2020年上海高考概要写作summary writing5(10篇,有解析)
2020年高考作文上海卷深度解析及范文
所以，文明发展的进程没有意料之外，每一个转折都是先贤筚路蓝缕、砥砺前行才玉汝于成的。理解文明的进程，要了解动物生存模式向社会生存模式的转折，要理解动物掠夺习性和创造交易生存资料模式的差异，要懂得化解协调、合作共赢优于霸权、暴力的社会形态运行，要认同科学理念和大众意愿相促进以完善情理法度的社会价值。而以上所有的决定因素都是人的力量达成，没有意想不到，也不存在无能为力。
新的世界，新的时代，新的人。鲁迅说，“首先要这人沉着，勇猛，有辨别，不自私。没有拿来的，人不能自成为新人，没有拿来的，文艺不能自成为新文艺”。敢于拿来，才是不随波逐流，才是敢于作为。
朋友们，勇敢地应对命运的转折，于无力处用力，在无为处有为，你将会做出无愧于世界、时代和生命的不俗成绩。
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文明的进程
3.价值判断的限制。人的主观能动性不容忽视，人类活动的作用不容否定，尤其是在科学高速发展的今天，人对事物发展的掌控只是是否实现和实现程度大小的问题。比如2020年的新冠肺炎疫情，我们虽然无法一下子消灭病毒，但我们可以尽快采取积极措施，将损失降到最低。所以，虽然世上意想不到的重要转折发生过许多次，但这并不意味着“人对事物发展进程无能为力”。这是材料中隐含的价值判断。所以此命题不但不可以见仁见智，还要对选择“无能为力”者予以批驳。
上海市高考概要写作9篇(有答案)
01 - Sales StrategiesHow can a company improve its sales? One of the keys to more effective selling is for a company to first decide on its “sales strategy”. In other words, what is the role of the salesperson? Is the salesperson’s job narrative, suggest ive, or consultive?The “narrative” sales strategy depends on the salesperson moving quickly into a standard sales presentation. His or her pitch highlights the benefit for the customer of a particular product or service. This approach is most effective for customers whose buying motives are basically the same and is also well suited to companies who have a large number of prospects on which to call.The “suggestive” approach is tailored more for the individual customer. The salesperson must be in a positio n to offer alternative recommendations that meet a particular customer’s needs. One key aspect of the suggestive approach is the need for the salesperson to engage the buyer in some sort of discussion. The salesperson can then use the information from the customer to suggest an appropriate product or service.The final strategy demands that a company’s sales staff act as “consultants” for the buyer. In this role, the salesperson must acquire a great deal of information about the customer. They do this through market research, surveys, and face-to-face discussions. Using this information, the salesperson makes a detailed presentation tailored specifically to a consumers needs.More and more sales teams are switching from a narrative or a suggestive approach to a more consultative strategy. As a result, corporations are looking more at intangibles (无形资产) such as creativity and analytical skills and less at educational background and technical skills.Sales strategies are classified as narrative, suggestive and consultive. Salespeople use the narrative strategy to promote products with standard presentations. The suggestive approach requires the salesperson to recommend a suitable product after talking with customers. The consultive strategy demands that salespeople acquire information about customers and act as their “consultants”. Nowadays more and more sales teams prefer the consultive approach. (60 words)02 - When You Hear the Final WhistleOne of the hardest things for any sportsperson to do is to know when to retire. But even harder is finding the answer to the question “What am I going to do with the rest of my life?”Some sportspeople go on playing too long. Perhaps they just can’t stand life without the “high” of playing professional sport. Michael Jordan, the greatest basketball player of all time retired three times. He retired once from the Chicago Bulls, made a successful comeback with the Bulls, then retired again. His second comeback with an inferior team ended in failure and he retired for ever at the age of 38. Jordan said, “There will never be anything I do that will fulfill me as much as competing did.”Others can’t resist the chance of one last “pay day”. Muhammad Ali needed the money, but his comeback fight, at the age of 39, against Trevor Berbick, was one of the saddest spectacles in modem sport. After losing to Berbick, Ali retired permanently. Three years later he developed Parkinson’s disease.For some people, the pain of retirement never leaves them. As Jimmy Greaves, an ex- England international footballer said, u I think that a lot of players would prefer to be shot once their career is over. J, Many of them spend their retirement in a continual battle against depression, alcohol, or drugs.But for the lucky few, retirement can mean a successful new career. Franz Beckenbauer is a classical example of a footballer who won everything with his club, Bayern Munich. After retiring he became a successful coach with Bayern and finally president of the club. John McEnroe, the infamous “bad boy” of tennis, is now a highly respected and highly paid TV commentator. But sadly, for most sportspeople these cases are the exceptions.For one thing, sportspeople find it hard to decide when to retire. Some don’t want to retire because they can’t stand living without playing professional sport while others just need money. For another, sportspeople find it harder to decide what to do after retirement. Some suffer from the pain of retirement while the lucky few take up a new career. (60 words)03 - IKEASince it opened its first store in 1943 , IKEA has become one of the biggest furniture empires in the world. The company has made people think differently about the way they furnish their homes, particularly in countries like Germany, the UK and France. Over 365 million people worldwide spend more than £8 billion in IKEA stores each year and the number of customers keeps rising. The best-selling products are bookshelves, sofas, candles, chairs and coat hangers, but perhaps IKEA is most famous for its flatpack furniture.Flatpack furniture was invented by chance in 1956 by a man called Gillis Lundgren. He lived in a Swedish town called Almhult and worked for a small furniture company. One day Lundgren needed to deliver a table to a customer, but the table wouldn’t fit in his car. “Let’s pull off the legs and put them underneath,” said Lundgren — and that was the moment flatpack furniture was bom. From that simple beginning, the small furniture company became IKEA and Lundgren became one of its top designers.The se cret of IKEA’s success is not just the design, it’s also the price. Flatpacks don’t take up much space, so IKEA can send furniture round the world vey cheaply. Also the stores don’t employ lots of salespeople to help you find or carry things; it seems peop le don’t mind doing that for themselves. And most importantly, IKEA doesn’t pay anyone to put the furniture together — they let the customers do that. Apparently, people would rather pay less and build the furniture themselves.IKEA is a big furniture chain store, well known for its flatpack furniture, which was invented by Gillis Lundgren when he managed to put a table into a car. IKEA’s success lies in the design and the price. IKEA can deliver flatpacks round the world cheaply. Customers would rather pay less and put the furniture together themselves. (57 words)4 - Refusing to Be ModernizedAn elderly couple are going to exchange candles for light bulbs after 37 years without electricity at their Suffolk home. Pat Payne, 74, and his wife Margaret, 72, brought up their large family in their farmhouse in Whepstead, near Bury St Edmunds, without any modem appliances.Their children left home years ago but now one of them has moved back and is paying £ 19,000 to have electricity put in the 200-year-old house next month. Mrs. Payne said that she was looking forward to “ being modernized “ but does not feel that she has missed much by not having electricity.“It would have been nice to have been able to do the ironing or to have vacuum cleaner instead of having to sweep the floor, but we got by,” she said. “I think our children are more excited about us getting electricity than we are.”The couple have mostly lived off the land. Mr. Payne, a former farm labourer, grows vegetables in the garden. Without a fridge or freezer in the three-bedroom house, milk is delivered every other day and fresh meat is bought as needed. Water comes from a well.Mrs. Payne used to wash clothes by hand, and with nine children that was a lot of clothes, but she believes that not having electricity may have been a good thing for her children while they were growing up.“Instead of watching television, they played together and used to make up games or read books,” she said.The life also suited her and her husband. “ Neither of us has eve r been seriously ill and we rarely get a cough or cold,” Mrs. Payne said. “With our fresh vegetables and not having central heating it’s been a very healthy way to live.”The Paynes have lived in their farmhouse without electricity for 37 years but they do n’t regret it. They think living in this way does good to their children’s growing up and their health. Now they are going to have electricity put in their house and will make use of modern alliances. (51 words)5 - Designer Brands Aren’t for Me!Although I follow fashion, I hate the phrase “must-have”. If I read that Ugg boots or Prada sunglasses are the latest “must-haves”, my immediate reaction is to think, “Why must I have them?” Why should I fall for the designer’s manipulative tactics, which are only intended to increase his bank balance at the expense of mine?Designer brands, in general, are for people who are too insecure to trust their own tastes. These people decide that everything at Prada must be “cool”, so if you shop there, you can’t go wrong. I find it much more satisfying to pop into one of the cheap chain stores on the High Street and buy a copy of designer’s clothes for a tenth of the price. OK, you have to use your skill to find the one garment in there that looks great. But it’s worth it! It’s like finding a piece of gold in a river. The find gives you immense satisfaction.Which is why, according to a survey done by a British bank, young people with money are abandoning the designer shops and buying their clothes in chain stores, second-hand shops, and in markets. This is the best news I’ve heard all week. It means that young people have the confidence to trust their judgment. They are prepared to take risks to look individual and not mass-produced.That has always been my shopping philosophy. The surprisingly high prices in designer shops leave me open-mouthed. Even if I had the money, I would think of all the other things I could spend it on!The writer thinks there is no need to buy those “must-haves” and that designer brands are intend ed for those who aren’t sure of their tastes. He prefers to do shopping in a cheap chain store. Besides, a survey reports that rich young people are switching to cheaper places to do shopping, thus looking individual. (54 words)6 - A Lesson Goes ViralAt the end of 2014, Tulsa, Oklahoma, sixth-grade teacher Melissa Bour received a friend request on Facebook from one of her students. She didn’t accept the request, but a quick browse through the girl’s friends list revealed the names of dozens of kids from her classroom. Many of the students’ Facebook pages were completely public, meaning even strangers could search through the kids’ personal photos and messages.“I saw middle fingers, students dressed inappropriately, and extremely offensive language,” Meli ssa says. “It was disturbing.” When she brought up her discovery in class, the students thought it was nothing. So she created a post of her own.With a bright green Sharpie, she wrote on a piece of paper in all caps, “Dear Facebook：My 12-year-old students think it is ‘no big deal’ that they are posting pictures of themselves ... Please help me show them how quickly their images can get around.” She put a picture of the letter on her Facebook page and asked people to share it.In hours, it was shared 108 ,000 times across dozens of states and four countries. She deleted it after eight hours, but it continued to spread. “I wanted to show them that it’s on the Internet forever,” she says.As she explained the results of her experiment in class, the students’ “eyes got bigger and bigger,” she says. “It scared a few of them into deleting their pages completely,” she says. Others have removed inappropriate posts and used privacy settings to manage their pages.Her intention wasn’t to scare them off social media bu t to push them to be mindful of what they post. Melissa says, “I tell them, ‘just because everyone else is sharing doesn’t mean you have to.’”At the end of 2014, Melissa Bour, a sixth-grade teacher in Tulsa, Oklahoma, found her students were using social media improperly. In order to warn them of the danger, she posted a picture with some words on it. It spread quickly and remained online even when deleted. She told the students what she did and her efforts were fruitful. (59 words)7 - Parallel LivesMargaret Richardson and Terry Connelly have almost identical taste in clothes, both have four children of more or less the same age, and both were married on exactly the same day. Not surprising, perhaps, Margaret and Terry are identical twins. What is surpri sing is that they didn’t even meet until they were in their mid-thirties.What happens if, like Terry and Margaret, identical twins are separated at birth and brought up in different families? Will their backgrounds make them completely different, or will their shared genes still mean that they have a lot in common? Professor Tom Bouchard from the University of Minnesota, set out to find the answer to this question. He traced more than a hundred pairs of twins who were adopted by different parents at birth, sixty-four of whom were identical twins. Each twin is then tested and interviewed about every detail of their life and personality.It turned out that Margaret and Terry were not unusual. As well as looking very similar, many twins had the same IQ, the same health problems, the same hobbies and interests, the same attitudes and even the same tastes. Several pairs of twins arrived at their first meeting in the same clothes, and one pair of middle-aged women were wearing identical jewellery. Others had made the same career choices：Jerry and Mark Levy first met in their thirties to discover that they were both firefighters, who drank the same kind of beer and weighed exactly the same.Of course, some of this must be coincidence. But Professor Bouchard has come to a remarkable conclusion. Identical twins brought up separately are more similar than non-identical twins brought up together. “I am not saying that upbringing doesn’t matter —it’s very important of course —but this research shows that our genes influence almost every part of our lives：they influence our IQ, our hobbies; our personalities, our political attitudes, our health, even the clothes and food we like.”Margaret Richardson and Terry Connelly are identical twins. Though they were separated at bi rth and didn’t meet until in their mid-thirties, they had a lot in common. Professor Tom Bouchard found through his study that identical twins who grew up separately are more like each other than non-identical twins who grew up together and that genes play a large part. (60 words)8 - They Beat Odds TogetherAFTER A CAR CRASH left 14-year-old Collin Smith unable to walk, doctors told him he had a 20 percent chance of finishing high school. The opportunity to attend college seemed even slimmer. Yet eight years later, Collin earned a bachelor of arts degree in communications from High Point University. Collin had achieved the nearly impossible — with the help of a kind man five decades his senior.Dial back to 2005. Ernest Greene had just moved to the same area that Collin and his parents lived. The families did not know each other. But when Ernest heard about Collin’s accident and the fact that his parents would not be able to care full-time for their son, Ernest says, he felt a calling. “The Lord was leading me to help,” he says. He had time to spare.Ernest approached Collin’s parents with the idea that he look after the boy while they were at work. The Smiths gratefully accepted. Collin, now 23 , says it was hard for him to understand then “how someone I didn’t know would drop everything to help me.”Ernest sought training to care for Collin and then began arriving at the Smiths’ home early on weekday mornings. He would help Collin get out of bed, wash, and dress. He would help him have breakfast. Then he’d drive Collin to school. And at 3 p.m., every day, Ernest would drive back to pick him up. Then, while the two waited for one of Collin’s parents to get home, “we played a lot of Monopoly,” says Ernest with a laugh.Collin graduated from high school with the rest of his class and was accepted to nearby High Point. Ernest accompanied him to every class. “The first year was interesting,” Ernest recalls. “Collin didn’t want to stick out.” Ernest, on the other hand, says he took full advantage of the opportunity, taking down notes and often commenting in class.Collin Smith lost his ability to walk at 14 after a car accident. When Ernest Greene, 64 then, heard about that, he offered to help him. He looked after the boy, sent him to school and picked him up after school. Thanks to Ernest, Collin graduated from high school and was admitted to a nearby college. (56 words)9- What I Think of Boxing as a SportBoxing is a popular sport that many people seem to be fascinated by. Newspapers, magazines and sports programmes on TV frequently cover boxing matches. Professional boxers earn a lot of money, and successful boxers are treated as big heroes.It seems to me that some people, especially men, find it appealing because it is an aggressive sport. When they watch a boxing match, they can identify with the winning boxer, and this gives them the feeling of being a winner themselves. It is a fact that many people have feelings of aggression from time to time, but they cannot show their aggression in their everyday lives. Watching a boxing match gives them an outlet for this aggression.However, there is a negative side to boxing. It can be a very dangerous sport. Although boxers wear gloves during the fights, and amateur boxers even have to wear helmets, there have frequently been accidents in both professional and amateur boxing, sometimes with dramatic consequences. Boxers have suffered from head injuries, and occasionally, fighters have even been killed as a result of being knocked out in the ring. Furthermore, studies have shown that there are often long-term effects of boxing, in the form of serious brain damage, even if a boxer has never been knocked out.To conclude, I am personally not at all in favour of aggressive sports like boxing. I think it would be better if less time was given to aggressive sports on TV, and we celebrated more men and women from non-aggressive sports as our heroes and heroines in our society. I believe that the world is aggressive enough already! Of course, people like competitive sports, and so do I, but I think that hitting other people in an aggressive way is not something that should be regarded as a sport.Some people love boxing because it is an aggressive sport, which echoes with the feelings of aggression they have. But boxing is also a dangerous sport, not only because boxers are very likely to be injured or even killed, but also because there might be potential brain damage. Personally, the writer doesn’t like boxing and appeals for non-aggressive sports. (59 words)。
2020上海高考概要写作summary writing510篇
Exercise 1A father's relationship to his child's current and future academic success and the level of his orher development in academic potential and scholastic achievement are both factors with somerather interesting implications that educators are beginning to study. As a matter of fact, “lifewith father”has been discovered to be a very important factor in determining a child's progressor lack of progress in school.A recent survey of over 16,000 children made by the National Child Development Study inLondon revealed that children whose fathers came to school conferences and accompanied theirchildren on outings did better in school than those children whose fathers were not involved inthose activities. The study, which monitored children born during a week in March, 1992，fromthe time of their birth through the years of their early schooling, further revealed that the childrenof actively involved fathers scored much higher in reading and math than those children whoseonly involved parent was the mother. The purpose of the study was to evaluate the role played byfathers in the raising of a child. It indicated a much higher level of parental involvement by thefather than had been anticipated. Over 66% of the fathers were said to have played a major rolein parental responsibility.The study also suggested that the greatest level of parenting took place in the families of onlychild. As the number of children and financial expenses increases, the father's apparent interestand involvement with the children decreased. However, no matter what the size or financialcondition of the family，a father's active participation in the child's development made a definitedifference in the child's progress.The study further revealed that while the frequency of overnight absences reflected a corresponding deficiency of the child's level in math and reading, a father's employment onnight shifts appeared to have little effect on the child's academic progress. The informationevaluating the level of the father's parenting performance was taken primarily from theadmittedly subjective observations of their wives.参考答案：A recent study discovered that a father^ influence played a significant role in the level of thechild's academic progress.(要点1) As is suggested, the father's involvement with children wasaffected by the size of the family and its financial expenses.(要点2) So children who tended toprogress academically were those only children.(要点3) Moreover, a father's frequentovernight absence had a bad effect on the child's progress.(要点4)分析过程：试题详解1.核心内容本文是一篇说明文，共四段。
语文高考上海卷作文(10篇)
语文高考上海卷作文（10篇）毫无疑问对各种作文都很了解吧，写作文能够锻练大家的独处习惯性，让自身的心静出来，思索自身将来的方位。
那麼，如何去写作文呢？下列是我为大伙儿搜集的2020语文高考上海卷作文【范文10篇】，期待可以协助到大伙儿。
University is a place that provides a number of interesting activities to eich our life on campus. In the two years, I have attended a couple of activities such as football club and reading society. The most benefited one popping into my mind is the sports meeting last month.First of all, sports meeting offers a great opportunity to draw students’ attention from busy studies to the sports field. As students, most of our time is killed in the classroom and library. However, doing sports could be seen as a relaxing ingredient in tedious study life.Secondly, as a member of football club, I attended the football game that day. I enjoyed the feeling of being united. During the game, we encouraged each other when we felt frustrated; we cheered for each other when we scored a goal. All these taught me to be more and more team-oriented.Lastly, doing sports benefits to our physical health. Increasingly sedentary lifestyle causes laziness and possibility of obesity. Therefore, this sports meeting on campus mobilized our students to enjoy the fun of sports.This is the campus activity that has benefited not only me but also most of the students.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.How to Live a Meaning LifeAmong all the highlighted topics, there is “how to live a meaning life?” Everyone has his or her own opinion. As the saying has it, “the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.”I cannot agree any more.If our life is just to pursue something for ourselves, we will surely feel fruitless and meaningless when we grow old. From Steve Jobs’s bibliography, we can get that the people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do. Steve Jobs has brought a great many changes to our world. His life, although short, definitely outlast. That’s a life worth living.Therefore, if there is a way to make my life meaningful, it should be to find something I’m interested in and also helpful to others or the whole society. Only in this way can I keep my passion throughout my life until I finally fulfil my life.时迄今日，仍有父母在持续的电話了解我有关小孩期末考试考试成绩的事项，问为何自身的小孩平时成绩非常好，此次却没考出好成绩来。
2020年上海高考语文高分作文评析例文10篇点评
★例文1：走出去，返回来罗素曾言：“多远乃万物之本源。
”正如大千世界，古老的华夏文明乃是古埃及、古巴比伦等诸多历史起源中的一支，面对纷繁的世界，我们该如何认识我们认为自己早已熟识的事物。
有人说过这样一段话：“倾听了不同国家的音乐，接触了不同风格的异域音调，我由此对音乐的‘中国味'有了更深刻的感受，从而更有意识地去寻找‘中国味'”。
对于事物的认识，总是有一个循序渐进的过程，这是一个“走出去”进而“返回来”的过程。
不同事物本身具有复杂性和多样化，这不可避免地导致了认识事物时带有简化作用的偏见的产生。
布朗斯说过：“偏见是一个人乃至一个社会思考能力缺乏的体现。
”我们以“中国味”的大气磅礴定义所有中式风格的音乐，而以西方的小夜曲、圆舞曲最为著名，在不知不觉中便沦为了偏见的奴隶，此时便具有了“走出去” 的必要性。
华为老总任正非否定了“自主创新”所带有的光辉，这并非是否定“自己”的价值和意义，而是倡导人们避免陷入偏见的泥沼，一再简化前进的目的，而无法深刻地认识事物的多样，以致丧失了认识自我的感情。
沉重的历史积淀化作包袱，迫使我们对事物的认识浮于表面，使我们安逸于认识的舒适圈中。
失去了交响曲的激情澎湃，我们如何体悟高山流水的悠扬绵长；失去了摇滚音乐的自由舞动，我们如何沉醉陕北民歌的精神支柱。
失去了与其他事物的交融与荟萃，我们在认知惰性中越陷越深，正如路遥所写：“当一个人沉浸在温柔之乡以后，就再也难以获得重回风暴的勇气。
”走出去，突破局限，更为全面而理性地看待与认识事物。
倾听不同国家的音乐，接触不同风格的异域音调，走出去，让我们窥探到一个更为全面的世界。
同时，“返回来”的重要性也是应当重视的。
若是只管“走出去”那便向鲁迅先生笔下“拿来主义” 所批判的那样所靠拢，只知“进去”而不知“拿来”在。
“走出去”的基础上，我们冲破了偏见与局限的束缚，我们要“返回来”，形成更为深刻的感受。
中国社会具有“从旧见行古道”的传统意识。
2020上海高考作文题的解析及范文(世上许多重大转折……)
2020年上海高考作文题解析及范文（5篇范文60-68分）原题回放：世上许多重要的转折是在意想不到时发生的，这是否意味着人对事物发展进程无能为力？请写一篇文章，谈谈你对这个问题的认识和思考。
要求：①自拟题目；②不少于800字。
材料类型：现象类思辨型话题词：人对事物发展进程/重要的转折/意想不到材料侧重：材料提出：面对意想不到的重要的转折，我们对事物发展进程是否无能为力？“世上许多重要的转折是在意想不到时发生的”，言下之意“世界上也有一些重大的转折是可预测的、可把握的。
”另外“是否”给我们提供充分的自由度，虽一般可赞同，可反对，可补充思辨。
但这则材料隐含了价值判断，所以我们一般选“否”，即“当有所为”。
一.界定概念意想不到：是无法意料，是人们的预测之外的事情，是很难准备和掌控的事。
但这种意外却有重要的转折的意义。
重要转折：重大的变化。
转折：有个人、集体、社会。
转折有良性及恶性。
人能否迎来良性转折，避免恶性转折；能否在遭遇恶性转折后，又迎来良性转折；能否有个人的转折迎来社会的转折……二.重要的转折在意想不到时发生，是否意味着人对事物发展进程无能为力？1.面对重要的转折，尤其是意想不到时发生的转折，人们会彷徨无措，易对事物发展进程产生无能为力之感。
2.人们对事物发展进程本质上是很难把握的，因为认知局限，而事物是无穷无尽且千变万化的-----天有不测风云，人有旦夕祸福。
3.“世上许多重要的转折是在意想不到时发生的”，言下之意“世界上也有一些重大的转折是可预测的、可把握的。
”---事物发展变化，总有迹可循，都有量变到质变的过程。
4.人类社会的发展历程告诉我们：人类在不断地利用并改造着周围的一切。
人们对事物发展进程的把握有时是可能的。
三.当重要的转折在意想不到时发生，我们应该怎么做？1.面对意想不到的转折发生时，我们不能坐以待毙，须勇敢应对，积极发挥主观能动性，要积极有为，寻找对策，战胜困难，渡过难关。
2.我们要知其不可为而为之，化意外为惊喜，化危机为转机。
2020年上海高考概要写作summary writing1(10篇,有解析)
Exercise 1With only two weeks to go before Christmas, buying presents is a high priority for a lot of people. However, this year not so many people are leaving their homes to go shopping. These days lots of people can do their shopping in the comfort of their own home with the help of the Internet.Online shopping is becoming more and more popular for a number of reasons: prices are often lower online; you don’t have to queue up in busy shops and you can buy almost any product imaginable with just a few clicks of your mouse.Both male and female are buying into the trend, but women are expected to do more shopping on the Internet than men. It seems women are now more attracted to the convenience of online shopping than they used to be. Average spending online this Christmas by women will rise to £ 240 (3.360 yuan) compared to the slightly lower average of £ 233 (3,262 yuan) for men.In the past a lot of people were reluctant to shop online. Many were worried about the security of entering their card details on the Internet and the reliability of the Internet but as shopping online has become more widespread, these worries have begun to disappear. 45% of Internet users still do have security worries but it hasn’t slowed down the ever-increasing numbers of online shoppers.One victim of the online shopping boom is the UK high street. The average spending per person on the high street is only £197. 70% of Internet users who are now buying their Christmas gifts online.参考范文：This year, people are doing Christmas shopping online at home rather than leave their homes for cheaper goods and more convenience.(要点1) With increasing popularity of online shopping, women spend more than men.(要点2) Although safety is a major concern for shopping online,still more and more people choose to shop online.(要点3) With the pressure from widespread online shopping, traditional shops in the UK high street began their sales promotion earlier this Christmas.(要点4)分析过程：一、试题详解1.核心内容本文是一篇说明文,共分五段。
2020上海高考概要写作summary writing110篇
Exercise 1With only two weeks to go before Christmas, buying presents is a high priority for a lot ofpeople. However, this year not so many people are leaving their homes to go shopping. Thesedays lots of people can do their shopping in the comfort of their own home with the help of theInternet.Online shopping is becoming more and more popular for a number of reasons: prices are oftenlower online; you don't have to queue up in busy shops and you can buy almost any productimaginable with just a few clicks of your mouse.Both male and female are buying into the trend, but women are expected to do more shoppingon the Internet than men. It seems women are now more attracted to the convenience of onlineshopping than they used to be. Average spending online this Christmas by women will rise to￡240 (3.360 yuan) compared to the slightly lower average of ￡233 (3,262 yuan) for men.In the past a lot of people were reluctant to shop online. Many were worried about the securityof entering their card details on the Internet and the reliability of the Internet but as shoppingonline has become more widespread, these worries have begun to disappear. 45% of Internetusers still do have security worries but it hasn't slowed down the ever-increasing numbers ofonline shoppers.One victim of the online shopping boom is the UK high street. The average spending perperson on the high street is only ￡197. 70% of Internet users who are now buying theirChristmas gifts online.参考范文：This year, people are doing Christmas shopping online at home rather than leave their homesfor cheaper goods and more convenience.(要点1) With increasing popularity of onlineshopping, women spend more than men.(要点2) Although safety is a major concernforshopping online,still more and more people choose to shop online.(要点3) With the pressurefrom widespread online shopping, traditional shops in the UK high street began their salespromotion earlier this Christmas.(要点4)分析过程：一、试题详解．1.核心内容本文是一篇说明文,共分五段。
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Exercise 1A father’s relationship to his child’s current and future academic success and the level of his or her development in academic potential and scholastic achievement are both factors with some rather interesting implications that educators are beginning to study. As a matter of fact, “life with father” has been discovered to be a very important factor in determining a child’s progress or lack of progress in school.A recent survey of over 16,000 children made by the National Child Development Study in London revealed that children whose fathers came to school conferences and accompanied their children on outings did better in school than those children whose fathers were not involved in those activities. The study, which monitored children born during a week in March, 1992，from the time of their birth through the years of their early schooling, further revealed that the children of actively involved fathers scored much higher in reading and math than those children whose only involved parent was the mother. The purpose of the study was to evaluate the role played by fathers in the raising of a child. It indicated a much higher level of parental involvement by the father than had been anticipated. Over 66% of the fathers were said to have played a major role in parental responsibility.The study also suggested that the greatest level of parenting took place in the families of only child. As the number of children and financial expenses increases, the father’s apparent interest and involvement with the children decreased. However, no matter what the size or financial condition of the family，a father’s active participation in the child’s development made a definite difference in the child’s progress.The study further revealed that while the frequency of overnight absences reflected a corresponding deficiency of the child’s level in math and reading, a father’s employment on night shifts appeared to have little effect on the child’s academic progress. The information evaluating the level of the father’s parenting performance was taken primarily from the admittedly subjective observations of their wives.参考答案：A recent study discovered that a father^ influence played a significant role in the level of the child’s academic progress.(要点1) As is suggested, the father’s involvement with children was affected by the size of the family and its financial expenses.(要点2) So children who tended to progress academically were those only children.(要点3) Moreover, a father’s frequent overnight absence had a bad effect on the child’s progress.(要点4)分析过程：试题详解1.核心内容本文是一篇说明文，共四段。
第一段讲的是父亲与孩子当前和今后学业成功与孩子学术潜力的发展程度这两个因素有着有趣的关系，教育者们正开始对它们进行研究和评价。
第二段讲的是该研究表明父亲参加家长会并陪同郊游的孩子在学校的表现要比父亲不参加这些活动的孩子好。
第三段讲的是研究还表明父亲对孩子活动的参与与家中孩子的多少和家庭财务有关。
最后一段指出，父亲经常夜不归宿也会对孩子的学业带来不好的影响，除非是因为父亲上夜班。
2.写作思路找主题句，概括段落大意。
找主题句、概括段落大意能帮助学生理清文章脉络，以便找出文章的要点。
第一段的主题句是最后一句“As a matter of fact, ‘life with father，has been discovered to be a very important factor in determining a child’s progress or lack of progress in school. ”。
事实上这也是本文所提出的观点。
第二段的主题句是段落的第一句。
该段以近期的一个调查所得出的数据来论述父亲对孩子学业发展的影响。
第三、四段的主题句都是该段第一句。
内容仍是调查的另外两个结果。
这两个方面分别用“also suggested”和“further revealed”来表述调查内容。
确定表达要点。
本文的概要把第一段的末句作为一个要点，因为它是全文的主要观点，也是文章的起点。
在确定表达要点后要思考如何准确地表达，这是难点。
因为评分标准要求学生用自己的语言组织，因此学生需要灵活地表达以对原文的语言进行替换。
范文解析：范文结合第一、二段的内容，用一句话来表述文章的观点，即要点1。
要点2和3是因果关系，是第三段的内容。
再从“revealed, also suggested, further revealed”三词可以看出第三、四段与第二段是并列关系，同是调查的结果。
所以用moreover连接要点4。
这样概要的内容全面而且能避免重复。
归纳总结：语义转换因为概要写作要求学生用自己的语言组织内容，因此语义转换是概要写作中很重要的一项基本技能。
例如范文中我们将“a very important factor”替换为“played a significant role”。
第三段“greatest level of parenting took place in the families of only child ” 用“ children who tended to progress academically were those only children”替换。
最后一个要点用“had a bad effect on”来表达夜不归宿的父亲对孩子会有影响这个概念。
要点整合本说明文的主题句即要说明的一个观点一一父亲对孩子学业成就有影响。
支撑句是对这个观点的分述，即第二、三、四段调查的结果对第一段提出的观点的分述。
要点1就是对第一、二段内容的整合。
第三段提到父亲对孩子活动的参与与家中孩子的多少和家庭财务有关，而父亲的参与对孩子学业有影响，因此将要点2和3用因果关系连接起来。
Exercise 2Taxes may well be discussed by your parents or government officials, but they are by no means only relevant to adults. You may not know it, but you are also paying them. For example, if you buy a movie ticket, 5 percent of your money goes to the government.Taxes are fees charged by the government for a product, income, or activity. People around the world have to pay all kinds of taxes. In fact, the government takes taxes out of every paycheck(收人）people receive.In China, people have to pay income tax if they earn over 3, 500 yuan per month. The government takes taxes out of their paychecks every month. Working people in China can ask for a receipt at local taxation bureaus(税务局）for the income tax they have paid.Sales taxes are taxes that you have to pay when you buy things at a store. You get an invoice(发票）to prove that you have paid the tax.Taxes are also part of owning homes or businesses. People who own buildings pay taxes on the land that the buildings occupy. Taxes are taken from gifts and awards, too. If you win the lottery, you pay taxes on what you receive.What is the money used for?Taxes are used to pay for government expenditures (开支）)Last year, about 85 percent of government income in China came from taxing enterprises and individuals.The money collected pays for things that benefit everybody in the country. Taxes are used to build roads and pay the salaries of police officers, firefighters, and public school teachers.Last year, the central government spent about 2.3 trillion yuan on education and about 1 trillion on public health care, according to People's Daily.Your tuition fees in elementary school and junior high school are also paid by the government. In this sense, your education is supported by taxes.参考答案：Nearly everyone pays fees to the government for products, incomes or activities. The fees are called taxes.(要点1) In China people have to pay income taxes，sales taxes，land taxes, and more.(要点2) Taxes are used by the government to benefit everybody in the country, including building roads，paying salaries of civil servants，health care and schools.(要点3)分析过程试题详解核心内容本文是一篇说明文，全文共分十段。