专业四级写作课件Note-writingPPT课件
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Lecture 3 Note-writing 英语专业写作 教学课件
Mention the sender of the invitation and its purpose in the very first sentence.
State when, where and what for the event is scheduled to take place.
In the block style, every part—heading, greeting, body, closing and signature—begins at the left side of the page as in business letters.
Practice：
You have got two tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band/orchestra. Write a note to your friend, Hilda/Mike, describing briefly what it is and inviting her/him to come with you.
The School of English and International Studies is giving a dinner party to celebrate the Teachers’ Day and the Moon Festival. We would like you to come and meet your old friends and our new faculty members. (sender of the invitation and its purpose)
The party is at 6:00 p.m., Wednesday, the 10th, in Rose Hall, Sir Run Run Shaw Building. (It will be over by 8:30 p.m.) (when, where and what for)
State when, where and what for the event is scheduled to take place.
In the block style, every part—heading, greeting, body, closing and signature—begins at the left side of the page as in business letters.
Practice：
You have got two tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band/orchestra. Write a note to your friend, Hilda/Mike, describing briefly what it is and inviting her/him to come with you.
The School of English and International Studies is giving a dinner party to celebrate the Teachers’ Day and the Moon Festival. We would like you to come and meet your old friends and our new faculty members. (sender of the invitation and its purpose)
The party is at 6:00 p.m., Wednesday, the 10th, in Rose Hall, Sir Run Run Shaw Building. (It will be over by 8:30 p.m.) (when, where and what for)
Lecture 4 Note Writing 1-2010.09.ppt
School of Foreign Languages Zhejiang Ocean University
English Writing Ⅰ
Salutation
• 1. If you are writing to a person you do not know very well, you should begin as follows:
School of Foreign Languages Zhejiang Ocean University
English Writing Ⅰ
• What is the mode of this note? Is it to be read or to be spoken? • It is written to be read in the form of an English letter.
• Teaching Target and Object
• Let us know what features notes have, mainly in terms of format, the semantic elements, the sequences, and the use of language. • Enable us to write short notes in common situations.
School of Foreign Languages Zhejiang n University
English Writing Ⅰ
Some necessary elements in writing each part of a note • Heading: • Heading is usually omitted in informal notes. But in business notes, the date should be added, for the note will be put into a file later. • But we had better write the date on the top right corner without the address of the writer; it is the requirement in the TEM–4.
English Writing Ⅰ
Salutation
• 1. If you are writing to a person you do not know very well, you should begin as follows:
School of Foreign Languages Zhejiang Ocean University
English Writing Ⅰ
• What is the mode of this note? Is it to be read or to be spoken? • It is written to be read in the form of an English letter.
• Teaching Target and Object
• Let us know what features notes have, mainly in terms of format, the semantic elements, the sequences, and the use of language. • Enable us to write short notes in common situations.
School of Foreign Languages Zhejiang n University
English Writing Ⅰ
Some necessary elements in writing each part of a note • Heading: • Heading is usually omitted in informal notes. But in business notes, the date should be added, for the note will be put into a file later. • But we had better write the date on the top right corner without the address of the writer; it is the requirement in the TEM–4.
专业四级写作课件Note-writingPPT教学课件
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Appointments
• July 15
• Larry,
• I have to meet my wife at the airport at 3 p.m. today. Shall we discuss the matter at 10 tomorrow morning? If not, please ring me to make another time – many thanks.
Note-writing
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Notes
• Notes are short letters written for various purposes. Compared with a letter, a note is simpler in form and often informal or colloquial in language.
• Liu
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• May 9
• Dear Prof. Lowell,
• I’d like to discuss with you the outline of my BA thesis. Could you please appoint a time and leave a message for me with Ms. Lin at/in the department office? Thank you.
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Evaluation Standards
• 1. Format (3 points) • Including date, salutation and ending. • 2. Contents (7 points) • Including several pieces of information
2024版四级写作ppt课件
四级写作ppt课件•写作基础知识•四级写作考试概述•写作技能提升方法•四级写作常见误区及应对策略•四级写作模拟训练与点评•四级写作备考建议与注意事项写作基础知识写作在日常生活、学习和工作中具有广泛的应用，如邮件、报告、论文等。
良好的写作能力对于提高个人素质和职业发展具有重要意义。
写作是一种通过文字表达思想、情感和信息的活动。
写作的定义与重要性主题材料结构语言01020304文章的核心思想或主要观点。
支持主题的具体事例、数据等。
文章的组织形式，包括开头、正文和结尾。
表达思想所使用的文字和语言技巧。
确保文章主题明确，避免模棱两可的表达。
保持文章各部分之间的逻辑联系，使读者能够顺畅地理解作者的思路。
确保文章中的观点、材料和语言风格保持一致。
运用多种写作技巧和表达方式，使文章生动有趣。
明确性连贯性一致性丰富性四级写作考试概述采用计算机化考试形式，包括听力、阅读、写作和翻译四个部分。
考试形式写作部分内容写作题材要求考生根据所给题目和提示，在30分钟内完成一篇120-180词的短文写作。
涉及校园生活、社会热点、科技、文化、环保等各个方面。
030201考试形式与内容主要从内容、语言、结构和卷面四个方面进行评分，其中内容和语言占比较大。
评分标准切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本无语言错误。
内容要求使用词汇和语法结构准确、丰富，句子之间连接自然、流畅。
语言要求评分标准与要求常见题型及解题技巧•常见题型：包括提纲式作文、图表式作文、情景式作文等。
解题技巧1. 仔细审题，确定文章主题和要点；2. 列出提纲，构思文章结构；3.注意段落之间的逻辑关系，使用连接词使文章更加连贯；4.多使用高级词汇和句型，提升文章档次；5.注意书写规范，保持卷面整洁。
写作技能提升方法03注意词汇的准确性和多样性在表达相同或相似意思时，尝试使用不同的词汇，以增加文章的多样性和丰富性。
01积极扩大词汇量通过阅读、听力、单词记忆等方式，不断增加自己的词汇量，特别要注意掌握常用词汇和短语。
《英语专四写作》ppt课件
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专四一模 3月22日 下星期二晚上6点 专四二模 4月9日 上午9点半
二模作为基英、写作和听力的期中考试成绩 带好鞋套 学生座位看教室门口张贴表
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CCTV Spring Festival Gala like or dislike cancel or reserve How to improve?
式正确，语言得体。考试时间为10分钟。
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作文评分标准
满分15， 分项可以打0.5分。
1. 思想与表达 2. 语言运用能力 3. 写作规范
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1. 思想与表达（Ideas and Arguments）：
满分为7分，其中1-2分较差，3分一般，4-5分良好，6-7分优秀。
思想内容：（idea & content）
满分6分，其中1-2分为较差，3分一般，4-5分良好，6分为优秀。 准确性(correctness)
语法正确 句子结构正确 固定搭配正确 用词准确 丰富性(richness) 词汇丰富 句子形式多样 得体性(appropriateness) 语气恰当 语言地道 流利度(fluency) 完成规定词数 (超出200过多扣1分。完成规定内容，字数少于170
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这是一篇自由发挥阐述的命题式作文，不限定论点。 要求作者就泛读发表自己的看法。作者可以根据给定的话 题，提出论点，然后再展开论述。
范文从自己作为一个英语专业学生的角度，提出泛读 对我们很重要，它能给我们带来一些好处。
文章提出了四点支持观点的理由，即小分论点。首先， 提出泛读可以帮助我们获取知识，作者用例证进行解释； 其次，提高阅读能力；第三，泛读可以扩大词汇量；最后， 泛读可以帮助我们开阔视野。
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5种题型及模式框架
专四一模 3月22日 下星期二晚上6点 专四二模 4月9日 上午9点半
二模作为基英、写作和听力的期中考试成绩 带好鞋套 学生座位看教室门口张贴表
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CCTV Spring Festival Gala like or dislike cancel or reserve How to improve?
式正确，语言得体。考试时间为10分钟。
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作文评分标准
满分15， 分项可以打0.5分。
1. 思想与表达 2. 语言运用能力 3. 写作规范
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1. 思想与表达（Ideas and Arguments）：
满分为7分，其中1-2分较差，3分一般，4-5分良好，6-7分优秀。
思想内容：（idea & content）
满分6分，其中1-2分为较差，3分一般，4-5分良好，6分为优秀。 准确性(correctness)
语法正确 句子结构正确 固定搭配正确 用词准确 丰富性(richness) 词汇丰富 句子形式多样 得体性(appropriateness) 语气恰当 语言地道 流利度(fluency) 完成规定词数 (超出200过多扣1分。完成规定内容，字数少于170
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这是一篇自由发挥阐述的命题式作文，不限定论点。 要求作者就泛读发表自己的看法。作者可以根据给定的话 题，提出论点，然后再展开论述。
范文从自己作为一个英语专业学生的角度，提出泛读 对我们很重要，它能给我们带来一些好处。
文章提出了四点支持观点的理由，即小分论点。首先， 提出泛读可以帮助我们获取知识，作者用例证进行解释； 其次，提高阅读能力；第三，泛读可以扩大词汇量；最后， 泛读可以帮助我们开阔视野。
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5种题型及模式框架
英语专四作文写作辅导课件
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Use different sentence structures to express oneself, such as simple sentences, compound sentences, and complex sentences, to make the article more diverse and diverse.
Clear logic
The logical relationship between paragraphs should be clear, the content should be coherent, and avoid jumping or confusion.
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Practice in Writing Essays for English Majors IV
Clear expression
The article should be well-organized, with clear viewpoints and coherent logic.
Language norms
Use standard English to avoid colloquialism and slang.
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Ensure sentence grammar is correct and avoid common grammar errors such as subject verb inconsistency, tense errors, etc.
Diverse sentence structures
要点一
要点二
Writing skills guidance
Provide corresponding writing skills and strategies for different types of essay topics to help students better organize the structure and content of the article.
英语四级writing部分写作指导PPT课件
写作模板—提纲式作文
Sample 1 对立观点式
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支 持 原 因 1…They also argue that 支持原因2… However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对理由… An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子… There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the abovementioned positive effects it might bring about, X also may 好处…
Your company slogan
写作模板—辩论式议论文
Sample 3
There is no consensus (共识) of opinions among people about X…Some people are of the view that 观点1…while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观 点 2…As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious. First of all, 论据 1… Furthermore, 论据 2… Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3… A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that 总 结 观 点 …As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心…. 或 From above, we can predict that 预测Your . company slogan
TEM4_写作考试专讲note-writing
TEM4:Note-writing
Requirements Format（２分） 1.Date: 右上角，April
22nd, 2007// 22 April, 2007//Apr. 22, 2007//22/4/2007//4/22/2007//April 22nd//Apr.22
说明：根据考生的思想与表达、语言运用能力和写作规范分别打分。 “思想与表达”满分为7，按考生的表现赋分： 1------2------3------4-----5------6------7 较差 一般 良好 优秀 “语言运用能力” 满分为6，按考生的表现赋分：1------2------3-----4------5------6 较差 一般 良好 优秀 “写作规范”满分为2，按考生的表现赋分：0.5------1------1.5------2 较差 一般 良好 优秀 空白卷、仅写了一些与任务无关的字句、仅仅照抄指导语得0分。分 项分可以有0.5分。
Possible version
June 22, 2010 Dear Jack, I’m glad that you asked for my suggestions with regard to a tour in our city. I strongly recommend you to visit the Great Wall. It’s a must-see for every tourist here. You can take a taxi to Dongzhimen first, and then transfer to a tour bus to the Great Wall. I hope you find my suggestions helpful and wish you a nice tour! Yours sincerely, David
Requirements Format（２分） 1.Date: 右上角，April
22nd, 2007// 22 April, 2007//Apr. 22, 2007//22/4/2007//4/22/2007//April 22nd//Apr.22
说明：根据考生的思想与表达、语言运用能力和写作规范分别打分。 “思想与表达”满分为7，按考生的表现赋分： 1------2------3------4-----5------6------7 较差 一般 良好 优秀 “语言运用能力” 满分为6，按考生的表现赋分：1------2------3-----4------5------6 较差 一般 良好 优秀 “写作规范”满分为2，按考生的表现赋分：0.5------1------1.5------2 较差 一般 良好 优秀 空白卷、仅写了一些与任务无关的字句、仅仅照抄指导语得0分。分 项分可以有0.5分。
Possible version
June 22, 2010 Dear Jack, I’m glad that you asked for my suggestions with regard to a tour in our city. I strongly recommend you to visit the Great Wall. It’s a must-see for every tourist here. You can take a taxi to Dongzhimen first, and then transfer to a tour bus to the Great Wall. I hope you find my suggestions helpful and wish you a nice tour! Yours sincerely, David
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I would like to express my apologies for not showing up at your dinner, because…
I write to make apologies to you for… I want to apologize to you for … With many apologies.
each of which is worth 2 points; • 1 point will be reduced at every two
spelling/grammar mistakes; • 3. Length: 50-60 words (40-80 words)
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Main Types of Notes
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Notes
• Notes are short letters written for various purposes. Compared with a letter, a note is simpler in form and often informal or colloquial in language.
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Informal invitations
• May 10 • Cathy, • We are having tea and moon cakes in
my flat (392) tomorrow night (Thursday) about 8 p.m. • Do come if you are free.
• Yours,
• Wang Hong
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Apologies
• 3rd July
• Jianhua,
• I am terribly sorry I failed to meet you at the school gate yesterday afternoon. I had one of the bike tires punctured on my way, and by the time I had the puncture mended and got to school, you must have given up hope and left. Do please forgive me.
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Sample
• May 9, (2012) • (Dear) Professor Wang, • I’m terribly sorry for not turning up for
the appointment with you yesterday, because I was seriously ill. How about another meeting at 8 a.m. on this Sunday? • Please accept my apologies.
• Liu
2020/10/13
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• May 9
• Dear Prof. Lowell,
• I’d like to discuss with you the outline of my BA thesis. Could you please appoint a time and leave a message for me with Ms. Lin at/in the department office? Thank you.
2020/10/13
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Appointments
• July 15
• Larry,
• I have to meet my wife at the airport at 3 p.m. today. Shall we discuss the matter at 10 tomorrow morning? If not, please ring me to make another time – many thanks.
• 1. Appointment • 2. Apologies • 3. Informal invitations • 4. Thanks/refusal • 5. Congratulations • 6. Encouragement • 7. Requests • 8. Messages • 9. Notice/ advertisement
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Writing Practice (1997)
• You are Peter/ Mary. You had a party at your home recently, but you unintentionally neglected to invite a close friend of yours -- Victoria. Write her a note apologizing for this and explaining how the mistake came about.
• Yours, • Sally
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Date
• May 10th, 2001 • 10th May, 2001 • May 10, 2001 • 10/5/2001 • 5/10/2001
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Ending
• Yours sincerely, • Yours truly, • Yours, • Sincerely (Truly) yours, • Yours respectfully, • Respectfully yours,
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Evaluation Standards
• 1. Format (3 points) • Including date, salutation and ending. • 2. Contents (7 points) • Including several pieces of information
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I would like to express my apologies for not showing up at your dinner, because…
I write to make apologies to you for… I want to apologize to you for … With many apologies.
each of which is worth 2 points; • 1 point will be reduced at every two
spelling/grammar mistakes; • 3. Length: 50-60 words (40-80 words)
2020/10/13
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Main Types of Notes
Note-writຫໍສະໝຸດ ng2020/10/131
Notes
• Notes are short letters written for various purposes. Compared with a letter, a note is simpler in form and often informal or colloquial in language.
2020/10/13
12
Informal invitations
• May 10 • Cathy, • We are having tea and moon cakes in
my flat (392) tomorrow night (Thursday) about 8 p.m. • Do come if you are free.
• Yours,
• Wang Hong
2020/10/13
9
Apologies
• 3rd July
• Jianhua,
• I am terribly sorry I failed to meet you at the school gate yesterday afternoon. I had one of the bike tires punctured on my way, and by the time I had the puncture mended and got to school, you must have given up hope and left. Do please forgive me.
2020/10/13
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Sample
• May 9, (2012) • (Dear) Professor Wang, • I’m terribly sorry for not turning up for
the appointment with you yesterday, because I was seriously ill. How about another meeting at 8 a.m. on this Sunday? • Please accept my apologies.
• Liu
2020/10/13
8
• May 9
• Dear Prof. Lowell,
• I’d like to discuss with you the outline of my BA thesis. Could you please appoint a time and leave a message for me with Ms. Lin at/in the department office? Thank you.
2020/10/13
7
Appointments
• July 15
• Larry,
• I have to meet my wife at the airport at 3 p.m. today. Shall we discuss the matter at 10 tomorrow morning? If not, please ring me to make another time – many thanks.
• 1. Appointment • 2. Apologies • 3. Informal invitations • 4. Thanks/refusal • 5. Congratulations • 6. Encouragement • 7. Requests • 8. Messages • 9. Notice/ advertisement
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Writing Practice (1997)
• You are Peter/ Mary. You had a party at your home recently, but you unintentionally neglected to invite a close friend of yours -- Victoria. Write her a note apologizing for this and explaining how the mistake came about.
• Yours, • Sally
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Date
• May 10th, 2001 • 10th May, 2001 • May 10, 2001 • 10/5/2001 • 5/10/2001
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Ending
• Yours sincerely, • Yours truly, • Yours, • Sincerely (Truly) yours, • Yours respectfully, • Respectfully yours,
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Evaluation Standards
• 1. Format (3 points) • Including date, salutation and ending. • 2. Contents (7 points) • Including several pieces of information