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Sadly, however, there is another side to the picture. The creativity of science has been employed in
Para 4. doing damage to mankind. The application of science and technology to the development and
Para 3. The continuation of such activities in the twenty-first century will result in even greater advantages
to human beings: in pure science-a wider and deeper knowledge in all fields of learning; in applied science-a more reasonable sharing of material benefits, and better protection of the environment.
Scientific research in physics and biology has vastly broadened our views. It has given us a deeper
Para 2. knowledge of the structure of matter and of the universe; it has brought us a better understanding of
for the worse; changes that brought a lot of benefits to human beings, changes that put man in danger. Many things caused the changes, but, in my opinion, the most important was the progress in science.
Para 4. doing damage to mankind. The application of science and technology to the development and
Para 3. The continuation of such activities in the twenty-first century will result in even greater advantages
to human beings: in pure science-a wider and deeper knowledge in all fields of learning; in applied science-a more reasonable sharing of material benefits, and better protection of the environment.
Scientific research in physics and biology has vastly broadened our views. It has given us a deeper
Para 2. knowledge of the structure of matter and of the universe; it has brought us a better understanding of
for the worse; changes that brought a lot of benefits to human beings, changes that put man in danger. Many things caused the changes, but, in my opinion, the most important was the progress in science.
高一英语新人教版(2019)必修第二册英语概要写作Summary Writing3课件
transports roughly 25 million young people to school and home again after the school day ends. Meanwhile, it is the safest method for
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spaced seats and energy-absorbing seats.
Q1:Find out the first reason.
Q2:What's the function of the rest sentences?
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.2
safest method for getting kids to and from school, according to the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA). Children are 70 times more likely to arrive at school safely on the school bus than if they had traveled to school driving themselves or riding with friends. • ②These school buses meet more of the nation's motor vehicle safety standards than any other vehicles on the road. Also, several new technologies available today are making school buses even safer, such as video cameras on the
getting kidTsiptos1a:n要d fr点om提s取ch—ool—, a注cco意rd句ing子to关th系e 和Na信tio号na词l H句ighway
spaced seats and energy-absorbing seats.
Q1:Find out the first reason.
Q2:What's the function of the rest sentences?
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.2
safest method for getting kids to and from school, according to the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA). Children are 70 times more likely to arrive at school safely on the school bus than if they had traveled to school driving themselves or riding with friends. • ②These school buses meet more of the nation's motor vehicle safety standards than any other vehicles on the road. Also, several new technologies available today are making school buses even safer, such as video cameras on the
最新高考作文概要写作Summary-Writing(必修三第四单元课文)精品ppt课件
Para 3-water
Topic Sentence: Water made life develop possibly
Tips: 补充说明第二段水的作用，可以作为次要点 放在第三段结合处理。
Para 4
Topic Sentence: None points:plants in water, shellfish, fish, plants on land land animals, forest, reptiles,dinosaurs,mammals.
It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.
读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、 体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章 的主要内容和观点。
not look after the earth well. the earth may be too hot to liveon , whether ...depend on
Main idea: Fianlly, Humans rule the earth but the time of their existence is uncertain.
高考作文概要写作SummaryWriting(必修三第四单元课文)
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What is a summary?
A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details 《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》
Unit 4 Astronomy: the science of the stars
【公开课课件】高中英语概要写作：Summary Writing
Summary Writing
By the end of this period, you will be able to:
1. be clear about the steps of writing a summary; 2. know how to get the topic sentence; 3. write a summary by using some techniques.
“things” rather than protective habitats. Zoos teach people that it is acceptable to keep animals bored, lonely, and far from their natural bones.
Zoos claim to educate people and save endangered species, but visitors leave zoos without having learned anything meaningful about the animals’natural behavior, intelligence, or beauty. Zoos keep animals in small spaces or cages, and most signs only mention the species’ name, diet, and natural range. The animals’ normal behavior is seldom noticed because zoos don’t usuallБайду номын сангаас take care of the animals’natural needs.
By the end of this period, you will be able to:
1. be clear about the steps of writing a summary; 2. know how to get the topic sentence; 3. write a summary by using some techniques.
“things” rather than protective habitats. Zoos teach people that it is acceptable to keep animals bored, lonely, and far from their natural bones.
Zoos claim to educate people and save endangered species, but visitors leave zoos without having learned anything meaningful about the animals’natural behavior, intelligence, or beauty. Zoos keep animals in small spaces or cages, and most signs only mention the species’ name, diet, and natural range. The animals’ normal behavior is seldom noticed because zoos don’t usuallБайду номын сангаас take care of the animals’natural needs.
浙江新高考之概要写作summarywriting省公开课金奖全国赛课一等奖微课获奖PPT课件
To research whether such a “sixth sense” really exists, Robert Baker, …
there is really a sixth sense
Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the information.
20/40
• … there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
have, exist, S+V+P
changing
opinions， viewpoints
✓People have changing opinions toward dirt over time.
10/40
2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away day dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替详细词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
描写某事物性质功用。即“对
√ 说明文
象+性质功用+利好”； 针对某个问题提出处理方法或
exposition 方法。即“问题+处理方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。
√ 议论文
即“现象+原因+结果”
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
7/40
there is really a sixth sense
Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the information.
20/40
• … there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
have, exist, S+V+P
changing
opinions， viewpoints
✓People have changing opinions toward dirt over time.
10/40
2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away day dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替详细词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
描写某事物性质功用。即“对
√ 说明文
象+性质功用+利好”； 针对某个问题提出处理方法或
exposition 方法。即“问题+处理方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。
√ 议论文
即“现象+原因+结果”
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
7/40
高中英语Summary Writing公开课精品PPT课件
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➢What is the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Aa rtygpuemofewnrtiatitnigotno 议inf论orm文or explain…
Mini-dictionary
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Summary Writing
In order to leave a good impression on you, I have been puzzled about what to wear and which color to wear this morning.
Summary Writing
and for various types of treatments when we are ill.
Some people even believe that the blind can benefit
from the ‘vibrations’ that color gives off.
Specific example
➢ Find out the topic sentence of Para.3.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Examples Meaning
➢What is the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Aa rtygpuemofewnrtiatitnigotno 议inf论orm文or explain…
Mini-dictionary
specific age groups. They often use red to attract yRouednger people Ptootwheirr products, for example, as OigtroailsdnvgaiebnrdannaCtvoaymn,dwmmhuiocnrhiecoayltodiueortnhcfuuslttohmaenrcsosleoerms ltikoe
Summary Writing
In order to leave a good impression on you, I have been puzzled about what to wear and which color to wear this morning.
Summary Writing
and for various types of treatments when we are ill.
Some people even believe that the blind can benefit
from the ‘vibrations’ that color gives off.
Specific example
➢ Find out the topic sentence of Para.3.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Examples Meaning
高考英语作文：“概要写作(summary writing)”初探课件(共18张)
议论文 文章论点 （1句）
拓展句
解释/分述 （2-3句）
论据 （2-3句）
概要形式
主题句 +
若干拓展句 +
总结
高考英语作文：“概要写作(summary writing)”初探课件（共18张）
高考英语作文：“概要写作(summary writing)”初探课件（共18张）
2: 利用关键句/关键词概括主旨 情况一:有主题句---段首，段中，段末 情况二:无主题句---定位、提取和整合分散在原文 中的关键词对主旨进行概括
高考英语作文：“概要写作(summary writing)”初探课件（共18张）
高考英语作文：“概要写作(summary writing)”初探课件（共18张）
二、简洁性： 能简则简，避免繁复。概要写作是一种对原文 “浓缩”后产生的新语篇，通过删除细节，减少例 证，简化描述以及去除重复来实现语言的简洁 性，但是简洁的同时还要做到意义的完整。
切记 概要写作不分段!!!
高考英语作文：“概要写作(summary writing)”初探课件（共18张）
高考英语作文：“概要写作(summary writing)”初探课件（共18张）
1: 判断文章体裁
描写类 叙事类
文章体裁 主题句句 体裁
说明类 议论类 指导类
说明文
说明的观点/ 对象/现象 （1句）
并：将几个独立的句子合并为一个并列句或复合句，如 带同位语、定语从句、状语从句、分词短语的复合句。
高考英语作文：“概要写作(summary writing)”初探课件（共18张）
高考英语作文：“概要写作(summary writing)”初探课件（共18张）
1.It can be difficult to figure out what to save and what to toss. It can be ___c_h_a_l_le_n_g_i_n_g___ to figure out what to
高一英语作文概要写作2课件
要求解读
1.
:即用尽量少的语言对较长原文的简洁重述;
2.自主性:即用自己的话语进行概写，避免对原文进行抄袭照搬;
3.理解性:即表现作者对原文本的精准理解。需要注意的是，考生不能对
原文进行解释和评论，也不能掺杂任何个人想法，或做出任何评判，因 此不能出现“I believe"I think"等字句;
But can our clothes really tell people what we are like? Maybe not, but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment. When people see us in the right clothes, they think we are serious about what we are doing. Furthermore, if we are clean, smart and polite, people will have confidence in us.
Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear a uniform. Why? A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies. Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too. If all the students wear uniforms, they can't judge each other because of their clothes. It also avoids arguments about who or what is fashionable.
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Para1 — Para2- 3 — Para 4
Para.1: Find the key words in this part.
When a student cuts class, fails to prepare for class or do homework, or is unable to answer even simple questions about the topic being studied in class, it is clear that the student is not learning well, and teachers may wonder why. One of the causes might be language anxiety. Language anxiety is a fear occurring when a learner is expected to perform in the foreign language. That is, when a student is asked to perform in the target language in class, he is likely to become nervous and fail to do it.
The good news is that so far some research has suggested language anxiety can make students focused, get good grades and build up high selfconfidence. Despite these benefits, most research has also shown a negative relationship between language anxiety and performance. The negative kind of anxiety harms learners' performance in many ways. As time goes by, they will doubt themselves, refuse to join in discussions and try to avoid using the language.
《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》
概要写作：
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文 写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）
词数少于40的和多余80的， 从总分中减去2分
3
Steps to help our writing
Step 1: Read Step 2: Underline key words/Make an outline Step 3: Rewrite the sentences in other ways Step 4: Make the summary coherent Step 5: Check to make the summary better
Expressions for reasons:
because...,because of, account for, as a result of, on account of, due to, owing to, contribute to, lead to
Para.2: Find the key words in this part.
Supporting details of disadvantage
Para.2 How to rewrite/paraphrase
2. What's the structure of the passage?
A. Topic— different opinions— conclusion B. Introduction — detailed information C. Phenomenon(现象)— analysis（分析） — suggestions
Read and write
What can make students feel anxious?ng
1. What's the type of the passage?
A. Narrative
(记叙文)
B. Exposition (说明文)
C. Argumentation (议论文)
Summary writing
概要写作
A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details. 《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》
What is summary?
摘要,是一种对原始文献或文章的基本内容进 行浓缩的语义连贯的短文.
Supporting details of language anxiety
Para.1: How to rewrite/paraphrase
…student is not learning well....one of the causes might be language anxiety … in the foreign language…
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