浙江新高考英语作文命题分析PPT课件
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2024高考英语新课标I作文部分解析+课件-2025届高三上学期英语作文复习专项
Step 1: 仔细审题，明确续写要求 注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式 在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
Paragraph 2 Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
书
本写作任
面
务要求考生写一 Step 1: 认真审题
表 达
封邮件和外国朋 友分享自己的户 外美术课经历，
Step 2: 构思结构 Step 3: 写作要点
属于半开放性作 Step 4: 润色成文
文。
Step 1: 认真审题 文体：邮件
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封 邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：（1）你完成的作品；（2）你的感想。注意：（1）写 作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如时下态格：式一在般答过题去纸时的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
Yours, Li Hua
Step 2: 构思结构
Para.1 Para.2
写邮件的目的
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
I hope you will appreciate my work and that we can enjoy a similar painting experience together.
浙江新高考作文续写公开课 ppt课件
• 3.Although Laurie wanted to win very much, when she found Jinny's tape, ______________________________.
didn't let the desire to win get the better of her and returned it to Jinny
6
Make it a one-sentence story!
• 1.Framton wanted to clam his nerves in Mrs Samptons' house, only to
_b_e__m__a_d_e__lo__s_e_h_i_s_n__e_r_v_e_s_b_y__a__li_t_tl_e__m_i_s_c.hievous girl
To continue a story
续写 之 如何构思
1
What is a STORY /Why do we make STORIES?
•A story is to entertian, to amuse, to educate, to enlighten. •Basically, a story is to deliver a piece of mind to us. •So, how to deliver it well?
• 2.Matilda put on the necklace and looked foward to the coming of the party. Her dream was ______________________________.
to become the queen of the party of the upper class
didn't let the desire to win get the better of her and returned it to Jinny
6
Make it a one-sentence story!
• 1.Framton wanted to clam his nerves in Mrs Samptons' house, only to
_b_e__m__a_d_e__lo__s_e_h_i_s_n__e_r_v_e_s_b_y__a__li_t_tl_e__m_i_s_c.hievous girl
To continue a story
续写 之 如何构思
1
What is a STORY /Why do we make STORIES?
•A story is to entertian, to amuse, to educate, to enlighten. •Basically, a story is to deliver a piece of mind to us. •So, how to deliver it well?
• 2.Matilda put on the necklace and looked foward to the coming of the party. Her dream was ______________________________.
to become the queen of the party of the upper class
2024届高考英语作文说课课件
Old And New 人与自然（自然环境、遗产保护） Book4 Life In The Future（人与社会 社会进步、人类文明） Traffic Jam（人与社会 社会热点） Body Language And Non-verbal Communication（人与 社会 良好的人际关系和社会交往） reat Scientists（人与社会 对社会有突出贡献的人物） A Trip Along The Three Gorges（人与自然 自然环境、遗 产保护） Unexplained Mysteries Of The Natural World（人与自然 地球与宇宙奥秘探索） Book5 British And American English（人与自我 语言学习的规律、 方法） A Job Worth Doing（人与自我 未来职业发展趋势、未来 规划） Adventure In Literature And The Cinema（人与社会 小说、 文学名著） Carnival （人与社会 不同民族文化习俗和传统节日） The Great Sports Personality （人与社会 体育活动、体育 精神） Animals In Danger.（人与自然）
➢ [2020年全国卷Ⅱ] 上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语 角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括： 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受
➢ [2020年全国卷Ⅲ] 假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。 给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括： 1. 剧情简介； 2. 指导内容； 3. 商定时间地点。
➢ [2023•1月浙江卷] 上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物” 活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动的过程； 2. 收获与感想。
浙江新高考英语作文命题分析 PPT课件(共13张)
读后续写型作文命题分析
二、对学生能力的要求 与应用文不同，故事续写型文章除了要求学生掌握丰 富的词汇和句式外，还注重学生的内容构思和情节衔接的 能力。 三、教师教学准备 一阶段：增加故事型完形和阅读的赏析和段落背诵 （情节设置衔接、动词的用法、动作的描述）适当增加新 概念故事类文章的讲解和背诵 二阶段：设定主题类继续段落的演练（加强词汇句型 的准确熟练运用；加强情节衔接的顺畅） 三阶段：故事续写类主题文章的大范围练习
读后续写型作文样题
The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm. It was from the bank. There had been a robbery （抢劫）！ Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shoutsof people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?” But everyone had a different answer. Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” He thought. “The suitcase! She thinks I’m the bank thief!” Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he stared to run.
读后续写：另类英雄(2022年1月浙江英语首考真题)分析课件 2023届高考英语作文备考
Ending
?
Develop the plot
Para.1: We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.
1. Did I have the same feeling when we met?(Feeling) 2. How did we draw up our plans?(Action) 3. What dialogue would we have?(Dialogue)
Para.1 We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________
When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades—the exact opposite of me. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short/dead突然停止 ( 说话 、 行动等 ) because I didn’t want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out临阵退缩. I decided to stick to it no matter what.
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Develop the plot
Para.1: We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.
1. Did I have the same feeling when we met?(Feeling) 2. How did we draw up our plans?(Action) 3. What dialogue would we have?(Dialogue)
Para.1 We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________
When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades—the exact opposite of me. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short/dead突然停止 ( 说话 、 行动等 ) because I didn’t want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out临阵退缩. I decided to stick to it no matter what.
人教版新课标浙江省新题型概要写作公开课课件(共11张PPT)
Why?
Why will I always remember the ‘lost and found’ Christmas gifts?
Title? The ‘lost and found’ Christmas Gifts
Write a symmary according to the key words.
sister thoughtmwonethhsaadgolost forever suddenly
I
rae_as_cpa_rp_f_e_a_r_e_dthiant oI’udr_'l_loi_svt_e'_s_.___at school
my mother my father
a _p_a_ir_o_f_s_t_o_c_ki_n_g_s_ that had _g_o_n_e__m_is_s_in_g____ from her closet months
பைடு நூலகம்
Para2.
Q:what did I expect the Christmas to be at first?
It was Christmas Eve of that year. A friend had kindly donated a Christmas tree, but there were no presents under it because we didn’t have the money to buy them. I went to bed that night with a heavy heart. I was expecting it to be the worst Christmas of my life. Instead, it turned out to be the best.
Why will I always remember the ‘lost and found’ Christmas gifts?
Title? The ‘lost and found’ Christmas Gifts
Write a symmary according to the key words.
sister thoughtmwonethhsaadgolost forever suddenly
I
rae_as_cpa_rp_f_e_a_r_e_dthiant oI’udr_'l_loi_svt_e'_s_.___at school
my mother my father
a _p_a_ir_o_f_s_t_o_c_ki_n_g_s_ that had _g_o_n_e__m_is_s_in_g____ from her closet months
பைடு நூலகம்
Para2.
Q:what did I expect the Christmas to be at first?
It was Christmas Eve of that year. A friend had kindly donated a Christmas tree, but there were no presents under it because we didn’t have the money to buy them. I went to bed that night with a heavy heart. I was expecting it to be the worst Christmas of my life. Instead, it turned out to be the best.
浙江高考英语应用文试题解析.ppt
How to combine the information?
On the theme of “First impression on China”, the competition is scheduled to be launched in the school auditorium at 6 p.m.on January 17th.
2020年1月浙江高考 英语应用文试题解析
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Part One
试题解读
试题回顾
假如你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请 给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括： 1. 比赛时间； 2. 演讲话题； 3. 报名方式。 注意： 1. 词数80左右 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
So if you’re interested, please sign up for it on the school website(file your application via Chinesecontest @)before January 15th. Tip3: 根据过往经历和生活经验，从读者视角出发，适当增加必要的细 节。
judge of the English Speech Contest to be held next Friday in our auditorium/school hall.
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last about two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Doing things right or doing right things”. With your attendance and precious comments, it is bound to be a great success. It couldn't be better if you could offer us some valuable advice on learning English at the end of the activity.
2023年英语浙江卷一月高考写作部分解析课件-2023届高三英语二轮复习
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
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I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
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02 历年高考英语读后续写真题分析 2023 试题分析
读故事
梗概 故事讲述了主人公“我”发现一个废弃房子里面有一只蜂鸟被蜘蛛 网困住了。“我”把蜂鸟救了出来。在“我”要离开时，这只蜂鸟停 在了我的面前，似乎在和我告别。 主题：人与自然——讲述了人与动物之间的趣事，体现了人与自然 和谐相处。 视角：第一人称
Undoubtedly, it was a valuable and enriching experience,which deserves a five-star remark.
定语从句的灵活运用
应 用 文
Practical Writing
你们学校上周末组织了一次生态旅游(ecotravel)，基于此活动你校英文报Youth正在举办 以“An impressive eco-travel”为主题的征文 活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
创作构思
Genre（style）：news report Person：the first person & the third person Language features:objective and authentic Structure：para 1 key imformation
para 2 the process (in details) para 3 the feelings
answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
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2、题型特点 应用文的写作文体是浙江省出现的新的写作题型，要
求写出80字左右的文章，可适当添加细节。 3、对学生能力的要求
应用文相对于之前高考中的议论文、记叙文，更要求 应用性、规范性、简明性。这要求学生对各个文体尤其是 邮件和信件格式的熟悉掌握，且需注意应用文所要求的语 言表达与议论文、记叙文的区别。因此我们会着重培养学 生的格式熟悉度以及相关重要句式的表达。
浙江新高考 英语作文解读
写作（共两节，满分40分）
2021
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第一节应用文写作（满分15分）
你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括： 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游； 2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往； 3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。 注意： 1.词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________ ______
________________________________________________________ ______
_________________________________________________________ _____
_________________________________________________________ _____
Yours, Joe
2021
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应用文命题分析
1、题目要求 满分15分，占整张试卷比重的十分之一。
2021
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读后续写型作文样题注意：ຫໍສະໝຸດ 1，所需写短文的词数应为150左右
2，应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。
3，续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
As he was running, Arthur heard the young man
shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”
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第二节
读 后 续 写 （ 满 分 25 分 ） 或 概 要 写 作 （ 满 分 25 分 ） （ 两 种 形 式 在 不 同考次不定期交替使用）
2021
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读后续写型作文样题
National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like you’ve got a problem.” Arthur said.
2021
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读后续写型作文样题
The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm. It was from the bank. There had been a robbery （抢劫）！
“I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’ t start my car.”
“Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked. The young manlooked at the two suitcasesin the back seatand then said, “Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi. “No trouble at all. I’d be glad to help.”
Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shoutsof people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?” But everyone had a different answer. Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” He thought. “The suitcase! She thinks I’m the bank thief!” Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he stared to run.
求写出80字左右的文章，可适当添加细节。 3、对学生能力的要求
应用文相对于之前高考中的议论文、记叙文，更要求 应用性、规范性、简明性。这要求学生对各个文体尤其是 邮件和信件格式的熟悉掌握，且需注意应用文所要求的语 言表达与议论文、记叙文的区别。因此我们会着重培养学 生的格式熟悉度以及相关重要句式的表达。
浙江新高考 英语作文解读
写作（共两节，满分40分）
2021
1
第一节应用文写作（满分15分）
你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括： 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游； 2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往； 3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。 注意： 1.词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________ ______
________________________________________________________ ______
_________________________________________________________ _____
_________________________________________________________ _____
Yours, Joe
2021
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应用文命题分析
1、题目要求 满分15分，占整张试卷比重的十分之一。
2021
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读后续写型作文样题注意：ຫໍສະໝຸດ 1，所需写短文的词数应为150左右
2，应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。
3，续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
As he was running, Arthur heard the young man
shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”
2021
3
第二节
读 后 续 写 （ 满 分 25 分 ） 或 概 要 写 作 （ 满 分 25 分 ） （ 两 种 形 式 在 不 同考次不定期交替使用）
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读后续写型作文样题
National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like you’ve got a problem.” Arthur said.
2021
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读后续写型作文样题
The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm. It was from the bank. There had been a robbery （抢劫）！
“I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’ t start my car.”
“Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked. The young manlooked at the two suitcasesin the back seatand then said, “Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi. “No trouble at all. I’d be glad to help.”
Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shoutsof people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?” But everyone had a different answer. Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” He thought. “The suitcase! She thinks I’m the bank thief!” Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he stared to run.