7!After a minute, Lexi spotted her sister crossing the pool. Nila was way behind the others. As Nila neared the middle of the pool, she slowed. “Keep going,”Lexi called. “You can do it!”Nila pushed one arm forward and dragged it back.Now the other arm. When she stopped to check her position, her heart sank. Only halfway across! Some kids in her class were already at the wall, playing and talking. Nate was bending over to talk to one of the kids. He didn’t see her. Better keep going, she thought. But she was tired. Lexi kept her eyes on her sister’s slow progress.Three-fourths of the way across, Lexi saw Nila stop again. As Lexi watched,Nila’s head dipped briefly underwater before it resurfaced. Uh-oh, thought Lexi. Her sister was in trouble, and she had to help. She kicked the bottom and started swimming toward Nila. Nila swallowed a mouthful of water and coughed. Panicky, she felt as if she had been swimming for hours. If only someone would see she was too tired to keep going. Not seeing Lexi coming to her, she scanned the edge for the instructor.Just then, Nila felt someone’s arms grabbing her from behind. “Lie back (放松),” her sister’s voice said. “I’ve got you.” Much to her surprise, it was at the critical moment that Lexi came to her aid! They got out of water quickly. “How are you feeling?” Lexi asked. “OK. That’s a little scary.” “Don’t worry,” Lexi said, “Next time we go swimming, I could keep you company. With more practice, you can surely pass Level 4.” Hearing this, Nila smiled broadly, a current of warmth flooding over her.【主题语境】人与自我——游泳测试【文章大意】马上就要举行游泳测试了，姐姐Lexi是个游泳健将，她信心满满，充满期待，妹妹Nila却忧心忡忡，但又不愿主动向姐姐请教经验。
高中英语2025届高考读后续写动作描写素材(动作链+动动手)
高考英语读后续写动作描写素材一、动作链【素材积累】在描写动作时，要学会细化动作，把动作过程分解成一连串细微的动作（2—3个动作）形成动作链，写出动作的连贯性，使描写具有画面感，使人物更立体。
1.“and”连接多个并列谓语动词She walked to the cash register and paid the money.I rushed home, searched through my collection of hats, and grabbed the cotton one.He stopped the taxi, jumped in with the suitcase and told the driver, “Go to the police station, please.”The boys rushed excitedly to the lake, took off their clothes and jumped into the water.She dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms.The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.We crossed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high mountains, and overlooked deep valleys.He reached deep into his pocket, pulled out a handful of change, and held it up to the farmer.He put on his coat, stormed out and slammed the door shut.Lorna came to the window, opened it and looked out up at the night sky.2.非谓语动词表达多个动作Walking to the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.Holding the necklace in her hand, Jenny lifted her lip, tears beginning to blur her vision.Hearing this, her mother smiled, patting her back gently.He dove into the water, kicking his legs and stretching his arms as far as he could.Seeing the coat in the bag, he looked very astonished and then called his mother to go out.Feeling stronger now, Jane walked along the stream, hoping that it would lead her to the lake.Standing beside the empty road, they looked up into the sky, feeling the precious peace from within.Throwing the overcoat across her arm, she crossed the hall quietly.Rushing towards the door, she opened it, saying, “Here, Edmond, here I am”.His mother, standing at the door, cried tears of joy.Putting the book where it belonged, the boy tiptoed out of the room as lightly as possible.Jane got to her feet shakily, approached her husband and threw herself into his arms, sobbing uncontrollably on his shoulders.【素材运用】运用晨读板块中的动作链技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
2024届高考英语读后续写语篇练习(荒野求生)
Part 4 努力方向
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高级结构
高级结构
三连动 名词性从句 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语
定语从句
状语从句
（包含倒装句）
强调句
副词做状语 非谓语
（包括独立主格）
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低头是题海，抬头是前途。 终将上岸，阳光万里! 祝大家前程似锦!
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a final run. They took a chairlift to the top of the mountain, where they split up to go
down in different trails. When the father finished his run, he headed to the parking lot
him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies. The sun began to sink and he was getting
colder by the minute.
Nicholas had no idea where he was. He tried not to panic. He thought about Bear
learned to use.
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续写原文
He decided to stop moving around. He needed the energy, and the winds weren't as strong in the valley where he stood as they were up on the mountain. Plus, there was a better chance of someone finding him if he stayed put. The first thing he did was to seek shelter from the freezing wind and snow. Using his skis, Nicholas built a snow cave. He gathered a huge mass of snow and dug out a hole in the middle. Then he piled branches on top of himself, like a blanket, to stay as warm as he could.
书面表达素材积累之读后续写——主题：英雄小狗Onyx(2024届苏锡常镇二模)
书面表达素材积累之读后续写——主题：英雄小狗Onyx（202405苏锡常镇二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
She was the prettiest puppy we had ever seen, and the whole family immediately fell in love with her. We named her Onyx because of her thick, shiny black coat. She spent her first vacation with us when she was only ten weeks old and had her first bath and swim in the St. Lawrence River. We had no clue that this amazing little ball of fur would end up being our hero.As she grew older, Onyx became more and more involved in our family activities. On hot summer days, Onyx enjoyed floating on the river with us in her own rubber tube (橡皮圈). Amazingly standing on the top of the tube, she smiled while showing off her perfect balance. Resting her front legs and paws over the edge of the rubber tube, she kept her eyes shut as she floated until she’d had enough of the warm sun on her black coat.One day, our eighteen-year-old daughter, Margie, announced she was going to swim across the bay. No one in the family was free to go swimming with her. The unwritten rule, regardless of swimming ability, was to have a companion in the water with you, especially when swimming the width of the bay. I was not a good swimmer, so I said to Margie, “Take Onyx with you.” Having heard her name, Onyx woke up from a nap and was ready for action. Margie signed the dog to follow her. Onyx ran to the water next to her. They entered the freezing river together and swam side by side across the bay.I watched from the bank as they reached the sandbar (沙洲) on the far shore. They rested a few minutes before diving into the water for the return trip. I felt uneasy for some reason and continued to watch the pair swim side by side.Para 1 Suddenly I heard Margie calling out, “I have a cram (痉挛) in the leg!”_______________________ Para 2 Seeing the pair approaching the riverbank, I breathed a sigh of relief.________________________注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
读后续写语篇练习：无声的声音
范文呈现
Paragraph 2： The next day, I had a special class for Willard. I shared Willard’s story with the class in advance, the whole of them growing noiselessly. We all decided to write some words to this silent boy. The moment Willard entered the class, his classmates couldn’t wait to hand him cards with sweet words ,saying like “It’s kind of you to contribute quarters”, “I want to be your friend.” His face beamed gradually and his eyes danced with delight when he read my card- “I love your smile, my boy!” Shortly he was crowded with his gabbling classmates, stretching a bright smile to me.
“Christmas is a season of giving,” I told my students. “There are a few students in the school who might not have a happy holiday season. By contributing to our Christmas collection, you will help buy food, clothing and toys for these people in need. We will start the collection tomorrow.”
高中英语高考读后续写素材积累(温柔+痛苦+懊悔)
高考英语读后续写素材积累01.温柔1.At first, I couldn’t hear his tender words through the fog of anesthesia.一开始，我在麻醉的迷雾中听不到他温柔的话语。
2.Each time, the soft encouragement reached my ears like a song.每次，温柔的鼓励就像一首歌一样传到我的耳朵里。
3.With a final tenderness, he draped his worn jac ket over the older man’s shoulders.最后，他温柔地把破旧的夹克披在老人的肩膀上。
4.A trifle ruefully, I thought of the times I had held Pookie in my arms as he recovered from his wounds, stroking him tenderly as he lay inert on my lap.我有点伤感地回想起，当Pookie从受伤中恢复过来时，我曾把它抱在怀里，温柔地抚摸它，而它一动不动地躺在我的膝盖上。
5.As if Chip could sense her feelings, he remained extra gentle with her.好像Chip能感觉到她的感情，他对她仍然格外温柔。
6.The man’s voice was soft and kind, but had a bit of a laugh in it.男人的声音温柔而亲切，却带着几分笑意。
7.He was so excited about his find that my husband and I hated to rain on his parade with a gentle reminder.他对自己的发现如此兴奋，以至于我和丈夫都不愿意泼冷水，温柔地提醒他。
高中英语高考读后续写素材积累(哭+笑)
高考英语读后续写素材积累（哭）一、流眼泪1.In the quiet of my empty room I shed my tears.在空荡荡的房间里，我留下了眼泪。
2.I laughed so hard that tears filled my eyes.我笑得很厉害，眼泪都流出来了。
3.As the tears streamed down my face, I felt a soft touch on my hand.眼泪顺着我的脸流下来，我感到有人轻轻地抚摸我的手。
4.Her tears were flowing again.她又流出了眼泪。
5.My heart was pounding and tears were rolling down my face.我的心在砰砰跳，眼泪顺着脸庞滑下。
6.I felt tears running down my cheeks.我感到眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。
7.Sometimes, after the children were asleep and I was alone, tears came.有时候，孩子们都睡着了，独处时，眼泪就会涌出来。
8.Through my tears, I asked how much it was, and she said, “Please, just take it!”含着眼泪我问她多少钱，她说：“请收下吧！”9.As I waited for him to answer I could taste the salt from that single tear as it landed on my lips.当我等待他的回答时，我可以尝到那滴落在嘴唇上的眼泪的咸味。
10.His emerald green eyes betrayed his anger, and tears welled up in them like hot lava.他翠绿色的眼睛流露出他的愤怒，眼泪像滚烫的熔岩一样涌了出来。
2024届高三英语二轮复习写作专项读后续写主题升华积累讲义
【读后续写Happy Ending】读后续写主题升华素材积累Class:__________ NO.__________ Name:____________每种类型挑选一个易背、易写、多用途的句子默写一、人与自我：自主觉悟，自主成长（一）永不言弃——希望见于坚持，梦想圆于不懈1. Never give up no matter what happens, no matter how hopeless. 1.无论发生什么，无论多么绝望，都不要放弃。
2. Every cloud has a silver lining. / There is always light at the end of the tunnel. / Somebody sometime somewhere will shine a lamp of hope. 2.黑暗中总有一线光明。
/ 隧道尽头总有光明。
/ 某个地方的某个人会点亮一盏希望之灯。
3. There are no shortcuts to any place worth going. 3.任何值得去的地方都没有捷径。
4. As long as you have a dream, just go for it, and never give it up easily. 4.只要你有梦想，就去追求它，不要轻易放弃。
5. Be the flower that blooms, and butterflies will come. 5. 做那朵盛开的花，蝴蝶就会来。
6. Luck is what happens when preparation meets opportunity. 6.当准备遇到机会时会发生运气。
7. There is no elevator to success, only stairs. 7. 通往成功没有电梯，只有楼梯。
8. Where there is a life ,there is a hope. 8. 生命不息，希望长在。
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【读后续写】语篇素材积累（二）
The Hitchhiker
John Henderson was driving home late last night from an exhausting business trip. He had put off visiting the company’s new headquarters in order to get home before midnight, and now he was having trouble staying awake. He turned up the radio and tried to concentrate on the news — something about a robbery — but his eyes kept on closing. His wife, Marsha, was back home in Dayton, and he missed having her company on this long trip.
It was then that he noticed the hitchhiker (搭便车者) at the side of the road. Without even thinking about what he was doing, he slowed down and stopped the car. He couldn’t help feeling sorry for the young man who looked so wet and miserable in the rain. “Get in,” he said.
John remembered having to hitchhike home from the university before he had a car. He couldn’t stand sitting at the side of the road for hours, waiting for rides. The hitchhiker got in and immediately John was sorry that he had picked him up. The young man had a strange face and very sharp eyes. His clothes were old and dirty, and his long hair needed cutting. The hitchhiker lit a cigarette and said he was going to Woodsville but when John asked him other questions, the young man avoided giving him any personal information and changed the subject. John began to sweat and his thoughts turned nervously to his wallet and all the money he was carrying on the backseat. He desperately tried to remember what the newscaster had said earlier about a robbery. “Don’t be ridiculous!” He thought to himself. “Stop imagining things! This guy isn’t a criminal. What’s the use of panicking?”
At this moment, John felt like having a cigarette, even though he had quit smoking three months before. He asked his passenger for one but before lighting it, he had to wait for his hands to stop shaking.
“Stop the car!” cried the hitchhiker all of a sudden. John slammed on the brakes, hands shaking even more violently. “What’s wrong?” He nervously tu rned to the
young man.”It’s Woodsville,” the young man replied brief ly and slowly reached into his pocket. “This is it!” thought John. “He is the criminal!” So panicked was John that he felt his lips trembling. He suddenly hit on a way out, stuttering, “All... all my money is on the backseat. Take it away and spare me, ple ase!”
The young man looked puzzled, “It is I that am to pay.” Contrary to John’s wild imagination, he pulled out several wrinkled bills, instead of a gun or a knife. “Thanks for your ride and company!”he said. Dumbfounded, John was too embarrassed to utter a word. “How ridiculous I was!”He thought to himself. Waiting until his passenger disappeared from sight, he stepped on the gas and drove out of town. He just couldn’t wait to share the amusing story with Marsha!
【主题语境】
人与自我，人与社会
【文章大意】
John Henderson半夜开车赶回家，途中偶遇一个年轻人搭便车。
他以为那个年轻人是一个抢劫犯……
【重点语句】
1. ...and now he was having trouble staying awake.
……现在他很难保持清醒。
2. It was then that he noticed the hitchhiker at the side of the road.
就在那时，他注意到了路边搭便车的人。
3. At this moment, John felt like having a cigarette, even though he had quit smoking three months before.
这时，约翰觉得自己想抽烟，尽管他三个月前已经戒烟了。
4. So panicked was John that he felt his lips trembling.
约翰惊慌失措，感到嘴唇在颤抖。
5. Dumbfounded, John was too embarrassed to utter a word.
约翰目瞪口呆，不好意思说一句话。
【文章出处】《大学英语精读》第一册。