2015年广东高考英语基础写作解题技巧课件：写好长句的技巧
广东省2015高考英语基础写作技能解析
教学课题广东省高考英语基础写作专题一教学目标知识目标：1.了解广东省高考英语写作要求2.熟练掌握基础写作中的调查报告3. 熟练掌握人物地点描写4.掌握提出建议体裁基础写作教学重点与难点掌握使用不同的词汇，句型描写1. 调查报告词汇引入：1. as for how to至于怎样2. update the website更新网站3. 50% of the girls 50%的女生4. next in line接下来; 位居第二5. compared with同……比起来6. communicate with与……交流7. account for/take up占(多少比例)8. be in favor of... 支持/赞成……9. as far as sb. is concerned就某人看来10. have a lot in common有很多共同点11. get along well with... 与……相处融洽12. arouse their interest激发了他们的兴趣13. have a better understanding of更好地了解14. put... in the second place把……放在第二位15. rank the first place / rank first / be in the first place排在第一位相关句式：st week, we did a survey among 2, 600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”.上周我们就“谁是你的偶像”在2, 600人中进行了调查。
2.Recently our League Committee has carried out a survey, whose results are as follows.最近我们团委进行了一次调查, 其结果如下。
3.According to the survey, about half of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble.根据调查结果, 大约一半的学生有困难的时候会去找他们的同学或朋友。
高考英语写作技巧(63张PPT)
有效地使 用了语句 间的连接 成分
上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性
语言地道， 规范
3、拼写和标点是语言 准确性的一个方面， 评分时，应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考 虑。
4、词数少于100和多于 140的，从总分中减去2 分。
5、如书写较差，以至影 响交际，将分数降低一 个档次。
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books. Books are free for the students there.
5. As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure.
6、 定语从句 In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place
where we can find much useful information.
Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him .
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
7、 各种名词性从句 That’s what I should do. We should do a favor to whoever needs help
广东高考英语卷基础写作指导
广东高考英语卷基础写作指导（系列1）第一讲记叙文：如何写人一、写作指导高考英语基础写作中的写人侧重人物的介绍，可以用第一人称(如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称，时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。
写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题：1．人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写，包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。
2．对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。
重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职要重点突出学历、经历，新闻报道要重点突出事迹，介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点，等等。
3．正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。
4．注意运用正确的时态。
描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。
二、常用词语外貌特征：beautiful, big nose, black eyes，fat, good-looking，handsome, healthy, near-sighted，ordinary-looking，pretty，short，strong, tall，thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, etc.性格特点：absent-minded, attractive，bad-tempered，be ready to help others, bright，charming，confident, diligent，friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous，independent, kind, kind-hearted，lazy，narrow-minded, naughty，patient，think of others, smart，talk ative，warm-hearted，wise，etc.出生年龄：a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , d uring his childhood, in one’s fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc.兴趣爱好：be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one’s work, be worried about, do well in his research work, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, look forward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put one’s heart into, take a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc.教育背景：be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test，a master’s degr ee, get on well with one’s lessons, give sb. a passing grade, ，go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a d octor’s degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an active part in classwhen at college, etc.经历事迹：become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneselfto one’s business, do sth with gr eat determination and perseverance, do research into this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one’slife for sth, have a good way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try one’s best to dosth., win the first prize in the competition, win a gold /silver/ bronze medal, etc.他人评价：an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as, his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of the most important persons in the past ten years, consider sb. as a genius, consider sb. as the greatest leader, set a good example for all of us, speak highly of him, etc.参考范文：Dear Manager，I am writing you a letter in order to apply for a position in your company. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981. I studied in Foshan No. 1 Middle School from 1994 - 2000, and then I came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years.I studied computer science, Chinese, maths, English, P.E,and now I am working for a computer company. I like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition.I am waiting for your reply.Thank youYours TruelyLi Hua参考例文：Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang. Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player. He is now one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team for several times. Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shanghai but three years younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in the 110-metre hurdls. He won the first prize in the Athens Olympic Games and broke the world record soon after that. Both of them love music, but Yao Ming likes listening to pop music while Liu Xiang likes singing.参考范文1. Li Ming, the monitor of Class 1 Grade 2, is healthy and lively. She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. When she came to school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language, but with great efforts she made a lot of progress in her English language study. In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Ming is very strict with herself in her work and daily life,and is always ready to help other people.2．请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。
高考英语写作技巧及常用句型PPT文档55页
高考英语写作技巧及常用句型
21、没有人陪你走一辈子，所以你要 适应孤 独，没 有人会 帮你一 辈子， 所以你 要奋斗 一生。 22、当眼泪流尽的时候，留下的应该 是坚强 。 23、要改变命运，首先改变自己。
24、勇气很有理由被当作人类德性之 首，因 为这种 德性保 证了所 有其余 的德性 。--温 斯顿． 丘吉尔 。 25、梯子的梯阶从来不是用来搁脚的 ，它只 是让人 们的脚 放上一 段时间 ，以便 让别一 只脚能 够再往 上登。
广东高考英语基础写作技巧指导
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作步骤：
第1步 审题
1 体裁格式 2 内容 3 人称、时态 4 信息点的整
合和排列
写信 描述高三学生现状。 第一人称。一般现在时。
6项
第2步 整合信息, 译成英语。
1) 每天在校时间约10小时。每天完成作 业时间3～4小时。
Every day we stay at school for about ten hours to have lessons. We spend at least three to four hours doing our homework. 2) 每天几乎没有时间娱乐、消遣。
2、如何做到句式灵活？ 1)并列句 2)复合句
(定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句) 3)强调句型 4)非谓语动词 5)倒装句 6)其他句型及结构
Ex:按要求改写下列句子。
1) English is widely used in the world. Most business letters are written in English. (合并为并列句)
5) (合并为定语从句)
6) July 11, when Zheng He began his famous voyage, has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005.
5) I will not be able to meet you at the airport. I have some experiments to do that day.(合并为状语从句)
a. We hardly have any time for relaxation.
高考英语作文书面表达必备万能公式及写作绝招课件演示文稿
3）因果（so, so, so） 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭 讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然 后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们 总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然 后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的 是先后或因果关系！ The snow began to fall, so we went home. 更多短语： then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗） 4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐） 6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐） 7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐） 8）most important of all, moreover, finally 9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况） 10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）
一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如： 走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room 小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room 小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room 老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room
高考英语写作技巧(精编课件).ppt
般) On his arriving/ arrival, please give….
(高级)
If the weather permits, I’ll come tomorrow. (一
般) Weather permitting, I’ll come tomorrow. (高级)
Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般)
The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English…. (高级精)品课件
9. 使用虚拟语气
The ship didn’t sink because there were the efforts of the captain. (一 B般ut)for the efforts of the captain, the ship would
词汇和语法的数量和准确性；
有用效了地语使句上语言下文的的得连体贯性；
间的连接 成分
精品课件
语言地道， 规范
3、拼写和标点是语言 准确性的一个方面， 评分时，应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考 虑。
精品课件
4、词数少于100和多于 140的，从总分中减去2 分。
5、如书写较差，以至影 响交际，将分数降低一 个档次。
8. 使用定语从句
The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般)
The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of. (高级)
写英语长句的方法
写英语长句的方法篇11.引言：简述写英语长句的重要性2.英语长句的特点3.写英语长句的基本步骤3.1 确定主语和谓语3.2 添加修饰语和补充信息3.3 注意句子逻辑性和连贯性4.常见的英语长句类型及其写法4.1 并列句4.2 复合句4.3 并列复合句5.写英语长句的注意事项5.1 避免冗长和复杂的表达5.2 保持句子清晰易读5.3 多加练习和模仿优秀范文6.结论：总结全文，强调写英语长句的技巧和重要性正文写英语长句是英语学习中的重要一环，对于提高英语表达能力和阅读理解能力具有显著帮助。
本文将介绍写英语长句的基本方法和注意事项。
首先，我们需要了解英语长句的特点。
一般而言，英语长句包含较多的信息和修饰语，结构相对复杂，但同时也更加精确和生动。
因此，学会写英语长句有助于提高语言表达的层次和准确性。
接下来，我们可以按照以下基本步骤来写英语长句：第一步是确定主语和谓语，即句子的核心意思。
第二步是添加修饰语和补充信息，使句子更加具体和生动。
在此过程中，我们需要注意保持句子的逻辑性和连贯性，避免出现语义混乱或歧义。
在英语长句中，常见的类型包括并列句、复合句和并列复合句。
并列句是由两个或以上的简单句通过并列连词连接而成；复合句则包含一个主句和一个或多个从句；并列复合句则是并列和复合的结合。
对于不同类型的长句，我们需要掌握其特定的写法和结构，以便更加自如地运用。
在写英语长句的过程中，我们还需要注意以下几点：首先，避免冗长和复杂的表达，以免使句子显得啰嗦难懂。
其次，要保持句子的清晰易读，确保每个词语在句子中都有其合适的位置和作用。
最后，多加练习和模仿优秀范文是提高写英语长句能力的有效途径。
总之，写英语长句需要掌握一定的技巧和方法，同时需要不断的练习和积累。
篇21.引言：解释为什么需要学习写英语长句2.写英语长句的基本步骤1.明确中心思想2.扩展句子成分3.使用恰当的连接词3.常见的英语长句结构1.并列句2.复合句3.并列复合句4.注意事项：避免冗长和复杂的句子，保持句子的清晰和流畅5.结论：总结写英语长句的重要性，鼓励多读多写正文学习英语的过程中，写作是一项非常重要的技能。
写英语长句的方法
写英语长句的方法
写英语长句的方法可以归纳为以下几点：
1.确定句子主语和谓语：确定句子的主要信息和要表达的动作，通常在句子
的开头部分明确。
2.添加修饰词和短语：为了更准确地表达意思，可以添加形容词、副词、介
词短语、从句等修饰词和短语，以增强句子的具体性和生动性。
3.使用连词：使用并列连词（and、or、but等）和从属连词（if、because、
when等）来连接句子中的不同部分，以使句子更加完整和连贯。
4.注意句子结构：在写作英语长句时，要注意句子的结构，尽量保持句子平
衡，避免头重脚轻或主语与谓语不匹配等情况。
5.校对句子语法：在完成英语长句后，要仔细校对句子语法，确保时态、语
态、主谓一致等方面正确无误。
总之，写好英语长句需要多练习和实践，掌握好语法和词汇，不断提高自己的英语写作水平。
高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT)【优秀课件】
高考英语作文写作技巧（共17张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
• P1 Everyone needs some recreational activities to help them relax after a day's work or study. And there are many recreational activities available to us in today's society. For example, sports fans may choose to play basketball or football. Or one may take a break by watching TV or listening to music.
作文得分技巧
1、 卷面整洁，书写清楚 2、 构思简单，少犯错误 3、 中心突出，层次分明 4、 重在变化，宁简勿烂
议论文写作的基本模式
写作框架如下： 第一段：现象背景介绍+引出话题（公众观
点+大概理由）； 第二段：关于话题的相关因素（影响，作
用，好处，危害或原因等）； 第三段：陈述自己观点或预期未来。
辩论式议论文模版
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the
Model
Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____.
In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____.
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学习成绩：优秀 兴趣爱好：喜欢体育，能歌善舞 英语学习：(1)她刚进校时，遇到不少困难； (2)不怕苦，不怕难，努力把英语学好。 品行评价：严于律己，乐于助人，是大家的 好榜样，父母以她为豪。 【写作要求】只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容。 【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整， 篇章结构连贯。
根据各要点之间的逻辑关系，我们可以将题 中要点分成5组，以便每组用一个句子来表达；在 组句成文中也要考虑各句之间的逻辑关系。 句 1 ：姓名、职务、外貌特征、性格特点、 身体状况、学习成绩 (同位语) 句2：兴趣爱好——喜欢体育，能歌善舞(并 列关系) 句3：英语学习：(1)她刚进校时，遇到不少 困难(转折、时间关系) 句4：英语学习：(2)不怕苦，不怕难，努力 把英语学好(结果)
句5：品行评价(并列、结果关系) 同时，句3和句4之间存在转折或让步关系；句5 和前几句之间存在递进关系。翻译后连句成文： (句1)Li Min, a tall, healthy and active girl, is our monitress who does well in her lessons. (句 2)Not only does she like sports but also she is skilled in singing and dancing. (句3)But when she first came here, it was hard for her to learn English well.
方法2：过去分词短语开头；with介词短语 Born on January 8th, 1983 in Guangzhou City, Guangdong Province, Chen Xiexia is a female weight-lifter with a height of 150 cm and a weight of 47.5 kg. 方法3：as介词短语 As a famous weight-lifter in China, Chen Xiexia was born on January 8th, 1983 in Guangzhou City, Guangdong Province, and is 150 cm in height and 47.5 kg in weight.
结语： 每次写作的内容下次再现的可能性 不大，但同类的内容以及同样的逻辑却篇 篇皆有，找到这个共性，进行针对性的归 纳整理，那么，平时每一次的写作练习就 不仅能帮助巩固我们前段时间的学习，还 能促使我们进一步提高，拿下基础写作， 则指日可待。
5. 基础写作 假设你是学校英语报的撰稿人，需要介绍一位优 秀的考生作为大家学习的好榜样。 【 写 作 内 容 】 请 以 “Li Ming —An Excellent Student”为题，介绍李敏。 姓名：李敏 职务：班长 外貌特征：个子高 性格特点：很活跃 身体状况：良好
写好长句的技巧
基础写作要求考生用 5句话表达全部内 容，因为一篇基础写作题中通常有七八个 信息点，要用五个句子表达出来，就是需 要考生能写好长句。长句的手段一般包括： 使用从句 ( 主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、 同位语从句、定语从句、状语从句 ) 、介词 短语、同位语、非谓语动词、插入语等。 这里着重练习介绍人物、节日及建筑物的 长句写法。
方法2：过去分词短语开头 Regarded as one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals, Qingming Festival takes place on somewhere around April 5th every year. 方法3：as介词短语 As a traditional festival (which is) in honour of our ancestors, Qingming Festival falls on April 4th or 5th every year.
2.用一个句子介绍以下地点。(三种表达) 古迹名称：云冈石窟；地点位置：山西省 大同市；始建时间：北魏时期；评价：举世闻名 的艺术瑰宝。 方法1：同位语+定语(定语从句或短语) The Yungang Caves, one of the most valuable cultural relics in the world built in the Northern Wei Dynasty, are located in Datong, Shanxi Province.
Li Ming, monitor of our class, is tall, healthy and active. 方法2：定语从句 Li Ming, who is tall, healthy and active, is our monitor. 方法3：with介词短语表示伴随状况 Li Ming, our monitor, is a student with a strong body and题 用一句话表达下列信息点。 姓名：李明 职务：班长 外貌特征：个子高 性格特点：很活跃 在介绍人物的身份、外貌和性格特征等时 可用以下方法： 方法1：同位语 Li Ming, (who is) a tall, healthy and active boy, is our monitor.
• (6)(话题：青少年参加电视才艺表演)赞同：① 丰富社会经验。②增强自信。(结果) • Some think that it is a stage to show their talents for art, contributing much to their social experience and self-confidence. • (7)(话题：青少年参加电视才艺表演)不赞同： 模仿多创新少。(对比) • However, other students hold the different idea that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than showing something original.
3.用一个句子介绍以下节日。(三种表达) 名称：清明节；性质：中国传统节日；目 的：纪念祖先；日期：每年四月五日前后。 方法1：同位语+定语(定语从句或短语) Qingming Festival, a traditional festival (which is) in honour of our ancestors, falls on April 4th or 5th every year.
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即学即用 1.用一个句子介绍以下人物。(三种表达) 姓名：陈燮霞；职业：女子举重运动员；身高： 150cm；体重：47.5kg；出生日期：1983年1月8 日；出生地点：广东省广州市。 方法1：同位语+定语(定语从句或短语) Chen Xiexia, a female weight-lifter who was born on January 8th, 1983 in Guangzhou City, Guangdong Province, is 150cm tall and weighs 47.5 kg.
• (4)倡议人们放弃私家车，选用公共汽车、自行 车或步行方式。（对比） • People are encouraged to take public transport， ride bicycles or walk instead of driving private cars. • (5)尽管工作繁忙，人们在清明节还是会带些花 扫墓祭祖。(转折) • Despite the fact that people are busy working, they will clean their ancestors’ graves and decorate them with some flowers.
4.分析信息点之间的逻辑关系，请分别用一个 句子表达以下各组信息。 • (1)(陈燮霞)2007年首次参加世界锦标赛，夺得 女子48公斤级三项冠军。(时间) • When taking part in the World Championship for the first time, she won a total of three championships for the women’s 48 kg class weight-lifting competition.
(句4)Although facing much difficulty, she worked as hard as she could, thus making her English one of the best in my class. (句 5)Besides, Li Min is strict with herself and willing to help others when they are in trouble and because of this, her parents are proud of her and we all like her very much.
方法2：过去分词短语开头 Located in Datong, Shanxi Province ， the Yungang Caves date from the Northern Wei Dynasty and is regarded as one of the most valuable cultural relics in the world. 方法3：as介词短语 As a world-famous cultural relic, the Yungang Caves which are located in Datong, Shanxi Province，can date back to the Northern Wei Dynasty.