高三写作专题复习课件(基础写作)

方法三. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力
1. He didn’t realize his foolishness until he returned home.
Complete the sentences
Not until he returned home did he realize his foolishness.
4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. On the other side of the street stands the clock tower.
方法三. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力
Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒 装句)
Common mistakes in writing
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汉语式英语 无过渡语
句式单一 平铺直叙
如何在写作中避免句式单一
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方法一. 使用三大从句可把结构松散的句子连接 起来，从而使表达显得高级 。
名词性从句：主语从句，宾语从句，表语从句，同位语从句
定语从句 ： 限定性定语从句 ，非限定性定语从句
方法四. 尝试多样化表达方式
Use different ways to describe the picture
一…就受到欢迎
As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed . On arriving at the airport , Lien Chan and his wife…
if ,uless ,as long as though,as,even if/though
1) 定语从句 Mary is a girl in Class 1. She speaks English very fluently. → Mary is a girl in Class1, who speaks English very fluently. (2) 状语从句 The doctor arrived there in time. The boy was saved. It was not too late. → The boy was saved because the doctor arrived there before it was too late.
__________________many times, he still repeated the Having been told
mistake.
3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默.
invited Unless ________to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.
你的感想
努力学习, 明天母校以我为荣
On October 20th our school celebrated its fiftieth birthday…
写作要求:1. 用５个句子表达全部内容 。 2. 内容适当 发挥, 注意 行文连贯 3. 适当使用所讲方法. 4.开头语已给 好。
Please finish the composition after class.
方法四. 尝试多样化表达方式
In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast. All these make people’s lives convenient, pleasant and colorful. _____________________________________________ In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, which_____________________________________ makes people’s lives convenient, pleasant…
方法二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动 词)
1. 听到这个消息,他们变的很激动. _________the news, they got excited. Hearing 2. 尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错误.
2) Do you want to meet Miss Tang? 3) She will come back from Japan. 4) She works as an engineer in Japan.
I want to ask whether you want to meet Miss Tang when she comes back from Japan, where she works as an engineer.
1. 他从不说关于他家庭的事.
Never did he speak about his own family.
2. 只有我们每个人都意识到水的重要性, 我们才能生活得更好.
Only when each of us realizes the importance of water, can we live a better life.
2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. If I am given another chance, I will succeed. Given another chance, I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. In order to improve his English, he studies hard.
2 In the east of the city lies our school, which is a key school of Guangdong province. It is very beautiful, surrounded with many trees.
一.使用三大从句可把松散的
Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport.
No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were … Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were …
句子连接起来使表达显得高级
句式多样 二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
文章增“靓” 三. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力
四. 尝试多样化表达方式
基础写作: 假如你是我校晨曦报的记者,请你根据下面要点提 示写一篇新闻报道. 写作内容:
校园庆典 情况 学校现况
1. 进校园，氛围浓 2. 到处是鲜花，校友交谈的情景 1.现有300多名老师近4000学生. 2. 教师工作苦,乐于奉献。 3. 每年有许多学生被大学录取。
方法二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
非谓语： 动词不定式 动名词 分词
方法二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
Rewrite the sentences
1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.
(3) 名词性从句 Xiao Ming was always late for school. His teacher didn’t know why. → His teacher didn’t know why Xiao Ming was always late for school.
4 Use different clauses to make the following four sentences into one sentence. 1) I want to ask you .
2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live.
Only by changing the way we live can we save the earth. 3.He is clever but he does not work hard.
Clever as/though he is, he does not work hard.
Beijing, people’s lives are With the development of ______________________ becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and ___________________________________________ colorful. _______
状语从句： 时间状语从句 地点状语从句 原因状语从句 目的状语从句 when ,while,as,after,before where ,wherever as,because,since in order that,so that
结果状语从句
条件状语从句 让步状语从句