新高考英语作文高分突破读后续写真题分析与备考建议精品课件
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2023年新高考英语读后续写题型提分课件ppt之读后续写中的记叙方法
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6)事情的经过(老师教育）
7)说明原因
8)事情的经过（老师教育）
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Suddenly Xiao Hua realized something
and made an apology to his teacher and 9)结果
promised never to use it any longer in （态度）
His teacher looked at him sternly and told him to put it away immediately and go to the office after class. Xiao Hua was unhappy, because he felt he lost face before classmates.In the office, his teacher didn't scold him but told him that it was a school regulation for students not to use cell phones in class. Xlao Hua then told the teacher that his father was ill in hospital, and he just asked about father's illness. But the teacher said, “I’m sure that your father will never permit you to call or send messages to anybody in class." Suddenly Xiao Hua realized something and made an apology to his teacher and promised never to use it any longer in class. The tether nodded and hoped that he could keep his promise
新高考英语作文高分突破读后续写真题分析与备考建议课件
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真题分析：情节
• One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three
hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the
way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the
新高考·英语
读后续写 样题 分析与技巧
1
真题分析：情节
• One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp
overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp,” and walked away.
tgiominegthteoyfirnedacahbedetttehreslpaoket ,feoJaxrnpuesowtsoaitsciasomonpan,”garnydthwaatlksheed
said to away.
Tom,
“I’m
• With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
真题分析：情节
• One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three
hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the
way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the
新高考·英语
读后续写 样题 分析与技巧
1
真题分析：情节
• One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp
overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp,” and walked away.
tgiominegthteoyfirnedacahbedetttehreslpaoket ,feoJaxrnpuesowtsoaitsciasomonpan,”garnydthwaatlksheed
said to away.
Tom,
“I’m
• With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
2023届高考英语复习读后续写课件(共17张PPT)
She was surprised.
She was scared.
Activity 5: Match emotions with actions.
Prediction
Skills
Emotion
Plot
Write a story by describing one's actions, emotions and so on. Show. Don’t tell!
story mountain
beginning
development
climax(高潮)
development
ending
had a quarrel with her mother.
gave Jenny a bowl of noodles.
reminded Jenny of what her mother had done for her.
(plot line)
(emotion line)
How did she feel?
Activity 6: Prediction
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.
positive ending
Who touched Jenny? What did Jenny and her mother do? Did they make up? How did they feel in the end?
angry
sad
Emotion
Prediction
Skills
Plot
A Bowl of Noodles
angry
sad
“I'll treat you today,” said the man. He brought her a bowl of noodles, the smell so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently. “What is it?” asked the man kindly. “Actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears. “Even a stranger will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house.” Hearing the words, the man smiled, “ I only gave you a bowl of noodles.
She was scared.
Activity 5: Match emotions with actions.
Prediction
Skills
Emotion
Plot
Write a story by describing one's actions, emotions and so on. Show. Don’t tell!
story mountain
beginning
development
climax(高潮)
development
ending
had a quarrel with her mother.
gave Jenny a bowl of noodles.
reminded Jenny of what her mother had done for her.
(plot line)
(emotion line)
How did she feel?
Activity 6: Prediction
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.
positive ending
Who touched Jenny? What did Jenny and her mother do? Did they make up? How did they feel in the end?
angry
sad
Emotion
Prediction
Skills
Plot
A Bowl of Noodles
angry
sad
“I'll treat you today,” said the man. He brought her a bowl of noodles, the smell so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently. “What is it?” asked the man kindly. “Actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears. “Even a stranger will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house.” Hearing the words, the man smiled, “ I only gave you a bowl of noodles.
备考2023新高考英语读后续写名校试题及写作素材 读后续写Writing 2(16张PPT)
续写第二段开头：“Peter向四周看了看，发现许多同学 在冲他微笑。”本段接下来可以这样构思：老师的做法—— 表扬Peter的诚实行为，并且不打算收回奖品。材料的最后提 到“Peter想起妈妈教他做人要诚实”，续写中可以很自然地 出现Peter的妈妈，比如可以写Peter回家后与妈妈分享这件事 ，并展示自己的奖品。再写Peter妈妈的心情，如为Peter的诚 实感到欣慰或对他的表扬。
的行为，与老师的评价相符，也为下文老师
拒绝收回奖品做了铺垫。
标准范文及评析
Paragraph 2: Peter looked around and found many of his
classmates were smiling at him. “Peter, I want you to keep this dictionary because you set an example for all of us,” said Mr. White. Peter took the dictionary from his teacher and expressed his thanks to him. Meanwhile, he ④couldn’t wait to show it to Mum and tell her one of his best days ever. On arriving home, he told Mum what had happened. ⑤“You did the right thing. Honesty is the best policy,” said his mother proudly.
Staring at the red sign “100%” which was written on his test paper, Peter was lost in thought. After a while, he remembered a lesson Mum used to teach him, “We ought to be an honest person.” 注意：
的行为，与老师的评价相符，也为下文老师
拒绝收回奖品做了铺垫。
标准范文及评析
Paragraph 2: Peter looked around and found many of his
classmates were smiling at him. “Peter, I want you to keep this dictionary because you set an example for all of us,” said Mr. White. Peter took the dictionary from his teacher and expressed his thanks to him. Meanwhile, he ④couldn’t wait to show it to Mum and tell her one of his best days ever. On arriving home, he told Mum what had happened. ⑤“You did the right thing. Honesty is the best policy,” said his mother proudly.
Staring at the red sign “100%” which was written on his test paper, Peter was lost in thought. After a while, he remembered a lesson Mum used to teach him, “We ought to be an honest person.” 注意：
2023届高三英语写作专项读后续写课件(共42张PPT)
读后续写指导探究
目标：
对读后续写评分细则的解读 在构思续写情节时，建议重 点考虑的5个方面 实例演示
考试说明中的“读后续写”题型
基本特点
★提供一篇350词以内的材料，续写内容为150词左 右； ★原文材料情节丰富，利于学生发挥想象力，多以 记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事 情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比 较强； ★所续写内容分为两段，每段的开头语已经给出。
The professor's wife was surprised to see him again so soon. "Oh, my dear, I forgot the name of the town." "What? You forgot the name? Maybe one day you will forget my name! Now I'll write the name of that town on a piece of paper, and you put it in your pocket and please, please don't forget where you put it." Satisfied that she had solved the problem, she sent her husband off again. Ten minutes later she was astonished to see him outside the house for the third time. Paragraph 1: "What is the matter now?" asked his wife.________________________ Paragraph 2: Hearing the cry, out rushed their neighbors, trying to find out what had happened. ___________________________________________________
目标：
对读后续写评分细则的解读 在构思续写情节时，建议重 点考虑的5个方面 实例演示
考试说明中的“读后续写”题型
基本特点
★提供一篇350词以内的材料，续写内容为150词左 右； ★原文材料情节丰富，利于学生发挥想象力，多以 记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事 情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比 较强； ★所续写内容分为两段，每段的开头语已经给出。
The professor's wife was surprised to see him again so soon. "Oh, my dear, I forgot the name of the town." "What? You forgot the name? Maybe one day you will forget my name! Now I'll write the name of that town on a piece of paper, and you put it in your pocket and please, please don't forget where you put it." Satisfied that she had solved the problem, she sent her husband off again. Ten minutes later she was astonished to see him outside the house for the third time. Paragraph 1: "What is the matter now?" asked his wife.________________________ Paragraph 2: Hearing the cry, out rushed their neighbors, trying to find out what had happened. ___________________________________________________
高考英语二轮备考读后续写课件：以2023新高考I卷为例
(1) building a scaffold
搭建支架
(2) entering the scene
融入情景
(3) independent exploration 独立探究
(4) cooperative learning 合作学习
(5) effect evaluation
效果评价
Activity-based teaching methods
点评：频繁使用非谓语动词和长难句，语言云里 点雾雾评里里：的的频高高繁大大使上上用，，非语语谓意意语朦朦动胧胧词不不和清清长，，难形形句成成，阅阅语读读言阻阻云力力里! !
语法结构和语言与原文风格不一致，极不协调 语法结构和语言与原文风格不一致，极不协调
! !
2023高考阅卷典型样卷分享
高考得分: 15分
So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “ Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.
帮助贫困学生 姐妹在母亲节给妈妈
制作惊喜早餐 老师帮助特殊孩子树立
信心完成越野赛跑 来自巴西的我在老师的 鼓励下突破自我，在英语
写作比赛中获奖
思维品质 邻里互助，爱满人间
人间有真情
感恩父母 感恩亲情
爱满人间师生情 永不放弃自强不息
爱满人间师生情 相信自己坚持不懈
2025届新高考英语读后续写提分技能及典题例析课件(共82张PPT)
02 “I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car.”
03 “Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said, “Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”
06 It was from the bank. There had been a robbery (抢 劫)!
07 Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?” But everyone had a different answer.
3. 难过但不恐惧，他决定要改变这一切。
H__e_a_r_t_b__r_o_k_e__n__b_u__t_f_e__a_r_l_e_s_s____,he decided to turn everything around.
新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPT
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _________________________________ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _________________________________________
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真题 Nhomakorabea析：情节
• Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear
water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
新高考·英语
读后续写 样题 分析与技巧
真题分析：情节
• One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp
overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp,” and walked away.
• As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
真题分析：情节
• One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three
hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the
way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the
tgiominegthteoyfirnedacahbedetttehreslpaoket ,feoJaxrnpuesowtsoaitsciasomonpan,”garnydthwaatlksheed
said to away.
Tom,
“I’m
• With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
• “Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
• No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
• With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
真题分析：情节
• One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp,” and walked away.
• Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear
water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
新高考·英语
读后续写 样题 分析与技巧
真题分析：情节
• One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp
overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp,” and walked away.
• As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
真题分析：情节
• One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three
hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the
way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the
tgiominegthteoyfirnedacahbedetttehreslpaoket ,feoJaxrnpuesowtsoaitsciasomonpan,”garnydthwaatlksheed
said to away.
Tom,
“I’m
• With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
• “Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
• No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
• With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
真题分析：情节
• One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp,” and walked away.