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高中英语外研版必修1 Module4《Writing》省级名师优质课教案比赛获奖教案示范课教案公开课教案
高中英语外研版必修1Module4《Writing》省级名师优质课教案比赛获奖教案示范课教案公开课教案【省级名师教案】1教学目标1、让学生掌握何时用and 何时用but。
(make the students master when to use “and ” as well as when to use “but”)2、让学生掌握如何来描写一个地方。
(make the students master how to write a description of a place)2学情分析写作课的主要目的是让学生会用英文来思维,用英文来表达自己的所想。
这节课时的目的是让学生把在本单元学到的描述地方的句型及短语等用上来描写一个地方,而我们学校的学生绝大多数学生来自于农村,基础差,英语表达能力薄弱,所以写作课一定要从最基础的开始。
3重点难点1、让学生学会使用并列连词来使写作更加的连贯。
(learn to make use of coordinate conjunctions to make their writing more coherent)2、使学生掌握如何来描述一个地方。
(make the students master how to write a description of a place)3、让学生掌握如何通过and 和but 来连贯的描绘一个地方(make the students master how to write a description of a place by using “and ” as well as “but”)4教学过程4.1第一学时教学活动1【导入】课堂导入，引出话题Ask the students to read A lively City again carefully and underline the sentences that contain the c oordinate conjunctions “and”as well as “but”.Sentences:1 It’s been six years since we last saw each other, you know. And this is the first time I’ve visited your hometown.。
公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
高中英语《基于IFOE框架的概要写作教学》公开课精品PPT课件
With so many cultural differences between people, it is _a_m_a_z_in_g__ to have somesi_m_i_la_r_it_ie_s___ in body language, ______ makes it easier for people to understand each other.
Assignment
1. Polish your summary and add it to the “English Corner”. 2. Try to practice the skills about summary writing after class.
One sample
Body language, a useful way to communicate, sometimes can be misunderstood, but some are universal. (要点1) For example, though smiling can be comprehended to hide negative emotions, it is frequently used to convey happiness. (要点2) Besides, there are also some globally understood universal actions, such as frowning, turning one’s back, nodding the head, keeping a certain distance and so on. (要点3) Generally speaking, the similarities of body language makes it easier for people to “read” each other. (要点4) (78words)
Assignment
1. Polish your summary and add it to the “English Corner”. 2. Try to practice the skills about summary writing after class.
One sample
Body language, a useful way to communicate, sometimes can be misunderstood, but some are universal. (要点1) For example, though smiling can be comprehended to hide negative emotions, it is frequently used to convey happiness. (要点2) Besides, there are also some globally understood universal actions, such as frowning, turning one’s back, nodding the head, keeping a certain distance and so on. (要点3) Generally speaking, the similarities of body language makes it easier for people to “read” each other. (要点4) (78words)
高中英语 读后续写微专题公开课
2. 他如此害怕以至于站在那儿一动不动。 He was __so__s_ca_r_e_d__th__a_t _ he stood rooted to the spot.
Sentence pattern 2
1. Happy and excited, we sat together to enjoy a big dinner, wishing everyone a
descriptions more vivid.
Use the 4 sentence patterns in a continuation writing.
Lead-in
Divide words related to emotions into four groups.
Group1
①angry
Group2
happy new year.
——B1U3 改
2. Tired but excited, I have been working on this, selecting his favourite
music.
——B1U3改
句型2: 情绪adj.1+情绪adj.2, 主+谓+宾, doing sth.
(感到)...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2
2. 当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时,我被欣慰(relief)和开心 给淹没了。 (2022全国1卷)
_R__e_li_e_f_a__n_d__d_e_l_ig_h__t_f_lo__o_d_e_d__o_v_e_r__m__e_ when David finally became determined to continue the race.
眼睛因难以置信/惊讶/恐惧而睁大,...
Sentence pattern 2
1. Happy and excited, we sat together to enjoy a big dinner, wishing everyone a
descriptions more vivid.
Use the 4 sentence patterns in a continuation writing.
Lead-in
Divide words related to emotions into four groups.
Group1
①angry
Group2
happy new year.
——B1U3 改
2. Tired but excited, I have been working on this, selecting his favourite
music.
——B1U3改
句型2: 情绪adj.1+情绪adj.2, 主+谓+宾, doing sth.
(感到)...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2
2. 当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时,我被欣慰(relief)和开心 给淹没了。 (2022全国1卷)
_R__e_li_e_f_a__n_d__d_e_l_ig_h__t_f_lo__o_d_e_d__o_v_e_r__m__e_ when David finally became determined to continue the race.
眼睛因难以置信/惊讶/恐惧而睁大,...
高中英语作文—求助信写作共PPTPPT优质公开课
Signature
六.写作训练 假设你是高中生李华，就读于光明中
学。你在英语学习中遇到了很多问题， 希望得到你的外教Miss Bruce的帮助。 请给Miss Bruce写一封信。内容包括 以下要点：
课文中生词太多，难记； 课文太长，难背； 希望Miss Bruce介绍一些英语学习 方法。 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____.
助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 结构的倒装用法使用准确，强调了词典的重要，为本文增加了得分点。
求助信 一任务呈现 假设你是李华，留学期间寄宿在 Mr.Brown家里，回国后你发现你有一 本英语字典落在他家了。请参照以下 要点给Mr.Brown写一封信。内容如下：
一本英语词典忘记带回国,词典是美 国老师送的，非常珍贵；
词典很可能落在卧室的书架上； 邮资自付。
注意： 1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：邮资postage Dear Mr.Brown, _____________________________ ______________________________ ___________________
六.写作训练 假设你是高中生李华，就读于光明中
学。你在英语学习中遇到了很多问题， 希望得到你的外教Miss Bruce的帮助。 请给Miss Bruce写一封信。内容包括 以下要点：
课文中生词太多，难记； 课文太长，难背； 希望Miss Bruce介绍一些英语学习 方法。 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____.
助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 结构的倒装用法使用准确，强调了词典的重要，为本文增加了得分点。
求助信 一任务呈现 假设你是李华，留学期间寄宿在 Mr.Brown家里，回国后你发现你有一 本英语字典落在他家了。请参照以下 要点给Mr.Brown写一封信。内容如下：
一本英语词典忘记带回国,词典是美 国老师送的，非常珍贵；
词典很可能落在卧室的书架上； 邮资自付。
注意： 1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：邮资postage Dear Mr.Brown, _____________________________ ______________________________ ___________________
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
...
talk in English
Brainstorming
read English books
ways to improve English
watch English films
have a good attitude
listen carefully
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
to sum up 观点 in my opinion, as far as I'm concerned, from
my perspective
Write a draft(草稿） by groups.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para1：Purposes and Problems
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, ————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
Step1：analyze (审题)
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
在此输入您的封面副标题
chemistry
math physics
English
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信 中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很 苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学 习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；
高中英语《概要写作专练》公开课PPT课件
People’s opinions are divided on the issue of change
Para 1
• People’s opinions are divided on the issue of change.
• People hold different views on change • People differ in their attitudes towards change • Different people hold different attitudes
towards change.
3.Locate the topic sentence
Para 2
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Para 1
• People’s opinions are divided on the issue of change.
• People hold different views on change • People differ in their attitudes towards change • Different people hold different attitudes
towards change.
3.Locate the topic sentence
Para 2
FFrroomm oonnee ppooininttofovfievwie, wpe, oppeleopwlehowahcocepatccehpatngcehsatnhginesk tthhaint k that cchhaannggeess make ththeeirirlifelifme emaneianngifnugl.ful. Firstly, changes create new opportunities, which make us leap forward. A new job, for instance, mighOtmpitreesxeanmptlcehs allenges that push the person to adapt, acquire new knowledge, or add to their skill set. Secondly, a change can represent a break with the past and an old routine which has become boring and predictable. Finally, as well as making life more fun and interesting, new experiences can be good for our physical and mental health. We find that changes can make us experienced and valuable.
公开课-高中英语写作课件
英语写作训练
The essay
What makes a good essay?
A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.
Topic paragraph
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
The paragraph
为了丰富同学们的课外生活，你校英语协会将举办 音乐周活动，其中一项活动为征文比赛。请你根据以下 提示The benefits of listening to music为题写一篇英 语短文参加征文活动：
1.听音乐有助于减轻压力； 2.听音乐能消除烦恼，有助睡眠； 3.听音乐给人灵感，培养创造力。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：灵感inspiration
典型病例
1.单词拼写问题 2.名词的单复数问题 3. 主谓一致问题 4.时态和语态问题 5.代词(主格、宾格)问题
6.Chinglish现象
A Sample Writing(范文欣赏) The benefits of listening to music A large number of people like listening to music.Listening to music is beneficial to us in many ways. To begin with, since stress is the cause of many illnesses, we can reduce the risk of getting these diseases by listening to music that we like.Secondly, listening to music is an effective way to remove worry and it is also helpful to a good night's sleep.In addition, listening to music can provide us with inspiration and help develop our creativity, which will play an important role in our future success. In general, listening to music will make us live better.
The essay
What makes a good essay?
A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.
Topic paragraph
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
The paragraph
为了丰富同学们的课外生活，你校英语协会将举办 音乐周活动，其中一项活动为征文比赛。请你根据以下 提示The benefits of listening to music为题写一篇英 语短文参加征文活动：
1.听音乐有助于减轻压力； 2.听音乐能消除烦恼，有助睡眠； 3.听音乐给人灵感，培养创造力。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：灵感inspiration
典型病例
1.单词拼写问题 2.名词的单复数问题 3. 主谓一致问题 4.时态和语态问题 5.代词(主格、宾格)问题
6.Chinglish现象
A Sample Writing(范文欣赏) The benefits of listening to music A large number of people like listening to music.Listening to music is beneficial to us in many ways. To begin with, since stress is the cause of many illnesses, we can reduce the risk of getting these diseases by listening to music that we like.Secondly, listening to music is an effective way to remove worry and it is also helpful to a good night's sleep.In addition, listening to music can provide us with inspiration and help develop our creativity, which will play an important role in our future success. In general, listening to music will make us live better.
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A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, …
英语书面表达
English Composition Writing
The essay
What makes a good essay?
A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.
Conclusion
Personally,… in conclusion, in brief, From what has been discussed above,
we may draw the conclusion that ... In summary, it is wiser ...
The paragraph
theirtnoepstiscinsterneetseonrcheoles in the rocks. Other
species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ... SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition, … Furthermore, ...
What makes a good paragraph?
A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.
There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee______
Wherever you go in our school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles. A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water. Our school is just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless 因果关系：because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that 递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
Topic statement
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows
表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,