高考英语漫画类作文写作指导

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高考英语漫画作文

高考英语漫画作文

二.漫画类先描述图画再发表自己看法范文:简要描述图片,并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。

(一)内容要点:1.描述文字说明:1)学生被迫上很多补习班2)无兴趣可言2.议论文字说明:1)太多的补习班是浪费时间2)学习要有兴趣3)家长不要强迫孩子参加补习4)表达希望(二)One possible version:Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to go to so many training classes besides his school classes. Life is no fun at all for him. Holidays and weekends have become dull work-days. He is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest.In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please don’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect!(三)文章结构和套语:Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to … besides his school classes. Life is …. … have become …. He is …In my opinion, … for many students. They might …when they … what they are learning. Please don’t …what they…, and when learning is fun, surely …1). 开头:Look at this picture.The picture shows that…From this picture, we can see…2).衔接句:1. As we all know, …2. As is well-known, …3. It is well known that…4. In my opinion, …5. As far as I am concerned, …6. This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.3).衔接词1.表示时间顺序:first/ firstly, then, next, after, after that, during, throughout, before, later, while, meanwhile, at present, by now, finally, in the end, at last, at that time, in the past, immediately等。

高中漫画作文写作指导

高中漫画作文写作指导

Useful Sentence Patterns
The phenomenon of …isn’t rare these days. It presents the conflict between…and… The picture is the exact reflection of a common phenomenon in China, which is… This satirical cartoon indicates vividly a kind of common phenomenon among… At first glance, it mocks the…but after some thinking, it’s easy to see that…
3. Give your opinions
Remember: Topic sentences Supporting sentences
Let’s enjoy 2 excellent pieces of writing from your classmates
Ending
To put it in a nutshell, we should pay attention to… All in all, the key to… lies in.... I do hope that… Though our economy is…, we should still bear in mind that… With our joint efforts/As long as…, I am sure that such ….will be eliminated I believe with the …, …will be created… What the picture shows is really worthy of our concern. For both …and …, more emphasis should be laontent

高考英语专题复习之漫画作文写作策略辅导

高考英语专题复习之漫画作文写作策略辅导

高考英语专题复习之漫画作文写作策略辅导【写作思路】漫画作文一般可分为三个步骤,即:1. Describe the drawing briefly2. Explain its intended meaning and give examples (if necessary)3. Give your own comments or opinions各部分常用的表达(一)描述漫画部分(漫画描述用一般现在时):1) From the cartoon we can see that…2) As is vividly shown/indicated in the picture, …3) This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see…4) Look at the picture. It is (a picture) about…(二)论述漫画寓意及所反映的社会现象部分1) What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today’s society./What it illustrates is the problem of …, which is a common phenomenon in today’s society.Apparently, the cartoon reflects a major social problem.2) This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.3) What the cartoon reflects set me thinking a lot.4) After seeing the picture, I was greatly shocked by the phenomenon. In today’s society, …5) This is a ironic (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among…(三)评论与观点、建议与措施部分1) As far as I’m concerned, what we have to do is to make full use of…and also…If we…and…, it will not only…but also…2) We can learn from the picture that…3) Consequently, it is high time that measures should be taken to avoid this phenomenon from happening again.4) Therefore, I am firmly convinced that…5) Let’s call on everybody to…. In the long run, it will have a negative influence on constructing a harmonious society.It is high time we took some measures put an end to this phenomenon.6) From my point of view, something must be done to …Only in this way, can we…/Only if…, can we…7)We should raise people’s awareness of…As is vividly shown in the picture, 图画内容. The picture tells us概括图片大意.The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with, 揭示含义/原因/结果一. In addition, 揭示含义/原因/结果二.From my point of view / As for me, it is high time that we took some measures to deal with the problem. First, we should具体措施一. Second, we must具体措施二. Only in this way can we solve the problem of 图画内容.范例:简要描述图片内容,就图片主题谈谈自己感想参考范文1_______________________( 正如图中生动地描述) ,when a young girl was riding a bike, almost all her family members were around, protecting her in case anything unexpected should happen, which did annoy the girl as she really wanted to manage it herself. It’s a common _________(现象)that parents care too much about their children. The purpose of the picture is to show us that we shouldn’t spoil our kids too much.My reasons are as follows:(首先)__________________, too much love from parents will spoil a child and makes it hard for children to get along well with others because a spoilt child is usually self-centered and unconfident. __________________,(其次) if parents take pains to pave way for their children , chances are that (很有可能) they will be at a loss as to how to deal with a tough problem in future, which will cause them to be eliminated from the fierce competition. ___________________,(最后)overprotection will prevent children from further developing their overall ability, thus having a negative effect on their all –round development.________________, ( 我认为)I don’t think it wise for parents to overprotect their children . _________________ (对家长而言),they ought to give children more space to try, to succeed and even to face up to the failure.And for children, it’s necessary to be independent.__________________ (总之),it’s parents’ duty to show love for their children; however, they should find the balance between holding and letting-go.In this picture we can see a girl learning to ride a bike with her parents and even grand-parents running around her, sweating. Obviously, they intend to protect the child, for fear that she might fall off the get hurt.(简述图片,忽略不重要的细节,只抓住与主题有关的内容)Due to the one-child policy, the only kids in many families are considered as kings or queens. The parents, consciously or unconsciously, have offered too much help and make too many decisions for the kids themselves, which definitely spoil the children. As a result, children become so dependent and incapable that they may find it hard to survive the fierce competition in future. It is also likely that they will have trouble handling future problems on their own.Many measures can be taken to prevent this problem getting more serious, but the following are among the most effective. Firstly, it’s better for parents to provide guidance a s well as opportunities for kids to fall and fail, as they are recognized as an inevitable way to grow up. Secondly, it’s high time that children learned to say no to their parents’ unnecessary protection. At the same time, young as they are, they should make parents believe they are old enough to accumulate practical experience in real life and prepare themselves for the future.(三点建议,句型的变化尤其值得关注)In conclusion, only when kids depend on themselves rather than their parents can they get mature and face everything with confidence and courage in the future.同体裁作文仿写:请简要描述图片,并结合图片内容谈谈自己的想法。

高中英语高考书面表达漫画类写作策略(共22张PPT)

高中英语高考书面表达漫画类写作策略(共22张PPT)

UNDERSTANDING AND RESPECT (TOPIC SENTENCE)
• In my opinion, this social phenomenon should be viewed as normal. Some people tend to be a loner at birth.
• I cling on to the belief that diversity of personality beautifies our society.
UNDERSTANDING AND RESPECT
• to begin with, independence is the ability we are expected to acquire, which brings with it the term “lonliness”. today, more and more people are learning to enjoy the beauty of loneliness, ma it unlikely for them to socialize with people around. moreover, due to the boosting development of social media, people tend to be divided according to common interests rather than places. in other words, we may have many friends far away but no acquaintances around. it is not that people are becoming apathetic(冷漠的), but rather, they are connected in another way.

最新精品 专题07图画类写作 新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板(学案)

最新精品  专题07图画类写作 新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板(学案)

专题07图画类写作-新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板【典题解读1】(2019·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。

你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。

请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述整个过程。

注意:词数不少于60。

提示词:西瓜watermelon______________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【典题解读2】(2013·福建卷)孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题,现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。

请阅读下面的漫画,按要求用英文写一篇短文。

内容要求:1.描述漫画内容;2.分析漫画所揭示的问题;3.提出你的看法。

注意:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯;3.词数120左右;4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇:pave the wayFrom the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.______________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作点拨】图画类作文是材料作文的一种特殊形式,是一种变“画”为文的作文方式。

高中英语真题-漫画类写作指导

高中英语真题-漫画类写作指导

高中英语真题:漫画类写作指导一、观察漫画,确定立意1、由图画到生活(特点:把握漫画的寓意)2、由结果推原因(揭示事件的本质)二、找关键词,关键句1.紧扣漫画主题2.抓住画面有效信息,合理发挥想象3.尽量用一些新颖词汇、句型结构4.确立人称、时态三、结构成篇下面是漫画写作的一些基本方法。

1.描述基本步骤:描述漫画、图表——引出暗含主题——简短解释——过渡参考模板:From the cartoon we can see that_____. What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today''s society, and it conveys the symbolic meaning of_____.According to a recent survey made by professor Wang, head of social department in , 90% of the people across the countr y are suffering from the problem. It is clear that___plays a imp ortant role in our life and work.2.阐明原因基本步骤:引出原因——列举原因——过渡参考模板:What causes the effect? There are at least two possible reaso ns. To begin with,_____. In the second place,_____. There ma y be some other reasons responsible for___, but I think what h as been mentioned above is generally acceptable. Nowadays it is well known that________.3.提出对策基本步骤:引出对策——列举对策——过渡参考模板:We should take immediate measures, for if the present situati on continues as before, serious outcome will come up. First of all, the government should propagandize (宣传)to raise public awareness of_____. In the second place, the go vernment should take effective measures to_____. Finally, ___ __ should be banned by law. This is my pointof view and I am sure my idea is both reasonable and worka ble(可行的).参考模板:1) describe the picture(描述图片)The picture is talking about/shows…The picture shows a common phenomenon.The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing…The picture above is about ……Let’s look at the picture above/first.In the cartoon, we can see…According to my understanding, the picture i s…As we can see in the picture,…As is shown/ described in the picture,…2) interpret its meaning(解释含义)It seems very ridiculous(荒唐的)that…However, this kind of story is performed everywher e.The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…The picture indicates that we…Nowadays, it is a common phe nomenon that…This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenom enon among…The picture reflects a real problem in our daily family life. There are two major reasons for this:…and…What are the reasons for the phenomenon?3) give your opinions about the phenomenon(对于现象发表你的观点)I think/believe that1. To use linking words if necessary(使用连词)表示平行、对等或选择关系and, as well as, together with, not only…but also...表示转折关系but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while表示对比关系on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand ...表示因果关系so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, tha nks to.表示时间、顺序关系first, second …, then, next, finally,for one thing ... for another, in the end,表示递进、强调关系besides, what’s more, in addition, worse still, above all表示解释、说明关系such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so on表示结论in short, in brief, in a word, in general,on the whole, in conclusion2. To use complicated structures if possible (使用复杂句型)例如:People suggest that the conference be put off.→It is suggested that the conference be put off. 被动语态She walked out of the room and many students followed her. →Followed by many students, she walked out of the room非谓语动词To his surprise, the little girl knew so many things.→What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many thin gs. 从句The couple were so curious about wild plants that they decide d to travel to the forest.→So curious were the couple about wild plants that they decid ed to travel to the forest.倒装Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.→It was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began. 强调句Many lives were saved because there were the efforts of firefi ghters.→But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved. 虚拟语气高考英语作文实用性高级词汇及句型1. (支持)Many people are in favor of the plan, believing that …. (反对)Most of them, accounting for 40%, opposed the plan, worri ed/arguing that …/2. People with good health can do work with full energy and th eir excellence in work in turn contributes to their health and ha ppiness.3. …is also a problem. (用语列举或陈述理由) /There exists a problem that …The gas released from/ sent off from vehicles is also a proble m, known as a main source of air pollution.4. ….is a /one’s good choice. =It’s a good choice to do sth.5. There are two factors accounting for this (phenomenon).6. They are burdened with too heavy a learning load, which re sults in their staying up too late at night,and as a result/ in which case, many of them suffer from lack of sleep.7. Getting plenty of exercise makes heart beat faster and lung work harder, thus strengthening the heart and reducing the c hance of heart attack, and helping to lower blood pressure. 8. To make a wise choice of occupations, two important thing s should be taken into consideration. One is the interest, the other, the demand of the people and society.9. It is definitely true that behind every daily activity lies a moti ve. As a matter of fact, we can achieve nothing without a reali stic goal.10. Children often complain that their parents cannot understa nd them, while parents feel sorry that their children seldom sh ow them proper respect and obedience.11. More and more people come to realize the importance of r egular physical exercise.12. Physical exercise increases the circulation of the blood and develop one’s self-confidence, judgment, and a strong will./ Proper sports activiti es help us strengthen our physical body and build our sense of competition and cooperation.13. There is an increasingly loud voice from the public calling for firm action against pollution. / There’s an increasing numb er of ….14. It is universally true that …….15. But the limited land is decreasing at a surprising speed.16. Fortunately, many countries have come to realize the seri ousness of/ become aware of the problem and take active me asures to preserve the environment.17. We sincerely hope that all the people will take part in the c ampaign and join hands to protect the nature.18. There is a great chance that …/ Chances are that …19. It’s a tendency to do sth. / there is a growing tendency of20.The past 30 years have witnessed a boom/an increase/ a change from…to…常用短语be available to sb; tend to think; contribute to/ result in…direct ly or indirectly; …; spare no effort to do sth.;have access to st h; compared with /to; be of vital importance to; raise/ promote/ increase public awareness of….有助于做…:help+ (to) do/ in doing; make it easier/ likely for sb to do; be h elpful/ of help to the doing of sthOpinions concerning the issue vary from person to person. we aken its development; out of the question; people aged 15 an d over; practice our traditions; devote one’s body and soul to doing;come to public attention; cope/ deal with …; among the best ; next to none; bring out the best of us ;treat sb with respect not prejudice; have unpleasant associations with…对…没好感; generation gap代沟;owe their achievements to the formation of good habits in e arly life 把成就归功于早年养成的好习惯develop the problem-solving and communication skills发展沟通和解决问题的能力话题专用词汇benefit from the government’s preferential policies得益于政府的优惠政策;fight/ commit cybercrime; encourage hatred and violence煽动仇恨暴力;slide into addiction逐渐上瘾;drunk driving酒后驾车struggle against our own laziness跟自己的惰性斗争; conse rve natural resources 保护自然资源;if consumed in large quantities 如大量服用;wildlife extinction野生动物灭绝;endangered species濒危物种destruction of ecological balance(the balance of ecosystem)生态系统的破坏;greenhouse effect温室效应;for shortage/ lack of fresh water /water resources 由于淡水/水资源的缺乏;laid-off workers下岗工人population explosion/baby boom人口爆炸;poverty-stricken areas贫困地区;recyclable products可再生产品;shake off poverty and set out on a road to prosperity消除贫困走上富裕之路;resources exhaustion资源枯竭;bad construction projects劣质工程;break intellectual property and copyright laws 违反知识版权法violate traffic regulations违反交通法规;the number one threat to human beings对人类的最大威胁观点类作文1. arouse/set off + a heated discussion2. Opinions are divided on this issue.=Opinions concerning this hot topic vary from person to person .3. Most of them, accounting for 60%, support the plan, fully convinced that …=60% of the people are in favor of this for three reasons.列举理由:For one thing,…For another,…Last but not least,…4. However/On the other hand, others are against it, argu ing that …. =A considerable number of people object to/ oppose/ are oppo sed to + the idea. =Others hold opposite opinions about it.列举理由:In the first place,…In the second place,…Besides/what’s more,…5.Weighing the advantages and disadvantages, I share the vie w of the former.I hold the idea th at…..解决问题类总结性句子漫画类写作指导一、观察漫画,确定立意1、由图画到生活(特点:把握漫画的寓意)2、由结果推原因(揭示事件的本质)二、找关键词,关键句1.紧扣漫画主题2.抓住画面有效信息,合理发挥想象3.尽量用一些新颖词汇、句型结构4.确立人称、时态三、结构成篇下面是漫画写作的一些基本方法。

高考英语图画型作文写作技巧及范文

高考英语图画型作文写作技巧及范文

高考英语图画型作文写作技巧及范文导语:图画型作文更能考察学生的分析问题的才能,因此深受命题者的青睐。

考生应注意认真审题,一旦审题有所偏颇,不容易得到高分。

此类作文首先要描绘图画,然后对图画进展适当的阐释(解释、说明和分析),介绍图画背后所反映的问题,最后联络实际发表自己的观点,给出自己的建议、原因等等,一般写三段。

以下是为大家精心的英语图画型作文写作技巧及范文,欢迎大家参考!1、As can be seen from the chart, …;From thechart/picture /table we can see(The chart shows) that ..;As is vividly shown in the picture( 假设两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的假设两个的话用drawings,假设是图表那么用table ,两个图表那么用 table s) above, 图画的内容。

The picture( 假设两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的假设两个的话用drawings,假设是图表那么用table ,两个图表那么用 table s) tells ( 注意,假设是前面的图画是复数,那么用tell) us that 这个图片的大致反映的意思。

2、 Recent years people in 地名(比方中国、北京、美国等等) have witnessed the fact that 描绘图片里的现象,And it is very mon/usual to see that in recent years.1、The implied meaning of the picture(注意,同上进展单复数的处理) should be taken into aount seriously. First/To begin with, 提醒涵义/原因/结果1,Second/What’s more, 提醒涵义/原因/结果2。

高中英语新高考-英语作文:漫画题的写作思路和技巧指导

高中英语新高考-英语作文:漫画题的写作思路和技巧指导

高中英语新高考-英语作文:漫画题的写作思路和技巧指导请根据你对以下两幅图的理解,以“We Chinese Should Carry Forward Traditional Chinese Culture”为题,用英语写一篇作文。

你的作文应包括以下内容:1. 简要描述两幅图的内容;2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解;3. 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。

注意:1. 可参照图片适当发挥;2. 作文词数150左右;3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。

第一部分:描述两幅图先对照高考真题的描述图画的范文:People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.The message conveyed here is clear: “Actions speak louder than words”. Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment.一、描述图画三步骤:第一步:确定人物做了某事:图1:小女孩向妈妈庆祝圣诞快乐;A girl wishes her mother a merry Christmas.图2:小女孩不知道端午节的意思。

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高考英语漫画类作文写作指导一.漫画作文概述高考英语考试说明写作部分第二节表述为:“要求考生根据所给情景,用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文(山东卷为120—150词)。

情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等;提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。

因此,图画是高考作文所提供的情景之一。

从最近几年高考试题来看,图画类作文占据了相当大的比重,当然主要是以记叙文为主。

而漫画又是图画的表现形式之一。

漫画的含义是:漫画是一种具有强烈的讽刺性或幽默性的图画。

画家从生活现象中取材,通过夸张、比喻、象征等手法,来讽刺、批评或表扬某些人和事。

它与图画相比,更能够与社会现实紧密结合起来,在大学英语四六级考试和研究生英语入学考试中应用的较为广泛。

同时在高考中出现的频率也越来越高,例如在上海卷、北京卷及山东卷中都出现过漫画作文。

二.漫画作文的特点1.试题命题特点漫画作文的主要特点是生动、形象、直观、图文并茂。

它就要求考生在写作时做到主题明确,即文章能概括图画所反映的中心思想。

2.能力考查特点漫画作文要求考生具有敏锐的观察力、丰富的想象力、严谨的逻辑思维能力、冷静的分析能力,以及最终将以上能力表达出来的书面表达能力。

三.漫画作文的写作思路一般的漫画作文一般可分为三个步骤,即:1)describe the drawing briefly.2) explain its intended meaning and give examples(if necessary)3)give your own comments or opinions各部分常用的表达描述图画部分:1)From the cartoon we can see that…2) As is shown/indicated in the picture3)This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see…4)Look at the picture. It is a picture about…论述漫画寓意及所反映现象部分1) What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today’s society./ Apparently, the cartoon reflects a major social problem.2) This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.3) What the cartoon reflects set me thinking a lot.4)After seeing the picture, I was greatly shocked by the phenomenon. In today’s society,…5)The cartoon implies that……评论与观点部分1)As far as I’m concerned, what we have to do is to make full use of……and also……If we……and……, it will not only……but also……2)We can learn from the picture that3)Consequently, it is high time that measures should be taken to avoid this phenomenon from happening again.4)Therefore, I am firmly convinced that…5) Let’s call on everybody to……In the long run, it will have a negative influence on constructinga harmonious society.四.典例分析【经典回放】06山东卷请用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,简要描述漫画内容,并结合生活实际,就漫画主题发表感想,题目自拟。

参考词汇:公民道德—civic virtueOne possible Version:Who lost your civic virtue?Let’s look at the picture above. It is about a boy who picks up a book on civic virtue and he is looking for its owner. But let’s pay attention to the passers-by. One boy is throwing rubbish and one of the couple is spitting.Something occurs to me. The owner of the book not only lost a book, but also his civic virtue. It is our duty to obey the principle made for our behaviors. And parents should set examples for their children to teach them to protect the environment. As we all know, kids always do as their parents do.Let’s call on everybody to do the tiny things we meet in our daily life to make our earth, our homes cleaner and more beautiful.【范文分析】这篇文章分为三段,第一段描述了图画的内容,第二段就图画所反映的问题进行了论述,第三段提出了观点并发出了号召。

同时每段的第一句都是过渡性的词语,使文章显得层次分明,结构明了。

同时文章有效地运用了连接成分和高级句型与表达,提高了文章的档次。

【写作步骤】在写作时,可以用以下的问题问自己!1. What’s the type of the writing? ___________A.说明文B. 书信C. 夹叙夹议D.人物传记2. What’s the tense and person of the writing? ___________3. 在写漫画类作文时,应认真审题,注重文章结构。

The writing contains there parts: _________________ (简要描述漫画内容)、__________________(说明漫画所反映的社会现状)、__________________(发表自己的观点和看法)。

1) How many people can you see?2) What are they doing?3) Whose behavior is to blame first?4) What does the cartoon reflect?4. What’s the tone of the author? ___________A. subjectiveB. objectiveC. criticalD. indifferent5. Pay attention to beautiful expressions in the passage(1 ) Description of cartoon: _________________________________________________(2 ) Reflection of cartoon: _________________________________________________(3 ) Author’s opinion: _________________________________________________【专题分析】根据图画内容,以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter”题,用英语写一篇0词左右的短文。

120—150词的短文。

We Want Our Schoolbags LighterThe picture shows that a girl is wearing a pair of glasses andcarrying a big heavy schoolbag, and a woman is doing some exercise.The gir l says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sureyou will lose some weight.”As is well-known, we Chinese students are overburdened with lessons and homework which our teachers have given us. All that we do every day is to listen to our teachers’ lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless.We do hope our teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way will we have spare time to do more physical exercise and make us stronger, and we will have more spare time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all mentally and physically healthier.【范文分析】范文包含了以下要点1)简单描述漫画的内容;2)作业负担过重;老师精讲精练;3)参加体育锻炼和社会活动。

本文思路清晰,表达准确,层次分明。

文章运用了大量的高级词汇、短语及句型(见文章划线部分),语言地道,上下文连贯。

恰当的运用了过渡性的连接词语,是一篇质量上乘的范文。

五.专题训练根据下面图中的相关信息写一篇以“成才之路”为题的短文。

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